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This shining population center is considered the jewel of The Sylira Region. Home of the vast majority of Mizahar's population, Syliras is nestled in a quiet, sprawling valley on the shores of the Suvan Sea. [Lore]

[The Stone Gardens] Greener Grass

Postby Jeremy Casing on December 27th, 2014, 4:40 pm

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Greener Grass. 38th Winter, 514AV, nighttime


To call this place a garden was a dramatic exaggeration, one that made Jeremy depressed and frustrated in equal measure. He stood at the entry point to the garden, golden eyes staring at the flatness, the greyness of it all. Jeremy had expected to see grass, trees, or a pond -- anything green and of Caiyha's own creation. It had not been lost on the Kelvic that the Stone Gardens were a place of memory for the fallen soldiers of Syliras, but he had not expected to see such a dramatic lack of life. This place is well suited to consider death, he thought bitterly.

Slowly, dismally, the Witch followed the cobbled pathway through the garden. Perhaps in Summer the Garden would be greener? The winter had certainly turned the patches of grass into clumps of dirty green and brown, cold and frosted. The bushes that framed the walls of the Garden were almost all bare as well; a sad sight indeed. But the season alone could not explain the clear destruction of nature that made Jeremy's stomach clench and twist.

With a sigh that emphasised his complete exhaustion, Jeremy stooped down, his hand resting upon a patch of damp, cold, neglected grass. The experience of Nura still amazed him, how animals - and more intriguingly, plants - could share their memories with him. Unsurprisingly, the body of grass he touched now communicated a never-ending sense of desperation and abuse. Thousands of feet had traipsed along this grass whilst mourning lost family members or simply seeking solitude. Nobody had mistreated the greenery out of malice, but city people were ignorant. They stomped on the grass when the stones hurt their feet, parents allowed children to pluck the few struggling flowers that managed to break through the compact soil. Worse of all, as more soldiers died, more grass was churned and removed to make room for additional commemorative pebbles.

As it seemed with all cities, nature struggled to survive against the demands of the public.

"Are memories of the fallen not enough?" Jeremy spat quietly, glaring at the neatly arranged pebbles. Each one represented some high-ranking solider who had sacrificed himself for Syrlias. Admirable, indeed, Jeremy considered, but a destructive commemoration.

It was not the dead soldiers who were at fault, of course. But Jeremy had been in Syliras only three days and already he was drained. Sunberth had been demanding, but the lawless city had not prepared Jeremy for Syliras. The entire city itself was unnatural, existing within the walls of a fortress where hardly any natural life could flourish. The city stunk of pollution, falseness and death. Even the rats, usually prudent survivalists of cities, carried with them a sense of exhaustion and desperation.
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[The Stone Gardens] Greener Grass

Postby Jeremy Casing on December 27th, 2014, 5:19 pm

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And what could Jeremy do? There were no alternatives to how the citizens of Syliras could live. They had built the city around them, now it was a hubbub of poison and death.

And the majority of the citizens did not even notice, and if they did notice, they did not care.

"Greyness. Nothing more." The quiet statement was both a comment on Syliras' current status of imbalance, and also the Kelvic's prediction for its future. Thankfully, the very existence of the fortress' walls meant that if the population of Syliras doubled tomorrow, the city could not expand anymore. The greedy fortress could gobble up no more land, the Kelvic speculated. This was no real victory though, Jeremy knew.

He also appreciated that the people of Syliras were not inherently bad. Their lives were difficult, especially in the winter. They focused on surviving each day, as was the natural way of living. But their survival meant the death and destruction of other living things, those created by Caiyha herself. It had fallen to Jeremy over a year ago to try and defend these things, these plants and animals that struggled to survive whilst people thrived. He had achieved very little, but that was not his fault. This fact, however, did not bring with it any respite.

Jeremy did not notice the alley cat until it was purring loudly at his feet, lithe body entwining itself around his skinny legs. The Kelvic smiled. He appreciated such four-legged company.

"What do you think of this place?" He murmured.

The cat peered up at him in bright interest, and golden eyes met green. Through Nura, he repeated his question, and in turn the cat answered. She told him of her many owners, from the old widow who fed her fish guts to the family with five children who each argued over whose feet she would sleep at that night. She would not have survived her twelve years without the city, and Jeremy felt her appreciation for the people of Syliras.

This surprised Jeremy. He had expected the cat - especially given her matted coat and ripped left ear - to reinforce his opinion that Syliras was a lost city. Reaching down to stroke her greying fur, he relayed the opinion of the rats: desperation, starvation, a short and stressful life. She disagreed whole-heartedly, and Jeremy did not need to be fluent in Nura to notice the dismissive flick of her tail. Rats were pests, invaders whose misery was their own doing.
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[The Stone Gardens] Greener Grass

Postby Jeremy Casing on December 27th, 2014, 6:01 pm

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Again, this response was unexpected, and in the subsequent lull of their silent conversation, Jeremy watched his companion saunter away to locate whichever bed she desired to sleep in.

The discussion had left him confused, which Jeremy disliked. It had been all too easy for him to damn Syliras for being too poisonous and polluted. But the cat, as sinewy and battered as she was, had portrayed Syliras as a goldmine of food and affection. Plants did not thrive within the walls of the city and the rats (and mice as well, Jeremy presumed) appeared to do little better. But perhaps there was some hope for domesticated animals.

Jeremy huffed as he considered this. He was all too familiar with compromise. His experience as a Witch centred on bargaining and conceding with various individuals as he tried to work in favour of Caiyha and her creations. But this city was his greatest challenge yet. The people were hungry, many of them poor. The physical architecture of the city meant that plants would not flourish, and he doubted that urban foxes even made it beyond the walls. Could he truly be satisfied knowing that only animals that could surrender themselves as pets could flourish in Syliras? It was an uncomfortable thought.

He shivered, and Jeremy accepted that he needed to sleep before making any further decisions. Syliras was going to be a challenge; that was undeniable. Jeremy had no clue how he was going to approach the mammoth task of balancing this city, but he needed to try.

Not for the first time, Jeremy felt the heaviness of his gnosis weighing him down. It was an honoured responsibility, but an exhausting one. With a grunt, he surrendered for the night.
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[The Stone Gardens] Greener Grass

Postby Katelyn Marks on January 12th, 2015, 2:19 am

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