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The Tiger, the Familiar and the Snake (Aka)

Postby Evalin on November 22nd, 2013, 4:25 pm

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It was so simple. A few words of praise and all suspicion cast upon Evalin, Katherine now, would be forgotten. An affectionate touch here, a whisper of admiration there. Evailn smiled as she was embarrassed, resting her head against her Mistress' shoulder as she silently reflected how easily it would be to slip a knife through the girl's ribs... If she had a knife that is. These were all merely reflections, however, for Evalin knew she still needed Aka. Needed her for shelter, for guidance through this unknown land, and to awaken those parts deep within her that had been thrown into chaos. This girl was a mage of fire, as she was, and so Evalin would absorb that flame and let the Evalin of old once more come to the surface. Let Evangeline return to her cold slumber. Such week sentiments were not needed by the Immortal, and in fact they were a hindrance, more often than not.

As Aka pulled back from her playful nibbling, Evalin would bob in a slight crusty once more, saying softly, "As my Mistress Commands."

Silently Kathrine waited as a good servant would, still and observant, basking in the glory of magical excellence. She had but enough time to quietly say, "Tis glorious the power you wield," Before Evalin found herself being tugged along behind the Dhani. Evalin frowned, deliberately stumbling at times and nearly falling others to hide her own dexterity.


So unruly... She must be trained. A flame must be nurtured before it can spread to consume the forest. Let us be that nurturing breath whispering sweet temptations in her ear.

Tsenrika's voice came slowly, thoughtful as always, Fires wild burn all, fires guided burn merely thine enemies...

Evalin smiled as she dodged a rock that would truly send her face upon the ground, Be that ever so my Dear Tsenrika. Be that ever so.

OOCYay! That was so fun!! I've never gotten to play this role before, with any character let alone Eva! I can't wait for what happens next! Thank you for threading with me ^.^
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Wretched Aura: As a Wretched One Evalin possesses an unnatural aura about her that causes unease in those who get too close. It can come as a prickle of the hair on the back of the neck, a sense of 'wrongness' about her. How people experience it is different depending on their personality and how they handle the unnatural and unknown. Animals tend to become more agitated, more easily sensing how wrong Evalin is and often avoiding contact with her.
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The Tiger, the Familiar and the Snake (Aka)

Postby Traverse on December 19th, 2013, 3:41 pm

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Aka


Experience:

  • Hypnotism 1 XP
  • Investigation 1 XP
  • Observation 5 XP
  • Persuasion 2 XP
  • Philosophy 1 XP
  • Planning 3 XP
  • Reimancy 3 XP
  • Rhetoric 2 XP
  • Socialization 5 XP

Lore:

  • Reimancy: Stone/Lava Scythe
  • Translating Complicated Common
  • Meeting a Being Cursed to Feed on Blood
  • Katherine: A New Slave
  • Showing Off Skill to Your Slave

Afflictions:

+1 deep gashes tot he arm: Will need a month to heal with regular care in order not to form scars


Evalin


Experience:

  • Acrobatics 1 XP
  • Acting 5 XP
  • Familiary 3 XP
  • Meditation 1 XP
  • Observation 5 XP
  • Persuasion 2 XP
  • Philosophy 3 XP
  • Rhetoric 5 XP
  • Socialziation 3 XP

Lore:

  • Tsenrika: Bound by Cold Logic
  • Aka: Dhani and Reimancer
  • The Potential of Losing Yourself in an Act
  • Aka: Slave Mistress
  • Yuki: Aka's Other Slave
  • Zinrah: Home to Dhani Constrictors
  • Simple Flattery Works Wonders
  • Seeing the Fullest Extent of Aka's Powers

Additional Notes :
Whew, this was an expansive thread with a lot going on, if you guys think I missed something be sure to let me know. I really enjoyed this thread, both Evalin and Aka are twisted creatures in different ways, so to have them sync up in this way was quite fun to read!

Aka, I mentioned this in another grade, but I didn't award you any Reimancy XP for the lightning use because as I mentioned before, you wouldn't inherently just pick up the knowledge of how to form lightning upon reaching expert levels. You gain access to air, but I haven't seen you play with it or train with your new element at all save for poofing away your other elements when done with them. If you have a thread going that is training in air/ lightning and it just hasn't been graded I'll be sure to reassess, but I'm not going to give you any credit for lightning until I see your PC go through the effort of experimenting and actually figuring out how to form it, instead of blam exploding hearts like your fire use.


If you have any questions, concerns, accolades, complaints, etc about your grade, drop me a PM and we can most certainly talk it out.

As always, Safe Travels!
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