Completed Storm stories (Alses, Sal)

Stormy weather brings strangers together in a house in Lhavit

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The Diamond of Kalea is located on Kalea's extreme west coast and called as such because its completely made of a crystalline substance called Skyglass. Home of the Alvina of the Stars, cultural mecca of knowledge seekers, and rife with Ethaefal, this remote city shimmers with its own unique light.

Storm stories (Alses, Quinton, Sal)

Postby Alses on January 10th, 2015, 3:19 pm

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Ah, you work for our redoubtable gadgeteer? He did sterling work on my home – or his employees did, at any rate.” Alses paused, considering. She’d never really given much thought as to the craftspeople who’d worked on Elysium Hall, still less to the artifice that brought piping hot water in elegant profusion and took away the wastes to Syna-alone-knew-where, but a moment’s reflection told her that the only possible business to have done the work was Lucis & Lucis. She knew them by reputation, really; most everyone in the starry city knew that they were past masters of water and its control. Who else, then, would have been entrusted with the commission?

Alses chuckled, the sound low and gentle. “If you’ve been working so much you haven’t been able to get out, I shouldn’t think you have much to fear, when it comes to your position. Diligence is much prized here. Skill is important, true,” she added, in the spirit of truthfulness, “But much can be taught in that field, at least, either by formal instruction or else in the crucible of experience. Finding a truly dedicated person, now that is a prize worth having! If you’re a metalsmith with Lucis, then I daresay Aska Terras at Touch of Fire is green with envy; she’s been bemoaning the lack of really hardworking apprentices for as long as we’ve known her.

A light shrug; Alses was keeping the conversation gentle and easygoing – gathered around a foreign fireside with one of Zulrav’s masterpieces raging outside was decidedly not the place for deep debate or charged argument.

In any case, devices-” she was pleased to remember the term “-aren’t really my field, but that doesn’t mean we don’t respect those who can make them, everything from the incidental little civilities like clocks right up to the pumps that make life on our peaks possible. Do give our regards to your master when you next see him, hmm?

The storm – grumbling merrily away in the background – chose that moment to reannounce its immediate presence, doing so with a furious barrage of thunder and lightning. Flashes of searing light turned everything dramatically monochrome, with the world split between the bright white of overloaded senses screaming and an impenetrable, inscrutable darkness.

A split-tick behind the visual assault there came the full-throated roar of the thunder as Zulrav gave full vent to his spleen, shattering the air with the sound. Ornea flinched, and badly. It was hard to tell in the storm-light, but Alses thought she’d definitely gone a few shades paler, too, her muscles tensed and vibrating under her skin.

This was food for thought indeed – Alses knew that Wind Reach was also in Kalea, and the vague impression of the place that she’d got so far was of a fellow mountain city. Surely, then, the Inarta should have been used to storms?

Zulrav enjoys showing off, doesn’t he?” Alses asked, mostly-rhetorically. It was really more of a segue to her next sentence than anything else. “We needn’t worry, though; storms have been battering themselves into impotence on Lhavit for five hundred years.

A wry half-smile – Alses was thinking of her own office and the Council Chamber high in the Radiant Tower, and how that was now surely in the very heart of the tempest. “The Towers are tallest; they bear the brunt of it each time, and the skyglass is divine enough that lightning bolts and wind and rain have little effect. We are – quite literally – safe as houses in here.

She leaned back in her chair, projecting to the very best of her ability a sense of easement and relaxation – Alses had noticed, in meeting and conclaves with important people and their minions, and indeed in clashes between two equally-matched powers, how every facet of a powerful person’s mien: their demeanour, their actions, the way they spoke, even the way they held themselves, could have a dramatic impact on others.

Exuding the right impression could – along with other skills, admittedly – bring a stormy meeting to tranquillity, or stir an informal party into a bubbling cauldron of rage and recrimination. Given that she was one of the very few Ethaefal that actually resided in the shining city – it had been built by Ethaefal, steered by the celestial race, but few of them actually cared to settle and congregate together – she was already accorded a certain status, and only adding to that was her current position.

