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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

In The Company of Chaos

Postby Elias Caldera on January 21st, 2018, 2:43 am

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Another day come to its bitter conclusion and Mikayas had still found no solace in his work. With a chorus of heavy sighs and a languid, meandering pace setting the evening’s mood, the old man made sure to lock up for the night as he had done every night now for nearly eighty years. With the bolts on the door secured and his eyelids growing heavier by the tick, so began the almost ritualistic walk through the rows of sculptures and carvings that adorned his shop on the way back to his room. This was usually a time he looked forward to at the end of a long day, a time to revel and appreciate, a chance to enjoy his finest creations as he toured past the artworks on display, greeting each like an old friend and faithful compatriot. Now, the work seemed only to mock him with their beauty, reminding him of his damnable failures and constant stumbles with each one passed. It was always the same damn story every time he’d run up against his artists’s block.

Today had been particularly trying however.

For weeks now he had labored over his latest piece, toiling away against the marble like a slave in the mines, and for weeks the stone had continued to vex him to no end. Every edge seemed perfect under his precise touch, every crease and curve a masterpiece beneath his ruthless inspection… until he decided to step away and studied the whole of his creation from a new angle, only to find his bells of sweat and toil had amounted to a piece of trash as amateurish and shoddy as his first days as an apprentice. It was frustrating beyond words at this point, and his temper had gotten the better of him more than a few times now, even going so far as scaring away customers with his tantrums. Well, scaring them away more than usual that was.

Perhaps that was for the best, at least until his work was done and this final commission was complete and put past him. It had certainly helped when those little hooligans from down the street had come traipsing around his tore again at noon, returning like a case of the lover’s pox to call him names like ‘stumpy’ or ‘splinter toes’ while their grubby fingers pawed and groped at the nude sculptures like incessant animals. Usually he’d trade insults from afar, chasing them around the store on his one good leg for a little before they grew bored and ventured back to whatever hell pit had spawned them, but this time he had had no patience for their absurd antics, and had instead resorted to flinging his instruments at the little shykes before they’d even had a chance to fondle the holy visage of the Voice. He’d listened to them yelp and squeal as the measurement sticks and mallets rained down upon their heads without warning, and in their hasty retreat, one had even taken a tumble into the canal with the most satisfying ‘kersploosh’ Mikayas had ever quite heard. That had cheered him up a great deal.

There had been another in particular who the endless vexation had served to rid of him of as well; a vagrant of some sort who had come snooping around, pretending to peruse his wares as if he could possibly afford anything from the sculptor’s shop. Mikayas was old, but he wasn’t a fool, and he knew a thief when he saw one. The old artist had no time for wild eyed lakeshore rabble who on occasion managed to wash up in the city proper, and had sent the pale wretch fleeing from his wrath just as quickly as he had done with the other delinquents that came before. That had been bells ago now thought, and it had been an exhausting day ever since, with more setbacks than success. He was tired. Too tired to think, to grieve, or even sit down with his prayer book before bed, he just wanted to sleep and hoped to Rhysol his blasted dreams weren’t as haunted with aggravation as his waking moments were.

With an overwhelming yawn that managed to crack more of his old bones than he cared to count, the sculptor pushed open the door to his humble abode and immediately noticed something was off.

He’d lived in this same shack at the back of his establishment for decades, and even his old weathered eyes could tell when something was out of place, especially when everything had been in the same spot for years and years. It didn’t take a detective to tell something was wrong however, when he pushed open the door and heard a hollow bump, followed by the tell tale sounds of an empty bottle rolling across the floor.

Hesitantly, he reached for the flint and tinder, hands shakily rubbing together as he fumbled for his candles to illuminate the dusk’s dark reprieve. When the spark finally found the wick and the flame took hold, Mikayas gasped in horror at the nightmare revealed in the dim light.

Bottles… of wine… everywhere!

His wine!

Someone had raided his bloody cellar, drinking dry every last drop before throwing aside the empty husks and moving on to the next. They littered the floor in the dozens, some spilled or simply tossed aside, and often accompanied by the occasional crumb or vile mess of food here and there. They’d gotten into his god damned pantry as well it seemed, wasting not only his vintage 411 AV brand, but also his petching jerky and bread.

