Wolves ( Nivel )

[Ahri]

Absentmindedly, she listened to the common "nice to meet you too" phrase, but when she heard " red water magic " she snapped back into reality. At first, she was confused, looking around, then the clay putting notice to her leg. She smiled grimly as she opened her mouth to answer her question. "No.. It's the substance that appears when a wound is made. It's called blood. Not magic. If things lose too much blood, they die. This won't kill me though. Just massive wounds.." She paused, frowning as she talked- "like those, will kill.. Yeah." She curled her lip. "Sorry if that was a bad explination." She looked back on her leg, which was bleeding less. She looked at the wolves carcasses, then realized she could perhaps skin them.

She took out a knife and walked to the carcasses, then frowned, taking a pause before picking one up and walking back. " I have absolutely no idea how to skin these.." She muttered, but trying anyway, trying to cut the wolf's pelt. Her hand was shaky, not only because of the first time, she realized, but of how bloody it looked. Ahri sighed, trying to shake off the feeling and actually tried to do it, and ended up with a medium sized pelt from the wolf. Her hands were quite bloody from trying, which annoyed her and alo made her feel queasy. She didn't bother to do the other one- her hands were bloody enough.

[Nivel]

Nivel stopped a moment to think about the info the Ahri had just shared with her. Tall folk and wolves were filled with a red liquid called blood? Were they just sacks of liquid that could go to sleep forever if they were ruptured enough...Tall folk must be more fragile that she had previously thought. While the pycon was thinking this over Ahri was apparently removing the wolves outer layer. Nivel was horrified and would have intervened but was surprised to find that the wolf was not just a sack of fluid but was more like a cooked beet root. Nivel wondered if the other people of this world were just plants that gained sentience, Nivel was made of clay so the idea didn't seem to far fetched to her. Maybe there are people made of water, rock and possibly even air. Nivel snapped out of her pondering and realized they were still out in the wilderness and Ahri was still desecrating a corpse. "Please stop defiling that beasts final rest! we need to leave from this place as soon as we can, It isn't safe" Nivel begged.

[Ahri]

(OOC: Whoever is grading this thread.. I'm sorry for waking up in the morning half-awake, trying to make Ahri awkwardly do leather. )

She cursed then sighed. "Yeah, your right. Sorry." She stood up, looking at the blood on her hands, mentally cursing herself, and picked up her pack and waited on the road for Nivel, looking back at the gates. Never try to do that again, she reminded herself.

[Ball]

And the grades come rolling in.

 

Overall Comments

Ahri and Nivel, wow! I enjoyed the thread, a bit one the short side of posting for when it came to their length. Try to make them a bit longer? Writing them in MS Word or some other word processor will help you both with length and typos. There were some in both of yours, but not a million of them.

Nivel, I enjoyed seeing a second Pycon in Syliras with Pyken, hit me up somtime for a thread or two? I am more than willing to teach you something!

Ahri, Same to you, I don't have much training in sword use, but a thread would be brilliant =D

 

Ahri

Experience Points.

Weapon(Bastard Sword)	+3
Weapon(Rock)	+1
Skinning	+1
Socialization	+1

Lores.

• Stroke of Luck: Wolf’s Neck Cut Deep
• Nivel: Pycon Squire to the Knights
• Nivel: Lost an Arm… Then Shoved it in her body and Grew it Back?!

 

Nivel

Experience Points.

Stealth	+1
Running	+1
Weapon(Pebble)	+2
Unarmed Combat(Pyken)	+2
Socialization	+1
Shield Points +3	Enjoy!

Lores.

• Surviving The Warm Rancid Breathe of Wolves
• Paralysis from Losing an Arm
• Ahri: Fights Wolves
• Ahri: One of the Tall Folk
• Blood: Red Liquid inside Tall Folk and Wolves

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