Completed Same Old Story

The unlucky Thief & The imperfect Soul

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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

Same Old Story

Postby Noaru on December 18th, 2012, 8:18 am

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Winter 18, A.V. 512

The city was dark... night had fallen and the inhabitants weary of the dark and those who sought trouble under the cover of night, closed their windows and doors... locking them before they slept away in their warm cozy beds. The night was still as always: a figure moved along the alleyways checking the windows and doors of the homes he had been watching for some days now in attempts to learn the daily patterns of the individuals who lived in them, he hadn't been successful in robbing the houses he's had his eyes upon lately but in the past he was lucky enough to rob six to ten homes monthly gaining a name for himself; he was known as the ''Midnight Bandit'' a cliche name yes but he was good at his job and was never caught in the act... not even once.


This particular night, it was more quiet than usual and he had been watching this one particular house that was abandoned just yesterday—the thief watched this house intently for several minutes, he was tempted to steal what was inside since the rumors about the house containing jewels and gold miza intrigued him greatly. A greedy person this thief was, he wanted it all, he coveted the riches of others and as a result began stealing things from those who were more fortunate than he was. The thief waited for the moment the clouds shrouded the moon... at that moment, it would be considerably dark around the alleyways, allowing him to cleverly sneak pass anyone watching the streets carefully.


The thief quickly scurries across the street like the rat he was and approached the house with considerable caution and haste, he wasted no time in quietly cutting a circular hole in the window and reaching inside to unlock the latch. He was now inside but what he saw wasn't what he was expecting... the rumors were nothing but lies! The thief looks around to see nothing but old furniture covered in dust and small traces of mold; he turns and looks around carefully, he wasn't sure if this was a trap or not; he pulls out his dagger and walks deeper into the house—the moon peeking through the window behind him as if observing what the twisted man was doing.


“Dark....”


A silent voice said in the darkness behind him, causing the thief to almost jump out of his shoes. The thief turns to see nothing, he didn't believe the voice to be a mere hallucination produced from his own mind, he felt that someone was in the room with him as he slowly circled a full three-hundred and sixty degrees with his dagger pointed in front of him. The silent voice did not make itself known again, it just remained real quiet within the house until the thief started to venture upstairs—the staircase creaking loudly with each step he took.


A shadow forms along the moon-lit wall—the body which could potentially produce this shadow could not be seen with the naked-eye; it just stood there almost knowing that the thief would enter the room it was occupying and the thief does so; however, completely unaware that a shadow of some sort was looming just behind him. The thief after a cold breeze passes across the back of his neck, doesn't pay any mind to it since it was winter and drafts would be quite often but then breezes continued, growing in intensity which began to startle him and after while these breezes started to feel more like someone was... breathing on him.

The shadow vanishes as the thief turns to face it—the thief notices nothing as he checks the dressers, beds, closets and everything for potential loot. In the next room dozens of figures hover just inches from the floor—ghosts who were unable to part from each other remained in the home; preventing all who tried to change their precious homes appearance and punishing those who did with sleepless nights and starving days. The ghosts already knew someone was in their home and this triggered their anger but there was something else that followed the thief into their home that made them nervous.

The shadow that had stalked the thief into the home appeared in the corner of the room to make its presence more physically known, it was Noaru! The spirit grinned in finding such a large number of ghosts in one area about six or ten ghosts were in the room with him all very agitated by the thief and terrified by his presence at the same time. Noaru stepped forward, emitting a more peaceful aura than usual but this was only to deceive the alarmed ghosts into lowering their guard which they did not lower.


“Greetings, are you all able to speak?”

The spirit would try to manipulate them in any way possible but mainly he focused upon their hatred, he felt that the mass-number of ghosts did not like the idea of someone entering their home, it could obviously be seen upon their faces by the way they were looking at the wall just moments before he appeared... they were looking at the wall of the room next door as if they were able to see the thief through it.
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Same Old Story

Postby Noaru on December 21st, 2012, 6:59 am

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The multitude of ghosts look towards Noaru with considerable caution and fear, they hadn't seen a ghost like Noaru before; he was strange in appearance all the way down to how his soulmist formed around him, it made him appear as if he was truly some kind of... entity. The ghosts did not try to answer Noaru they just stared at him strangely and kept their distance away from him but one brave ghost stepped forward, he had some determination in his eyes but clearly you could see his was nervous at the way his soulmist flickered like a light just about to go out.


“I have no interest in you.... I want to talk to the leader of this group or the voice of it.”

Noaru gave the young ghost a strong and arresting glare, it caused the young ghost to blink away from him and hide within the group of ghosts. Noaru successful intimidation tactic seemed to be effective against one measly ghost but he wasn't satisfied with just that, he wanted to make the power of this entire group his! The only problem was that manipulating these ghosts would look to be a challenge for him... Noaru just went straight to the point.


“There's a intruder in your home... make that two intruders by including myself.I look to kill this man due to the fact that he is what he is... a thief. I would like your cooperation with this since we all share a common interest.”
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Postby Noaru on December 27th, 2012, 7:42 am

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The ghosts did not trust the evil entity before them nor did they like his personality or his sly yet polite form of speech but he did have a point... their interests were very similar. A single ghost nods and acknowledges Noaru and the evil spirit smiles as his soulmist swirled around him in excitement! Noaru saw that the ghost that was communicating with him somewhat was probably the groups leader, he would specifically have to understand the groups leaders interests which were probably not as evil as his own interests.

A loud thump came from the room next door along with a sudden crash and bang; glass and wood was being broken at a rapid pace! The thief had become frustrated with the rooms lack of treasure and took out his rage upon the empty rooms furniture, smashing the chairs, flipping the table and slicing the bed wide open with his blade! The ghosts react to the mans violence with frustration but none of them moved due to the fact that they did not want Noaru to discover the fortune they had hidden in the walls of the room they were currently occupying.

