Completed [The Arena of Ancients] An Extension of the Arm

Much to her surprise, 14 year old Kaie is introduced not just to using a blade but defending against one. All with the help of her father and a washed out warrior.

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Taloba, home to the Myrians, is the thriving core of Falyndar. Inhabited by a fierce and savage tribe where blood sacrifices are normal and a way of life, they are untamed and proud of it. Warlike, and with their numbers growing, the Myrians are set on reclaiming what is rightfully theirs. [Lore]

[The Arena of Ancients] An Extension of the Arm

Postby Kaie on June 4th, 2013, 11:35 pm

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Now this...This is not my forte, Kaie thought bitterly through gritted teeth. Her heels had left deep half pipes in the dirt when she had slid back while trying to fight off a greater force. Her efforts ended pathetically and her opponent's attack slid her back far too easily. Yitmah's perfectly edged gladius was thrust roughly against hers in a vicious battle for ground. She struggled against his force so violently that the space between their faces was that of their swords. The thirteen year old Myrian girl exhaled audibly with exhaustion, feet digging deep into the dirt. It was like she was running in place to try to move him away from her. Finally her enemy shoved his weapon into hers brutally with a force she could not compensate. Kaie's body went backwards to fall straight into the mud. Her hands sank straight into the filth, handle included. Specks of mud had splattered up her limbs like someone had shook a paint filled brush at her body. Sitting there in that pile with the sun kissed elder above her, Kaie had never felt so pathetic.

Without missing a beat, the dark haired beast jammed his sword at her. The point stopped just before the base of her throat. Kaie's eyes widened at the sharpness of the weapon so close to her throat. Quickly, though, they turned into narrow slits. It wouldn't be long before her frustration possessed her in a fit of anger. Sure, Yitmah was a seasoned veteran discharged honorably from the army, but Kaie couldn't simply accept failure. This would make the fourth time that the man had her pinned in the filth of the jungle floor. An embarrassment by anyone's standards. Especially when your attacker was little more than a recovered cripple. I will not give in.

With a yell, Kaie swung the mud covered blade from the dirt straight at his hand. The edge was headed for his wrist like she meant to hack it off for daring to threaten her. Perhaps that was her actual motive but with tension so high, one could never tell with her. With an amused grin, Yitmah pulled his hand back before he lost it. There was a sinister twinkle in those black eyes, the kind that made her want to gouge them straight from his skull. Did he really enjoy demotivating her that much?

"Still slow, Girl...GET BACK ON YOUR FEET!" Her instructor cried down at her with a downward slash of his dulled blade. Panic took her over (or was it still that brooding anger?) and just in time did that sword hand rise to contest the blow. Keeping her wrist strong, the sword slammed down upon the blade. Metal on metal screeched and a thunderous clang rang through the training arena. "Redirect!" Yitmah hollered at her as soon as contact was made, his command echoing through the empty area. Kaie obeyed and changed her force to redirect the blade outside her body. The sword obeyed her command and Yitmah's slid to the side, leaving himself exposed. The Myrian girl bit her lip. Hesitation was a killer but now she hadn't a clue what to do. She knew only of unarmed combat and a bit about survival, but swords? She didn't know a damned thing.

Kaie had just gotten over the awkwardness of the weight. The way it pulled her arm down was irritating to an unarmed combat fighter. She had always relied on her light quickness to pull her through conflict. How could she do that when an extra three pounds was added to her dominant hand? Yitmah had scolded her repeatedly from the start. "Hold the petching sword right, Girl. No, no! Be strong like a rock when you grip it. Always strong!" or "For Myri sake could you pretend you listened to a word I said? Your blade is your most trusted comrade. Have faith in him when you swing!" An hour or so later and she finally had the basic knowledge to do battle. Or so she hoped. Yitmah had been kicking her ass all day. His was better in every way. Strong, faster, and more skilled with his weapon. Kaie had nothing but youth on her side. Actually all she had on him was his weak back that was the direct reason for his retirement from service. She was more than disappointed to find that several years later he was far from weak.

