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Considered one of the most mysterious cities in Mizahar, Alvadas is called The City of Illusions. It is the home of Ionu and the notorious Inverted. This city sits on one of the main crossroads through The Region of Kalea.

A Different Kind of Poison (Dexius)

Postby Aislyn Leavold on July 5th, 2016, 4:31 pm

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It had been many times Aislyn had been asked to speak on her favorited deity’s behalf, and it had been many times she had spoken almost the same speech every time.
But this, this was a new question.
”...They?” Aislyn had never questioned her choice of pronouns on Ionu’s part. Ionu had never presented a gender to her, so she had never assigned a gender to them. It seemed wrong to assume something you couldn't possibly know of someone so infinitely powerful. ”There's no punchline, if you consider this to be some sort of joke.”

There were plenty of Alvads that assigned ‘he’ or ‘she’ or a combination of both to Ionu, but that hadn't seemed quite right, either. The deity of illusions presented themselves not as both but as neither, as far as Aislyn could see. ”It seems strange to me that people can sooner comprehend a city that streets constantly move than a deity that presents no gender.” She paused for a moment, considering her thoughts. ”And I have seen many strange things.” She had always been extremely defensive of her city, her deity, her faith, her beliefs, but it was rare she was actually given an opportunity to defend them. ”Thus, they.”

On her paper, Aislyn had essentially finished her replication of Dexius’ key.
For a moment, she stared at it, thinking. Presumably the man would want the drawing, but it would be useful to have such a thing committed to her own paper. The words on the key were interesting; Aislyn had never seen such an engraving on Alvadas’ signature trinkets. Each item was unique, a strange size, colour, or shape. The only equivalent thing that each key held within its appearance was that it was equivalently inequal. No two houses the same, no two keys the same. But words, words were an oddity.

Folding the paper over, Aislyn was careful to keep the edges equal as she applied pressure to the parchment. When she unfolded it again, a lighter copy of the key was transcribed onto the other side. Charcoal smudged, she had mentioned this to the man herself. Most of the time, such smudging was an inconvenience; but every once in awhile, something very, very convenient came out of it.
Along the fold line, the artist pulled the paper to either side, tearing it gently. As Dexius muttered about angles and restarted on his own drawing yet again, Aislyn began to trace over the light lines of the copy, until the two charcoal pieces were practically identical. Apart from the obvious fact of the words being completely backwards in the copy. Whoops.
No matter. She’d trace the copy later, or just deal with having to read mirrored text. Or she could give Dexius the copy and keep the original for herself; let him deal with wondering what had gone wrong with the text on the page.

The Symenestra’s tales of the difficulty of common rung empty in Aislyn’s ears. She had never spoken anything but common in her lifetime, leaving her with no point of comparison. Languages would certainly be useful, but to her it seemed like the time to learn them had long since passed. She’d had several interactions in which words or phrases had been picked up, of course, but to call her anything near sufficient was inaccurate. Then again, she had never put much effort into learning such skills. Perhaps in future she’d try again. When the topic switched to something more interesting, however, her apathy quickly dissipated. This whole situation reminds me slightly of the past...

”Your past?” You and me both, bandito. ”...She?” The antagonistic way the man spoke still pulled at her nerves, but curiosity still prevailed. This was a story, and she intended to hear the end of it. Rolling out her shoulders, Aislyn set Dexius’ copy of the drawing onto the “table” in front of him, slipping her own copy into her journal. The slightest hint of interest faded into her voice as she spoke again. ”Do tell.”


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A Different Kind of Poison (Dexius)

Postby Dexius on July 5th, 2016, 7:22 pm


Dex raised his hands in protest to the woman's passive aggressive responses to his inquiry. Great, now he had made her even more agitated than she was before, good job. "No joke..just genuinely curious is all.." He sounded a little more than defeated at this point. Offense was not something he liked to rank highly on his list of things to do, rough sarcasm was probably the closest thing. "It was just easier to accept the way the city is from firsthand experience. Pretty hard to ignore something right in front of your face..very well, they it is then."

