An Unexpected Encounter { Nikia }

Ferrin attempts another go for the Mountains to hunt/practice archery. And he meets Nikia during that time.

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Stretching northward along the coastline of the Suvan Sea, the Cobalt Mountains are the home of the Bronze Wood, numerous ruins, and creatures both strange and fantastical.

An Unexpected Encounter { Nikia }

Postby Ferrin Al'Mandrikan on November 1st, 2015, 2:37 am

Ferrin


Ever since Ferrin deserted his family. He has felt hollow as an carved out pumpkin. Ferrin wondered what his parents thought of him then. Will his father ever forgive him from abandoning them? And what about his siblings?

Ferrin was so lost, he almost wanted to cry. But his father taught him to be strong, brave, courageous. Ferrin felt like he has failed them. And now he believes they will not be able to forgive him. Nikia asked him what was wrong. "Family problems, I guess... "

Hire words trailed off as he felt a small tear trailing down his cheek. Hopefully that it was dark enough, so that Nikia couldn't see that tear. He didn't want to begin crying. It doesn't feel normal to Ferrin, a man crying. He never saw his father cry. But hire mother cried at necessary times though.

When Ferrin returned home after their curfew hours. Or when he was out hunting for a long amount of time. This night shouldn't be about him though. He accidentally shot at Nikias leg, the arrow missed the target that he was aiming for. That petching tree. He would've hit that tree, if he wasn't thinking of his father again.

Ferrin put down his bag and everything else onto the earthen ground. Covered by leaves and broken twigs. But Ferrin didn't care. What mattered to him, is if Nikia is alright. " How about you? How's your leg?" Ferrin knelt down to Nikia, or should he sit in front of her? Did it matter?

He sat crossed legged. In front of Nikia. Gazing at her with fixated eyes. He smiled, "Do you want my cloak? You look chilly." Ferrin took it off, placing it on his lap. His bow and quiver close by, along with his sword. They're on the ground, showing Nikia that he won't harm her.

So many emotions flew through his head. Despair, grief, exhilaration, etc... He wanted to make Nikia feel less... Confused? Confused works as if right now. Ferrin can hardly tell now, what time it is. He lost the time through his trace of thoughts. Is Nikia really interested into me, Ferrin thought.

He didn't know what to do at this point. Ferrin seems confused himself, maybe more so than Nikia is. But as a women with white hair, she looks even more beautiful and gorgeous as a perfect view of the sun setting. Ferrin wanted to kiss her, or maybe, would that offend her? He, very slowly felt his head moving towards Nikia. 'Am I crazy? But what can go wrong, a recompensed kiss won't hurt will it?'

Ferrin is persuaded, in some sort of way. Does Nikia intend to make it this way? Only a way to find out right??? What Ferrin really hoped is that it won't end up bad.



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An Unexpected Encounter { Nikia }

Postby Konrad Venger on September 24th, 2016, 12:34 am

Ferrin

XP:
Observation - 4
Longbow - 2
Animal Husbandry - 1
Logic - 1
Socialization - 1

Lore:
Anxiety can Effect your Aim
A Rough Bandage for a Wounded Wolf
Logic: A Calm, Wounded Wolf Must be a Kelvic

Nikia

Grade Withheld due to Out-of-Date Ledger

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Not too shabby, guys, but Ferrin, you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. Every post was littered with spelling mistakes, not to mention you keep confusing the tense of your posts. Remember, the standard and MANDATORY tense for Mizahar IC posts is PAST TENSE, as if you're reading a saga from centuries past. If you keep making that mistake, eventually you'll get penalized, or just waste more and more time rewriting.

Also be careful about silly little mistakes - "an" instead of "a", "hire" instead of "his" - that hold you back. You've got a good understanding of your character and you know WHAT you want to write. You just need to SLOW DOWN and do it right. ;)

Oh, and please make sure you go back and edit your post in the Request Thread to reflect the fact this one is now done and dusted. PM me with any questions and later 'tater!

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