Galen

[Galen]

Name: Galen

Age: 28

Sex: Male

Description: Black hair. wears a black jacket and a white t-shirt.
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Height: 5'8

Weight: 171

Eye Color: blue

Personality: His cold personality may makes him seem like a psychopath, but he will try not to hurt or kill people that may done nothing to him and does not like to killed people who did nothing to him. He also has honor, never killing women or kids.

History: Galen was rised on Syliras by a master swordsman and woman. Ever since Galen was a kid, he dreamed of becoming a master swordsman.

Out of Character: Not done yet, will be done soon.

[Kraken]

Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

Welcome to Mizahar, Yamato. I've spotted several big issues with your character sheet that will need to be addressed before continuing on. Please keep in mind that these can be easily fixed with some careful review of the Mizahar lore.

First, there is no such power as attacking the soul of other people, nor are there psychic attacks. Your character's "powers" are considered to be godmodding, and I'll need you to remove your entire section on Power. This is not a superhero website and, as such, your superpowers do not fit with the Mizahar theme. You've also given your character too many abilities to make it a fair fight & experience for other players, even if these powers were allowed. Additionally, you history does not fit within the Mizahar theme. Please review the godmodding link above, and the following links:

• Theme
• Rules
• Starting Guide
• Magic

Your character sheet does not fit the requirements, so you'll also need to review the Character Sheets Lore. I recommend using a CS Template to create your character sheet so you don't miss any sections.

You will also want to review the introductory message you received in your inbox upon signing up for Mizahar. Unfortunately, your roleplay on the site will be halted until these issues are addressed. Thank you for understanding!

Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!

Kraken

[Galen]

I am sorry. I will go fix him so he is not too powerful.

[Galen]

And nice to meet you Kraken.