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Race: Mixed blood, a son of a Human and an Ethaefal Gender: Male Age: 19 Birthday: Winter, Day 36, 494AV Birthplace: Lhavit
Appearance Body structure: Slim, athletic Weight: 143lb / 65kg Height: 6' / 1.84m Eyes: Brown, with a soft element of green on the outter edges of the iris Hair: Brown, short, thin, straight Skin: Light caucasian pallor, smooth
Character Concept Traits
Level- headed
Patient
Proud
Optimistic
Intelligent
Clairsentient
Vegan
Adventurous
/will be supplemented/
Character History
The thorough history of the life of Imehiel Dove :
• Born to a couple of non-conformists- an ex-mercenary Human father and a very Spiritual Ethaefal mother, Imehiel was a healthy and an exceptionally calm boy. • His father fell in love with a beautiful local Ethaefal he met in Lhavit and that led him to the abandonment of his dangerous career and settling down. • His mother, an Ethaefal, who spent most of her life in Lhavit, was dedicated to spiritual improvement, seeking for answers to the meaning of existence and the practicing of numerous arts. • Imehiel was schooled at home, because his parents, in unison, wanted to raise a man based on their particular views and beliefs. They both spent a lot of time carefully introducing Imehiel to the aspects of this reality, nurturing his mind, by providing him with choices of his own and teaching him both theory and practice.
His mother taught him well to speak, read and write in common tongue, introduced him to the basics of various plant and herb properties, their applied use in medicine and cooking. Skies and stars were always of interest to the boy, thus presenting astronomy and astrology to him did not require much hassle. At the age of five, Imehiel found out about meditation from his mother and has been practicing it ever since.
As Imehiel grew older, his father started teaching him the basics of the human body muscle and neural system structures, training him in body movement, self-defence and eventually- wielding of a blade.
• Moreover, Imehiel spent a lot of time learning alone as well. Running around in nature, climbing trees and buildings, playing with other kids, swimming, naturally gaining interest in certain things. And his parents never had anything against it, they gave him as much free time as he needed and they enjoyed watching him grow in his own way. • Imehiel loved all life by nature, was always fascinated by all kinds of plants and animals and in spite of insatiable interest, he still managed to respect them and their freedom. When not learning, or playing, Imehiel spent some of his time helping mother in the garden, or the kitchen, as, in fact, food was another fascination of his - especially baked goods. His passion for food led him to start practicing cooking at a very early age. • Of course, Imehiel, as all living beings, was influenced by his surroundings and on the darker note, that led him to try out certain things at his teen age. Those things included alcohol, herbs with psychedelic properties and stealing. However, Imehiel did not feel good doing these things and he soon got over them, without it leaving much of an impact in his life. • Growing and improving- Imehiel kept on building his views on reality, learning more about his surroundings and himself. As he got older, he naturally developed interest in philosophy and the biggest questions of existence has always been of utmost importance to him. • Having read a handful of books, Imehiel found out about clairsentience and similar senses, thus through improvement in comprehension of own feelings and meditation, boy came to an understanding that clairsentience was indeed a sense he possessed. Once he realized, that the sadness he feels near troubled people, or the joy he feels near uplifted ones, is indeed uncommon and rare, he was already used to it, since it was a part of him since the birth. Now conscious of his unique gift, he decided to try improving it and learning to control it. • Some time after turning eighteen, Imehiel started paying more attention to his diet. He decided that he does not feel good about eating dishes made out of the living ones. He also noticed that his body is occasionally having hard time digesting dairy substances, thus Imehiel stopped consuming these products. • Yet most important moment in Imehiel's history is the one when he came upon some detailed information about a city which instantly captivated the boy and caught his interest. The Wind's Reach. At the age of nineteen, Imehiel receives a blessing from his parents and sets out, for the greatest journey of his life, to sate the thirst for adventure, to find his path in this reality.
Season of Spring, Day 1, 513AV, Imehiel Dove sets out for the Wind Reach.
Languages
Fluent Language: Common Tongue
Skills !! - I've been already noted about skills requiring to have at least 5 points. I will fix that next time I will be editing my CS.
Heirloom: Simple Steel 'Bamboo' Blade provided by father and a Cloak (~llama wool, ramie, leather, copper, dies~), provided by mother, upon the outset for Wind's Reach.
Housing
Location: Travelling to Wind Reach.
Private Note :
(HELPFUL HINT, Please Choose & Remove - PM DS Phoenix to have a private residence added. Otherwise, seek out the Valintar.
Darniva Commonrooms: All Wind Reach housing is inside the Mt. Skyinarta Volcano in cave systems. Anyone living in Wind Reach lives in a cave. There are no cottages or buildings outside the volcano.
With the exception of drudges, who sleep wherever they finish working, the common housing of Wind Reach all reside within the Darniva Commonrooms. There is actually plenty of space for everyone since the rooms were created with the advent of Wind Reach and made numerous with the anticipation of a much larger city. Rooms can be rented or purchased by travelers or immigrants through the Valintar for any duration of stay at any size requirement. People do not have to stay in the rooms they rent, often renting a small space and opting to move into a far larger one. The Inarta themselves, other than the drudges who do not get their own rooms, are free to occupy whatever space they'd like. Visitors that occupy spaces other than the ones they have leased or purchase run the risk of getting run out the first time someone else rents or leases the space they are in. Individuals are responsible for keeping their own spaces clean, though there are a number of drudges assigned to the Darniva to keep them all clean as well.
The Eagle Aeries: The Home of the Wind Eagles and their riders and family, the aeries are the richest most elaborate residences found in Wind Reach. In order to access them, one must have an eagle as a bonded mount or be otherwise attached to a rider as part of his or her family. The Aeries are the only rooms in Wind Reach that have their own bathing chambers.)
Ledger
Transaction
Barter
Balance
SP
+100 Kina
100 Kina
SP - No house
+500gm
500gm;100Kina
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Last edited by Imehiel on April 20th, 2013, 1:46 pm, edited 15 times in total.
Greetings. I have created a character, but soon after- I changed my mind and I entirely remade it. This is one of the reasons of this post- to bump the topic.
More importantly - I need someone to look through my character sheet and notify me of any issues, before I can finish it, because I fear there might be huge holes in my story, 'game-start plan' and maybe even something what contradicts with the lore, or the rules.
Looking forward to an intervention, Much love, Imehiel
I'm Siren, the local and completely harmless Character Sheet Liaison. In order to help you get the most out of your experience on Mizahar, I have taken a look at at your Character Sheet to make sure that everything is up to par!
Unfortunately, there are a few changes that have to be made before we can move forward! Please see the tabs below for details on these issues. Once the issues have been addressed, feel free to send me a private message, let me know you've fixed what I've pointed out and I will gladly remove the intervention!
Skills
Unfortunately, the lowest number of points you can put in a skill from the Starting Package is 5. All your skills have 1 except your racial bouns, so you're going to have to make some big changes there
Possessions
I see you have a LOT of purchased items, but it is misleading because your ledger is still at 500 after you turned in your housing. Please deduct everything you've bought from your ledger. You can still list it next to the item in your possessions list but it needs to be in your ledger as well.
Housing
I understand that your PC is traveling to Wind Reach, but I didn't know if you realized you still had an information tab in your CS
(5gm)
(40gm)
(8gm)![[Note by Siren]](./images/note.png "[Note by Siren]")
Imehiel Dove 
by Imehiel on April 17th, 2013, 2:50 pm 