“Come now, will you just simply allow a man who's obviously a thief and maybe a thug to trash your home? I bet everything in that room holds a precious memory.. one that you want to preserve. ”

Noaru's manipulation was simple... poke around their anger and make it swell into an uncontrollable rage and aggression! The ghosts looked towards Noaru, they could see the corner he was occupying darken around him and suddenly witnesses Noaru disappearing into the darkness. The ghosts figured that he would be in the room where the thief was and they all blink to that room also, seeking vengeance upon the poor soul who dares trash their precious home and desecrate many precious memories.


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Same Old Story

Postby Noaru on January 2nd, 2013, 11:52 pm

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Noaru snickered silently in the darkness somewhat pleased with the ghosts responses. The spirit was now lingering in the darkness of the room that the thief was now in--the man was sitting down in a chair that he managed to not break in his fit of rage and treasure-lust. Noaru was now just simply waiting for the other ghosts to enter the room and work their magic so that he wouldn't waist any unnecessary strength in trying to terrify this homely fellow, he was now carefully watching from the shadows. Noaru could feel the presences of other ghosts slowing creeping into the room, he found it hard to contain his laughter since things were finally going his way.

“ Now, things should get interesting!”

The sinister ghost thought from the darkness but then he noticed a small bottle sitting on the table where the bandit was, he disappeared from his shadowy hiding spot and reappeared next to the table. The spirit waited for the moment the thief wasn't looking before he grasped onto the bottle; he allowed his soulmist to completely consume the object as he focused mainly on forcing the object to move then Noaru remembered when he first pushed an object, it was a tiny pebble on the ledge of a cliff that he saw a human throw once, he remembered the dynamics; strength, focus and speed.

The spirit added the emotions he felt when he moved an object for the first time into his soulmist and pushed slightly with his soulmist! The object slid from the edge of the table but did not break once it hit the floor, Noaru continued to influence the objects path by causing it to simply roll as he pushed it towards the window; he stops the bottle in front of the window just about four meters away from the window. The spirit now just needed to push the final scene forward himself!


“ Thievery is punishable by death! ”

Noaru's voice echoed from the darkness around the thief--the man stood to his feet with his dagger drawn, readying himself for a potential confrontation. The thief had a look of determination within his eyes, he knew his skills would allow him to escape with relative ease and with nightfall behind him...his escape would be flawless! Then the thief's disposition changes once he see's something dark piercing through the darkness, its dark body could easily be seen swirling through the darkness and he had never seen anything like this before which forced him to step back from the table.

Noaru began to manifest within the room which darkened as he continued to focus on becoming solid than more transparent, his soulmist stretched and flexed outward from swirling mass of soulmist and took the physical form of a body, it wasn't long before a clear and distinct human shape could be made out. Noaru stood fully visible to the thief before him and grinned with his eyes fixated on the thief's eyes almost as if he was trying to intimidate the thief.

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Same Old Story

Postby Noaru on January 4th, 2013, 12:43 am

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“ This is the end for you, your soul will be consumed by these angry ghosts and you shall for all eternity... dwell within their stomachs in constant turmoil and pain, never to know peace.”

The room darkened, clearly an effect of Noaru's darkening power. The spirit stepped forward his footsteps to the thief seemed heavier than before: maybe, it was due to his fear which was having an effect on his mind! The thief is forced to back away from Noaru and the angry ghosts their hands could be seen stretching from the darkness behind Noaru; they called to the anxiety filled man as they approached him, getting ever so closer and pushing him towards the window.

“ The end...”

Noaru stepped forward, stretched out an arm and pushed the thief gently with his finger. The man stumbles back from the gentle push; his left foot has contact with the bottle on the floor in back of him...he loses his balance and falls backwards. The thief tumbles from out of the window but grabs onto the window ceiling before falling barely holding on to the wooden framework. Noaru looks out the window down to the man with a look of pity, he stretches out his own hand and using his soulmist, grips onto the man's fingers and pulls them backwards; he watches as the man's skull strikes another window's edge before hitting the deep water below.

The other ghosts stare at Noaru with faces expressing shock and horror; they knew that killing wasn't the answer all the time before they couldn't attempt to stop Noaru--the spirit's body turns into a black mass of soulmist and flies out the window... maniacal laughter following behind him. The next day the house was prohibited to enter and no one was to enter until the house was completely cleared of ghosts and spirits alike.
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Same Old Story

Postby Verilian on February 7th, 2013, 4:16 pm

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Noaru

  • +2 Soumist Projection
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You Question My Logic? :
XP explanation goes here.


Lores: The Midnight Bandit, Manipulating Ghosts, Murdering a Thief

Notes: You need to put the year in your timestamp for this thread. I'm assuming 512, unless this is a flashback. Also, on your CS, you have put down Winter 513. It is not the year 513 yet. Mizahar's new year is on the 1st of Spring, so it wont be 513 until March.

Also, just remember that at your current level of Soulmist Projection, you can only manipulate up to 2 pounds worth of force, and that it must be within arms reach. So what you did when you grabbed his fingers was probably beyond your skill level.

Last of all, I know you asked for intimidation, however, in light of Tarot's recent video on ghosts and skills, I cannot give you xp for anything other than Soulmist Projection, Materialization, and Possession unless you possess someone else. This even includes mental skills like intimidation, persuasion, ect. This has technically always been a rule, but has not been widely enforce, however, with this video I am going to now abide by it 100%. You don't have to get rid of any skill points you were already awarded this way, but going forward, I am going to abide 100% by the rules.

Okay, now that all that is out of the way. Great thread! I enjoyed reading it, and cant wait to see what is next. Keep writing!


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