Solo Wandering through the Wastes

Spirit goes exploring, and finds a bunch of interesting things along the way...

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This northernmost city is the home of Morwen, The Goddess of Winter, and her followers who dwell year round in a land of frozen wonder. [Lore]

Wandering through the Wastes

Postby Spirit Frostfawn on April 9th, 2013, 10:44 pm

--Spring 45th 513AV--

Spirit wandered around the wilderness, taking in the magnificent scene around her. She was possibly a bell away from the city, not so long in her opinion, since she had basically dedicated this day for exploring. She rarely went further away than this, but it still left her with plenty of land to explore in isolation. Well, not complete isolation of course, since Wind trotted faithfully behind her. The Vantha looked back and smiled at her companion, who replied by wagging his tail slightly. He seemed not to mind the cold, or the long distance, which made sense. His breed was quite hardy, used to travelling far. They were sled dogs, and a simple walk probably meant nothing to him. Probably...

Looking at Wind, Spirit noticed that he was looking a little more tired than usual. His aging made her sad, and though she tried to push the fact of his approaching death out of her mind, it kept coming back to haunt her. What would she do without him? Her faithful puppy... she didn’t know how she could stand being alone, especially at times like this, when he was her only company... her thoughts fell into melancholy, and she shook her head, attempting to force such sads ideas out. She continued her walk, continuing to watch the apparently unchanging, but still fascinating scenery. The wastes never got old for her, and she hoped they never would...

Coming across a tree, she stared at it in fascination. She rarely saw them around, and though it wasn’t particularly amazing, she still spent at least 15 chimes just looking at all it’s branches in wonder. It stood straight for at least ten feet, until it bent at an odd angle for a bit, then straightened out again for the rest of it’s height. The branches also stuck out at odd angles, and the needles within created a thick nest. The Vantha smiled slightly while looking, and saw multitudes of little pine cones around it. She wandered under the tree and stared straight up, but was unable to spot the midday sun. The needles blocked almost all the light filtering through.

Spirit stood there for an even longer time, marvelling in the sight of the branches from beneath, when she finally decided it would be best to move on. Not looking down, she sighed slightly, and began walking, but stopped when her toes bumped into an object. Looking at the item, she saw a long branch that had fallen from the tree. Smiling slightly, she picked it up and looked at it closer. It was almost exactly her height, possible a little shorter, and maybe two inches thick. It was perfectly straight, except at the top where it curved slightly, and split into two ends. It was amazing how such a crooked tree provided such a straight and long branch... Wondering how strong the wood was, she took the staff in two hands, and awkwardly hit it against the massive trunk of the tree. Nothing happened. Readjusting her grip, she twisted her at her waist, and using the weight of her body as well as her arms, swung the stick at the tree again. It felt like a much harder blow, and Spirit saw several chips of bark fly from the tree, but again the stick didn’t change at all. It’s bark was much thinner and more pliable, more resistant to the blow, she assumed. She wasn’t really that adept in wood crafting, and barely knew anything about it in the first place. Still, it seemed pretty impressive and sturdy. Her grin widening, the Vantha took the staff in one hand and pushed it against the ground, deciding to use it today as a walking staff. Taking steps, and using the staff as support on the icy parts, she continued her journey.

After possible another bell of walking, enjoying the use of her staff, Spirit found a convenient rock jutting out of the ground, perfect for leaning against. She sat there, eyes closed for maybe five chimes, until she decided she needed something to do with her hands. She gazed at the stick, thinking that it might hold some ideas. Luckily it did, and she removed her backpack (which she always carried with her) and rummaged through it. She was looking for something to cut with... a knife of sorts, but the best she found was her eating knife. It was decently sharp, and the girl hoped it would cut the tough wood of her staff... Finding the place where her hand rested, she dug the knife into the bark with no small effort. At least it worked. The Vantha smiled slightly, patted Wind (who was lying, head on paws watching her) and pulled the knife out. Pushing it in a more sideways direction, she moved under the bark for a few inches, then pulled it up. What was under was a much paler wood, with an uneven surface to it, from Spirit’s unsteady knife wielding. She didn’t mind of course, just pleased that she had successfully created something. The girl repeated the action a few more times along the section she had chosen, becoming better and better with each movement. By the time she had removed all the bark from that part of the stick, there was quite a difference between the starting section and the end one. Neither looked perfect, but she was satisfied with her work. Replacing the knife in her bag, Spirit stood up and stretched, causing Wind to jump up happily. Grabbing her backpack and swinging it around her shoulder, she continued her journey to nowhere in particular, finding the grip on her staff much more comfortable.
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Wandering through the Wastes

Postby Spirit Frostfawn on April 10th, 2013, 10:58 pm

Behind her beautiful scenery, and ahead the same, Spirit walked at a slow pace, taking in the land around her. She was both paying attention to her surroundings, and not at the same time. She could spot any tree within her sight, but any moving creature was completely ignored. A voice in the back of her mind said this was a dangerous thing, since any wild animal could attack her and the Vantha would be defenseless. When she and Wind were younger, he would have preformed that task, but now his limbs were stiff and he couldn't run or jump like he used to.

