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First Foot Forward

Postby Colt on September 25th, 2015, 4:39 pm

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42nd of fall, 515 a.v
mid-morning

There was sun to be seen today, a pleasant change from the cloud and frost that had since been dominating the earlier portions of the season, although the wisps of cloud lingering in the far horizon promised that it wouldn’t last; the weather seemed a bit irritated that nothing unpleasant had happened already, and if it didn’t turn for the worse tomorrow than it almost certainly would the day after.

As it was, Shahar wanted to take advantage of the fair weather to become acquainted with the newest members of the Dawnwhisper family. Although at least two of the additions had seemed to be tolerant enough of human contact to suggest previous groundwork, there was little that could be known for fact in regards to their experience. The ragged old female who had come to be called Kendi was not one that worried Shahar a great deal; even though she was unfamiliar, she was certainly an agreeable creature that Shahar couldn’t imagine desiring harm upon anything. There was a warmth to her that he liked, even trusted. At least, a warmth that he trusted enough to leave her to her own devices on this day.

Then there was Vanya, the white-gray mixed-blood. She also seemed to be possessed of a docile temperament, although there was still enough youth in her bones that she was willing to stand up for herself if need be. She seemed to have at least basic manners, and had come with the Dawnwhispers quietly and without difficulty; that as much as anything gave Shahar hope that she could yet settle into their lives and become one of them. Such was the purpose of today.

The morning’s hunt had been completed, and he had returned home for his midday rest as he often did; when midday turned to afternoon he would ride again to earn the pavilion’s coin, but that time was not now. Now, he would give the entirety of his attention to Vanya.

The herd was well within sight of the tents, and so Shahar had left his javelins and axe with the rest of his possessions, keeping only his hunting knife at his side; it was more tool than weapon, anyway. What he did have was a well-used bag of brushes and picks, implements that he knew just as well as he did his knife. They would serve as Vanya’s test, and perhaps would even lay the groundwork for future comfort and familiarity.

Snow trailed behind him at a distance, vaguely curious; the entire affair of the auction had intrigued her greatly, although Shahar’s explanation had left her somewhat disappointed. She was far more interested in the event itself than the results; horses were hardly new sights for her. She knew the routine of cautious dancing; Vanya would almost certainly fear her, and at Shahar’s request Snow would remain far enough away so as not to spook the mare. Besides, it wasn’t as if Vanya was particularly interesting to begin with, but that was where Shahar was going, and so it was the automatic assumption of both pup and Drykas that Snow would also go.

Vanya stood on the outskirts of the herd, closer to Kendi than any of the others. Akaidras, who also lingered about the outskirts, looked up with an interested whicker of greeting, which Shahar returned with hello brother, no need, as you were. Akaidras had already performed labor for the day, and had yet another stretch of work ahead of him; this was as much the strider’s time to relax as it was his rider’s. Appeased by the gesture, Akaidras returned to his lazing.

The alternative intent in the hunter’s posture was enough to catch Vanya’s attention, as it was directed towards her. While it was a positive sign that she both noticed and responded to it, such a thing was no guarantee of knowledge; she could have just noticed the position of his shoulders rather than comprehending the actual sign and its meaning. Whatever it was, though, it was better than nothing; the Drykas paused respectfully and sent off exaggerated, easily-perceived motions of hello request I am coming towards you, followed by the enaction of the promise by stepping slowly towards her.

Vanya snorted and bobbed her head, picking up a hoof uneasily before setting it back down. But she didn’t back away. He came closer. Again she seemed uncertain, but again she went nowhere. The closer her grew, the slower he became, unwilling to risk her bolting; Kendi looked up and pricked her ears cheerfully towards him, and Shahar greeted her, too. The older mare’s comfort seemed to assuage Vanya’s confusion, and he was able to come just as close to her as Kendi. Still Vanya did nothing.

Slowly, carefully and gently, Shahar stretched out a hand and brushed his fingertips along the gray horse’s shoulder.
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Postby Colt on September 25th, 2015, 5:06 pm

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Vanya startled, as he had expected she would, but she didn’t bolt; she picked up her feet and cast a nervous glance towards the Drykas, but did not move more than a few inches away from him.

“Easy, Vanya, my friend,” Shahar murmured. “I will not hurt you.” Careful, respect, no harm. “You are alright. You are safe.”

Vanya paused and surveyed him, whickering in something different than fear; the brief touch had been harmless, and Shahar still displayed no warning signs. But it was his voice that seemed to catch her attention the most; it was a low and deep hum, the same hum he used to speak to all his animals, and it seemed to be… if not familiar, than something Vanya knew to be safe. His words were reassuring her.

“Are you nervous after the auction?” Shahar continued, reaching out to touch her again. “How were you rounded up, Vanya? Did any of them care for you before? How deeply?” He brushed his fingers against her shoulder again, and this time she did not flinch. “Yes, you aren’t afraid of me. You just don’t know where you are.” He lay his hand flat against the corded muscle, drawing his palm over her hide in like with the grain of her hair. Still Vanya did not move away; his voice had made her open, and his gesture had proven his good will. She appeared ready to listen to whatever else he had to say.