A blink was a long pause in combat time, so young Kaie decided to use what she knew. Impulsively, the young Myrian teen drove a kick straight into her teacher's chest. He stepped back maybe once before he rebounded faster than anyone would anticipate an old man was capable of. Promptly, Yitmah swung the flat part of his dulled gladius right into the side of her head. Never had so much pain flooded her being. Not when her father struck her during training. Not when Keikyo managed to slice her once or twice with their own makeshift weapons. This here was real. Kaie's feet moved quicker than a hummingbird's wings, trying desperately not to lose her footing. She failed as expected and dropped like a stone on her side. Not the mud again...

The middle aged man hovered over her frowning deeply. Dark eyes became black holes of disappointment and anger. He pointed the tip of his sword at her face. She knew exactly what he was thinking: Dead. She huffed once before the headache turned from a minor inconvenience to a distracting migraine. He hadn't hit her hard enough to knock her out by any means. Still it was enough to take her off her feet and make her hurt. It was only then that she realized the cruelty her father had spared her of. This is what real training was. Here there was no loving father, no Keritan to plummet his skill level for the sake of her leaning. Oh no. This was a place she would be expected to learn on her feet. Quickly.

"If you expect to knock a big man with a sword over, you must pack a greater punch. Girl," He said to her, crouching beside her head now where she lay in the watery dirt again fuming. He loved to call her that. Girl. Her father had told him all about how badly she wanted to explore the barbarian lands after her blooding. To follow her father to the lands across the sea and spill blood for the Goddess Queen. Yitmah wasn't just insulting her age or skill level. He was attacking her dignity and her womanhood. He made her feel unworthy to fulfill her pilgrimage. Nothing could boil her blood more. He was right though. Yitmah was a hulking man at forty one years old. He was a monster compared to her. She hadn't the leg power to do damage and he had shown her that her ignorance would've cost her her life.


"You're bigger than me," She managed to say quietly through clenched teeth.

"Big. Small. It does not matter. The blade is simply an extension of your arm. Get up," Yitmah commanded with an indifferent shrug. He pushed his hands against his knees and popped back to a standing position. After his third step back, Kaie could finally feel able to return to her feet. That's not to say the disciplinary swat hadn't still left her powerfully impressioned with a headache. Soul full of nothing far below loathing for her teacher, Kaie returned to her feet as well in a ready stance. Just as she expected the sword came but this time Yitmah didn't call an order. Instead he took the offensive. With moves so quick she would've missed them had she blinked, he redirected her blade five times as well as she had his earlier. Then instead of driving with a kick or a punch, he simply moved in. Sword at a tilt outside his body as a result of his previous action, Yitmah simply stepped directly at her side. The gladius moved with him. Kaie looked down to see the dulled edge against her neck. She could only imagine what he had done to others with this same move. Surely when he moved in he savagely cut their throat and then continued on his way. Onto the next.






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[The Arena of Ancients] An Extension of the Arm

Postby Kaie on August 12th, 2013, 6:01 am

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"All is fluid. One motion. Swordsmanship is an art, Kaie. You don't always need to get cute with it," He said as if it were obvious, all the while walking past her so he was at her back. Soon enough she felt the dulled tip digging into her spine as expected.

Not this again...

"Keep it simple. If your sword's already in position to kill, follow through with it. No need to start hurling body parts if there's hardly any gain. Now, react as I showed you," He commanded, his voice hard and steady as his sword. Kaie groaned internally. Her muscles were becoming sore and her body was begging her for much needed sleep. Yitmah on the other hand was lively and vicious. He was like a dog tied to a tree, fighting his restraint not to unleash hell onto the young woman.


"We've already done this before," Kaie challenge without turning to look at him. The sword prodded her harder in the back, and she had to keep herself from turning to kick him in the family jewels.

"Correct. You also were wildly out of control and inaccurate. Again."

Without needing another command, Kaie pivoted on her heel with surprising speed to escape his sword. Spinning in from the side, the Myrian woman swung her own gladius right at his middle. Yitmah, displeased as always, still managed to just knock her sword away before she broke the skin. The dance continued. They clashed again, her trainer yelling insults and criticizing her work as frequently as their swords collided.