He continued to work on his own copy of the key, as bad as it was turning out. The teeth were just finished and already he could tell the depth was all off between it and the shaft. Scratching his head he had no other choice but to continue working towards completion. The head of the key would probably be the simplest next to the shaft with it's simple rounded shape. He sketched it out lightly, trying his hardest not to smudge up the rest of the dark colored key with the rest of his hand. Harder he pressed near the bottom of the key to add in the missing shadow effect the woman had talked so very much about.

A ripping sound broke Dex from his concentration, his companion had folded and ripped her paper in half, but why? Did she have time to draw the key twice already? Barely just finishing his own drawing he looked at the parchment as she placed the ripped half on the would-be-table. Lying there in front of him was a very clear copy of his key. Nowhere on the paper were signs of smudges or mistakes that she had to remedy later on. Compared to his own, it was virtually perfect. He picked up the drawing and compared it to his own, perhaps he could obtain more information from a completed piece of work.

Various shading allowed the shaft of the key to look more rounded, it was very precise compared to his which looked like black had just oozed onto the paper. The teeth of the key were perfectly angled in a way his lacked and they matched the depth of the rest of the drawing perfectly. Interrupted again Dex looked to see what the artist wanted from him now. Great. She wanted to know about her..but she can't know. He would look like a fool if he lead on to the death of his best friend under his watch. Dex was caught scratching the back of his head for a few ticks before he responded, not exactly making eye contact either. "She was..she was just a friend. An artist. An artist with an attitude who tried to teach me to do more than what I once knew. She tried, a little of what was taught stuck..but we never were able to continue. A musician, the flute. She was the best flutist I had ever heard."

At this point Dex looked more than a little shaken by his own words. The charcoal slipped from his fingers and 'thump'd' onto the crate in front of him. "I can't finish those lessons though. I must figure it out of my own if I wish to continue.." A singular tear formed in his eye before it quickly dripped from his face. Dex returned to his work in progress, picking the charcoal up and marking up the parchment once more. He half wanted to continue his work on the art and half wished he could go be alone for a moment. Neither seemed like a valid option right now sadly. "That's all though..about her. Ask away about the city more if you like.."
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A Different Kind of Poison (Dexius)

Postby Aislyn Leavold on July 7th, 2016, 6:04 pm

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There were very different types of curiosity. The curiosity of wondering what colour a drop of paint would turn should it be introduced to another shade, and there was the curiosity of following a stranger down a street until they turned around and demanded to know what was going on, to which one would reply ”Just Curious”. This was the latter kind of curiosity.
Nonetheless, curiosity was a curious thing and this Dexius was a curious man. One second he had the conversational skill of a brick wall, with the intelligence to match, and the second he was a remorseful man that could never mean any harm.

As the Symenestra worked, Aislyn began to collect her things. Notebook in the main compartment of her bag, what charcoal was left tucked away in a side pocket. Crossbow bolts sheathed and crossbow in hand. She was done being an artist. Her part of the deal was complete, all she needed was the spider’s end of the bargain.

Leaning against a wall adjacent to the makeshift table, Aislyn maneuvered her quiver so she wasn’t leaning on the bolts inside. After doing the same to her backpack, she put her full attention on what the man had to say. A story this was indeed, and a good one at that. The kind of story one heard in children’s tales, about the lost princess that the white knight had to go and save, for which she rewarded him with the gift of her knowledge. Never was it the other way around. Tragic, really. Such potential there to remove the damsel in distress altogether. All that was needed to complete Dexius’ story was for said fair maiden to have unavoidably perished, leaving a sad, misguided fool behind.
For a moment, Aislyn caught a bit of motion out of the corner of her eye. At the entrance of the alleyway, someone passed by, without a care in the world to what was happening nearby.
When the woman looked back, the Symenestra man appeared to be… Crying.

Oh dear. He had a soul.

