Training Day (Ana)

Ana visits Zandelia for some training. Zandelia accepts and they get sweaty ;)

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Training Day (Ana)

Postby Zandelia on April 27th, 2012, 10:33 pm

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Zandelia watched Ana from the side, a small distance away but more than enough to find no danger from the learning girl. In many ways she was infinitely pleased with the younger woman, she showed a penchant for learning that would prove useful in her quest for survival – not to mention in Zandelia’s own desires to use her for the greater advancement of her cause, Crimson Edge or not. Howe3ver, there was a warning in her mind from many years ago that gave her pause for caution in pursuing such a conclusion with unabashed swiftness. She had learnt very fast indeed so many years ago, so fast in fact she had outgrown the chains of her domination faster than they could be replaced. Though Zandelia’s own methods were far more layered and less blunt than those she remembered being used on herself she knew when it was time to tread slowly.

I do not want her thinking she can find better elsewhere after all, her bond to me more one of necessity than anything so far. Delicate, fragile and indistinct. I must forge the bond stronger before she grows to individualistic to ever enthrall she mused as her practiced gaze took in Ana’s movements and techniques.

She was practical in how she performed the repetitions, but she was mechanical due to the fact that she was learning by mimicry, which in all fairness was to be expected for someone completely new to the weapon she was trying to learn. Experience and time would work their inevitable magic to bring her skills together to form a newly-forged masterpiece. Still, Zandelia smiled to herself as she was finally able to accept that the girl was ready for the more enjoyably useful portion of the lesson – practical application. She also noted how Ana seemed to exude a slight tentativeness, as if she were truly worried she were a failure, something Zandelia found endearing. She wondered whether it was more down to wishing to excel more than the desire to please her teacher. She could hope for both, though perhaps in vain.

“God, you are learning. You need to cultivate more fluidity of movement to be called competent but for a novice you learn quickly,” Zandelia pointed out in a semi-encouraging tone, “but your footwork could use work and practice will bring out the warrior within soon enough. Perhaps sooner than later” she grinned a little as she set about pulling her practice tonfa back into her hands, their familiarity lending her more confidence now.

“Now, on to something more enjoyable perhaps. Let us see how you move when faced with a real opponent – me. I shall not hurt you and I doubt you could hurt me. Still, practical experience is the only experience worth having. I shall attack and you shall block my attacks as best you can Ana, we will see how you do” she finished as she came to stand in front of the girl now, legs shoulder’s width apart as she gave her time to assimilate what was about to occur.

She set about twirling her tonfa around her in the circular guard she had grown so used to, the most basic tool in her repertoire. As she managed to get it going with some considerable speed she began to add a few flourishes here and there, a feint attack outwards with her right before smoothly flowing back into the guard movement followed by another with her left. It was the rhythm she would use against Ana and afforded the girl time to analyze and predict it well enough. Once she was confident the knowledge had been assimilated she stepped forwards and came within striking range of her pupil. She chuckled, a small thing but sounding slightly portentous perhaps.

“Follow the rhythm and you shall come to no harm, forget it and you’ll probably earn some bruises to learn by girl. They never hurt anyone. Begin!” she spoke out louder now. She decided to shout out her attacks along with her movements.

“To your left!” she barked as she lashed her right tonfa out in a solid horizontal bludgeoning of Ana’s shield, an attack easy enough to block and stop, wood upon wood sending shock waves down each person’s arms. Zandelia was used to it but she knew Ana would need to learn to cope with it sooner rather than later – better to learn with Zandelia after all.

“Right!” she barked next as she swiftly pulled her right tonfa back into her guard and snaked out her left one in a vertical attack to be blocked by Ana’s sword this time, parried and sent out to the side before being brought back into her guard.

“Good! Now we go on instinct and not words! Defend yourself girl!” she barked as she began to launch out her attack without speaking.