Those little mongrels.” Mikayas cursed through a spray of rage induced spittle as he stomped over to the kitchen to see the full extent of the damage. They must have snuck in while he’d been distracted with his sculpting, ransacking his home while he worked diligently upon his craft, those motherless curs! He was going to kill those damn creetons when he got his hands on them, he swore it!

As he rounded the corner, fury and malice fueling his stride, he continued to light candle after candle in an ever-enraging effort to cast clarity on the totality of the mayhem that had become his come. As his spray of sparks gave birth to the latest flame however, Mikayas came a to sudden and abrupt halt as the flickering fires unveiled something hidden in the darkness.

Something moving.

Were they… were they still here?

Slowly, uncertainty, the old man raised his candle lantern to burn away the shadows and delve deeper into the blackness before him. It was something he regretted instantly, as a pair of cold, blue eyes quietly turned to meet his gaze from within the shivering shroud of night.

It smiled at him.

Then It lunged.


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Damn his old bones! Damn his blasted leg! If he’d been twenty years younger… he’d still be a hundred years too old to get away, let alone even pretend to indulge the idea of fighting back. He could hear the heavy footsteps hot on his trail as he turned to flee, and the ancient artist hadn’t even made it a step before a hand had wrapped itself around his mouth, muffling his scream. He could feel it was slick and wet with something as it squeezed the breath from him, and when his wide and panicked eyes fell upon the fingers strangling his cry, the old man realized they were covered in blood. Oh god, help me. Rhysol, I beseech thee, save your faithful servant!

In vain he tried to free himself, to fight off the arm that ensnared his frail form from behind, but the effort proved as fruitless as his prayers, his boney fists bouncing off the pale flesh that gripped him like a vice with laughable effect.

Why you, hmmm?” He heard a course voice hiss into his ear. It started another round of flailing and futile resistance as the sculptor’s muffled wails died in the clutches of his mad eyed assailant. “Why did they choose you, old man? What did you do to earn their ire I wonder?” His breath was hot upon Mikayas’s face, the familiar, pungent stink of the craftsman’s vintage stock so thick upon his words they burned the nostrils. Mikayas’s struggling only intensified, his eyes darting from place to place in a desperate attempt to find something nearby that could help him. His candle had fallen to floor in the bedlam, its faltering light casting a thousand dancing shadows across the walls as the two struggled. Eventually, amidst the madness and fear, the old man’s terror-stricken gaze fell upon the table the intruder had been sitting at, a veritable feast of stolen food and drink splayed out haphazardly upon the old kitchen staple. Something about it seemed off though, like an imperfection in one of his pieces that drew the eye away from everything else around it into one sole spot.

It was a glass inkwell that caught his attention for some reason, though why he couldn't tell, yet nor cold he look away. It stood apart from the ransacked banquet, carefully and distinctly separated from everything else as if it held some importance even amidst the crazed gluttony that had been indulged here. Mikayas staired deeper within, for some reason, hopeful he might find the answers he sought and the salvation he needed within its murky depths. Within its see through encasing however, something black and dangerous swirled, something that wasn’t ink.

Doesn’t matter.” He heard from behind him as the madman shuffled. His gripped didn’t loosen upon Mikayas’s mouth so much as it shifted to pry apart the old man’s lips. A pathetic, mewling sound escaped the craftsman as he noticed the vial being lowered from above next. “You’ll be playing my game now, not there’s.

It was blood! The thing was full of blood!

And then we’ll see whose the real puppet here!


@ProphetThis a long post with just a lot of preamble. Whats important to note though, and what may not have been too clear since I wrote this the way I did, is that Elias has swapped out the black blood given to him with his own blood, hiding the latter in an ink pot. So when he gives Mikayas the vial, nothing should happen.
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In The Company of Chaos

Postby Prophet on February 11th, 2018, 11:10 pm

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Shameful, spying on one’s neighbors but such is the life of one paid to observe. From above, shapes and figures look a lot alike but there’s an art to understanding a location, a target…a job. Benito was just a slave brought up in the Institute. He was taught to follow orders and adhere to people of power. The researchers were intelligent people but they were ultimately bound by the same strings that held the kelvic. It wasn’t about being free. Freedom is the world’s biggest illusion. It’s about knowing your place and understanding how to make it comfortable.

