[Note by Lamia] Aureil Darkfern

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Aureil Darkfern

Postby Aureil Darkfern on January 21st, 2013, 11:51 pm

PC Name- Aureil Darkfern
Physical Information- Aureil is light and fast. She is strong for her size, but cannot compare in strength to her brothers and sisters. She seems flighty, and can outrun the fastest Dryka anywhere. She darts about, neve remaining in one place for long.
Race- Dryka
Birthday & Age- She was born on the 73rd day of Red (Fall) She is age 24 (born year 498)
Gender- Female
Physical Description- She is tall. Her skin is a creamy, too dark to be called tan, too light to be considered ebony. She has high, chiseled cheekbones and a smal, noble chin. Her liquid, almond-shaped gray eyes are whole and solid, and she can stare down a crazy wolverine. Aureil is skinny, but light and lithe. Looking at her, you think of a winter wind, quick and breezy, but straightforward. She has long hair, just a tone darker than her skin. Small, intricate braids, knots, and twists are in the under layer of her hair, each one full of beads and precious stones. She normally pulls her hair back and ties it with an old, pretty piece of white ribbon, and, if you look carefully, you can see the braids. She wears a simple, sleeveless tan wrap around her torso and cool, thin breeches. She has a thick leather and fur cloak, though, with a large, fox-fur lined hood for cooler weather. Her Windmark is simple. It is a thick, twisting line across the middle of her back, and flows down, curving and twisting, into her stomach on either side. From the front, it looks as if two hot, steaming fountains of water are pouring onto her stomach from either side.
Personality - Aureil is like a sharp wind, ready to bite and bite back in the heat of a single moment. She has a temper, and an intolerance for most men, finding them crude and controlling. She rides along her Sea of Grass with reckless abandon, and is never able to stay in one place for too long.
Ethics - She is kind to young ones, and not mean to strangers. She hates to see anyone mistreated, and will help anyone who is, despite what it might cost her. She dislikes most men, although there are some exceptions, and she has a fondness for small prey-animals. When she's not hungry, that is.
Likes - Aureil finds intense joy in mainly three things; Riding Starmare (her strider horse), painting with her own, natural paint set, and running around, free of any burdens. She does like children, and wants at least one, but can't bring herself to settle down.
Dislikes - Aureil does not like most men. They are crude, rude, and very obnoxious. They act as if they own the world, instead of accepting who they are. There are a few exceptions, though.
Pre-Creation - Aureil grew up in a large family. Her father was an important member of the Diamond clan, and she was the daughter of his second wife, Sunie. She had many competitive brothers and skilled sisters. The main thing that she excelled in was her horse riding abilities. A you Cyphrus Strider filly bonded with her when she was twelve. The filly was a light brown, with a copper mane and lighter star on her forehead, and matching coronets. Aureil fell in love with her and named her Starmare. She left the Pavilion to find love and a place to stay at age 16, after her youngest sister was born.
Post Creation- Aureil hopes to find a job as a messenger, and wants to start breeding horses. She wants her own Pavilion, and respect for her artwork.
Training & Skill Points- She was trained to paint, to ride, and to defend herself with a long, wooden spear. She can hunt as well.
Starting Package- 20 riding (10 included, as Dryka), 20 hunting, 10 painting, and 10 weapon: spear.
Earned Skill/Points-
Equipment/Possessions- She has a copy of the clothes that she wears, padded with leather for protection. She carries a simple wooden spear set (like sharpened, long sticks), and a heavy cloak. She has a large hunting dog, a black and white Imperial, and her horse, Starmare. She also has A water skin, food rations for a week, flint and steel, and a knife. She also has a tent. 1 large tent (4 person), large tarp, 100 ft of rope, flint & steel, lantern, 2 torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle & hooks, a riding horse (Starmare), a full set of tack, and a large set of saddlebags.

Ledger-
100 gold mizas (=1,000 silver =10,000 copper)
Thread List (Optional)
Keep a running record plus links of all your threads and in what season they were in.
Languages-
Pavi: Fluent
Zithanese: Basic
Human: Poor
Last edited by Aureil Darkfern on February 11th, 2013, 9:42 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Aureil Darkfern

Postby Lamia on January 31st, 2013, 7:33 pm

Hey!

I’m Lamia! The local Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help you get started and help you out if you have any questions regarding the lore or just about anything you are having trouble with. So if you have something on your hearth, don’t hesitate to ask.

I was slithering through your character sheet and found the character to be highly interesting. None the less I found a few issues that should be addressed before you proceed.

  • Account name: Your account name must be the same as your character’s name, please edit this through the control panel.
  • Age and birthday : Even though you have listed your PC’s birthday, you haven’t listed a year or her age. The current year and season is the winter of 512.a.v.
  • History: While this is not a big issue, I’d advise you to contact a story teller or the Help Desk about anything that has something to do with ‘important’ people in the family.
  • Skills: A PC starts with 50 Skill points + Racial bonus. You seem to be missing 10 points, feel free to add them in a skill of your choice. Also, if you could rename the skill of ‘spare-handling’ to ‘weapon: spare’ that would be splendid.
    Proper Skill Setup :
    After a recent meeting with several of the Storyteller Staff and Founders, we have decided to Officially Change a policy regarding Skill Points in the Character Sheets. You must now display all Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Points separately from one another. Storytellers and Liaisons will now be Intervening on Character Sheets that fail to make this change.

    Examples

    Skills Exp Total Proficiency
    Auristics 15 SP, 72 XP 87 Master
    Seduction 18 SP, 3 XP 21 Novice
    Glassworking 10 RB, 12 SP, 35 XP 57 Expert
    Intelligence 5 SP 5 Novice
    Sewing 13 XP 13 Novice
    Weapon: Javelin 1 XP 1 Novice
    Acrobatics 85 XP 85 Master


    SP = Starting Points
    RB = Racial Bonus Points
    XP = Earned Experience Points


    Example 2:

    Auristics: 87/100 (15 SP)
    Seduction: 21/100 (18 SP)
    Glassworking: 57/100 (10 RB) (12 SP)
    Intelligence: 5/100 (5 SP)
    Sewing: 13/100
    Weapon, Javelin: 1/100
    Acrobatics: 85/100


    Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date.
  • Housing: You haven’t stated where your PC is living. If you could look over The Housing Options and chose the appropriate for your starting city, it would be wonderful.
  • Heirloom: I see you have not chosen a Heirloom. A heirloom is one item not exceeding the price of 50GM please look over the Price list and chose one if you wish.[remember to label your possession as a heirloom]
  • Possessions A PC starts out with 1 simple set of clothing, a copy of these clothing’s has to be purchased and the cost deducted from your lager. The wooden spares, tent, horse and dog should be also bought.
    • The horse and tent can come as part of the Starting package if you chose the ‘Tent and Horse’ starting package.
    • Please keep in mind that in Mizahar, we have no such dogs as ‘golden retriever’ we have our own breeds of dogs found here and a list of horses found here
  • Lore:Your haven’t chosen any lores. Feel free to add two.

Once these issues are addressed, please contact me and I will remove this post. If you have any questions don’t hesitate to PM me.

~Lamia
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