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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

Needles In The Grass

Postby Razkar on November 18th, 2012, 4:32 pm

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The Tattooed Man's name was Elric, though Razkar never bothered to learn it. The first time they had met, it had been as potential enemies. Now, when the crossed paths on the overgrown trail leading to Haev Provedan's stronghold, it was as fellows in the same enterprise.

But among sellswords, the two amounted to the same thing.

"So you return." The Tattooed Man said, hand resting on the hilt of his sheathed sword, scars and black ink on his face made stark by the midday sun striking through the trees. "I owe Danny over here a copper."

The younger sellsword snorted. There were four of them, as before, the detail for this pathway. At least, this particular part of it. Razkar had no idea how many mercenaries and hired thugs Provedan boasted, but given the man's careful nature, he knew this little checkpoint was not the only one on the sole trail leading to his lair.

This time he stayed on Mrrko, wrapped in his cloak, all he owned packed into saddle bags and rolled up on the beast's back. He leaned forward, face neutral.

"I offered work. I take work. Provedan said come back two weeks, and two weeks is gone." He spurred the horse just a little. "I know way."

The Tattooed Man held his ground for a moment, and then with a sneer he stepped aside. His men followed suit. Razkar felt their eyes on him, ranging from carefully blank to suspicious to just plain contemptuous, and ignored them in turn. He had nothing to prove to any of them, and knew full well that any attempts at kindness or camaraderie would fall flat.

He would always be a barbarian to them. Well, so be it. They were the same to him.

As Mrrko and he made their way down the narrow, winding trail, he soon heard the activity from Rattling Chains. Smoke curled and wound upwards as before, blotching the sky is dark smears. The steady thump of running feet was clear, shouted orders striking through the trees, too.

The forest parted and he was at the edge of the camp. The familiar field of churned earth, pitted and scratched and scarred with trenches and wooden bridges crossing them. Tents of various sizes were dotted around, and once again, he could see a platoon of slaves jogging around the camp's perimeter, ringed by a squad of guards.

Haev certainly put much stock in keeping his produce fresh.

He rode onwards to the clump of sellswords around the mine entrance on the other side of the camp. There were over two dozen of them, few of them wearing armor than matched, armed with every weapon he knew and some he was somewhat hazy on. Humans, mostly. Drykas, too. But here, and there, an Akalak, towering over the rest, harder and colder than their more... legitimate brethren back in Riverfall.

Cutthroats and killers all. Razkar would fit right in.

He rode on, uncaring as they turned to look at him. Some merely frowned and studied him, curious and wary. Others, who were present two weeks past when he gutted and scalped a boy named Justinian, gave him a careful nod. The rest seemed to look down their nose at him.

But all, to a man, spared him only a few moments, then turned their eyes back to the front. Razkar hitched his horse and stood at the side of the group, wondering what was going on...

A man and a woman. The man standing, arms cross, still and patient. The woman was on her knees, eyes rolled back so only her whites showed, hand moving as if... as if she was winding and massaging a thread or a rope in her hands...

Haev Provedan looked up from his lieutenant, seeing his new addition out the corner of his eyes. Those calm, reptilian eyes - honestly, Razkar had seen more emotion in the eyes of Dhani - did not blink or show any kind of surprise or boon. They merely achknowledged him, and went back to watching Caracatas.

Razkar crossed his arms and decided to do the same.
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Needles In The Grass

Postby Razkar on November 18th, 2012, 7:46 pm

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It was beautiful. It was humbling in its size and unfathomable in its complexity. It spiraled and spread and wrapped and encompassed half a continent. But the size was only part of its wonder: it was all that was present in it.

People. Animals. Places. Events. Actual events, recorded by primal energies and deposited in a vast library of information that could be accessed, if one knew how.

And if one was arrogant in their entry, the sheer scope could fry their brain in moments.

Caracatas was not arrogant... at least in that respect. Ever since childhood, she had been in awe of the Web that spanned Cyphrus. She remembered seeing the first shimmering lines, barely visible above the ground, stretching on and on past the horizon. Then she discovered she could touch them, hold them, and she felt their power.

But when she realized she could read them, use them, well... that was power.

Provedan realized her value within moments of meeting her and seeing her abilities. The Sea of Grass was vast almost beyond belief, and more than that, almost featureless. It was a green and gold desert, only deserts were easier to navigate.

They didn't have seven foot tall grass covering most of it.

There were no mountains or hills, forests or canyons. Few villages or encampments survived within it. Few roads or trails crossed it. The serpents and glassbeaks and the sheer hostility and resilience of the land itself jealously halted any attempt to develop the inland grasslands. Navigating my stars was often ones only hope, and if one was lost... they stayed lost.

But with Webbing, the ability to read and use the djed-fuelled magical network that covered the Sea of Grass, one could pass through it, avoid dangers...

And even find people within it.

Razkar watched the woman intently. Her hands were always moving: sometimes fast, sometimes slow. Sometimes kneading and caressing, sometimes frantically and furiously unfurling. The Myrian found. It was like she was manipulating... some kind of... rope...

He glanced around and some of the other mercenaries were watching with the same curiosity. Others, the veterans of Haev's service, looked bored. They all waited, not daring to speak, until...

"They have... left Kenash... this morning..."

Razkar blinked at her voice. It sounded so... far. Her lips moved, and there was noise, but it was as if they were hearing it from across a field, or a crowded street. He had to strain his ears to catch every syllable, as if each one was being ripped from a distant plane beyond their own.

Which, he guessed, they were.

"Men... women... young... dozens... misery... so much misery... and others... men... soldiers... but not for flag... or lord... for coin..."