In a series of trials that showcased a new class of slaves for the powerful and wealthy crowd of Ravok, Benito had been given an advantage. His clean cut look and straight jaw had endeared him to Amanda Nitrozien- the head researcher. Having been taken to her bed on half a dozen occasions, she confided the stress of the upcoming trials and emphasized the importance for everyone including the slaves. Benito was a smart creature. He found out early in life that curiosity is best kept in check and pleasing your masters always pays off in the end. Proof of this was satisfying a woman in bed but the information he gleaned about the presentation of kelvics paid off and continued to do so well after he had been purchased.

Benito was a kelvic whose animal form was that of a grey gull. He was an excellent flyer and also a decent swimmer so his skills as plant were innately better than a great deal of his peers. His cutthroat attitude and lack of deep loyalties made him the perfect expendable game piece for a high ranking official in the Black Sun. Which explains his purpose in this instance since Benito was sent to watch a particular individual. His job had been boring for many days since the marked person was old and only left his shop to go home and only left his home for work. That all changed when a big man with dark shadows over his blue eyes showed up. Benito flew off in wide circles with no particular direction but is mind was set as was his place in his master’s good graces.

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When Elias took Mikaya, he was being watched. The entire setup was under surveillance and even the timing of the ruffians’ arrival was scripted. Elaborate was a word one might use; complicated others would say. Regardless of how one classifies the act, it was necessary for what was to follow.

There was no way to surprise the rogue operative in his position. The old man’s home was perfect for a paranoid mind since it offered a complete line of sight from all angles. When an unexpected visit could not be concealed, shock was the next best thing. Boots marched along the plaform in front of the store as Ravosalas numbering close to a dozen pulled up and dumped soldiers and paladins, apprentices and agents and even a Dravlak. They moved through the sculptor’s sanctuary and proceeded to line up in the small space outside of the hut. One man with white eye moved forward and placed himself right outside the door. He spoke in an even tone and shrugged one shoulder while turning his head as if to stretch.

“Caldera- bring him out.” He lifted a hand and the Dravlak was brought off to the right. The handler and his beast were given a wide berth. The thing resembled a fat lizard with randomly sized and placed fins all along its form. It had two tails, one was wide and flat and the other was extremely long and thin like a whip. Its head was hard to identify since it flickered and blurred almost constantly as if caught in between an illusion and a curse. The platform creaked beneath the monstrosity as its breath formed saliva which dripped on the wood and slowly burned holes down to the water.
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In The Company of Chaos

Postby Elias Caldera on February 18th, 2018, 3:44 am

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Oh come now, you’re being a baby about all this…

Mikayas, teary eyed and dazed, looked up from his ever-expanding puddle on the floor, countless questions formulating themselves on his quivering lips as he tried to piece together his senses… only to have them dashed again as another bout of vomiting gripped him.

Elias rolled his eyes disapprovingly. Their grand moment together had been as anticlimactic as anticipated, but the Ravokian was sure it had served its purpose all the same. Now they waited together in a poignantly awkward manner, the old sculptor on his knees, trying his best to rid himself of yesterday’s lunch as gruesomely as possible, and Elias, picking his teeth with a notable air of boredom on the other side of the room where his shoes wouldn’t get quite so wet.

So… how ‘bout this weathe- Oh, there they are.

A pounding at the door. His name from a stranger’s tongue. A lot of boots marching into formation. That, the mage hadn’t expected. Such a grand show a force, and for what? Certainly it wasn’t for his sake, was it? Perhaps it was to contain Mikayas then? He turned to the seasoned old artist and gave him a quizzical look, one that was promptly returned ten fold by the poor old bastard as he fumbled for meaning behind all of this. Elias didn’t have time to catch him up. “Coming!” He shouted lackadaisically at the door. “Just give us a moment to uh…” He turned to Mikayas once more, though this time it was for silent assistance with a plausible excuse to keep their guests waiting.

Something vile dripped from the old coot’s mouth as he stared gob smacked at his attacker.

It seemed the the old man was going to insist on being a thorough stick in the mud.

…get dressed?

That had come out as more of a question than he’d intended, but regardless. He only needed a moment. As they spoke, his hands had gone to work, twisting and bending to take on a number of different seals. “I’m going to level with you, Mikayas” Elias began, his voice hushed and hasty as he toiled. “You’re proper petched here. You see those men outside are the one’s who sent me to do this to you, and I can’t imagine they’ll have any reservations of doing worse once they’ve got their hands on you.” Something effervescent and barely discernible began to pour from the scarred man’s fingers, the blue tinged substance draining into the floorboards like smoke, yet not quite. “Which means, your best bet of surviving the night… is with me.