Better, now, to seem calm and confident, composed and with faith in the city’s architects, than anything else. “And speaking of the Towers…we might not cover the very broadest spectrum of magic in this city, but what disciplines we embrace we’re good at. I shouldn’t like our reimancers to try and stop a storm dead; that, I think, would be beyond mortal artifice, but the Dawn Tower is certainly well-equipped to handle any more minor problem.” A brief frown flashed across her face, before it cleared back to beatific calm. “They had better be,” Alses murmured distractedly, “Or I will know why.
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Postby Sal Mander on January 23rd, 2015, 4:49 am

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Leather boots were pulled on, coat collar folded up, and scarf and hood realigned to ensure maximum efficiency against the raging storm. In agreeing to aid Maeki in fetching the bucket of water, Sal had neglected to consider the chaotic weather that awaited him. Still, if the bucket had been placed near the back door as promised, he might only have needed to lean out temporarily to grab it.

Moving down the corridor, the opposite end to where the front entrance lay, the back door was located close to the entrance to the kitchen. Maeki had left it open still when she returned there, affording Sal another chance to listen in on the conversation for a moment or two. The topic seemed to have shifted to magic in the city, with Alses having taken the lead while Ornea opted for role of listener. Sal was able to glance through the crack of the door briefly, noting that apart from Maeki who was tending to something over by the stove, everyone else had remained in place from when he had left them.

The back door, built from what once might have been a proud oak, now stood in a less than confident manner. It was scuffed, chipped and worn, as though one well placed kick would send it flying off its hinges and out into the storm, where it would likely be torn apart like an unfortunate carcass amidst a pack of glassbeaks. Furthermore, Sal was astounded that it had thus far remained intact of its own accord, given the storm had been desperately banging against it, demanding entry to the otherwise peaceful home. He was almost too reluctant to open the portal to outside, but was egged on at the prospect of Maeki's disappointment should he have returned empty handed.

The instance he opened the door, a sharp lashing of wind tested the gap Sal had created, whipping the exposed part of his face and eager for flesh. A shrill whistle filtered in and along the corridor, while the noise of the storm outside was amplified now that there was no meek door stood in its way. He felt the wind tugging at the door, now that it was unlatched in his hand. Pulling it open a little further, rain splashed across his face as cruel droplets plummeted from above and both sides. It seemed to come from everywhere at once, in a devastatingly effective flank attack.

And of course, there is no bucket, Sal realized, cursing his luck. Not completely devoid of good fortune though, the investigator noted it had merely been blown off the back step and now lay rocking back and forth in a puddle of mud a few yards away. However, it lay discarded on its side, its innards having been spilled across the ground like a fatal battle wound. Taking a deep breath, Sal pulled the door open further, before slipping out into the maelstrom. Each step towards the bucket seemed harder than the last, the wind and rain tormenting him as it swirled around hurling insults at him. He plucked up the mud covered bucket in already thickened fingers from the cold. A trough sat to his left against a wooden fence that flexed and wobbled under the instructions of the wind. I guess this is where she fills it from. And frankly, right now I don't GIVE A SHYKE, he muttered miserably, plodding over to the trough.

The journey back to the door had the rain lashing at his back, whipping and goading him in his retreat, while the howling wind continued to mock. A flash of lightning punctuated the moment, followed quickly by a massive roll of thunder that seemed to make the whole house shake. The prospect of staying out here much longer inspired Sal to improve his pace, reaching the back door, thrusting it open and pouring through in the same manner the storm so longed to do.

He forced it shut behind him, standing there in the corridor drenched and cold. For a moment, he wondered if he might have filled the bucket himself just from standing in it. At this point, soaked and miserable as he was, he had put Ornea and the fear of her blade out of his mind, instead pushing past the door into the kitchen with the promise of the hearth enough to urge him on. In his haste to deliver the water and set about warming by the fire, he had not noticed the trail of mud that followed behind like permanent shadows. Furthermore, with the bucket clutched in freezing hands before him, he never had a chance to see the cup, having dropped from the sleeping man's hand and now laying in wait like a viper in the undergrowth.

As Sal's foot came down on the cup, his ankle turned to compensate, before the deviation in trajectory had filtered up his whole leg, hip, and right side. Before he could steady himself, the left leg was claiming its turn to move, ending in a strange interpretative dance that had Sal move like he was struck by lightning. He did that thing people did when they were tottering on the edge of a fall, trying to relocate their feet to safer ground while arms instinctively flailed about in a blind search for balance. Only, in doing so, they had half relinquished their hold on the bucket.