Razkar didn't need any further translation. People in misery and soldiers who fought for pay? Sounded exactly like what Provedan was running here. But the group Caracatas were describing were not in his employ. They were apart. So... competition?

"They are on... the road to... Riverfall... fifteen days journey..."

There was a gasp from the woman, only it sounded like a gasp from a hundred mouths all at once, and at its peak her pupils snapped back into the middle of her eyes and her hands went still. She blinked a few times, realizing where she was, and that same calm expression settled on her face.

Caracatas rose, and finally Provedan spoke.

"You know where they are?"

"Yes."

"And you know where they will be?"

"Yes."

"Can you direct them on a safe route to intercept them, and bring them back?"

That time there was a pause, but a brief one. Caracatas squinted for a moment, as if seeing something far away... then nodded.

"Yes."

Provedan nodded in return, hearing all he needed to. He turned to the men assembled, Razkar among them, and raised his voice so all could hear.

"You leave immediately. Caracatas will direct you." He walked to a man in the forefront of the party of sellswords, a bulky man with crossed arms and only one eye. "Manfred. You will be in command. Caracatas will give you instructions. You will follow them to the letter, do you understand?"

A short, curt nod, and that was all. Provedan continued.

"They will guide you straight to a caravan. Kill all who guard the cargo but one, to deliver the message she will give him. Return the livestock here. You will be paid upon your return."

"We don't get nothin' upfront?"

The words did not come from Razkar's throat. It was a young sellsword, learning on a halberd with a double-head in that casual, dismissive way of youth. His chin jutted out and yet when Provedan turned his gaze upon him, he looked away.

"I pay for results." The slaver said, voice enough to make a man shiver. "Not a march to a battle. Do what I order, what Manfred orders, and if you return, you shall be paid, and properly. Any other questions?"

As Razkar expected, there were none. Provedan turned his bald head back to Caracatas and the woman was already writing careful instructions onto a piece of parchment. Manfred had already walked over to her and was peering over her shoulder. After a few moments her quill stopped, and her head whirled around.

"That is distracting."

"What is?"

"Looking over my shoulder."

"Oh..."

He shuffled a few feet to his right, and she began again. The mercenary rolled his eyes but wisely kept his mouth shut.

Haev turned without a word and walked into his mine, becoming a figure, then an outline, then a shadow, and then vanishing entirely. Manfred turned to the assembled men, his own voice a bass boom that spoke of nights in revelry and days screaming at dead enemies. Razkar could hear it already resonating with Provedan's own authority.

"Ten chimes to pack what you need. No horses: we're travel light and across the Sea. Be ready in ten, or don't come. Go."

The two-dozen mercenaries split apart like a flock of birds surprised by a barking dog, wheeling away in groups or individually to their tents to prepare.

Razkar had no such need. He merely went to Mrrko, gathered his rations - smoked meat, of the human and Zith variety - his weapons and what personal effects he could carry on his back.

Then he sat on a nearby stone, drew his gladius, and ran his whetstone over the blade. With every stroke, it became a mite sharper. Soon the slow jerk of his arm and the grating sound became a steady, comforting rhythm.
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Needles In The Grass

Postby Razkar on November 18th, 2012, 8:33 pm

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Razkar was not one to give approval freely, but he was mildly impressed when all two dozen of Provedan's mercenaries returned to the same spot in less than ten chimes. They had packs and bags over their shoulders now, but nothing that needed to be carried, only that which could be slung over their shoulders. Their weapons were readied, their faces set.

Razkar glanced up a few times, but did not move. The gladius was shining brighter and brighter with every stroke of the stone. He always appreciated that. Simple and honest effort rewarded with actual, tangible results. A blade that could slice off a limb or skewer a torso with equal ease. He held it up to be kissed by the sun, twisting the blade. He regarded it critically... then nodded with satisfaction.

He sheathed it, pocketed the whetstone and stood. He was ready.

So was Caracatas. She stood from her rock and handed the parchment to Manfred. Heavy brows encrusted with furry eyebrows knitted together and his lips moved as he read the words, even following them with his finger.

Not that Razkar was one to judge. He could barely read Common.

After a few minutes the sellswords new leader nodded a few times, stuck the parchment in his pocket and looked down at the shorter Drykas. She returned the stare levelly and she pointed to the forest rim behind him, to the left.

"Starting that way."

"Yes, mistress."

Manfred turned on his heel and walked. To a man, and without a word, the rest followed.

Razkar was among them. At the edge of the camp he watched the human halt, pulls the parchment and read a line... then start walking again. His men were behind him, Razkar near the front, feet already getting into the familiar timbre and tempo of a long, long march.

Haev Provedan watched the raiding party leave. When the last man had disappeared into the forest, headed north-east, he returned to his subterranean lair. He knew his Drykas protege could be relied on, and Manfred was one of his veterans. He knew his job, and Manfred knew the price of failure. This was not the first time he had sent him on such an errand. Time and time again she had magicked a path through the blank desert of the Sea of Grass and found what he wanted.

He had no doubt she had do so this time, and Manfred was smart enough to follow her directions.

Razkar marched, leaving him behind. He had a mission, now. He had purpose. An enemy to be engaged and a battle to be fought. That was all he needed to know. As he marched, with comrades that were not, his lips moved in silent thanks to Myri.

And a promise not to fail her.

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Needles In The Grass

Postby Jackalope on November 30th, 2012, 3:47 am

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Good first attempt at describing webbing. Just a note. Webbing lets someone know who, where, and when. Not so much the emotion of how they felt. Otherwise an enjoyable read as always. Keep up the good work. If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, please send me a PM and we can figure it out. :)

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