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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

Things Fall Apart (Naeya)

Postby Imass on September 14th, 2012, 3:46 pm

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A group of older boys and several adults stood vigilant on the high plataeu. Imass and Kobalt were among the dozen people present in the party watching the progress of the Fall Season’s Rite of Trial participants. Lurik was among the dozen hunters. He was Naeya’s younger brother and Imass’ peer. That was the major reason why Imass was even present. Kobalt, Naeya’s older brother, was present to witness his younger brother’s Trial as well. The rest of the Akalaks were watching their respective kin.

Looking down over the plains the hunt unfolded before their very eyes. Kobalt spoke, “Imass... they try for the Ba-ha-lan...” His eyes were glued to the scene and he spoke absent-mindedly.

The current hunting fad for the young Akalak boys was charging Alpha-male Glassbeaks head on. It was a brutal and quick hunt, but extremely effective. The Akalaks completed such feats not only for personal glory, but for racial pride as well; the blue-men were out to prove that they were the biggest and best hunters in the Sea of Grass. They would disregard the Glassbeak’s claim of dominance on the food chain and fight them honorably instead; the species would clash openly for the mere sake to test their own superiority. This idea was ingrained in the minds of the boys now on the Rite of Trial. Although they were hunting, it was the warrior’s mentality that lead to this fad.

Thus, the prevailing strategy they employed was known simply as “weave” or “Ba-ha-lan” in crude tukant warrior slang. A squad of swordsmen and a squad of lancers would charge a Glassbeak head on and cause the predator into a weave of assailants. The tactic was based on simple geometry; two lines of warriors took perpendicular angles as they charged the animal. This tactic forced the Glassbeak to chase only one group of horsemen. If executed correctly, the predator would be forced to choose an angle of pursuit that was perpendicular to the path of at least one squad (i.e. if the swordsman group gets attacked initially, the lancers would be in position to intercept the Glassbeak and vise versa). Bascially, the moment of contact was eight Akalak horsemen and a Glassbeak running in between each other at different angles and because of this image the strategy was named “weave”.

Imass responded some time later, for his attention too was on the hunt commencing below, “Yes... Lurik has already taken his position with bow... it is the Ba-ha-lan...”

Melee contact was very important for the Ba-ha-lan, however the job of the bowmen was much more crucial in the scheme. They were tasked with shooting the Glassbeak with a large, barbed arrow attached to a strong rope. One end of the rope was tied to the horseman’s saddle horn so that they could pull the line taut. When the Glassbeak was strung up and immobilized by strong horses. The only issue with the bowman’s job was that they only had one or two shoots and they needed to get extremely close to the Glassbeak and risk melee combat. This was no issue if the Ba-ha-lan was performed correctly.

At that point, the lancers would charge in and finish the kill by simultaneously piercing the predators neck and chest, aiming straight at the heart (the kids would want to keep the actual head preserved as a trophy no doubt). The battle between the two species was always dangerous, but even more risky if the proper angles were not taken by the horsemen. The hunt never lasted more than a chime before a bloody conclusion. Two dozen seconds of battle would be the most adrenaline filled moments of a young Akalak’s life. The battle would be over before anyone knew it and triumph waited the boys at the end of a spear point.
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The Rite of Trial participants were acting solely on their own and would receive no adult help in this hunt. Standing on the cliff, with his hand over his brow, Imass squinted to clarify his vision. The dozen fifteen year olds were forming a staggered line, which was not the conventional ‘weave’ technique taught by the adults.

Imass exclaimed, “Kobalt -- look -- they are lining up differently... what do you think they are going to try?”

“No choice.... two brood males are galloping...” the tall Akalak responded.

A league away on the flat plains where two Aplha male Glassbeaks charging straight for the group of hunters. Hunting down one Glassbeak was hard enough, but two enemies changed everything making the encounter twice as difficult. The boys would need to use all their wits in order to be successful. Even though the two Alpha’s were spotted by the hunting party five minutes earlier were fighting each other over dominance over a female and her brood, the participants decided to attack anyways. It was obvious they had devised some sort of alternate weave strategy to accomplish this task; perhaps a father taught a son an advanced tactic. Lurik and the boys were now faced with an extraordinarily intense and bloody hunt.