She kept up the rhythm she had first established for the first barrage of attacks – shield then weapon, shield then weapon. As Ana grew used to it and built up some confidence she shifted to shield – shield and then sword – sword. She then alternated at random and began to allow some attacks to come in at differing angles. A clip towards her legs to be blocked by the shield followed by an upwards strike to be pushed down towards the ground by the sword. She kept her pace slow and the strength of her attacks to a minimum as much as she could as she knew her skill far outstripped Ana’s and wished not to harm her untowardly. The volleys continued for some time before Zandelia relented and stepped backwards a few paces, sliding her practice tonfa into her left hand alone and nodding at the girl.

“You did well enough. How do you feel lass” she asked her, the first glimmerings of care for the girl being revealed into the open now.


oocHey there! You can use the examples I gave you and create your own on top of them. Feel free to control Zandelia as much as you think necessary to get the job done. We can stop here with your post if you want? Or we can continue. It’s up to you


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Training Day (Ana)

Postby Ana Sol Starris on April 28th, 2012, 10:47 pm



Still the small woman continued to practice, her arms tingling from the effort of holding unacustomed heavy items as well as from the lifting of the sword, to bringing it down, and then bringing it up again, again, and again. Side swipe, grip, raggedy breathing as the exercise was taking even more of a toll on her lanky body. Up, loosen, the blade rose, down, grip, it fell in a diagonal slash in front of her. Spreading her feet apart, comfortably, she felt as if she could walk around better whilst swinging the sword around at this distance. While still being able to move freely, step, fowards she brought a foot as her buckler acted as a wall, thrust, the sword pushed through the air. Back, back, step, side, swipe, fowards, side and repeat again, again, until her feet started to entangle with eachother, throwing her balance off and causing her to flail her arms. Hard grip on the hilt, and the handle to the buckler, she directed her imbalanced fall to her arse in hopes of lessening any damage.. Falling fowards with a sword, well, Ana didn't want to think about that. With a thump her arse connected with the dusty ground, her arms shaking from the effort, breathing heavier, another bead of sweat rolled down her forehead.

Pettttttttch.. Ana thought to herself as she got up onto her feet again, feeling her arms sway and wash over in tremors. Though her body asked, begged her not to, the small thief began the techniques again till Zandelias voice cut through the air. How long had they actually been training? Anas gaze went to the sky quickly, then back to her instucter, feeling a sense of acomplishment pass over her because of Zandelias words. Progress! She had been complimented as well! Ana beamed unintentionally at her teacher, excitement at the thought of being good at something, heck, not even a negative comment nor an insult directed to her. Quiet, Ana wasn't one for talk, especially when someone was giving her feedback on her progress, or her skills, but she nodded vigorously at Zandelia, to the advice and knowledge being passed on to the thief. Letting out a long drawn out breath, she grinned whole heartedly, showing off teeth in the progress. Never once had Ana ever smiled like this to anyone since arriving to Sunberth, actually, Ana couldn't remember smiling like this in Zeltiva either. Puzzlement filled her thoughts, surely life hadn't been that bad in her fathers household..

Out of her thoughts, Zandelia had something about putting what she had been learning to use. Against Zandelia, panick filled her mind as she realized that she had a steel weapon, and Zandelia a wooden one... Her words did not lay on deaf ears, and only ceased her worrys about harming her teacher. Even the womans moves spoke of great experience with the tool, watching her warily while bringing the buckler up in front of her and the sword aloft to her side. Anas demeanor screamed reluctance due to the heavyness in her limbs. Now was not the time to back out though, jerked out of her insecurities and into repetition, Ana brought the buckler up to defend herself against the tonfa. The collision of offence against defence sent shockwaves into Anas hand, down her arm, it caused her to yelp out of surprise as she took a step backwards.

"Right!" Zands voice barked.