She held on long enough, struggling desperately against him. Despite her hatred for him, her exhaustion, and her slow adjustment to the change of pace, Kaie was far too determined to lose. Far too serious about the world she lived in. She was a warrior. She was a fighter. She would not disappoint her people. Of course...She did have her limits apparently. Not that she openly recognized them often.

"And now you're focused only on my sword," Yitmah sighed at her, swinging heavily down onto her gladius again. She struggled to halt it but as soon as she did, Yitmah hurled his leg into the back of hers. Promptly, Kaie's feet went out from under her. Back into the dirt. Great.

"Good warriors use every resource available. You already know your body is a weapon, Kaie. That doesn't change when you get something in your hands. Always beware," He said with a stiff nod before bringing his sword down to poke the back of her neck.

"Oh, and you're dead again."






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[The Arena of Ancients] An Extension of the Arm

Postby Kaie on August 14th, 2013, 5:40 am

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Kaie growled under the cool point, infuriated and spiteful at her failure. Eyes burned bright with hostility and her expression conveyed utter hatred. She turned over onto her back and lashed at his ankle from the ground. With a bored expression, Yitmah simply lifted his foot and stepped over the gladius. She tried again on the back swing, but he simply stepped away.

Now she was boiling, going straight from simmer to nearing violent vaporization. He had beaten her time and again. He had persecuted her, brutalized her and mocked her. She had felt that wretched sword dig into her skin more than once. He made her look weak and that was something she couldn't accept. She rolled out the way of his downward strike and spun up onto her feet, gladius ready. Kaie's lips curled with a feral growl, teeth bared in her rage. She raced at him with an angry cry. Swords met, but this time she was more powerful. More deadly and purposeful. She was quicker, rebounding off his sword to try another strike as soon they clashed. Kaie was working his angles now, actually forcing the man to back pedal some.

Finally when she had worked him enough, she went for the straight jab at his chest. Yitmah transitioned just in time to strike her sword outside her body. He then somehow managed to switch hands to his left, to drive his sword directly into hers. With their swords on the same side, Yitmah reached his free hand and gripped her throat before she could sent a kick. Running forward, he slammed her into the tree behind them. Pain attacked her once more. His fingers squeeze, cutting off her air gradually, though never enough to be a true choke. His nostrils flared, eyes wild, and lip curled as he stared into her eyes.

"Good! Fight with heart. Fight with fire. But when you fight with rage, do not make anger your weapon. It will blind you, Kaie. Clouds your thinking. You'll run yourself onto your enemy's sword in your recklessness,"He advised meaningfully, staring into her aggressive orbs to make his words sink in. Her burst in speed had caused him to breathe heavier. His chest rose and fell in deep breaths. They had been fighting for a very long time, and her transition caused his body to finally catch up with him. Regardless of his advice, Kaie's hatred for him was still clearly expressed in her face.


"If you don't use anger when you fight with rage, what do you fight with?" Kaie questioned him intensely, challenging him. Nothing he had said made sense to her. Was anger and rage not the same thing? Yitmah leaned in closer, searching her loathing glare for comprehension. When he found none, he made eye contact once again before speaking.

"Righteous fury."




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[The Arena of Ancients] An Extension of the Arm

Postby Kaie on August 14th, 2013, 8:38 pm

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Suddenly there was a sound of light foot steps upon the ground. Both warriors, young and old, directed their gaze toward the sound. Within a second of their reaction, Keritan emerged. Instantaneously, all of Kaie's rage faded. It was like an unexpected breeze slicing through flame to quell its burn. All of her hatred for Yitmah was forgotten the moment she set eyes on her father. She didn't know he had already returned. Why hadn't he sent her word?

"You look older every time I see you. I trust the winds were on your side this time around?" Yitmah greeted with an instant grin. They loved throwing friendly jabs at each other, even though her father didn't look a day over thirty. Yitmah dropped his fingers from Kaie's throat to tap her shoulder. "I betcha got your hands full at home with this one, don't ya?"

Keritan beamed at his old comrade and winked at Kaie. His skin was covered in tattoos and flexed over thick muscle. He was a tall man with an athletic build. Other than a bit of facial hair he hadn't the time to groom just yet, he was the same man since the last time she saw him. Still had that warmth to his eyes. That comfort in his stance and softness in his smile. He might've taken a thousand souls but still his appeared untainted. And Kaie loved him.

