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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

Written Warning

Postby Razkar on November 20th, 2012, 4:43 pm

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34th of Fall, 512AV

Afterwards, he would count himself lucky that the mace was wooden. Had it been metal, it would probably have fractured his skull.

At the time, he was not so reflective.

Razkar felt the side of his head explode into black and blue stars, his balance dying quick and his legs becoming distant, uncontrollable appendages. The bloody, chaotic ambush swung out of focus and he felt himself fall to the muddy earth. It's sticky. Slick. Red... he saw red when he blinked again. The color of war, of battle... of his goddess.

Get up.

With a grunt he hauled himself to one knee, seeing the horseman who brained him wheeling around, lips pulled back in a hateful grimace. The wooden mace had been tossed aside, bastard sword favored instead, and with an animal bark, he spurred his horse at Razkar.

The Myrian rolled out of the way and cries out as the sword slashes down at him, slicing at his back. But the horse was not an easy thing to stop, and in the time it took the horseman to stop and turn, Razkar had finally dragged himself to his feet.

Head throbbing. Vision blurred. Blood oozing down the side of his head...

"H... Help..."

A figure grabbed at him from the side. One of Provedan's mercenaries, face bloody, hands and tunic red, bleeding, eyes glazed, desperate and clawing at him. Razkar snarled and grabbed hold of him, ready to throw him to one side-

-then the horseman charged at him again, bastard sword raised, and he decided to make final use of the dying man-

-by throwing him under the horse's hooves.

The rider's face switched from savage joy to stunned horror in a moment, screaming sellsword into a grinder of pistoning hooves. Crunching and snapping of bones, eight limbs (four equine, four human) became a frenzied, unstable mass within a second, and the horse lost its footing. It crashed down on top of the sellsword, crushing whatever life was left out of him, the rider crying out as his leg was broken.

The horse screamed, head tossing back and forth, mane flashing in the sun, eyes so huge and terrified only the whites were-

-Razkar ended its suffering with a stab through its head. The rider's sword fell from his hand in the fall, and now he could only stare, panting, hands up as this nightmare figure of dark flesh and darker ink towered over him. Bones struck through his face. Blood splattered over his body. The Myrian felt behind him and winced, white teeth glimmering as he felt the cut there.

Then Razkar looked down at the panting, helpless man. Without a word he walked over to the horseman he killed at the very beginning, wrenching his hand ax free, and walked back. Calm. Focused. In no hurry.

The battle, or skirmish, or ambush, whatever you will, was over. The frenzy of movement and mortal combat had given way to languid coup de graces down the length of the caravan. Men screamed and pleaded and begged. They were ignored. Slaves cowered and prayed, and were mostly ignored, too.

For now.

Razkar looked down the line of dead, dying and bound bodies, squinting, and saw one sellsword had been spared. He's dragged by a jeering Burned Man up to his feet, left arm a bloody mess. He saw Manfred approach him... but he had other business, and turned to-

-the man with a kukri in his hand-

Out of instinct he swung the ax backhanded and low. Crimson sprayed his stomach, arcing up from the ground. There's another scream from ground level, and a hand gripping a kukri thuds onto the ground.

The downed horseman shrieks at a clear, uncaring sky, and receives no answer to his wordless plea. Razkar bent down and picked up the hand, loosening the fresh, warm fingers and examining the blade. A good blade. Well-balanced, curved blade a foot long... a good weapon.

He smiled, slowly and pleasurably, and cast his eyes upwards, too. Much blood spilled. Victory won. She would be watching...

Razkar knelt down by the begging, rasping man. He held up his (former) blade so he could see it clearly. Held it so the man could see his own terrified eyes in the keen, bright blade. Razkar knew that would be important for what had to follow.

Then he reversed it with a flick of his wrist, and raised it high.

"This not be quick."

Then the fun began.
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Postby Razkar on November 22nd, 2012, 8:27 pm

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They lost seven of their number in the ambush. Manfred knew that Haev would have mixed feelings about that.

On the one hand, it meant seven less hands outstretched for gold when they got back to Rattling Chains, and cutting overhead always pleased Provedan. Cutting it while they're being useful was even better.

But, on the other hand, they still needed to get their livestock back, and with seventeen men that seemed... problematic.

Manfred smiled to himself, and absently patted the precious parchment in his pocket. Seemed. Things often seemed, especially when they are not.

"P-Please, d-don't kill-"

"We're not going to." He said, turning his attention back to the wounded, babbling guard, the sole survivor from the caravan. Well, aside from the slaves, naturally. "Yer gonna deliver a message for us."

Char had been a mercenary for long enough to know that when you heard those words, it was unlikely to be as simple as, say, a neatly-printed card you had to pass to your employer. No. People in their line of business were more... creative. But what choice did he have?

Everyone was dead. The boss, his lieutenant, all his partners...