Mikayas gawked at him.

Like I said, proper petched.

Elias knew the old sod wasn’t the only doomed soul in that room. He needed a contingency plan for that small army he heard make landfall just outside. A plan a, b and petching c for all the good it would do him. The resting had helped, and being free from those damn four walls was doing wonders for his health with every passing tick, but in truth, it had been the food he'd stolen that had been the spectacular savior of the night… well, the food and the wine.

His strength was returning, though not quite fast enough for his liking. He was not quite the same as he was before his imprisonment, and the the sorcerer had to figure he never quite would be again, but for, what he had would have to be enough.

Res continued to flow forth from the reimancer before promptly disappearing beneath the floorboards. “You’ll have a choice out there,” Elias continued, making his way over to the old man and grabbing him by the arm. Mikayas struggled initially, but the ravokian’s grip refused not budge. “Just like I will…” he said, voice trailing off as he absentmindedly patted the ink vial full of blood in his pocket and the small knife next to it. His eyes seemed to venture off somewhere into the distance, staring at something too far away to see, before abruptly snapping back to reality and considering the old man in his clutches once more. “Whelp, out of the frying pan and into the fire we go, come along then.” As they made their way to the door, the res mirrored its master's movements from below.

A moment later, and the front door creaked open ominously before the lone stryfer who’d been knocking.

A pale, scarred face popped around the corner, a feigned smile of surprise lighting up his dreary features. “Oh my! Look, Mikayas, guests!” The door swung open to reveal the pair of them standing there. Mikayas looked just as bewildered and mad with worry as ever, but Elias was studying the small force of apprentices and soldiers arrayed behind the big man propped in their way. Holy shyke, they brought a Dravalak…

Sir, I have to ask… did you bring enough men?” He leaned a bit closer. “This one is quite the savage beast, I’m not sure were safe here.” He whispered conspiratorially behind a planted palm.

I mean just look at him.

Mikayas shivered quietly.

Absolutely terrifying.
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In The Company of Chaos

Postby Prophet on March 19th, 2018, 1:06 am

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The Dravlak handler stepped forward to read the sarcastic face of the one they were sent to apprehend. He smirked to match Caldera’s expression. “Have it you way, ya pale swine.” The man snapped his fingers and released the chain to which he’d been holding. The beast of unholy consummation twisted its maw into a snarl then released a billowing roar which was like the thunder of a faraway storm mixed with the airy release of a punctured lung. It was rending the world around them!

A yellowish wave of energy radiated out in a swirling globe that expanded rapidly yet seemed to slow things down which was utterly confusing. Those of weak mind turned to gelatinous piles of matter splattered and smashed by armor and gear on the platform; Mikayas was the first to drop into nothing. Some men seemed to take longer to respond to the effects but the creature continued to bellow and channel forth its corruptive power. Several of the men directly in front of Caldera dropped their arms and tried to jump into the lake only to find their bodies did not hold enough rigidity to spring from their stances. One man remarked as his face lost its shape- eyes dropping back into his skull and his teeth spewing out from his lips like foam. “My bones are mel-” The rest was simply a gurgle. When the effects began to soak into Caldera’s body, the pain of having a broken bone would be multiplied times number of bones in his body. He would pass out before seeing himself become a puddle.

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The sound of water being poured into a glass would rouse the unconscious man- Elias Caldera. Eyes would open to find a well-lit room decorated in simple yet elegant décor; well-made furniture with tooled upholstery, flowing curtains and sashes, a huge shelf of books that ranged through what must have been every language under the gods and a hand-carved chest that seemed to be the room’s focal point. As the shock of daylight faded and more details could be absorbed, the source of the sound made herself known. A woman dressed in the white robes of a virgin moved around a desk and brought forth a golden tray with two carved wooden cups and a carafe of white wine. These things were placed on a small stool next to Elias then she took one of the cups and turned away before much could be gleaned of her appearance.

