[Sanctuary] Earning thy keep (Open)

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[Sanctuary] Earning thy keep (Open)

Postby Raiha on November 4th, 2011, 3:31 am

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She smiled when he agreed to come. “Who couldn’t?” she neatly went around him, as if he was made of as much flesh and blood as she was. It was all about common courtesy, after all. “That’s Diallo. He will not bother you,” she sought to reassure Ragnor that the dog, while he certainly looked menacing, wasn’t about to give him any grief. She seemed right, because the big white Deerstalker followed Raiha, giving Ragnor plenty of space as she headed down the steps and headed not for the stables, but the pasture itself where the horses that stayed out overnight were penned. She found Yakini’s familiar Aura easily, spotting it amongst a dozen-odd other horses, and whistled for her mare. The Firemane’s ears perked up and she raised her head, even in the faint light of the morning, and trotted over to see her rider. She usually had something good with her, after all.

“Yakini is an easy keeper,” she explained as she reached to rub the mare’s face and get behind her ears with her fingers. “So she stays out a lot, until the weather turns bad.” She pulled a hunting knife off of her belt and cut into the apple’s juicy flesh, letting the sticky juices coat her palm and drip onto the grass as she cut the core out of quarters and began to work it into slices, which she offered to Yakini, one at a time. “Why do you still linger?” she asked him after a bit as the mare crunched the fruit, piece by piece. “Being a ghost cannot be a pleasant experience.”
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[Sanctuary] Earning thy keep (Open)

Postby Ragnor Matlian on November 6th, 2011, 11:38 pm

His eyes followed her as she went around him, nodding his assent to her polite action. Touching the living was every bit as uncomfortable for him as he suspected it was for them, and he appreciated her not trying to walk through him. The dog seemed to take his manners from her, and was quick to follow the woman down the steps, and willing himself forward to follow Raiha outside in the fresh morning air. Silent, he followed her, his feet hovering only inches above the ground as he let his eyes to wander across the horizon, suppressing the nagging questions that buzzed on the edge of his mind. He was still yet but a stranger here and it was not his place to question things that where about here, no matter how stranger, or curiosity provoking they might be. In Avanthal he had been a unassuming, unquestioning man, simply accepting the way things where, but that had always been made easier by traveling with men he had known all his life, and coming home to a loving family. Now in death satisfying a newborn curiosity seemed to be among the few ways he could derive pleasure in death, and the temptation gained sway more each day.

With death came no patience, only a reason to learn patience for a constant gnawing at his core urged him constantly to actively seek out anything to soothe the anguish he felt buried deep inside by any means necessary, yet he had restraint. Her question was a painful one, and reminded him all to well how much time he'd have to spend on this world before he would know true peace. Still there where many things yet to be done, to many things for him to explain to this woman that he knew only in passing, so he supplied her with a simple answer. "I keep watch over the Sanctuary, and in return my family is saved from debt, and arranged to have a home here" Ragnor said, his voice melting in the air, words seeming to fade as soon as he spoke them. The memories where back, stronger this time, and he wasn't sure if his mind could quite weather them as well as he had before. He clenched his insubstantial fists, as he kept his eyes on the ground, for they alone showed the desperation that overwhelmed him, he needed to distract himself. "What magic strikes your skin?" He added in his usual rumbling tone, his eyes still remaining on the ground as he fought to concentrate on her, and what was happening now to avoid the painful introspection that grew in power within, nagging him to open his mind, and thus fall into thoughtful despair.
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[Sanctuary] Earning thy keep (Open)

Postby Kavala on November 25th, 2011, 4:44 pm

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Her and her son turned, heading back, and continued running along the sand. As she ran, the lessons of the past skipped through her head. Tamar had meant so much to her, and even in the short time her sister-in-law had been in her life she'd passed a great deal on to Kavala. She'd always used to sing Kavala a mantra to keep her form good as she moved. "Top up, Heal up, Knee up... Oh Yea. Reach out claw back, run run run." It was the five basic parts to an upright creatures running action. Each one needed to be considered when one thought of running. A mantra was an instrument for thinking, a way to condition one's mind like one conditioned one's body. Mantras aided Kavala in all things in her life. The Drykas were big on them, and Kavala had adopted the practice herself though she was on the fringe of never really believing she was Drykas anymore... nor anything but a brood mare to the Akalak.

Kavala stretched her legs, continued her intense focused thinking, and passed several men running the opposite way. The Akalak were very health conscious and as the morning grew later, she often had to share the beach with several of them. After flushing a pair of rabbits out of saw grass along the surf, which darted perpendicular to her path to get away, Kavala smiled. The beach was starting to get busy. Gulls wheeled overhead, calling out to her, while tiny creatures in the sand leaped away to flee her passing.

Mantras.

They were a kind of secret weapon or magic. One just didn't need a powerful set of lungs or a strong body to be a good runner. One needed a strong sharp mind as well. And that mind had to have a 'can do' attitude when it came to enough discipline to run from point A to point B and keep up the pace. Kavala glanced over her head at Tasival, nodded to herself, and kept running, going back to thinking about her favorite mantras.

"Lighter, stronger, faster.."
was her favorite. She tended to repeat it coupled with "Relaxing, Smoothly, Flowing.." It helped lengthen her stride, relax her body, and helped her to run with better technique. She often repeated the mantras every other footstrike once she was faltering and needing to stop. They helped her not to stop. The other thing that helped her was pretending her whole body was a magnet. Once she was past her halfway point and coming home, Kavala always visualized Sanctuary as a pull, dragging her effortlessly back. Coupled with the mantras, it almost always granted her extra energy for the return which tended to be smoother than the departure.