"Ah. You wound me, Yitmah. And to think I dragged your incoherent body out of that Dhani's hold? Always such an ungrateful bastard," Her father said with a good natured laugh.

Kaie had to fight every sound bone in her body to keep from springing to him. From jumping into his arms like she was a child again. She'd be fifteen soon. No longer a little girl. She had to put childish things behind. Even if it meant giving up such open and juvenile affections. Yitmah broke from her though, chuckling with and outstretched arm. The two comrades clasped each other's offered hand and went for a one handed hug. After slapping each other's back they drew apart. It was clear that even now their friendship was strong.

"And how is my daughter fairing, old friend?" Keritan asked with a bit more serious expression. Total kill joy.

"Fiery as hell. I can tell what clan she's from. Needs work but has potential," Yitmah shrugged indifferently, simply telling his friend the truth. There were no lies between friends of that level. Her father simply nodded. He was satisfied enough. It had been one of her first gladius lessons. He never expected a prodigy.

"Good. Show me," Keritan commanded while staring at Kaie. He then turned to Yitmah with a nod, who in turn tossed him the gladius. Hilt up of course. He caught it with practiced grace and turn to her. Settling into a battle stance, he waited for her expectantly. After how atrocious she had done all day, how could she succeed now? If there was ever a time to step up, it was now. Unfortunately, now seemed to be utterly and hopelessly, impossible.

Aw, shyke...


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[The Arena of Ancients] An Extension of the Arm

Postby Kaie on August 16th, 2013, 1:56 am

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A pit grew in her stomach. No, no, it wasn't a pit. It was an abyss. An abyss of misery and hopelessness. He wanted her to spar him and she hadn't a clue what she was doing. Disappointing Yitmah was annoying in itself, sometimes even rewarding to see his anger in a mistake. Disappointing her father? She was sure there was nothing worse. Nothing she could think of anyways. Regardless, she lifted her gladius and stared at him wide eyed.

"Come on, now. No need to be polite and let me attack first. Be quick, daughter. Show me what you have learned," Keritan commanded assertively, coaxing her in that smooth voice. He crouched into a proper stance, and waited for her. Expecting her to snap out of her fear and rush him.

Kaie swallowed hard. Stared at him some more. She found his eyes and focused on them, soothing herself until she was ready. Within a few seconds from when he spoke, Kaie was prepared. She exhaled deeply and adjusted her grip. Eyed her target some more and then nodded her head to show she was ready. Her steps were slow and uncertain at first, moving toward him like an unsure faun. Once she regained confidence, she moved to him quickly. Kaie swung her sword to try to cut across his body, already back swinging as soon as he stepped back from it. Keritan's gladius knocked her sideways and he moved in with the intent to finish her.

Quickly she side stepped like they were training with fists again, sword back close in a guard. This time he slashed at her diagonally with his full body weight, and Kaie again lifted her gladius. Unfortunately she hadn't put all her strength into her block. Her hand bounced down a bit under the weight before she countered his strength. Her eyes had gotten wide at the already close call. Her focus a bit broken, she almost forgot to watch his sword.

The gladius came in for a straight strike and she narrowly missed being hit. She jerked her body awkwardly to the side, almost spinning around to get away. Yitmah laughed from the tree, one arm folded across his chest and the other propped up so he could rest his head on his hand. The fires of displeasure she had for him refueled her desire to win. She'd have to thank him for that later.

Kaie spun back around just in time to smack away the slow moving jab. She went for a downward strike be it was blocked easily. Blades collided but Keritan seemed to be sleepwalking through the exercise. Kaie on the other hand was already fatigued and was struggling just to hold him away. He shoved down upon her sword to become level with her throat for a slash across. With anticipation and panic, Kaie fell backward onto the dirt. A stupid thing to do but it was all she could think of. Funny how she kept gravitating into the forest floor. It was demotivating enough she didn't stand a chance on her own two feet.