With elegant steps, she strode around the chest and gestured to it several times with lazy fingers before taking a long drink and turned on her bare heel to face the apprentice. “Can’t? Or wont?” Her face was clearly visible now. The woman was in her early twneties but bore the seasoned expression of someone who was wise beyond her years. Eyes like a doed, brown and watery,, scoured the quivering form of the would-be soldier. Thick lips, lucious and red, split for another drink of the cool refreshment which gave her a chance to look into the mage’s eyes more deeply. Her straight nose was the perfect anchor for her features and drew her natural beauty to a place of fine art. Her hair was freely flowing down her back in strangs of golden silk with hints of amber that glistened like embers beneath a crown. “Kind sir, you really should drink. I do not understand your protests. The wine will help you regain your strength.” She walked to the other side of the chest. Her fingers lingered near it as if tempted to open it but she recoiled several times as if afraid of the thing.

The chest, itself, was a pale wood that had a strong aroma of citrus. The carvings were in great detail and depicted several battles but none so perfectly captured as the portrayal of Sylir avenging the murder of his father upon the Deceiver, Rhysol. The drop of blood fell into a field and became a lake where the last depiction showed a city of light. There was something magnificent about the whole thing- a lake with spires and castles rising from the waters and a thriving civilization of peace protected within. The woman moved around and took another sip of her own cup then offered it to his lips as she knelt beside him. Her eyes trembled and her hands were shaking but she persevered. As she pushed the wood up to his lips, she whispered once more. “Drink and explain to me why you won’t help us… or why you can’t. Please?” One hand now held the cup to his lips while the free hand clutched at his chest. “Please!”

Elias found himself to be unrestrained but dressed only in a single draping of white linen which ran from his shoulders to his ankles with large holes cut for his arms. His body was weak and his mind was cloudy as if he couldn’t remember the events leading up until this point. He bore the same scars but they seemed fresher.. More pronounced. He had no weapons or gear anywhere in sight.
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Postby Elias Caldera on March 25th, 2018, 11:53 pm

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His hands red and trembling, his heart all but broken, the Caldera remembers standing there upon the pier, blood dripping from his fingers as they tightened around the dagger’s hilt. Amidst the pain, the confusion, and the betrayal, he remembers most of all the look in Caiden’s eyes as they stared down at him in disbelief. He remembers the man’s lips trying to speak, his hands fumbling upon Elias’s even as the blade sunk deeper. He remembers then the way those eyes went hard and anguished as the shadow of Torian fell upon them both and realization dawned like the morning sun. The truth had been revealed in its light, and the mistake became clear as day.

Elias remembers his father’s final words to him in that moment. The words that would haunt him for the rest of his days...

"Elias, what have you done?"

He remembers...

He remembers... it’s just a memory.


The mage woke with a start, eyes bloodshot and weary as they sprung open to behold a sight that made no sense whatsoever. Where was he? How had he gotten here? Where were the stryfe, the soldiers, Mikayas? The last thing he remembered was that sound -gods, that terrible, unnatural sound. A scream that rent apart reality and sundered the world. He had died then, he was sure of it, but in that brief, endless moment amidst the suffering and the pain, Elias Caldera had known relief. Relief, because it was finally over and he could peace at last… yet here was once more, in this familiar room, with this familiar woman.

What did she want from him? Could she not see with her resplendent eyes he was a man with nothing left to give! Her beauty was astounding, angelic even, but her perfection only served to highlight the flaws in her features as she circled her prey. He could read the desperation in her face, even as she sipped from her dreaded cup. For some reason he could not understand, that desperation terrified him. The pit in his belly only deepened as she fell on her knees before his near crippled form, hands grasping at his chest. Panic overwhelmed the soldier, and he struggled against her touch as if it were fire upon his flesh. No! he cried out within his mind as hazy blue eyes went wide with fear, No!!!

With a guttural scream, Elias slapped aside the goblet, dashing its sickly sweet contents across the floor as he heaved himself up from the seat and pushed aside the priestess who accosted him so!

He collapsed upon his hands and knees, his body aching with wounds both fresh and old. He tried to run, but when that failed and his weakened legs abandoned him, he crawled instead. On blistered palms he dragged himself from the turmoil, eager to escape, to get away from this horrid place and back to… he didn’t know where it was he hoped to go, but anywhere was better than here. Anything would have been better than this.