In slow motion, at least for Alses who had a front row seat to proceedings, Sal came toppling forward, losing his grip long enough for the bucket to tip over, a cascade of freezing storm water hurtling out to land in poor, unsuspecting, Ornea's lap. Sal fell forward, landing hard on his knees while one hand grasped the table for balance, the other still clinging onto the bucket that bounced back from Ornea's lap and was now sitting on the ground where Sal knelt. Instinctively he leapt up, but his heel slipped in the mud trail, causing him to now perform the whole act in reverse, his body heading backwards in crazy steps until finally his feet gave up. With one final swoosh as his leg slipped on the mud once more, Sal fell back against the kitchen door that flung open, the gaping chasm welcoming him as he plummeted back against the wall in the corridor.

Falling against the wall, he somehow managed to snag his hood and scarf, so that both were pulled down to reveal the face of Ornea's tormentor. The poor inarta, sitting there in a state of shock from the freezing water that had been dumped on her, not to mention having witnessed perhaps one of the finest displays of how not to keep your balance. But worst of all, absolutely the most horrid aspect to all of this, was the person she saw as she looked up. There, staring back with an incredulous look slapped across his stupid face, was Sal Mander.

There was a strange pause that hung in the air. Even the storm seemed to have settled momentarily as though it was watching through the windows with bated breath. Sal stared at Ornea. Ornea stared at Sal. Sal looked down at the bucket in his hands, before looking back up at Ornea. Ornea looked down at the bucket, then back to Sal. If anyone was to ask the investigator what happened next, he would have pleaded a moment of panic. Indeed, there was simply no other explanation whatsoever.

In that moment of panic, Sal saw Ornea sitting there drenched, surprised, angry, murderous. Maybe it was born of habit. Maybe it was reflex. Whatever it was, it compelled Sal to give Ornea one last look...before he launched the bucket at her, promptly turned to the back door, and literally hurtled out and off into the storm. The door slammed shut behind him, another crack of thunder shaking the windows like a giant cackle of laughter.
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Storm stories (Alses, Sal)

Postby Ornea on January 29th, 2015, 4:46 pm

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Never would she forget his face.

The “scarf man” had lost his scarf. He stared at her, and Ornea stared back in disbelief, as she realized he was the same odd man who had turned up at Lucis and ran from the pumps after having thrown a bucket of water at her. And here he was again, and the same thing had happened again, but with more and colder water this time. It was so incredible that she lacked words and all she could do was stare, stare, stare and stare. She wasn’t even able to rant.

She had been right to be suspicious. That much was obvious. But the magnitude of how weird and uncanny this meeting of strangers in the storm had become was daunting. It was hard to believe it, and for a moment she felt a sudden fear that this might mean her mind was drifting and this wasn’t real. But with Maeki and Alses there, starting to exclaim and fuss over her wet clothes, this definitely was happening.

Alses had seemed like a sound and intelligent personality with a lot of common sense, and so had Maeki. Those two had reassured her and told her no danger was around. Alses had went as far as to tell Ornea she knew the “scarf man” and there was no need for Ornea to worry or be on her watch. He was some kind of “investigator” the ehtaefal had said, an employee at Cosmos Center. And Ornea had contented herself with believing this, as Alses seemed so obviously high ranked and so sure of herself.

This might be true, Ornea thought now, but high rank wasn’t a guarantee for not being involved in some really bad stuff, was it? The way this was developing, she started to wonder if the sleeping man actually was a innocent and harmless as he seemed, and Alses was the one in league with the scarf man. Those two had arrived at same time too. According to Alses they knew each other. And this Maeki they were visiting seemed to know the others too. So, one possible conclusion could be that Ornea was right now in the midst of a secret cabal that involved a man who had been doing some very odd things at Lucis. Ornea didn’t know what it could be about and she didn’t know why these people would be sheming, and perhaps the idea was farfetched like petch. But ! There was no denying the situation was full of weirdness and uncanny surprises.