Spirit had been feeling slightly more cautious now than in those times, but today there was something different. The staff she had acquired not too long ago sat in her hand, sturdy and strong. It felt down to earth, something which the girl needed sorely. When wandering alone, she would have her mind in the clouds, not really focusing on anything in particular. The stick also provided physical support, giving her something to keep her balance with when on slippery ground. She remembered that feeling of...power... when she had smacked a tree trunk when she had just found the staff. It was amazing the difference in strength when doing so, and it gave her a sense of more control. Power wasn't something the Vantha had often, and she couldn't remember the last time she felt she could really stand up for herself, in a physical sense. Luckily living in Avanthal, where most were kind and open, this had never been too much of a problem. Spirit had always led as simple, quiet life, with little danger or adventure. Occasionally she was slightly annoyed by this, but not that often. Shrugging slightly, the girl continued on her meandering journey.

A small creature darted before her feet, causing the Vantha to stumble back and cry out slightly. Wind looked at her in confusion, not understanding what the commotion was about. Looking around for the surprising creature, Spirit vaguely spotted a white form, blending in with the snow. A small white rabbit stared at her from 20 feet away, before turning around and loping out into the distance, out of sight. The girl stared at the spot where it had been not moments before in fascination. It had been hard to spot, with the white-on-white, and she had to admit it was effective camouflage. Her black hair stood out among the snow, though if she cared at all, her white clothes aided with blending in. But of course, she didn't mind in the slightest, not finding a need to ever blend in with her surroundings. She shrugged lightly, and resumed walking. Paying slight more attention to the area around her, she couldn't spot any more rabbits around, which surprised her slightly. She thought they lived in groups, so maybe this one was a loner. It didn't matter too much anyways, since though she adored animals, at times like this, she wanted to be alone, even from wild creatures.

Spirit spotted a small black dot on the horizon that confused her slightly, so she stopped. It grew ever bigger, closer seemingly, and eventually was joined by a white figure of the same size. They had probably been walking together, but from such a distance she didn't notice the lighter one. The girl wasn't really concerned, until she heard Wind growling behind her. Wind rarely, if ever, growled, so his reaction put her on edge. There was something about those to figures... creatures now, as they drew closer. The Vantha was still unable to identify what they were, but gripped her hands tightly around her staff all the same and didn't move. The animals had obviously spotted her, since they made a direct beeline to her location. They were after her... which didn't sound good.

Finally, the beasts came closer, and what she saw made Spirit's heart jump. A pair of wolves, one pure white, the other opposite, approaching her, hackles raised and growling. They drew slightly apart, and began to flank the sled dog and the girl, obviously planning on attack. The Vantha's pulse sped up in fear, not knowing what to do. She couldn't fight... at all, and wolves were dangerous... very dangerous. They would attack her! They would attack Wind! The last drew a gasp of breath out of her as she understood the danger for her companion. They would go after him, obviously the weaker and then... no, she wouldn't think about it. She had to protect Wind... that was the only thought that went through her mind, erasing all fear. She yelled loudly at the wolves, not forming any words, but just making noise. It was a hopeless attempt to make them go away without force, and didn't not work in the slightest, only causing the white one (who was closest to her) to prick up it's ears a bit. She and Wind watched them warily, back to back, Spirit gripping her staff tightly. She wasn’t sure if it could be used very well as a weapon, but it was all she had...

The black wolf lunged while the Vantha wasn’t looking, snapping at Wind’s legs, but the dog quickly retaliated. He snapped his jaws heavily around the night-colored animal, and held on like there was no tomorrow. The creature wasn’t expecting such an attack and quickly succumed, thrashing about, but unable to dislodge his new attacker. Wind, however strong his grip, was unable to stay upright, to was simply hanging onto the wolf’s neck with his jaws, unable to find purchase on the ground with his paws.