“You are with us now, Vanya.” He reached into the bag at his belt and fished around for the hard curry-comb. “We are the Dawnwhispers, who have bought you from where you were before. All these horses and zibri are safe here, and you are safe here, too. Akaidras and Wildfire and Kairi will protect you.”

He set the brush against her shoulder. She did nothing, and so Shahar began to draw the tool in small, gentle circles that gradually became harder and wider. He was careful not to become tense, but it was a struggle; he had no idea what her experience with a brush was, even in spite of her receptiveness to touch. She was clearly not wild-born and had almost definitely been owned and cared for at some point––although, granted, a casual look at her appearance would not have given that away––she knew that at least some humans were trustworthy, and had tolerated Shahar thus far. He had to remain relaxed, or else she wouldn’t be able to; he expected her to baulk at the sensation of the brush, to move away uncertainly and refuse it.

Vanya did none of these things.

Her history, whatever it had been, had laid strong groundwork. The feel of the curry-comb was one that was familiar to her; she did not nip or evade it, not at all. Letting out a deep sigh, the mare’s ears dipped and her head bobbed down, and Shahar could almost see the uneasiness flow out of her like water from a basket. She liked this.
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Postby Colt on September 25th, 2015, 6:37 pm

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With Vanya growing more relaxed with each stroke, Shahar allowed himself to focus much more clearly on his hands and what he was doing with them. Vanya was not completely filthy, but a wild life lived on the Sea of Grass had not been kind to her appearance; her coat was matted and dirty, her mane was tangled and grubby and she was almost definitely not the color she was supposed to be. Dirt, hair and skin all came off under the curry comb, leaving behind a flat patch of loosened refuse that was determined to remain there. That was where the soft brush came in. Shahar reached back into the bag and pulled out the bristled tool to sweep away the clotted grime and peer for the first time at a piece of Vanya that was at least partially clean. He was surprised to discover that she was much lighter in color than he had expected. Although there would need to be more than one layer of brushing, she appeared to be a very light gray that bordered on dull white. It was a pretty color, one that would likely be even prettier when it was clean.

Shahar returned to the curry comb, spreading his circles until he had covered Vanya’s entire shoulder, then casting away the unwanted buildup with the soft brush. Next he went to her sides, and here he was careful again; Drelah didn’t like his stomach being brushed, and he didn’t know if Vanya had any spots she was uneasy about. A careful brushing of her back elicited no violent reactions, and a slow, gentle motion to her stomach was the same. And so he paused his exploring to actually brush her again, repeating his motions on her back, sides and stomach. This area was much wider and took more time than her shoulder had, but patience did end up rewarding him; eventually, nearly all of Vanya’s side was… well, not completely clean, but much better than it had been before. It was a patchwork of sort-of-clean and somewhat-clean and actually clean, but Shahar wasn’t concerned with consistency right now; once he got the thick of Vanya’s dirt off, he could go over her again and brush her more thoroughly.

He continued to her hindquarters, again remaining careful until he was certain she wasn’t uncomfortable with it, and cleared away the matted hair and mud. Around to her other side he went, keeping one hand on her skin as he walked behind her to let her know where he was, where he started on her other side. He went in reverse this time: hindquarters first, followed by sides, back and belly, then to the shoulder, and here he was cautious again as he explored her response to being brushed on the neck. She seemed to enjoy that part more than anything. He moved to her chest, then to the tops of all four legs, and was pleasantly surprised when she picked up one hoof for him in expectation of him picking it––yes, Vanya knew this routine well, and seemed immensely happy to have her layers and layers of dirt being discarded. Shahar set her foot down for now; he wanted to finish with her coat before he started on her hooves.

When he had gone over her entire body with the brush, he set about to doing the entire thing again––this time with attention to detail, consistency and thoroughness. He had gotten the worst of it off, and now he wanted to get it all off; he started at the same place, her shoulder, and curried up the deep-seated dirt and cast it away with the soft brush. A single, handprint-sized patch of her shining silvery coat soon peeked up at him, clean and neat and free of clumps and dust. That was her true color, and that patch of color was what he needed to spread to her entire body.
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Postby Colt on September 25th, 2015, 7:14 pm

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When Shahar stood back and surveyed his work, he was quite proud of the results. Vanya was a very pale grey with the barest hints of blonde laced through her mane, with a dark muzzle and clear eyes. She had even let him use the smallest soft brush on her face once he had completed the rest of her body; the experienced had softened her, and she seemed to trust him. For that, Shahar was grateful. He mane and tail were still tangled and matted, but those were not immediate concerns and would probably be just as time-consuming as the brushing had been. The next test for Vanya would be in regards to her hooves.

The two brushes were beat against the cloth of his pants to loosen the dirt they had collected and then returned to the bag, and in exchange he pulled out the hoof pick. If Vanya’s previous performance was anything to go by, the pick wouldn’t give either of them much trouble; she seemed just as eager to have her feet cleaned as Shahar was to clean them.

