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Center of scholarly knowledge and shipwrighting, Zeltiva is a port city unlike any other in Mizahar. [Lore]

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Postby Eden on December 3rd, 2010, 7:59 pm

"Isn't she cute?" Iris asked in reference to the doe that was grazing before them. But Eden barely heard her. His eyes were bugging out, his mouth was watering, and he was doing his best not to lick his lips. He wasn't so sure about how successful he was however.

Eden's body was tense, ready to spring, he had already taken off his cloak and lain it over his body. It draped over him like a blanket draped over a sleeping human. MUST HAVE MEAT. MUST HAVE MEAT. MUST HAVE MEAT. KILL, KILL KILL his brain screamed as his mouth watered and his stomach rumbled. "Meat," he muttered, as he tore off the rest of his clothes, under the cloak, and instantly shifted into his animal form, a cheetah.
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Postby Iris Dove on December 3rd, 2010, 8:29 pm

Iris looked over to where Eden was sitting before. He had seemed to vanish, but his clothes were still there. She lifted up his red cloak, and beneath it stood a cheetah. With golden-yellow fur and black spots. It seemed to be staring hungrily at the doe.

"Eden?" she whispered, suddenly realizing that he wasn't what he seemed to be. He could only be... another kelvic. Most likely a half-way decent hunter, and very fast, considering his current form. That doe's toast, she thought, horrified, thinking it too graceful and too beautiful to destroy. Deciding she didn't want him to kill it, she lunged at Eden, grabbing one of his back paws. His fur was soft, and warm, the ground beneath her, cold, hard, and uninviting.
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Postby Eden on December 3rd, 2010, 10:18 pm

Eden's eyes were fixated on his prey. FOOD, FOOD, FOOD, FOOD, FOOD his brain screamed as he began to crouch, getting ready to spring.

Just then, he felt something on his back paw. He looked behind him and growled, Iris was clinging to his foot, as if for dear life. What is she doing there? he wondered, as he turned back to his prey, which was looking at the two of them, eyes wide, alert, ready to spring into action.

Eden's tail swished, and he kicked Iris off to him, leaping after the doe which started to run wildly away. He chased after it growling as he ran. I will get you, he thought, no use running.

He was gaining on the doe, his paws, at the animal's heels. So close....
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Postby Iris Dove on December 3rd, 2010, 10:56 pm

Eden looked back at her and growled. Iris' black eyes bore into him, don't do it, they whispered, silently.

But Eden slipped through her fingers and bounded after the doe. Perfect she thought, the doe's really toast now, nothing I can do but twiddle my thumbs now, she said as she picked up Eden's cloak and folded it into a little square, or at least, as little a square as she could. She needed something to distract her from the chase.

Iris didn't know why, but she didn't want the doe to die. She was tolerant of the slaughter of smaller animals, she was even an ok hunter, but this, this was really really bothering her.
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Postby Eden on December 6th, 2010, 8:15 pm

Eden had caught up to the doe. His claws sinking into her flanks. Ripping. Blood. The doe staggered. Eden ran into it. Sliced its side with his claws. Dug his teeth into its neck. His paws resting on the animal's side. He heard a loud snap. The doe was panting, heart racing, and then dead. He killed it.

He ripped out its throat, started chewing, happily. Ripping at the flesh, and eating mouthful after mouthful. Blood dripping from the doe's body. His lips. His teeth. It tasted so good he didn't care if anyone was disgusted or watching.
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Postby Iris Dove on December 10th, 2010, 6:32 pm

Absolutely disgusted, and trying desperately not to puke, Iris grabbed her things and walked away, trying to clear the frightening image of Eden feasting from her mind, and failing miserably. She wanted to be as far away from him as possible. Iris hoped to never see him again. As attractive as he had been to her at first, it had all been lost in that moment, and she wasn't sure that their was anything he could do to change that. Scratch that she knew there was nothing he could do. So she just walked away, back down to the docks, hoping the fishy smell could overpower her memory, and get Eden out of her mind, forever.
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Postby Panna Cotta on December 31st, 2010, 4:50 am

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EDEN
  • Socialization 2
  • Interrogation 1
  • Hunting 2
  • Lore of Bumping into a Stranger
  • Lore of Zeltiva's Docks
  • Lore of Desiring a Master
  • Lore of Attraction to another Kelvic
  • Lore of Giving into Primal Instincts
IRIS
  • Socialization 2
  • Interrogation 1
  • Lore of Bumping into a Stranger
  • Lore of Humming
  • Lore of Attraction to another Kelvic
  • Lore of Disgust against Carnage
  • Lore of Getting Disappointed with other Kelvics


NOTES:
  • You were right that this was just a socialization thread, but what was great about reading it was the way you both wrote out the scenes and the setting. Zeltiva's docks came alive as you two chillaxed around. :)
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