Spirit screamed at this attack, fearing for her companion’s life, and was about to kick the black wolf hard in the side of the chest, until it’s white counterpart made it’s move. It leaped past the girl and grabbed ahold of the dog’s rear left leg in it’s jaws. The three canines now made a long, squirming, bloody chain, that may have seemed humorous out of the moment but didn’t even occur to the Vantha. Seeing the snow-white wolf as the greatest danger now, she yelled again and aimed her kick at it’s side instead. It hit hard, fueled by fear and rage at it simply being there. It jerked the creature to the ground, sending it toppling over like Wind, but also like the sled dog it did not let go. Seeking another way to fight back, Spirit took the bottom end of her staff in two hands, and lifted it awkwardly above her head. Gathering all her strength, she brought it down onto the skull of the white creature, causing another sickening crack. With a loud, pained yelp, the beast finally let go, and turned on the Vantha. It was obviously very hungry to continue fighting like this. Before it could more again though, the girl repeated the action with another loud cry, sending the wolf crashing to the ground, unmoving, either dead or unconscious. She didn’t care, turning her attention back to the two wriggling animals beside her.

The black wolf had sunk to the ground, apparently weakened by loss of blood. There was certainly quite a lot streaming from it’s neck, where Wind’s jaws had pierced hard. Both canines looked exhausted after their short battle, but at the moment it seemed like the tame one was winning. Taking her stick again in the same position, Spirit brought it down on the creature’s neck, causing it too to collapse. It was done... they were... dead.. she collapsed to her knees beside her companion, silent tears streaming down her face as she inspected the wounds of the prone dog. He was alive, and seemed to have taken no mortal wounds, but his breathing was heavy and he looked exhausted, just like her. They’d had a hard past few chimes, and as short as it may seem, it had felt like a lifetime during the event. Wind’s body was covered in various scratches, from the black wolf’s claws and the ground, but the worst wound was his leg. The hind part was ripped to shreds, and the Vantha could see the bone below. The sight sickened her, not because of the blood but because of how badly the dog had been hurt. She cried softly for a while, before realizing she had to do something.

The girl ripped off the bottom part of one of her pants, and made it into a sheet. She didn’t care if her leg was cold from touching the snow, she needed a bandage... she took the newfound bandage and tightly wrapped it around the shredded leg, but careful not to make it too tight. She didn’t want to cut off his leg...It was a shoddy job, but all she could do at the moment. Tears flowed down her face from exhaustion and fear, as she wondered what to do. The sun was setting... she had the bodies of two wolves beside her, and an injured husky. The best she could do was... sleep. But... no, sleep. But she had to find shelter...

Forcing back the irresistable urge to collapse, Spirit looked around for a possible place to stay the night. All she saw was a small grove of well-sheltered pines, which looked like they could provide decent protection. She slowly dragged Wind under their branches, arms aching from the simple effort. She was so tired.... though tempted to fall asleep then, she noticed that the smell of blood from the pair of wolves would draw other creatures, and came up with a bad, but possibly effective way of keeping them out. She then moved the two corpses to share her tree, and covered them with massive amounts of snow. She herself was unable to smell anything from them, which wasn’t saying much, but she hoped it would work. It was all she could do. Collapsing next to Wind, slowly rubbing his side in consolation, she fell into a dreamless sleep.
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Wandering through the Wastes

Postby Spirit Frostfawn on April 11th, 2013, 3:19 pm

Spirit awoke, cold, tired, wet, hungry and most of all grumpy. She felt still all over and for the life of her couldn’t figure out why. She groaned and rolled over, pulling with her the small, scratchy and snow covered blanket. Snow covered? Before she could figure out why, she heard a cry of surprise.

“You’re awake!!” exclaimed a man’s voice, though young seeming. The girl grumbled and sat up uncomfortable, and stared at the person. Seeing his unfamiliar face, she felt confused, then looked around and that feeling grew. Why was she in the middle of the was.... then it all came back. She gasped suddenly, causing the man to looked concerned. She had... killed...

“Wind!!!” She cried aloud, attempting to look around her all while feeling cold and stiff. She heard a bark from her left, and turning towards it, spotted the dog, head up and looking a lot better. He was alive... he was safe... she was too... She fell back to the ground, arms splayed in exhaustion, but she wasn’t allowed to rest for long. Soon the man, with his dark brown hair with orange bangs walked up. Getting a better look at him, she figured him for a hunter, since he carried a bow on his back and a dagger at his waist. He was also certainly a Vantha, since she could she his eyes changing color as he moved. What prooved his occupation more though, was what he held. Lying on one of his arms was a pair of wolf pelts, one white, one black. They looked oddly familiar, but Spirit couldn’t figure out from where.

“For your hands” He said simply, kneeling beside her and wrapping the furs around her hands. She couldn’t understand why he was giving her such beautiful and perfect pelts... but he began to speak once again.