Keritan struck down at her but she quickly lifted her sword again. The dulled blades collided and she groaned under the stress. Failing in their struggle, Kaie was boxed in. Thinking fast, she slammed her foot into the outside of his hip with all she had. His eyebrows raised in pleasant surprise and he stumbled back some. Just enough space for her to get up. Yet was it enough for her to have a chance at beating her own father when he wasn't even trying?


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[The Arena of Ancients] An Extension of the Arm

Postby Kaie on August 21st, 2013, 9:40 pm

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The answer to that previous question? No.

Keritan twirled his blade in his hand once before returning with a bit more vigor. Surely he was hardly even going quarter speed on the girl, but it's not like she had the experience or skill to notice. In her eyes he was already a terrifyingly quick opponent of great skill. Each swing of his sword was like a lashing from Dira herself. It didn't matter whether the blade was dulled or not.

He was upon her like a furious predator again, sword working her inside and outside. She could hardly keep up. Not to mention she was back pedaling like a mad woman. Sometimes she could clash blades and sometimes she hardly had the time to duck or dodge. It was only a matter of time and time was ticking. Quickly. With that in mind she tried to go on the offensive. Bad idea.

As soon as her jabs and ill aimed swings began, Keritan was changing the game and making each of her attempts joke worthy. He smashed each stroke out of the way and then returned with his own, forcing her to change pace. In a last ditch effort she sliced down diagonally down toward his throat. Her father promptly smashed her sword so hard her arm swung outside her body. And then he was there. He crossed her out at the throat. It was teasing really, the way he drew his gladius across her throat so he just skimmed her. Then he was gone.

"You're right. She does have plenty of room for improvement. Not too bad. I expect results soon, Yitmah," Keritan nodded to his friend, issuing a challenge simultaneously. The old instructor shrugged as if to say "I told you so." Keritan tossed him the sword back and simply watched her where she stood for a moment. Where she panted and gasped for air quietly, tired and beaten. Still not yet defeated in spirit. At least he could see that much.

He hadn't changed his breathing pattern at all since their battle. There wasn't a trace of sweat on his skin nor strain in his voice. The man hadn't even utilized his limbs on her. Quickly, Kaie realized the fight had been very one sided and very far below average par. This time he wasn't willing to let her have the illusion of winning. This was a reality check. One she took as a direct challenge. He wanted a warrior. A daughter that would have the strength, skill, and tenacity to glorify the Goddess Queen. Keritan wanted Kaie to be a leader and an honorable addition to the Cutthroat Shadows when her blooding came. Until then she was nothing more than a child in the jungle. A girl who hadn't yet hit her coming of age mark. Within her a fire began to rage.

Flames rose to incinerate any ideas of doubt still in her mind. All became clear to her. All her training would amount to something worth noticing. It would be valuable in her clan's eyes. One day she would live a story worth telling. And it all would start here. Right in this jungle where she tasted defeat and successes on a daily basis as she trained. Where her blood and sweat cultivated the very ground she fell upon. Kaie was determined to earn her keep. She would take no quarter. Not anymore.

"Return home when you are finished, daughter," Her father reminded and patted his friend on the back before disappearing back within the foliage. Yitmah turned to her and grinned at her silence. He knew she was unsatisfied. Though the man did not hammer on her esteem any further. Instead he offered her a bit of an escape.

"Go and rest, Kaie. Tomorrow you come back to the same place. Same time. We'll get you there."

And with that her training session was over, her mentor lumbering off into the jungle after he took her mock blade. Exhausted, the young Myrian girl headed home. The burning still marking her heart with desire.


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[The Arena of Ancients] An Extension of the Arm

Postby Traverse on August 24th, 2013, 5:19 pm

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Skill XP Earned
Acrobatics2 XP
Endurance 3 XP
Gladius 5 XP
Observation 5 XP
Unarmed Combat 1 XP




Lores Earned
Yitmah: Crippled, But Strong
Learning to trust Your Blade
Avoid Letting Anger Cloud Your Fight
Daddy's Little Warrioress
Realizing Your Inability
The Drive to Become a Great Warrior


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Awesome training thread! You sure maxed out your skills for this one! I gave Acrobatics for the instances where Kaie acted more reflexively and described a lot of movement, and the Endurance was for putting up with all the torture Yitmah was doling out. Very well written, and a great give and take little tale!


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