Aislyn had never been a fan of crying. It was a sign of weakness, a lack of control. You couldn’t see straight if there were tears in your eyes, and that was a very avoidable problem she simply didn’t have time for. The woman had plenty of handicaps as it was already. Lack of strength, lack of skill, lack of experience, lack of a reliable mind. She didn’t need to add another weakness onto that list, so she had decided to stop any sort of show of weakness altogether. It was hard to pinpoint the last time she had ever actually cried. Two years, at least. She must have still been a teenager, most likely mourning the loss of her only friend. Or the loss of her mentor. Maybe her imaginary friend. She hadn’t shed tears for Kuvarakh, or Wanda either. It wasn’t necessary.
Even in the time before she had emerged, before she had come out of hiding… All the anguish blurred together after as many years as it had been. Losses that weren’t even complete; weren’t even definite. In every case, the person she had lost was still very much alive, but bleeding and breathing and existing was different from living in another person’s life. As far as Aislyn’s memories went, her childhood friend and her mentor were very much dead. A friend from her later years hadn’t been seen in years; an imaginary friend that never came back for her, and both of the more recent losses were disappearances out of the blue, with no word or warning, no explanation of what had gone wrong. And what was that, if not death? Death came in many shapes and sizes; Dira did not discriminate. She just took, and took, and took, until there was nothing left to take.

By the time she reached adulthood, Aislyn stopped wasting time on crying. The realization of loneliness hadn’t brought tears or a lack of breath. It had brought nothing. A literal, crushing, nothing. Emptiness, that filled everything it touched to the brim.

Pulling her hair back behind her shoulders, Aislyn shook off the thought. The nothing was nothing now, and it was of no matter to her. Out of the nothing she had born control, and control was not something she gave up easily.

Observing the man closely, Aislyn felt almost like an onlooker looking in on a play. Like she was a patron of the Crooked Playhouse, watching a story she didn’t fully understand. A tragedy, at that. Entertaining, and sad at the same time.
Something gave her the feeling that ’unavoidably perished’ might not have been all that far from the truth after all. But that was an unanswered question yet, and it appeared, from Dexius’ open ending, that the half-answer was all he was going to give. How unfortunate.
After a few moments of silence, Aislyn raised her voice into the empty air. She wanted some answers, and if she annoyed Dexius along the way, all the better.

”What was her name?” A wicked idea crossed her mind, and after a pause of half a tick, she went through with it. ”And when did you kill her?”


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A Different Kind of Poison (Dexius)

Postby Dexius on July 7th, 2016, 10:30 pm


Dex wiped the tear from his eyes after hearing the artist gathering her things. She was preparing to go, her lessons for the night completed. Hoping the woman wouldn't see his weakness he continued to scribble on his parchment for a few moments before folding up her copy and placing it in his pack. When would he ever get over this part of his life? A grown man in a dark alley crying in front a complete stranger, what a joke. Surely she would scoff at him or make a rude remark, it seemed like something she would do from what he gathered of her personality so far.

Rising from his position at the crate-table he also began to gather his possessions, the few that he had. Rapier and scabbard returned to their familiar spot on his waist before clasping the necklace-key back to his neck, the metal now cool to the touch. Grabbing his scarf he began to weave it around him in it's usual fashion before looking over at the woman. There she was; silent and staring. Seemed to be the usual for her so far. He merely responded to her look with a shoulder shrug and a 'what?' look on his face.

Dex wiped his hands on this trousers before pulling his hair through his scarf, he liked the free flowing feeling rather than having it trapped against his body. Reaching down, he collected his drawing and the piece of charcoal he was using before kicking the makeshift table back to the side of the alley. His picture was a piece of garbage, that much was obvious. He would have to practice a lot more to get the results he desired. Maybe she could give more lessons later and actually assist him with his drawing rather than just blab out details when she felt like it.