Instead of salvation however, Elias found himself confronted by a chest instead. Sullen eyes drifted to its details, to the familiar depiction of Sylir and his great revenge upon the cur, Rhysol. He recognized the carvings, he’d seen it’s like a thousand times before upon temple walls and cheap dockside souvenirs alike. It was as recognizable as Lake Ravok itself, and yet there was something different about it. Something… off. His hand reached out to take a hold of it, but hesitated before his fingers could brush the pale wood.

I don’t deserve it.” He heard himself mumble. “I don’t deserve it!

You know I trained for years to become part of the order. Dedicated my body and my soul to the purity of the Ebonstryfe, because I believed more than anything that our cause was righteous, and our purpose true… but I wasn’t.

The images carved upon the box had begun to shift, expanding as if to envelope him completely before abruptly shrinking again in an attempt to hide. The woman was practically forgotten by then, Elias’s tale whispered to the ever-changing shapes as if they were the ones asking the questions.

I thought I knew betrayal once, thought I had it defined, was even arrogant enough to believe I was its 'master.' I was a fool. A child who knew nothing save his own predictable pride, and when I plunged the dagger into my Caiden’s heart, I realized that too late… for either of us.

Eyes squeezed shut against the tears brimming behind them.

I looked into my father’s face as I stole his life, and in it I saw my god’s face looking back at me.” He paused, breath shuddering and unsteady as the memories that were more than just memories rolled in like the coming storm. “…and I flinched.” He had known failure that day, and in turn, he had known nothing but doubt ever since. Doubt in his god, his cause, himself… that single act had broken him completely. He thought he’d understood betrayal, but when the moment came, he recognized the lie his life had been up until that point, and the realization had left the boy little more than a shattered mess of shame and regret.

He had killed his father…

I killed my father… for nothing.

Elias threw back his head and let loose a bellow so pained and heartbroken it shook the room with its sorrow. “Oh god, I failed him!” He cried, gnashing his teeth as hands grasped at his disheveled beard and hair as he began to tear. “I failed you!” He had lived with this grief since the day he’d fled Ravok, and every day since he had known its torment from dusk to dawn. Now, here in this place, he felt that anguish renewed, and its harsh press upon his heart was stronger than ever.

Why now? Why did the pain of his betrayal sting so bitterly today instead of yesterday or the day before? Because now he knew he sought forgiveness, and in that same instant, he knew he did not deserve it… but he had to ask none the less.

For if he could not be forgiven, then all his scars and suffering, all the death and destruction, they would have been for nothing. It had to have meaning, If not for his sake, then for Caiden’s. It just had to!

Rhysol!

The name reverberated throughout the quaint setting. He had not called out to his god in such a manner in what felt like a lifetime. “Rhysol.” This time, the Defiler was called upon much more quietly, much more desperately. “Please.” Elias begged, his hands reaching out to seize the chest before him. “Please. I don’t know what to do…” Fingers began to seek the lip of the box, pushing and prying. “I don’t know what I am.” He could feel it beginning to open ever so slightly against his feeble touch, but what lay inside, he still wasn’t sure he wanted to behold.

But he could not turn away this time, he could not flinch from his destiny again.

Help me...
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In The Company of Chaos

Postby Prophet on April 7th, 2018, 12:03 am

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The woman watched with a look of patience and disappointment as the man flung himself about in wailing fits of self-pity. It wasn’t until he reached for the chest that her face lit up. Fate was fickle but the human condition was as constant as Syna and Leth chasing one another across the sky. The beauty walked with graceful steps, silent as her toes were pointed each time so that her foot would pad down like a cat. It allowed her garments to shift in a very natural wave as her lithe frame weaved its way across the floor to stand to the left and behind Elias.

The chest was opened and inside was a solid gold mouth filled with jagged rubies rubies for teeth. The mouth was open and twisted like one in agony or bitter rage. If he touched it, the gold would melt and the rubies would turn to rust. If he did not, it would slowly rot away like an apple that had been bitten once and placed in the sun. Gently, she rested her hand upon the back of the soldier's neck. If he looked back to see her, she would be the same beautiful woman- calm and patient but her eyes would’ve bled to clear orbs of swirling white. The girl bit her lip until it bled then kissed the back of his neck right at the base of his skull on top of the spine. A burning sensation would penetrate his very being and keep him from moving as would the suddenly iron-like grip of the small woman.

