Welcome to Mizahar Thomas

Just a few things. It is Christmas (Christmas Eve) when you posted so that will effect the amount of views a topic gets as many are spending the holidays offline.
Another thing is your thread is written in First person. Here in Mizahar we write in third person. Past tense is preferred but not so strictly enforced as long as you don't jump from Past to present too much *guilty of that myself and trying to fix ..*
Also don't forget about Time stamping. Where you date your threads. We are currently in the Winter of 513. So 1-92 day, Winter, 513 for a present thread.
Once again Welcome to Mizahar!