Walking over to the would be teacher, he looked down at her and held the extra piece of charcoal out for her to take. Finally though, the silence was broken but not in a way Dex would have ever wanted. Her name. Of course this one would go ahead and ask the question. It seemed like she was very keen on pressing his buttons as much as possible. She was like a mouse with a million and one questions that never seemed to end and you can never just get rid of mice.

But then the accusation happened and a fire roared up inside of the Symenestra. He clenched his hands and let the broken pieces of charcoal drops to the street below, breaking into even smaller shards. This woman was not a mouse, she knew how to bite, she was clearly a rat.

Empty eyes locked with the artist. He wanted to gut her, that much was certain. It was the only way to really deal with a rat. His left hand fiddled with the rapier as before, clicking it in and out of the scabbard slightly but the blade is never drawn. Finally though, the swordsman broke his silence but the words sounded harsh and uncaring instead of sarcastic and carefree. "Not like you care in the least..but her name was Alasyia."

At that, he pulled his scarf back up to cover his face. Back to the way he looked when he first trudged down the alley a short while ago. Turning away, Dex took a few steps towards the exit of the dark alley before coming to a stop. "The last time I had a good night's sleep..It was the twenty seventh of the last winter season when I killed her..." Dex looked back over his shoulder at the artist, she had really hit a soft spot with him tonight. But he offered her a deal and would see it done regardless. "Now..if you need anything else from me..please do tell before I get going. The night is still young...maybe I can find a petching bandito to stop or something." He wanted nothing more than to find something, or somebody to drive his sword into.
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A Different Kind of Poison (Dexius)

Postby Aislyn Leavold on July 9th, 2016, 7:52 pm

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It took several moments for the Symenestra to respond. Several moments in which he moved closer, offered Aislyn back her charcoal, and then… crushed it.
Closing her fist on empty air, Aislyn was indecisive on whether or not she should have been surprised. She had caught some of the ruined pieces, and for several moments the woman stared down at it, partially angry at the insulting action, partially lacking any sort of reason to care at this point. It was one piece of charcoal. Half a drawing took up that much material.
Uncurling the fingers that trapped the dust particles, Aislyn jerked it upwards in an instinct reaction, tossing the ruined black pigment back in Dexius’ direction. Not to say some of the dust didn’t blow back in her direction, but it was clear to see she was less adversely affected. After all, her clothes were black, and his were… not.

Meeting the man’s eyes, Aislyn couldn’t decide whether to sneer or to smile. She’d hit close to home, that much was obvious. Bullseye. She wouldn’t apologize for her statement, no matter what history he cared to share. Eating one’s words was just another way of admitting defeat, and she certainly didn’t plan on admitting defeat. The world wasn’t kind if you weren’t kind to it, and people were no different. No one had ever apologized to her; never held back any blow. To expect her to respond any differently was simply absurd. Trust no man, pull no punches, say your prayers and sleep when you’re dead.
Or never sleep again.

The last time I had a good night’s sleep… They had come full circle, then. Besting each other over who had hurt the most. Now was the moment when he claimed she was still alive, or she had died some tragic death. He’d blame himself like some white knight, but it wouldn’t have actually been his fault.
It was the twenty seventh of the last winter season when I killed her.
Unless it was his fault.

Well, shyke.

Aislyn hadn’t expected Dexius to have actually murdered this ‘Alasyia’. His reaction had some heavy implications, but the Symenestra had never seemed like an outright murderer. He seemed too hesitant, too sarcastically pacifistic. Like he could threaten all he want, gloat over victory, but never actually have the guts to take a life. No wonder he’d reacted the way he had. Aislyn had guessed right.
Anyone could be a murderer, she supposed. She’d once thought it was such a life-changing event, taking the life of something that could be considered sentient. But plenty of Alvads could be called murderers. A carnivore was a murderer. An executioner was a murderer. The Silencers removed those that threatened others; those that could become murderers themselves. Alvadas had risen up to protect itself two seasons before, were all those that fought murderers? It all depended on whether or not the death of the undead was really a death, or just a return to a previous position. Everyone could kill. Anyone could kill. Aislyn had, Aislyn could, and Aislyn would again.
Accidental or not, a death was a death.