“Elias-” the voice was that of the woman’s but it also crackled with power… “You disappoint me, Elias.” The angelic face bounced from one ear to the other. “You seem so strong at times and I was ready to welcome you into my arms; call you my brother!” The hand let go and the girl twisted around and straddled the man forcing him to the ground with a strength born of divine nature. The look on the woman’s face was pure ecstasy as the blood on Elias’ neck scorched his flesh and drilled into his nervous system. “You love the games and the wicked ways in which people give up on their oaths but you come before me and you weep?!” The girl threw her hands up and then let them fall lifelessly onto his chest. “It’s no wonder you use hypnotism to get petched! You’re pathetic!!” To emphasize her point, the girl gyrated her hips down against his groin and made a face that puckered to one side of her plump lips. “I guess I’d hypnotize women, too, if I was in your pants.”

The woman popped up and walked to the chest. She reached in and plucked up a skull that looked rather real. “This is your father’s head- should’ve been a crowning moment for you but it wasn’t.” The woman dashed the skull against the floor and it turned to dust which started a strange reaction in the room. Everything began to spin as if the reality in which they stood was water twisting down into a drain. The white eyes settled on Elias. “I cursed you with my blood, Caldera. I’ll know where you are and therefore be able to keep tabs on you. I had high hopes for your life to be involved in mine. Consider this a last chance to figure out what you’re supposed to do with it.” The girl vanished into the suction and within a few ticks, so did everything else including the soldier. When he woke up, Elias would be lying in a low patch of walkway behind some buildings on the docks. A child was untying his boots and froze when he realized his mark was awake. The boy scattered around a corner before there could be anything done to him.

Elias :
You have received a negative mark from Rhysol.

Individuals marked by Rhysol often experience a burning sensation around where the god's blood touches them. This sensation is akin to touching white-hot metal. The burning does not stop with the flesh however as it quickly spreads into the blood so that the entire body feels as though the skin will split open at any moment. The pain then extends into the mind where one's head feels as though the skull will fracture at any point and bring about death. Death however does not come and after what seems like an eternity, yet only lasts a moment or two, the burning pain is replaced by a cool, soothing, almost erotic feeling that washes away all thoughts of pain and death.

Those cursed by Rhysol experience much of the same initial suffering as those who are marked but the pain diminishes only so that it is centralized around their mark. The cursed also suffer from period headaches and moments of stabbing pain around their mark. They do however gain the corruption ability albeit uncontrolled. More often than not, the corruption is passed on to those whom the cursed would not want negatively affected by it such as a friend or loved one.

This is not what you wanted, I know...but it’s only the beginning. ;)
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In The Company of Chaos

Postby Ruvya on August 31st, 2018, 9:55 pm

G R A D E
Endurance +3
Philosophy +3
Subterfuge +1
Unarmed Combat +2
Tactics +3
Hunting +1
Glyphing +1
Persuasion +2
Rhetoric +4
Intimidation +2
Weapon: Dagger +1
Larceny +1
Interrogation +1
Acting +1


The Black Hole: Not a fairy tale but a real and desolate place
Philosophy: Purpose gives a man will to live
Subterfuge: Fabricating a story to cover the truth
Rats are not good friends; you are dinner!
Tactics: Kill rats to forge weapons from their bones
Hunting: Becoming the bait by drawing your own blood
Philosophy: A dignified death
Tactics: Carving glyphs onto your own flesh
Elias’ Confession
Acting: Surprised
Unarmed Combat: Tearing out a man’s throat with your teeth
The slaver trade is an ancient & honorable profession
Intimidation: Waving a weapon around threateningly
Tactics: Feigning weakness to seize an opportunity for attack
Larceny: Looting a dead man
Bohir Adams: The man to talk to, to find a man in Ravok
Elias: Enjoys jokes
Interrogation: Offering the ‘easy way’ or a ‘painful way’
Persuasion: Pointing out yourself as the best of the worst
Elias: The sarcasm is real
Elias: Seeking forgiveness for his father’s murder
Chaon: The mark of Rhysol
Elias: Marked, and cursed, by Rhysol


✚ Leather Jerkin, good quality
✚ 50 Silver Mizas
✚ 1 Steel Dagger



You possess incredibly immersive writing, Elias, I was on the edge of my seat! If you have any queries about your grade, feel free to lemme know via PM.
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