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[Antinous Training Grounds] Sore head training

Postby Fallon on March 17th, 2013, 7:27 pm

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14th Spring 513AV,
Morning, 8th Bell

If there was anything that Fallon had successfully learned after last night's drinking, it was that too much of it and its consumption lead to an ungodly headache. Yet instead of simply curling up beneath the covers and hissing at the dull light, Fallon dragged her bleary eyed state up to the training grounds, with the dull throb ringing out. She gave a loud yawn as she stretched herself out, a feeble attempt to shake the hang over that had grasped onto her so tightly. She looked terrible to say the least, her face drawn and pale with dark lines having formed under her eyes. In the cool spring light Fallon turned her attention to the training grounds, looking at the other squires and their patrons, the mock battle grounds before her. She remembered coming her the day before, and being shown around the place along with what was available for her to use. And so, rather sheepishly she took up one of the wooden ones and felt the light weight in her hand. Although she knew that it was far from the weight of an actual long sword, it still felt heavy in her hands. Yet in time she knew she would grow use to the weight, and just as she would grow use to it the wood would no doubt be replaced with one with metal.

Of course, that would no doubt be an age away, for Fallon was still barely a novice and had yet to truly grasp anything about the way of the sword, let alone anything related to the knights. So taking herself off to a relatively quiet area Fallon attempted to bring herself to train. Which was harder than she first imagined. The first issue was getting use to where the sword needed to be held for both balance and the best effect- even if it was just made of wood. She stroked her chin and held the wooden sword before her, her eyes contemplating what was what.
This must be the cross-guard, she thought as her fingers tapped against it, meaning this must be the hilt…
She gripped her hand around the hilt of the sword and felt it in one hand, a firm frown forming on her face. It was far from the same as using a Kukri, the hilt for one was different, along with the weight.

But it did not mean she could not apply the same basic logic. She extended the blade out, watching the tip already begin to dip as she held it there. She withdrew it, moved her hand along the hilt and extended it out again. This time it was worse, even she could tell that. That and extending it pointlessly out was making her wrist ache. Though not as much as her head. Letting out a sigh she returned the wooden sword once more, her eyes narrowing at the hilt. The first issue seemed to be finding a point of balance, a place that was good to grip the blade before performing swing after swing. She slid her hand along it again, grasping it as she tried to find a comfortable point.
Definitely nothing like a Kukri, she frowned as her hand finally reached the cross guard, Bah, at the top again.

For a moment Fallon paused, then moved her hand back down again, her patience quickly growing thin. She gave it a wild swing, a flash of her more temperamental side coming out. She felt herself becoming hot headed through her hang over, annoyance commanding her actions. She gave a second wild swing as the sword slid briefly in her grip, the weight shifting with her swing. She gripped it tighter and the wooden sword back, before staring down at the new hold that she had taken and the dull ache in her swinging arm. It seemed to feel a bit better now, or if anything it was at least comfortable, although it was something still alien to her. She glanced round briefly to look at those who were watching, mainly a group of young squires who seemed to be revelling in watching her make a fool of herself.
“Oi, Petch off!” she gave them a wave, a firm hint that they should do something else other than simply laugh at her expense “Go train or something!”

She shook her head and poured her focus into the wooden sword, trying to understand what she could from it. Which still remained very little. She rubbed her forehead, before giving it a few more swings, her ears pricking to the dull swish of wood in the air. She brought the wooden sword above her head, and brought it racing down with all her might. It reverberated against the ground, the vibrations shaking through her arms and hands, but that did not stop her. Fallon brought it racing back up, both hands tightly wrapped around the hilt this time, before stepping forward into a lunge. Or as best as she could, she felt her body follow after the sword, ripping her forward into a stagger. She felt the wood flick back, it jerking to the side as she went forward. She threw her foot to her front, twisting to one side as the wood blade sliced through the air beside her. One of her hands released its hold, failing out in an attempt to steady herself, her feet locking up as her stance was solidified. The blade tip bounced off the floor once more, any form of mild control she did have on it having now been lost. Fallon released a heavy sigh before returning her hold on the hilt of the long sword.