Refusing to break his gaze, Aislyn heard the familiar sound of the Symenestra fiddling with his sword. More threats, brilliant. They had gone too many chimes without threatening each other, it seemed. There must have been some unspoken quota to fill. Adjusting her grip on her crossbow to return the favor, Aislyn readied herself. He was still too hesitant, that much was obvious, but if his words spoke truth, hesitation couldn’t have always been a problem.

Once the Syemenstra turned around, Aislyn drew back. That was it, then. The end. An ending fit for kings. Kings in back alleyways exchanging insults until Syna rose high in the sky. What an ending, too. She’d learned so much, and in just one night as well. Perhaps her anger was worth something after all.
With small, silent steps, Aislyn prepared herself to hit the back of the alleyway soon enough, though no contact was ever made. A glance over her shoulder confirmed the fact that Ionu had favoured her, providing an exit for her escape. The dead end had shifted, leaving both ends open and the perfect opportunity to evacuate the premises without ending up like a caged animal, trapped in a corner with no place to run.
An ending fit for kings, an encounter fit for thieves. Thieves and murderers. Spiders and snakes.

”Sixtieth of summer. Patchwork port. Sunset.” She paused, her voice just loud enough to echo along the alleyway. Despite the rough beginning, the night hadn't exactly ended in disaster. Her lies were convincing, her truths hit home, and she had a resource- a foolish resource- but a resource no less. All that was left was to disappear into the night.

”You still have your end of the bargain to hold up.”


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A Different Kind of Poison (Dexius)

Postby Dexius on July 10th, 2016, 10:16 pm


For a moment, standing near the exit to the dark alley Dex almost considered going back and asking the woman why she was so cynical. For a moment. After that though, his thoughts drifted through the events of the night. Wandering through the city at night coming to a dead end time and time again without reprieve. It all seemed so appropriate then that he would find a rival in the night with black clothes as dark as her heart. Life was not fair they would say, that nothing comes easy to those that wait and friends were no different. Not that he expected to find a friend in the middle of the night during the troubled times that the city was going through. But he did not expect to find a black clad rat either.

Dex grabbed his pack and retrieved a small metallic object before returning it to his back, still awaiting her response if there was one. The artist was an enigma, for now at least. She liked to ask questions so it easily seemed like the woman would be the knowledgeable type but she behaved more..rashly than he had expected. The way she responded to him was almost defensive, like she had something to protect or to hide perhaps pertaining to her supposed night vision. That or..maybe she just had a bad attitude, who would know? A rat trapped in a corner brings it fangs to bear after all, she should do no different.

Looking down at his shirt he realized that the crushed charcoal would probably have to be washed out but he patted out as much of it as he could. Black smudges remained on his white shirt, a reminder for the rest of the night of the transpired events. Perhaps he needed a change of wardrobe. Dex was not exactly a man of style but if he is to be around the streets at night then it might be best to blend in. Easier to hide in the pack of rats than to look like the preying cat.

Finally the woman gave her response. The sixtieth then. He had ten..no nine days then as the light of the morning sun began to pierce the darkness of night. Nine days before he had to meet with the rat woman again, he pondered what kind of words she would cut at him with on their next meeting. It mattered not though, for he would be in charge of their next encounter.

Dex slowly pulled the scarf down from his face, still facing his exit from the alley. He had no desire to see her again this day. "I hope you're as good with your feet as you are with your hands, Artist." Bringing the small object to his mouth the Symenestra blew life into the flute for the first time since arriving in the city. He played a few basic notes before taking a pause to address the woman, the rat, once more. "I also expect that you are smart enough to pick out a rapier at the local smith from the rest of the weapons there. Consider that your first lesson, if you come empty handed then do not come at all."