Anas arm was slow as she shot it to her right to clumsily block the attack, hand shaking, eyes widening, concentration on the tasks at hand now were evident. Stepping, stepping, oh no, Ana watched Zand at her instructers words, no more words, only attack. It was understandable, it was practical application and Ana doubted that future attackers would orchestrate their moves by word for her.. Lifting her buckler at another attack from Zandelias tonfa, connecting and sending another shockwave, one that began to make Ana stumble around her teacher, another swing with the other tonfa and Ana brought her sword up but only to get hit in the arm. With a sharp intake of breath, Ana flicked her eyes between each of Zandelias tonfas. Movement, Ana brought her buckler up and felt another hit of wood against wood travel through her arm, hunching up a bit, Ana felt her stance beginning to crumble into that little girl mindset again. No, no, no, Ana went back into her defencive stance, determined to not be that easily pushed around girl in front of Zandelia, she caught a glimpse of her tonfa and brought her sword up to block it, downwards. For awhile it went on like this, Ana got use to the repetition after a bit and was working with much more ease between attacks as she began to understand Zandelias patterns.

Then Zandelia was becoming random with her attacks, causing Ana to fumble from the lack of repetition. Tonfa to skin, caused her limbs to begin throbbing and burning from impact though it was hardly what you would call detrimental to ones health. Anas body wasn't use to such hands on attacks, it had suffered scrapes and bruises, cuts and breaks before, but nothing so rash as weapon attacks. Breathing hard, Ana was like a smelly rear end of a donkey, her normally bundled up hair was now falling apart from its bun to stick to her forehead and neck, as well as get in front of her face more, causing even more problems with her performance. Multiple times, Ana tried to get her hair out of her face but gave up after more bruises were to be allocated to her body. What confidence she had felt before was quickly diminishing as well as with her own energy, by the time Zandelia had ceased her relentless attacks and took a few steps back, Ana was ready to sleep all day. Sleep, what a wonderful concept it seemed now to her, Zandelias words warbled through her ears.

With what she could, her legs trembled, they wheezed to stay standing after such a regiment. Such exercises had required them to be far quicker than normal sneaking standards, stealth, it didn't require one to get smacked in the shin nor a tonfa to the back knee. Sheathing her sword, gripping the hilt as hard as she could as her fingers tingled. Knees locking, even though they seared from the pain Zandelias tonfas had caused, standing, remain standing, Ana thought to herself repeatedly, taking a deep breath, as if she had been getting a hold of herself "like a horses rear end.." Ana chuckled breathily, the weight of her sword now in the sheath, had left her arm feeling like air, in fact, much of her body began to feel like air. Bringing a partially limp hand to bring her hair out of her face now, wiping the sweat and dust that had accumulated onto her skin away. Fire, blazing, Ana felt pride once more, smiling dazedly at her instructer and letting her hand fall to her side again "that.. that was hardcore," Ana gripped the bucklers handle harder, feeling her body want to give way. Never had she ever done something along these lines, she was plum tired out now "I won't.. I won't be a waste Zandelia, can.. can count on me on that."

What ever was keeping her standing.. Was she allowed to sit? Was the training over, why had she put her sword away? Was she at her limit? Heat washed over her body as well as more tingling, sitting down was a nice thought, again, sleep crossed her mind, Anas eyes seemed to droop from the effort of staying open. Bringing her hand up again to rub her eyes, her voice a mumble now, her voice heavy, little to no sleep had also been playing a huge factor in her performance today and now was hitting her body harder than ever before "don't..think.. I can stay awake much.. longer though" The lack of action was making her body shut down, if they had continued on then Ana would be much more awake. With her mind shutting down, so did the joints in her legs, leaning backwards and sitting on the ground in an effort to keep from falling flat on her face, buckler still on her arm as her chin dipped inwardly to her chest. Comically, it seemed, she had just fallen asleep right there, right then, right there in front of Zandelia after just a few moments of a break from attacks. Out. Cold.

oocZand if you want to post yourself putting Ana in Wrens tent, thats fine. :P Tis funny, otherwise it can go in for grading.. >.>
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Training Day (Ana)

Postby Zandelia on May 1st, 2012, 12:09 am

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Zandelia watched Ana as she attempted her defense, noting that she was a little sluggish in places and feeling both a wave of pleasure and of pain as she landed her blows upon Ana’s body. She was not a sentimental woman but she did like to look after her own in ways that were perhaps perplexing to others. She did not believe in coddling, noting that survival was hard and thus cruelty was needed in schooling others n its acquisition. Still, she could not help but feel a little glimmer of sadness at the fact she had injured the smaller woman. Her skills with the tonfa far outstripped the skills in combat Ana possessed and she would remember that she would have to go a little easier on her pupils from that day if she did not want to beat them into oblivion.