It became clear as time went on. The more she swung the sword about, the more she felt an unease creeping in. To begin with she tried to think nothing of it, but the more she persisted with trying to learn the way to at least swing the wooden long sword, the more she felt defeated. Even when she gripped the hilt with two hands she found it unwieldy. She sighed and stopped her swinging, knowing that it was achieving next to nothing if any. She exhaled and stared at the wooden sword with disgust. It did not feel right; it felt unwieldy to her, as if it was something that was far too long for her and her smaller frame. She rubbed her forehead once more, before simply throwing it to the side with annoyance.
Better go find something better.
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[Antinous Training Grounds] Sore head training

Postby Fallon on March 17th, 2013, 7:27 pm

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12th Bell

A new weapon. Let’s see how this goes…
This time Fallon had chosen something a lot smaller in length and a lot more wielding. Or at least, so she had been told. Time would reveal that one. The new weapon she had been introduced to was called a Tulwar, apparently, and was a curved blade made of steel. The first thing she noticed was of course the difference of weight, for despite it being shorter in length, it was made of a heavier material. She stared at the blade in its sheath for a moment, her mind trying to work out what it could about this weapon.

Her first attention was drawn to the hilt, and it was something she could instantly compare to with the Kukri. The grip was cramped- or at least it may have been for a male hand-, and small in comparison to the long sword, and designed for a single hand instead of two. The length was also different, with the Tulwar being only two-thirds of the length of the long sword. She slid her fingers around the grip, the noted the disc pommel and the manner in which a small spike came out the end. For a moment she kept it in its sheath, adjusting her arm to the weight of the weapon as she picked out traits from it that she could mimic from her Kukri.
Small, one hand hilt. Curved. About double the total length of the Kukri… She inhaled and brought the hilt towards her eye level for closer inspection. There was a simple cross guard where the bladed and the hilt joined, all of which was made of strong steel. She gave a sigh before turning the blade over and studying it again. Now with more time for careful analysis she could get use to the blade and hopefully become more accustomed to it.

Better get the show on the road.
She drew the steel blade from its scabbard, the sound of metal sliding against metal filling the air. Her spine let out a shiver as she heard the set grind against each other, before and dull ring sounded out. Her ears pricked at the humming of the metal, a shiver racing down her spine as it sliced through the air. New, sharp and reading for combat. She looked upon the flat of the blade, feeling the secure hold of it in her grip as she turned to the edge. Much like the Kukri it had only one sharp edge she quickly noticed, but instead of it being on the inside, it was on the outside. The other thing she noticed upon performing a few wild slashes and thrusts was that the blade was heavy-ended, making it not only good for slashing at opponents, but also at both cutting and thrusting. She withdrew it back to her, eyes narrowing at it before she extended it out once more. She felt more in control with this weapon, the length to begin with did not hinder her as much. Yet she still had to get use to it, and getting use to it would take time. She rubbed her forehead and returned the Tulwar to its scabbard, before turning her attention to the wooden one. This was training, and swinging around a live blade with no skill would only provide damage.

Taking it up she allowed her arm at first to adjust to the difference in weight, the wood being feather like in comparison to the real thing. She placed her fingers around it, extending the blade out, bringing it back, a variety of quick slashes cutting through the air. She brought her foot forward with a thrust of the blade, and for a moment her face wore the expression of surprise that her feet had decided to go with the movement. She returned to her original position, thinking carefully on where to begin with the weapon. She took a stance, or one she would at least use with the Kukri. Her knees bent slightly, the blade being held across her body. Her free hand she kept hovering behind the blunt edge, as if to catch it should the blade flick back towards her. She slid her feet forwards, the blade cutting out widely as she went with it. A little too wide however, because the next thing that occurred was the sensation of her slipping and falling through the air.

Well Petch, was the last thought that went through her mind as she crashed to the floor in a heap. She gave a grunt, followed by a groan, before slowly pushing herself up. She felt a little sore from the fall, the wooden Tulwar having flown from her grasp. Begrudgingly she stood, stretching out the muscles slowly and flexing her fingers, her gaze turning to the weapon. She took it up, returning the weight to her hand. For a while she simply pondered over what she had done wrong, slowly acting the move. A slow step forward, a wide swing with a lean in. She steadied herself with the lean, her head turning to watch the blade go back. She frowned and brought the blade forward again, repeating the motion from beginning to end.
What went wrong? Why did I fall?
She drew in a deep breath and focused the movement, repeating the movement again. She swung the blade forward once more, her arm flicking behind her as it pulled her off balance. She felt herself about to tumble again, and in response to that she snapped herself back with the Tulwar in tow. She wobbled for a moment, before stabilising her balance. Though barely. She had herself precariously balanced on one leg, the other arm still flapping about.
I look like an idiot. I know I do.
She eased herself back, returning herself to both feet.
“If at first you don’t succeed, try and try again,” she said with a sigh.