Imass knew exactly why the young boys would risk such a hunt though; the prestige from killing two alpha males at once would be great for each boy’s respective family. Lurik probably didn’t care much, but undoubtedly others would have pushed for such a confrontation. Imass, was had complete faith in Lurik. Although the kid was not terribly interested in such martial extreme, Imass was confident that Lurik would do anything to raise his family's status. In some ways the fame and triumph for such a battle was vital to the Akalak race. Imass and undoubtedly the rest of the Akalak present not only supported the participant’s decision, but understood the choice intimately.

“...they are going to spread the line out in order to account for two Glassbeaks... It is a bold, yet risky strategy...” Kobalt said when the group finally got in formation. Contact would happen any second now.

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The observation party stood silent. Imass held his breath.

The swordsmen raised gleaming blades high in the air, pushing their horses from a gallup to an all out sprint. Lances were slowly lowered into place as the riders thundered over the green fields. Bowmen, along with Lurik, aimed their cruel barbed arrows and clenched the horses hard at the knees. The whole party was in a full out charge as the gap between the two predators closed. The Glassbeaks sprinted almost twice the speed of the horsemen. Whether Naeya’s brother knew it or not, the next minute would be the defining moment in Lurik’s life so far.

“This is it!” Imass exclaimed. In less than a chime the battle would be over and it was sure to be bloody.

The two Glassbeaks ran together and would not separate until collision. The swordsmen chose their angles of pursuit; the first two swordsmen reined their beasts to the left at almost a forty five degree angle, while the second pair swooped in perpendicular to them trying to screen the Glassbeaks into their weave.

The two bird like predators suddenly crossed paths at speeds so quick the shock troopers could not react. The first pair passed in front of their prey, missing their mark by some yards. Luckily, this is where the Ba-ha-lan technique excelled; the second pair roared behind and made contact. The third swordsman raised his shield in protest to the bird’s tackling claws, but it was no use as he was thrown off his horse backwards into the dust. The second bird was not as lucky; the fourth swordsman heavily slashed his broadsword at the predator, effectively slowing it down.

Lurik and another bowman broke off and changed their angles of pursuit almost ninety degrees to the left. The second pair of bows continued charging in hopes to surround the Glassbeaks. The second bowman loosened his quarrel on the Glassbeak that had been cut; he was successful! Out of the dust charged the second Glassbeak taking an angle that crossed paths with Lurik.

“LURIK--” Kobalt screamed.

Another bowman loosed an arrow. Lurik tried to rear his horse to get out of the Glassbeaks way. The second animal was now held by two ropes. Lurik shot his weapon, but missed. The first group of swordsmen turned back to rejoin the fight. The lancers were but a second away. Without a moment’s pause, Lurik and his horse collided with the first Glassbeak. Naeya’s younger brother got flung off his horse and fell shoulder first into the dust.

Imass’ face turned pale with extreme panic when he saw Lurik fall.

Another arrow was loosened on the first beast and now he was held by one horse. The first pair of swordsmen charged into the cloud of dust in attempt to save Lurik. The Lancers arrived to stick the second Glassbeak that was being held down by the rope. Two more lancers entered the fray over Lurik’s fallen horse. There was a second of pure confusion, then the dust settled to reveal another successful kill. The group of spectators cheered...except for Imass and Kobalt, who watched in horror as Lurik and his horse laid motionless on the grassy plain.

Ten thousand emotions ran through Imass’s body like he was struck by greased lightning. He didn’t know whether to laugh, cry, scream, fight, cuss, or run; he was absolutely out of his mind. The whole battle only took a several brutal ticks and Imass was still trying to figure out what happened. One thing was for certain though, Lurik was not okay.
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Things Fall Apart (Naeya)

Postby Naeya on September 24th, 2012, 6:59 am

Lurik

Lurik's heart was not in the hunt.