Still, she did well enough that I feel confident she will not die any time soon. Not with me watching out for her. I’ll post someone to watch her when I cannot spare my own gaze I think. Best to protect my investment she thought to herself as she watched the exhausted girl totter a little in her normal stance now.

“Good, see that you don’t. If you die I’ll hunt your ghost down to the ends of the earth. Count on it,” she spoke back, a rare slither of warmth creeping into her tone of voice as she smiled at the girl, “now go get some…” she began, but had no time to finish her suggestion that Ana rest before she collapsed and hit the ground with what sounded like an uncomfortable crunching noise.

Zandelia was silent for a few moments, wondering whether the girl had merely fallen over or whether she really had been embraced within the arms of slumber in mid-sentence. After a few moments she walked over to Ana’s recumbent form and nudged her with the tip of her boot a few times, seeking to waken her so she could at least stumble to her tents. There was no way Zandelia was going to enter Shroud’s tent, the bastard more than capable of pinning something upon her for her efforts at nicety. When her poking was met with nothing but a series of loud snores, like dice rattling in a cup at the betting table, she gave an exasperated sigh and knew there was nothing for it but to scoop the lass up and put her into her won tent. She bent down and set about extricating Ana from her weaponry before heaving her form into her cradled arms and pushing herself upright.

“Come on then little shade, let’s put you to bed” she muttered under her breath, surprised by the reaction the words created as Ana shifted to snuggle her face into her neck a little. Zandelia stood there, dumbfounded and more than a little uncomfortable at the closeness.

Well, that’s a new one Zandelia. Note to yourself, beat Ana up and she shows more emotion than ever she told herself wryly as she made her slow way to her tent, more than large enough to contain the pair of them.

She pushed the flaps aside with her shoulder and shoved her way into the interior, barren and bereft of any real furniture but her bedding. It was a sad commentary of her life that personal affectation held so little priority to her. She was nearing thirty years upon the lands and held little to her name but her reputation and a few scars to never brag about. It normally never bothered her, but with Ana in her arms and the sense of being closer to someone she could not find much about her existence that spoke of happiness. She trained, she killed and she padded the shadows. She never truly…lived. It filled her with a strange feeling she had not felt in so long she could not even comprehend its depths.

“Home…sweet…home” she whispered into the wasteland of impersonality as she took Ana to the bedding and set about stripping her down to her small clothes. As she pulled the covers over the girl she, for the first time, had not a thought of taking advantage of another woman n a sexual manner. She sat on the edge of the bedding and put her head in her hands for a little while.

“You know Ana, if you take you away. Shadowfang, Leon, the others too. Well, I don’t really have much do I? You are all my legacy, and for the first time I have something to lose. Emptiness was easier than this. One day…perhaps…you will all appreciate that” she whispered before she lay back herself and ruminated upon her spoken words until sleep took her in its grasp too – Ana’s small arm covering her torso protectively.


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Training Day (Ana)

Postby Archelon on May 22nd, 2012, 6:10 am

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And the Results!!!!:

Ana :
SkillName 1-5 How/why?
Shortsword4
Shield 3
Observation2
Persuasion2
Rhetoric1



Lores:
Zandelia(partial)
A basic shortsword stance


Zandelia :
SkillName 1-5 How/why?
Meditation3
Shortsword4
Tonfa3
Observation2
Teaching3



Lores:
Ana Sol Staris(partial)
A Basic shortsword stance.
Subconscious: Perhaps being alone isn't the best way after all.



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