So along with the mantras, the visualizations, Kavala thought as she needed Sanctuary again about the common problems her running had. The first and foremost was heel stricking. This was when her heel struck the ground hard acting as a breaking action. It was a detriment and something that she always had to work on. It was when she struck the ground in front of her center of gravity giving herself an awkward stride. She always had to work on getting her weight back over this rather than using the 'claw back' momentum of her foot propelling herself forward. When she heel struck, she tended to land too heavily and stress all her bones, especially at the joints.

It tied back into the first mantra... what she needed to watch for when it came to her physical form.

Another problem for Kavala, one she had to carefully watch, was leaning backwards. A good runner leaned forwards slightly with their whole body rather than breaking at the waist or leaning backwards. If she leaned backwards, as she was prone to do, she would break up her entire action and then her back would hurt after the run.

Kavala also watched her arms. She often had lateral arms. Her arms were always supposed to swing the direction she was running, not across her body. Once she'd stopped carrying Tasi on her runs and actually used the baby pack, this had helped tremendously. Kavala had learned over time if there was excessive lateral movements in her body, it was twisting and then her joints would start to hurt badly. As her arms swung, there was also a difference between the height at the front and at the back of her arms. She brought her arms up to about chin height at the front so her arm was almost parallel to the ground at the back when she was sprinting. It felt high, but it was the reason she moved along so quickly, propelled by the energy of her arm action as well as by her legs. The angle of her lower to upper arm was always around ninety degrees (just less at the front and just more at the back). For longer distances the range her movement was slowed and less exaggerated with the emphasis being on relaxation and balance, as opposed to drive and speed.

Kavala was almost back to Sanctuary, but there were two more issues she had to deal with as she ran. She tried to 'stand up' more as she moved. When she sat as she ran, her hips were not held high enough and she couldn't extend her stride. So if she pretended her pelvis was attached to a puppet master's string and being lifted, her legs lengthened and her stride eased and her mantra's made more sense. When her pelvis wasn't uplifted it wass harder for her to to get significant knee lift and Kavla found herself running fairly flat footed, relying primarily on strength in her quadriceps and not using her hamstrings and calves to their full ability.

By now, sweat poored off her and as she reached the road upwards, leading to Sanctuary, Kavala had one more thing to think about. She corrected, gently, her pendulum legs. She wasn't lifting her feet far enough off the floor to get a good knee lift which shortened her stride length. With a shorter stride, the later part of the action of her leg was always relatively straight, and so she put more stress on her hamstrings. And when one did that, there was a danger to almost instantly getting hurt.

Kavala didn't want to be hurt. So she ran smoothly instead, crossing back around Sanctuary and into the stable yard, nearly colliding with Raiha as she spoke with Ragnor. The Konti unslung Tasi from his backpack, slid him to the ground, then bent double coughing as she tried to catch her breath.
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[Sanctuary] Earning thy keep (Open)

Postby Raiha on January 8th, 2012, 2:32 am

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She listened to what he had to say. Most people didn’t listen to a ghost, she felt, and that was the whole problem. A lot could be solved by talking to them and listening, and much more could be learned. A family. That was a considerable burden... And it wasn’t something Raiha felt would be lifted easily. “I see... and that’s good to know. Some ghosts are rather malevolent,” she smiled grimly at the memory of her possession and having her arm forcibly morphed in order to try to blackmail people into helping her. She watched his Aura as she fed Yakini more of the apple. The mare crunched away contentedly, her velvety muzzle daintily accepting each piece that was proffered. “Where are they now? Where are you from?”

“Many,” she shrugged slightly, palms facing upwards as he asked her about the magics. She wanted to learn and practice and expand her repertoire. Slowly, and safely, of course, but she did want to learn. There was so much -to- learn, after all, and in a way, learning magic was as much of a birthright for her as her Kontinese gift from her mother and her ability to see in the dark from her father. “One doesn’t need magic to know that you’re there, you know. But I saw you earlier with what is called Auristics. The study of auras. That is how I knew you were th---” she was cut off by the arrival of the Konti, and she reached out a long blue arm to steady Kavala as she bent over, while Diallo nuzzled Tasival and licked his face.

Hey, kid!

“Good run?” she greeted her friend once Kavala was able to speak.
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Postby Jackalope on November 8th, 2012, 8:03 pm

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Skill XP Earned Lore Earned
Observation +2 Biding Your Time
Socialization +2 Raiha Can't Sleep When the Birds Are Out



Kavala

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Running +5 Feeling Like a Ghost
Running to Get Old Body Back
Running Technique: Standing Tall
Running Technique: High Knees for Sprint, Low for Distance
Running Secret: Always Warm Up
Running Secret: Keep a Consistant Pace
Running Secret: Adjust the Plan
Running Secret: Track Your Progress
Running Secret: Rest
Using Mantras To Keep Going
Mind Over Matter


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Auristics +1 Inviting Ragnor Along
Socialization +2 Ragnor's Purpose
Listening to a Ghost


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Curious to see where this would have gone. Great indepth analysis of running, Kavala. I gave you a million lore for it because the time put into it was clear. If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, please send me a PM and we can figure it out. :)

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