Although it was supposed to be one of the biggest landmarks in his life, the young Akalak couldn't quite muster up the energy to care. It wasn't that he didn't want to bring his family honour and prestige; he most definitely did. Rather, it was that his head was in a million different places and the hunt was just a tiny piece of the muddle. Besides, he'd never been very good at this combat stuff. Why should he expect this day be any different?

As Lurik sat high on his horse and eyed the male Glassbeaks from a distance, he couldn't stop his thoughts from wandering. After the hunt, he, along with the other fifteen-year-old boys, would be expected to declare his chosen profession. Problematically, Lurik had no profession to declare.

Even after several years of patient (and not-so-patient) guidance from mentors, he still didn't know what he wanted to be when he grew up. Would he take after his mother and become a healer? Would he follow in his father's footsteps and work for the Rivarian government? Or, like his elder brother, would he aim to become a trained warrior-poet who was constantly at the city's beck and call?

At least I can safely cross the last option off my list, he thought wryly, knowing even at fifteen that he would never be the same as his brother. He loved Kobalt dearly, and the feeling was returned twofold, but even he had to admit that they were complete opposites. Naeya discussed this with him every once in a while, seemingly amazed at the totality of this opposition. As she liked to point out (good-naturedly, she would be sure to remind him), Kobalt appeared to have an unlimited supply of discipline. He was (willingly) on time to his combat practice every morning, with a look of focus in his eyes and a grin on his lips. Sometimes it seemed to her that he lived to train.

"Lives to serve, more like..." Lurik muttered. A rare feeling of bitterness popped into his mind, staying only for a moment but leaving a slight emptiness behind. He knew that Naeya would go on to say that he was more - what word did she like to use? Ah, "multi-passionate." He was sure that she really just meant that he was scattered. Unfocused. Undisciplined. Lurik, unlike Kobalt, didn't know what he wanted. He never had. There were too many interesting facets to Riverfall, to Mizahar, to choose just one. ...Weren't there?

If there were, then why was he stuck feeling like no one else saw things the same way? Naeya didn't count, of course. Although she was his sister, she was also a Konti. He meant his brethren. His Akalak brothers, immediate family or not. Why did they always want to make him choose?

Lurik snapped out of his thoughts as the boys around him began to plot their move against the Glassbeaks. Their original intent had been to use the Ba-ha-lan technique, where they set themselves up in a weave formation. Using this tactic, Lurik would be expected to use his archery training to help immobilize the Glassbeaks so that his peers could go in for the kill. When the Glassbeaks began, from a distance, to careen boldly towards the group, their technique was hastily modified. To his dismay, Lurik realized that there now existed the possibility of him being one of the first points of Glassbeak contact.

Why me, Wysar?

The hunting party, bowmen included, began to speed towards the plains monsters. Lurik dug his knees into his horse, feeling his breath catch in his throat. As much as he wanted to disregard it, he couldn't ignore the fact that the glassbeaks were galloping towards the group just as quickly - nay, quicker.

It didn't occur to the young Akalak until that moment that his life might actually be in danger. He and his peers had expected to pass their Rite of Trial and be home to celebrate with their families by nightfall. The majority of the boys were more worried about earning prestige (hence the double Glassbeak target) than about dying while doing it. Now, however, in the heat of the battle, Naeya's brother was completely and utterly scared.

While the Glassbeaks were unexpectedly crossing paths and causing one of the boys to be thrown off his horse, Lurik was doing his best to screw up all of his courage. At this moment, as bowman, he was going to be relied on to help kill these deadly birds, whether he wanted to or not. Eyes forward, hands clenched, chest tight. He then silently repeated his archery instructor's advice: take deep breaths, slow down, and focus.

As Lurik and his fellow bowman broke off from the group and veered sharply to the left, he imagined himself as having the power and speed of his older brother. As having Kobalt's confidence. He could do this. He would do this.

Still, his attempts to muster up bravery within himself were not quite enough.

As Lurik neared the angry male Glassbeak, he faltered ever so slightly. Whether he wasn't in complete control of his horse or he wasn't aggressive enough with his bow, he'd never know. What he did know was that one of the Glassbeaks had changed its path and was now charging straight for him.