“I found you here, maybe an hour ago. You were just lying there, next to the bodies of two wolves, and a dog.” He pointed over in a direction, where the Vantha girl remembered she had buried the corpses. Apparently the snow had come off. She felt slightly numb, not quite sure what to feel, but she certainly felt pain in her hands. As they thawed, she realized they had been practically frozen, and possible only her Vantha blood and the warm weather that night had saved her from losing them. “When I came over, your dog here barked, so I knew he wasn’t dead. I figured out you were alive too... You guys seemed to have been in a pretty nasty fight against those wolves. I’m amazed you’re alive. You’re a pretty stubborn girl...” He continued, going slightly off topic, but went back to the point. “Oh, these furs are from the wolves, and I put that blanket on you... I skinned them while you were still asleep, so you could use them for more warmth...” He seemed slightly awkward, unsure of what to say then cried “Oh! Right, I’m Jerry Frostfawn, a hunter.”

Spirit nodded absent mindedly, taking all this in. She had had a frightful day before... it hurt just to remember it, so she reached over and patted Wind on his head, who was now leaning on her side.

“Thank you... I’m... Spirit.. a Frostfawn too... how can I thank you?” She asked, unsure of what to say. Her head felt muddled from exhaustion, and she couldn’t think straight. She dug her fingers deeper into her companion’s thick fur, to try and calm herself.

“Nice to meet you, and you don’t need to thank me... All I want is... eventually, my blanket back” He laughed lightly at his little ‘joke’, though it didn’t really register to the girl. “And, if you don’t mind... I could find a use for that wolf meat... though you can keep the pelts. You can have them as a souvenir, or sell them for a good price....” He sounded slightly awkward at this request, as if not sure if Spirit would mind.

“Oh... Well, that’s ok with me...” Realizing that she now had obtained the wolf pelts, she hugged them slightly closer to her, though not sure why. Suddenly , she remembered something. “Ak!! Wind! Your leg!!” She cried looking at his bandage for the first time. It was covered in blood, and the limb looked like it pained him. She winced at forgetting about it, and only thinking about herself. She looked at Jerry and asked “Do you have some cloth? Or... a bandage?” The hunter nodded, looking slightly surprised, and moved over to a horse that had been standing patiently 10 meters away. Spirit was amazed she hadn’t noticed it before, and at how well behaved it was. She watched Jerry fish a long bandage from one of the saddle bags and come back, handing it to her. She silently nodded her thanks, and again wrapped the bandage around his leg, covering the blood stains. She knew it was a terrible idea to remove a bandage when you needed to add more, since it basically reopened the wound and could do more damage. Finally, when Wind’s leg was covered in white fabric again, she stood up, legs aching with the effort.

Spirit found her stick and clumsily picked it up from the floor, almost falling over in the action. Jerry watched from a distance, slightly concerned, but not about to complain.

“Well... I’ve put the meat on Icehoof here, and I think your dog should join it...” He patted his horse’s side when he said this, so ‘Icehoof’ was apparently it’s name. Spirit nodded, and attempted to pick up Wind, but failed miserably, collapsing to the ground. The hunter jogged over, lightly pushed her to the side, and picked up the sled dog, tying him down on his horse. Wind looked slightly concerned at this, but when his companion smiled at him while standing up again, he relaxed and let the new man do his work. The girl handed her new friend his back his blanket, which was also added to the horse’s back. Silently they began their journey back, Spirit leaning heavily on her staff, and Jerry leading Icehoof. All the way back, the Vantha girl contemplated what would happen next, and what she would do with the furs...
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Wandering through the Wastes

Postby Noblesse on April 21st, 2013, 6:19 am

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Spirit Frostfawn :
Experience:
  • Observation +3
  • Carving +1
  • Quarterstaff +3
  • Medicine +2
  • Unarmed Combat +1
  • Wilderness Survival +1

Lores:
  • I Have to Protect Wind!
  • A Near Death Encounter at the Wastes
  • Removing Bandages Can Reopen Wounds

Other:
    Inventory: A thin Quarterstaff, one white wolf pelt, and one black wolf pelt

Notes:
Hey Spirit, I see you’re taking a nice jaunt through the frozen wastes here. I would like to congratulate you for beating your previous solo’s record count of 1,862 words with a total of 3,676 words! That’s 1,814 more words you dished out there than your last one. Be proud of yourself, you.

So moving on to my personal comments. The first part of your thread felt like it didn’t have any definite direction and seemed to draw on and on about unimportant stuff. However, you took me by surprise by your second post. I see your potential in writing action scenes. You kept me on the edge of my seat during the whole scuffle with the wolves! There is still much room for improvement, but this solo is a definite improvement than you previous one. Keep up the good work!

But yes, I have to remind you again that we don’t use hours and minutes as units of time in Mizahar. Instead, we use bells (hours) and chimes (minutes). And another thing: there aren't really trees at the northern wastes since, well, it's literally an icy wasteland! I'm going to let it go this time, but please refer to the Player information, or just shoot me a pm, when you're unsure about things like these. :)


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