The Drykas stepped close and touched her shoulder, running his fingers down the length of her foreleg to grasp at her ankle. Vanya immediately picked up her foot and let him hold it, to his great pleasure, and he peered into the rim to examine what he had ahead of him. Her hoof was packed with dirt, although rocks seemed to be minimal and small and there seemed to be no actual damage. He set into the accumulation of paths traveled, starting at the rim and uprooting the unwanted cake of stuff; the sunny days behind them had dried whatever was in there, and it came out in big flakes of packed mud and grass. He got to the bottom of her hoof in short order, then moved inward and around, cleaning it out until the frog of her foot was the only protrusion that remained. He brushed it a bit with his fingers for good measure, just to get out the last traces of what had been there, then let the foot drop.

Onto the second hoof, down her side and to her hindquarter. Vanya predicted what he wanted, and she had canted her leg before he even asked her to. He picked up the foot and repeated the process, digging into the dirt and expelling it until the hoof was clear and empty. Around behind her, keeping one hand on her rump to inform her of his movements, then to the other hindquarter. She picked up her foot amiably, and again he set the pick to what lay there; the movements were coming more freely, as Vanya seemed to almost be encouraging him to continue. The feeling of cleanliness was getting to her, and she wanted it to be completed as quickly as Shahar possibly could. Both hind feet were finished, and at last he came to her final forefoot, which was picked up, cleaned and set back down in short order.
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Postby Colt on September 26th, 2015, 4:46 am

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Vanya tossed her head and snorted the moment her foot touched the ground. Her tail flicked back and forth behind her, nicking Shahar’s bare shoulder like wire; she picked up one leg, then another, almost prancing in place to experience the full extent of her now-clean feet. This development was one that she liked, and she made it clear in the cheerful lines of her body––so much so that Shahar had to step back to get out of her way.

“Vanya,” he said firmly. An ear twitched his way, but was not followed by her eye, nor her full attention. “Vanya, stop.” Shahar lay a hand on her chest. “Look at me,” he commanded.

Vanya paused and glanced at him, unsure of what it was he was asking.

“Back up,” Shahar told her. He put pressure on his hand and closed in, trying to crowd her. “Back up.” With his hands he reiterated the point. Back up back up back up.

Vanya whinnied and pulled her head high, but did as he said, taking one step back, then another, then another, retreating from his pushing. He waited until she had taken five full steps, then stopped abruptly. He ceased pressing her chest, let his hand drop and took a step away to get out of her personal space.

“Good,” he told her. Very good pleased happy. He lay a hand on her neck, where she had most enjoyed being brushed, and began to scratch. Good reward pride. It occurred to him that he should have brought along treats of some sort, but it was too late now; he couldn’t very well just turn around and walk off to get some, not when he had already made so much progress.

Vanya seemed to enjoy the scratching. She perceived it to be a reward, at least.

“Will you follow me, Vanya?” Shahar asked. Come, towards me, follow. He took a step back, but kept his hand on her neck. Slowly he lightened the pressure, leaning back and waiting; would she understand what it was he was trying to convey?

Perhaps she did, in the end, or perhaps the scratching was enough of a starting point for her to figure it out; she followed his pressure, stretching towards him to try and get him to start scratching again. He took another step back, which forced her to step forward to keep up.

“Yes, good. Very good. Follow, Vanya,” he said, moving farther away. She acquiesced, and all the while he fervently repeated the sign for come follow good come follow with me good come follow.

It seemed that Vanya did indeed know what it meant to belong to a Drykas.

Shahar stepped closer and stroked Vanya’s neck, signaling satisfaction. The sun was moving onwards in her neverending journey across the cerulean dome of the sky, and he had accomplished what he had come for––and much more besides. Vanya had always displayed the groundwork of good manners, but the extent of her experience was truly invigorating; he still didn’t know if she had any experience riding, but he didn’t need to. This was enough exploration for one day; he had many days ahead of him to continue learning about the new Dawnwhisper animals.

Signing fond farewell, gratitude, Shahar left Vanya’s space and turned to clearly indicate the completion of their interaction. Vanya whickered curiously, but did not follow him when he walked away from her. She was clean and unmatted, and Shahar had proven himself a trustworthy caretaker––she was just as content with the event as he was.

Time would tell if that lasted.

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First Foot Forward

Postby Tribal on September 28th, 2015, 10:42 pm

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G R A D E S

Shahar Dawnwhisper

Experience

  • Organisation: 1
  • Grooming: 3
  • Animal Husbandry: 2
  • Horsemanship: 2
  • Endurance: 1

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  • Kendi: An old mare won at auction
  • Vanya: A docile mare won at auction
  • How to approach a strange horse safely
  • Grooming: Slow circles working outwards
  • Grooming: Using a curry comb
  • Shahar: Horses enjoy being brushed
  • The basics of cleaning out a hoof
  • Horsemanship: Teaching an old horse new tricks
  • Vanya: Once belonged to a Drykas

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I'm glad someone is enjoying his new horses lol! Even though the grooming was only spread over two posts, I thought you did such a good job of it that I decided to award you three points. Awesome work.
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