She took a comfortable stance once more, her fingers arranging themselves to be comfortable position. She exhaled once more, her eyes looking down at her stance, adjusting it to what she thought was at least right. Stances were never her strong point after all. Rolling her shoulders back she held what she thought would have been a more offensive stance, knees bent, and the tip of the blade pointing forwards. Her free hand was held back this time, and close to her frame, to the point it no doubt became more restrictive than useful. Not that she would realise that at the time. She watched the tip waver in front of her, her eyes following after it for a while as it swayed. She felt herself still, her mind growing almost numb as it became absorbed by the notion. It swayed to the right for a moment, and her eyes followed it.
Get the show on the road Fallon!

It was a sudden jerk, a forward thrust with the blade. Her mind went with it, her feet taking a firm step after it. She followed it through, almost as if being pulled on, and being guided by it. Whatever possessed her was beyond her control as she felt the jerked movements set in as her body tried to find a more fluid swing. The muscles strained, twisting and turning as she wood turned in her hand. Her feet went forward with it as the wood pierced at the air, the swing turning awkwardly inwards, arching round as the point turned off. It swatted into her off arm, the swing having now flipped back and returned to her. She gave a curse as the wood crashed against her, her brow creasing as released her hold with her other hand. The wood clattered to the floor, and for a moment she simply stood there and scowled at it before tentatively picking it up. Her arm ached from where she pulled it across herself sharply, the other throbbing from the wild blow. She gave a scowl, and forced herself to draw in a deep breath.
Come on! You’re almost there!

Fallon felt the eyes of the group of squires that were watching her earlier fall upon her again, their muffled laughter ringing on her ears. She gave it a few quick slashes, her shoulder beginning to grow stiff. Maybe right now they were laughing at her make a fool of herself once more. But right now, there was no point being concerned with that factor anymore. Begrudgingly she took the feeble stance that she took last time, blade tip pointing forwards as if to fight an invisible foe. She swung it forward, much like she would have with the Kukri, trying her best to ignore the world that was going on around her. She twisted her wrist round, eyes focusing solely on the space before her. The twisting however was sharp, and sudden. The muscles gave a scream, the tendons in her hand releasing the wood. A reflex action from untrained muscles. She gave a grunt, the sword clattering to the ground as she clenched her wrist with her other hand, her brow creasing as she felt it tighten. She gently flexed the fingers, stretching them out as she relaxed the arm.

She heard the mumble of the watching squires behind her once more, and drawing in a deep breath she took up the wooden blade once more. If anything it was simply pure stubbornness that had consumed her now, a raw determination that she would allow herself to get to grips with it. Her knuckles tightened around it. She gave a wild swing, one after the other, without aim and without direction. Just swing after swing. Her face creased at the fast motion, tendons straining, joints aching as forced herself onwards. Her step advanced after it, confidence blooming within. She had to break through, no matter what. A grunt escaped as with a final step she lunged forward, slicing the air with the curved point. Her chest heaved for a moment, her eyes narrowing at the point. Her arm trembled, the heavy weight of straining starting to set in, the world dancing before her eyes. The dull thud of adrenal reached her ears. Her free hand rubbed at the tendons in her arm, feeling the muscles before she shook her head. It was the curse of being so close, and then slipping away again. She released a heavy sigh, her eyes turning to the watching squires, before she retracted the wooden blade. Enough was enough, and although it was simple training its toll was felt.
Let’s take a break.
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[Antinous Training Grounds] Sore head training

Postby Accolade on April 6th, 2013, 3:59 am

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Observation + 4 XP
Weapon (Tulwar) + 3 XP
Weapon (Long sword)+ 3 XP


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Regretting the night before
Learning to use a Tulwar
The difference of a wooden sword
Learning to use a Long sword


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Good job! You asked for advice, separate those paragraphs more tehe.


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