[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

by **Amaria Waterstance** on December 15th, 2012, 1:19 am

Alright

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic28464.html

Give her a look over, let me know how it is. Don't sugar coat it Sarge, I can take it I swear!

by **Torchlight** on December 15th, 2012, 7:57 pm

Thanks for submitting your CSes!

Amaria, Woath, Meneldor, Telth, and Ettan - I have placed notes on all of your CSes! Don't worry, none of you have done anything horribly wrong. It's mostly minor changes and adjustments.

Let me know via PM if you need anything!

by **Kienwynn** on December 16th, 2012, 11:08 pm

My character sheet I would like if you looked it over. Thanks!

by **Kraken** on December 17th, 2012, 12:40 am

Kienwynn - It looks like you have a little error in your coding. Unfortunately, I can't reach the edit button on your thread, so you'll need to repost your CS in a new thread before we can review it.

I have the proper coding below, so just copy and paste & then link your new thread on the review page once more.

Code: Select all: [frame=#3AAACF][frametrans=black,7][color=#61B4CF] [center][size=150]Kienwynn Frostfawn[/size] [img]http://us.123rf.com/400wm/400/400/invisiblev/invisiblev1104/invisiblev110400060/9342637-elegant-mulatto-girl-with-long-hair.jpg[/img] Race: Human, mixed {Vantha & Inarta} Age: 19 years Birthday: 27th of Fall, 493 AV [u]Character Concept[/u] Born to an Endel and a woman of the Frostfawn hold; Kienwynn physically reflects her mother more so than her father, but that's almost as far as it goes. Her personality borders on strongly representing that of an Inarta with her hot temper, boldness, direct and adventurous lifestyle. Despite Kienwynn's hot temper the only way to make her angry is to ask her questions she doesn't want to answer or threaten something she cares for. Like her father she seems to have a connection to birds and no fear of heights. But she does show traits of her mother. Kienwynn is very friendly and definitely reflects the entertainer in all Vantha. [u]Character History[/u] Her mother is a Vantha woman of the Frostfawn hold and her father is an Inarta man. The reason for his arrival in Avanthal remains a mystery to Kienwynn since her mother never told her. Her father didn't stay in her life long enough to do much more than teach her a few words of Nari. He returned to Wind Reach and his people, leaving Kienwynn with her mother in Avanthal. She threw an awful fit when her mother told her that he had left. The young girl had screamed and cried for hours that day then committed herself to about a week of silence. Once Kienwynn had finished with her temper tantrum her mother told her that her father had left his falcon, Rani, to her. To this day she holds those few words of Nari, Rani and the memories of her father close to her heart. As Kienwynn grew older her mother explained in pieces why her father had left her in Avanthal. Kienwynn keeps from her mother that her one wish is to go to Wind Reach and be with her father. In most recent days she spends most of her time out in the Avanthal woods with Rani, usually hunting for sport and food. [u]Possessions[/u] 1 Set of Clothing: -Simple Light Blue Shirt -Simple Light Blue Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak -Simple Leather Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel Housing: 1 basic 20x20 Arvinta in a Hold with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table. [u]Ledger[/u] [table]Purchase Cost TotalStarting Package +100 GM 100 GM[/table] [u]Skills, Lores, Languages[/u] [table]Skill EXP Total ProficiencyHunting 10SP 10 NoviceFalconry 16SP, 10RB 26 CompetentTracking 14SP 15 NoviceAnimal Husbandry 10SP 10 Novice[/table] Languages~ Fluent: Vani Basic: Common Poor: Nari Helpful Lores: Lore of Avanthal Geography {Starting Package} Lore of Edible Plants in Avanthal Forest {Starting Package} [u]Thread List[/u] [/center][/color][/frametrans][/frame]