Naeya's brother did the only thing he could think of at this point: rear his horse and try to fell the beast. As Lurik raised the bow, perspiration snaked its way into his eyes, momentarily blinding him. His hands shook as he tried to steady and then loose the arrow, but sweat, nerves, and Lhex had concocted a special form of failure for him on this day.

The arrow missed, and Akalak collided with Glassbeak.

A blinding pain shot up Lurik's side as the pair clashed; the lone fifteen-year-old Akalak was no match for such a dangerous predator. The monster's talons cut deep into his stomach, dragging agonizingly down his leg. Lurik's horse reared in panic, having given up all faith in her rider's ability to control the situation, and Lurik himself was thrown wildly backwards.

Blood mixed with frost as Naeya's brother hit the ground with a hard crack.

Can't... breathe...

Lurik's chest gasped and heaved as he tried to claim the air around him, but his body was having none of it. He lay weakly in the trampled grass, struggling for breath. After a moment of shock, he became faintly aware of a hot liquid running down his side, though he couldn't begin to understand why. As he tried to piece together what had happened, his breathing continued to be short and laborious.

Instinctively, his right fingers twitched in an effort to clutch at his bleeding stomach, but his arm... his arm refused to move. It lay splayed out next to him at a peculiar angle. He then tried to gain feeling in his wounded leg, but that too rejected him.

Why could he not stop shivering? Why did he feel so cold?

The dying boy could hear panicked voices around him and was able to make out vague images of shadowed bodies, but both his vision and consciousness were fading fast (though to him it felt like years).

Cold. So very, very cold.

The voices... they sounded so familiar. So worried. So scared. Someone reached down to feel for his pulse, but he could only blink once in recognition of their touch. He struggled to speak before Dira arrived to claim him, forcing what little air was left in his lungs out into the world.

"I'm... sorry..." he finally managed to croak out.

Forgive me...

And with that, sweet light was eclipsed by eternal darkness.
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Things Fall Apart (Naeya)

Postby Imass on January 13th, 2013, 9:57 am

IMASS

Kobalt, Imass, and the rest of the on-lookers thundered down the ridge. Squeezing the mount with his legs and giving the horse the command to briskly trot, the warrior-to-be guided his horse down the hill. The area was relatively simple for Riverfall breeds to traverse, for it was not steep and easy to navigate. The Akalak only had to move his reigns occasionally to make sure the horse did not step into foul underfoot. Regardless though, it was imperative he kept his balance for their was a lot of moving as they jotted down. The young Akalak needed to keep shifting his weight as they went to make sure he stayed on.

No one talked. The only sound to be heard was the constant clatter of hooves upon stone and earth. Imass' mind could barely even concentrate on anything else other than the ride down the slope. He focused everything into riding his horse as fast as possible, but he could not keep up in front very long. The simple fact Kolbalt and the others were moving faster only angered Imass. The good weather, his own horse, the people around him, this all brought anxiety into his mind. Everything was producing a fiery rage in his heart, even thinking hurt.

The young Akalak did not know how to react to such an experience, "How could this happen to LURIK? I don't understand! What is going on? Only thoughtless screams of panic went through his mind. He did not know what to do, except ride harder than ever. Within a couple minutes the party was down the ridge and into the plains. Giving a loud command to his horse, Imass leaned forward, squeeze with his knees even harder, and pushed down on the stirrups. The on-lookers began to gallop down into the valley and towards the Rite of Trial members. The horse galloped wildly alongside his companions, which made it easier for Imass to keep up. He just let his horse ride as he held on for dear life. He had to constantly shift his weight with the stride of the horse just in order to stay on. There where a few around him that raced up front, but the young one did not understand how they did it.

"Go faster!!! Why am I so slow!!!" Imass screamed in frustration. He didn't know what to do or what to think, but his emotions where telling him ride as fast as possible. Somewhere in the back of his mind, Imass had the idea that Lurik could still be alive, but it was quickly drowned out by thought of his friend dying. This only produced more rage and more hatred for no reason. Sometimes Imass forgot why he was so heated, but then the scene of Lurik falling played in his head again.