These high-strung thoughts rushed through her brain at lightning speed while she locked eyes with “scarf-golem”. The first time they had met, at Lucis, she hadn’t memorized his appearance. This had been detrimental to giving Edward a good description of the intruder in Lucis premises. Edward had not exactly scolded her for it, but in this moment she recalled that she had sworn to not repeat the mistake. This time the man’s looks would be memorized and imprinted on her memory, even if it was the last thing she would do in life, surrounded by people who were possibly a team up for something obscure.

Just like she remembered him, he was very tall. She felt sure he must be over six foot, which was amazing, for Inarta standards. Short black hair framed his face, which looked like he was nearer to thirty than to twenty and sported high cheekbones, a strong straight nose and a short black beard that was as well trimmed as his hair. The color of his eyes was hard to judge; at least at this distance she wasn’t able to discern it. They could be blue, grey, green, hazel or a mix of it.

This was all. Ornea vaguely realized it would still be hard for her to describe him to other people, but she was sure that from now on she would recognize him with absolute certainty if he turned up again. She had understood today that he might be connected to powerful people. And there weren’t any known crimes or even plans she could accuse him for, so she wouldn’t say anything to Edward or to the Shinya. It would just be foolish, as she didn’t have any evidence of anything. In addition, this Alses might be involved in whatever was going on and it could be really dangerous to suggest this with no proof. For now, Ornea was all alone with the whole mess. She would keep quiet, but she was on alert and from now on she was for sure going to take every opportunity to find out more. The two women were on her list of suspect people now. In particular Alses.

And then, just like a wild animal suddenly disappearing in the forests of Wind Reach after a few ticks of total stillness, the man left the house and disappeared in the storm outside. It was over. Maeki and Alses were still fussing over Ornea and she was offered to borrow dry clothes. But she didn’t trust them any more. Not after Alses had vouched for that man! And as she was already totally soaked, Ornea decided to defy the storm and make her way home to her apartment at Solar Winds. She was Inarta ! She would honor her people, be strong and determined, endure the storm and go home!

There was no stopping Ornea once the headstrong Inarta had made up her mind. Soon enough she was out there in the storm that tore at her, and the rain she didn’t feel as she was already so wet. She focused on going home. Flashes of lightning crossed the dark skies and thunder shook the world. The Inarta walked alone between the beautiful houses of Lhavit, the skyglass flaring up in ominous displays of shining colors as it reflected an refracted the light of the flashes. Memories of the odd evening haunted her as she walked, but she endured this too, even the flashbacks of “scarf-golem” and how he had danced his odd dance with the bucket, drenched her and stared at her.

Never would she forget his face.

OOCI'm handing in, as Sal wrote his exit and this is my end post for Ornea. Alses, if you want to add something you're welcome.
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Storm stories (Alses, Sal)

Postby Ssezzkero on February 10th, 2015, 4:48 am

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Wow, this was an interesting thread! I liked it, and you are all awesome writers, so it was not easy to get bored. PM me if you have any questions or concerns.

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XP:
  • Endurance: +1
  • Observation: +2
  • Socialization: +2
  • Tactics: +1

Lores:
  • Meeting an Ethaefal for the first time
  • Maeki Cho: A generous Host
  • Snoring: You hate it
  • Alses: Must be in some high social rank
  • Sal: Has a habit of throwing buckets at you...
  • Alses: Must be in cahoots with Sal

Notes: I'm not sure if there was another person supposed to join, but I like how you so casually turned their absence into the background. It's random, but I thought it was cool, I love seeing people do unusual things in their writing. :) Don't forget to edit your post in the request forum as 'Graded'.

Alses
XP:
  • Observation: +1
  • Leadership: +2
  • Socialization: +2

Lores:
  • Ornea: A fighter
  • Maeki Cho: A generous Host
  • Windreach: Home of the Inarta

Notes: I liked how you wrote Alses in this thread. I've only read one other thread, and I know you are a pro at writing you character (obviously), but you fell into the leadership role so naturally in this thread. I liked it! :)

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XP:
  • Observation: +3
  • Camouflage: +1
  • Endurance: +1

Lores:
  • Keeping up with Fashion
  • How to not be noticed by enemies
  • Investigation: The art of information
  • Maeki Cho: A generous Host
  • How not to keep your balance

Notes: I've also not read much of your work, but I still have to say, you may have the most enjoyable descriptions in your writing that I've come across. There is never an issue with picturing what is going on in your writing. The end made me laugh :p.
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