"Er... what message?"

"We'll get to that." The muscular human flicked a glance at the two sellswords holding him and he nodded. At once they shoved him down to his knees, grip never loosening. "Hold him. For now."

Then he heard the screaming. Wet, agonized, gurgling and fresh.

Manfred turned and saw a Myrian at worship. Kneeling on top of a thrashing, crying figure, hands scarlet up to his elbows... and holwing in a savage tongue to the sky.

"Goddess! See my deeds this day... see my deeds and rejoice!"

Razkar stabbed the kukri into the man's stomach and ripped it from left to right, just under the ribcage. Eyes popping out of his skull, coughing up blood that mixed with tears and bile and sweat and snot, the man convulsed pitifully under him.

Razkar's eyes were for the sky, though. Not on this dying meat.

"Goddess! Accept this gift... this offering..."

And with that last word he plunged his hand into the wound, feeling upwards, fingers worming and flexing and forcing up and up... finally closing around it's beating target. The man, nameless and doomed and in agony beyond the hells, now just gasped occasionally, eyes glazed, wishing for a death that would not come.

Provedan's sellswords watched. The slaves watched. Manfred watched, curiosity mingled with slight disgust... and then he turned to his captive's guards.

"Make sure he watches this."

So, whether he wanted to or not, Char was made part of the audience, too.

"Goddess... see your son... honor you... with love-"

With an almighty jerk Razkar ripped the beating organ out of its cavity, arteries torn loose and hanging, spurting spasmodically. The rider gasped in utter shock, staring and not wanting to, watching the Myrian withdraw his arm... and hold his beating, dripping heart high in the air.

There was an art to this. The timing was crucial. Just long enough for him to see it stop pumping...

"In your name, my Queen... I do send this soul."

There was some measure of mercy abroad in the Sea of Grass that day, for the man was dead before he could watch Razkar eat his heart. The Myrian savored the rich taste of humanity. Definitely his favorite. More than Zith or Dhani or Charoda. Exquisite...

When he was done, when every last morsel was ingested wet and raw, he took his new kukri and gripped the dead man's hair. He made a careful, straight cut just below his hairline, and then jerked his scalp free. Manfred watched the whole time, expression bored, in no hurry. The slaves were praying. Some of the sellswords, too.

And when he turned to Char, the man was white as alabaster and shaking uncontrollably.

"You ready to carry our message?"

"Y-Yes!"

"Good." The human said genially, then drew his own dagger. Instinctively Char squirmed and struggled, but it was pointless. He reached down and ripped his shirt open, revealing his hairless chest. Broad, too. Perfect. "Try not to move too much. It'll only hurt more."

He wrote the message Haev had given her. The words meant for an Akalak who needed to learn that the slave monopoly of Riverfall was exclusive and inviolable. An Akalak with powerful friends, a lot of money and a desire to move into a business that he arrogantly thought would give way to him with one prosperous deal, and Haev Provedan would simply slink away without a fight.

An Akalak who should have chosen a better class of sellsword, because one of them had sold him and his comrades out to Provedan.

Not that it would help him anymore, lying somewhere on the trail, stiff and cold and his soul bewildered and (ironically) betrayed. Char was the only survivor, and he was not the traitor.

We've already mentioned that Provedan liked cutting overhead, yes?

Razkar heard the screaming. He ignored it. He had more scalps to collect...
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Postby Razkar on November 22nd, 2012, 8:43 pm

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The man walked alone, but the cyclops had told him he would not be alone long. The wagon trail was ill-used, but not abandoned. Within a day, by his reckoning, someone would be along. The cyclops even gave him food and water, lest he expire before he was found.

That would ruin his plan.

So Char trudged onward, heading south, or thereabouts. That was where his message was to be delivered. His eyes had a glassy, broken tint to them now. His jaw hung open slackly, uncomprehending, fixed dimly on the horizon. His arm had been washed and stitched. Once again, she did not want him to die before his purpose was served.

Char staggered towards Riverfall. His shirt was gone. All he wore were leather pants... and the words carved onto him. Carved and burned in with salt. Letters made up of straight lines, large and clear across his chest. Char knew who to deliver it to: he had told him before he had sent him on his way. He even knew the exact address to go to in Riverfall. The name didn't mean much to him.

He didn't move in the circles Balor Takarian frequented. Far more exclusive and moneyed than his own.

Char did not look down. Did not want to see them...

STAY
AWAY
- H P -


He marched dully towards distant Riverfall. His eyes were open, but did not see.

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Postby Jackalope on December 2nd, 2012, 10:54 pm

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Razkar

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Brawling +1 Fighting on for your Goddess
Gladius +1 Making Use of a Dying Man
Kukri +1 A Sacrific for Myri
Humans Taste Best


Injury: Brusing on head. Headache for a couple of days

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