Reaching the scene of the hunt last, Imass stopped his horse next to Kolbalt and dismounted. In a flurry, the boy sprinted to where Lurik lay dead. The thick golden-brown grass was slick with bright red blood. The Akalak hunter-to-be slid many yards from the place his horse was felled by the Glassbeak. The whole place smelled like death. Lurik laid unmoving on his back; Kobalt had laid his own shirt over the body. The older Akalak laid kneeling by his brother with red eyes. Anger and rage emanated from his body too.

Imass fell to a knee across from Kobalt, "Let me see him..."

"No, Imass, leave him be," Kobalt said softly as he continued to stare at his brother.

"No. I want to see him!"

Kobalt looked up and stared at Imass with tears, "I said NO! Why can't you understand that damnit!? You saw what happened to him!"

"Petch you, he was my friend!!" the young Akalak screamed with too much edge in his voice. Before Kobalt could answer, Imass stooped down and ripped the cloth off him. The scene was beyond gruesome. Lurik had gotten impaled through his gut, down through his groin, and deep down his inner leg. His members and bowels laid slathered under his body. Blood leaked from his mouth and many of his bones where broken from the fall. His leg was angled in a way that brought shudders down Imass' spine. The Glassbeaks claws where everywhere. Imass almost vomited, he had never seen such a gruesome death.

Kobalt launched himself at Imass, "I told you not to remove the cloth!!! Petch you!!" Both of the boys began to fight in the grass in rage. They where not seriously fighting each other, but this was the only way to release their frustration and anger. Tossing one another around in the blood soaked grass, Imass and Kobalt went at it savagely. Both Akalak where crying and hurting each other at the same time.

No one else talked. No one else moved to stop them.

'Why did it have to be Lurik? Why? Why? Why? Why?"'
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Things Fall Apart (Naeya)

Postby Naeya on February 2nd, 2013, 12:57 am

Naeya

The sun was just beginning to set as Naeya stepped onto the balcony of her family's Kuahala Estates apartment. Syna's rays splashed across the sky in brilliant shades of amethyst, citrine, and ruby red, while streaks of rhodonite ran through the clouds like ribbon - the goddess' parting gift to the world below. The balcony itself looked out over the Suvan Sea, whose wild waters mirrored the vibrant painter's sky.

Breathtaking.

But Naeya hadn't ventured outdoors for breathtaking sights, no matter how hard her heart pounded at the view. She had simply desired to escape the stifling confines of her empty home. The solitary silence was becoming unbearable for her nerves.

The young konti's parents had left with her youngest brother, Behren, just one bell earlier to visit the Zhongjie Warren. They were picking up food for the night's meal in case Lurik and his hunting group stayed out another day. Another day... Naeya was already so high-strung with anticipation that she wasn't sure if she could endure one more day. She knew her brother would return to her safely, but that knowledge hardly made the waiting easier. She just wanted his test of boyhood to be complete and for their lives to go back to normal.

Anxious green eyes glanced down at the piece of wadj she had clenched tightly in her hand. It was a letter she'd written for Lurik, congratulating him on his success and offering him the wisdom her youthful mind had held onto over the years. "Follow your heart" and "forge your own path" were just two of the many trite, but well-meaning, pieces of advice she shared within it. She grinned, thinking of what his reaction would be - an eye roll, a long drawn-out groan, and then a genuine wink of thanks.

"He'll be fine," she murmured reassuringly. "He'll be just fine."

A gust of bitter autumn air whirled around Naeya's bare skin and danced with her loose hair. She shivered and wrapped scaled arms around her chest, wishing she'd thrown a cloak over her thin blue dress before stepping outdoors. It was always so cold on the cliffside. One more chime, she promised herself, reluctant to return indoors alone. But the elements disagreed and a second rush of wind pushed against her, urging her back to her four walls of safety.

They must have known.

As if on cue, the sound of a heavy knock echoed throughout the apartment the moment Naeya re-entered her home. She wasn't expecting her parents to return for yet another bell, so it had to be-

"Lurik!" she called out happily, immediately forgetting the chill and rushing towards her front door. She swung it open with bright eyes and a wide smile on her lips.

And then...

"Lurik?"
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