After inspecting the flute in his hands he attempted to shine up the exterior with a clean part of his tunic. He had not meant to ignore the instrument since coming to Alvadas but the city had a lot more in store than he first thought. It kept him fairly busy. "Sixtieth of Summer. See you at the port. Hope you don't mind getting scratched. Swords are mediums of the blood, expect to see such a sight."

"If you are afraid of your own blood...get a paper cut. Should be simple enough." With that Dex placed his fingers around the metallic instrument once more before breathing into it again. His notes were soft as he began his slow walk back around the corner towards his home. One note after another, slowly. But more quickly than he had expected the would be musician already missed a note. Pausing for a moment at the edge of the corner Dex let out a very audible sign of frustration before returning his scarf to cover his face and sliding the flute into his belt. Now was not the time for this, he would practice again in peace by himself.

He looked back down the alley again for the last time before making his leave of the dark alley altogether. What a strange night with a strange woman. He found, talked, fought, and learned from the very arrogant sounding woman. Soon he would be the teacher though. The rat-artist would learn how to fight in nine days and he would be the one to teach her. Rubbing the bridge of his nose Dex wondered how he could get into these situations. All he could do was shrug before heading off back into the city proper. Alvadas made all sorts of situations, but how would the next end?
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A Different Kind of Poison (Dexius)

Postby Kaleidoscope on September 18th, 2016, 10:46 pm

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  • Observation: +1 XP
  • Interrogation: +4,
  • Socialisation: +2,
  • Weapon: Crossbow: +2,
  • Intimidation: +3,
  • Investigation: +1,
  • Teaching: +3,
  • Drawing: +3,
  • Subterfuge: +1,
  • Rhetoric: +1
Lores
  • Aislyn: Illusionist insomniac
  • Witness to a mugging
  • Dexius: Complex historied, black-haired Symenestra man
  • Symenestra: Sometimes known as Widows
  • Intimidation: Using passive-aggressiveness to make the target uncomfortable
  • Subterfuge: Lying on the spot
  • Kalinor: Home city of the Symenestra
  • Symenestra originally from forests
  • Dexius: A newcomer to Alvadas
  • Teaching: Straight to the point
  • Viratas: God of Essence, or Blood
  • Symenestra: Most have pale skin
  • Viratas: God of the Symenestra
  • Dexius: Wilfully or woefully ignorant?
  • Drawing: Folding paper to transfer an image in charcoal
  • Dexius: A man of many emotions, possessor of an apparent soul
  • Dira: Goddess of Death
  • Disappearance the same as death
  • Dexius: A killer
  • Dexius: Killed his friend named Alasyia
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Aislyn as Thief is so bitingly, deliciously sarcastic- and intricately paranoid. Love it.


 
Dexius
Skills
  • Observation: +3,
  • Persuasion: +3,
  • Socialisation: +3,
  • Interrogation: +1,
  • Drawing: +5,
  • Rhetoric: +1,
  • Teaching: +1,
  • Intimidation: +1,
  • Play Musical Instrument: Flute: +1
Lores
  • A competition of sleep deprivation
  • Wistful thoughts of family
  • Raimu (Aislyn): Passive-aggressive, black-haired artist
  • Raimu (Aislyn): Potential liar, analyst and dodgy character
  • Viratas: God of Essence
  • Symenestra originally from forests
  • Ionu: Deity of Illusion
  • Ionu: Controls Alvadas
  • Dexius: An artistic soul of sorts
  • Drawing like swordplay
  • Socialisation: More difficult than it looks
  • Ionu: A deity who chooses both genders and nothing, too
  • Drawing: Perspective is important
  • Drawing: Light then dark
  • Raimu (Aislyn): Biting rat in the night
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Dexius is such a fascinating character! Both aggressive, observant and strangely emotional all in one. I look forward to reading more.


Comments: This thread was an amazing read, congratulations to you both. I'm only sorry I didn't get around to grading it sooner. I especially enjoyed Dexius' sudden bite of emotion when Aislyn taunted him about Alasyia... that was excellent. And the way you both thought you'd be the one in control of your next encounter. I look forward to seeing your two character's again.

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