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Well It Ain't A Rocky Montage

Postby Konrad Venger on March 2nd, 2016, 8:21 pm

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17th Bell - 9th Day of Spring, 506AV - Castle Commons


"We're inna' hurry, mate, so jus' geddit an' dun' waste time."

That was all Konrad really needed to hear, but he decided to confirm the tone and the verbal swagger before he did anything else. He looked up from the jar of Wind Reach Honey he'd been pretending to study and tossed a look at the grocer behind the counter. The man walked stiffly, carefully, as if too slow or too fast would get him petched up by someone... but he did manage to catch Konrad's eyes-

-and nod. Face a sweaty, puffy mask.

Okay. Time to work.

He tossed the jar of honey up and walked up behind the two wide boys who were, literally, quite wide. Not tall, though. He topped them by half a foot each and he took that into consideration. Studying their back as he came closer, he didn't see anything out of place. No gang colors or tattoos, scars or brands that would set them apart.

Typical, he thought, remembering Tremor's instructions to him. Never easy. Ah, well.

"Youse can fuckin' wait an'-"

Harry's growled order at the civvie coming up behind them was cut off when he turned around fully at the sound of his steps... and saw that it was no civvie. Tall, clad in black, face the kind that made women mutter prayers and children lose their smiles. The two gutter trash locked eyes and knew each other in that instinctive, animal way in and instant and-

Konrad was faster.

The brawny ganger screeched as a half-quart of honey in a glass jaw shattered against his head, right next to his eyes. Sticky shards flung out everywhere, burying themselves in his eyes, his nose, his tongue when he screeched and coughed, blinding him even as the sweetness dripped into his mouth and-

-Konrad drew back his hand fast and it shot out again towards Dev, the second shakedown "artist", head snapping around in surprise as his partner went down mutilated, blinded and surprisingly sweet-smelling-

-looking further up to see Konrad's palm strike coming for his face-

-only it wasn't a callused palm, but the sharp, jagged top of the jar-

"Shyke!"

The man fell back screeching as Konrad crunched the remnants of the jar into his face, screwing it in as he pulled his hand away, gouging into his eyes, nearly pulping his nose his lips-

-and cutting his own hand open, too. He cursed and made a fist out of instinct. That time, instinct was not his friend. He winced as he felt a sliver driven in deeper to his skin, but not time to worry about that now.

Harry was starting to get to his feet again and Konrad had to prioritize. Swallowing the pain in his hand, his arms shot out and he gripped Dev by the hair and the side of the head, pulling and jerking with a snarl that spat bile and disgust-

CRUNCH

-slamming the ganger's skull into the counter. The second time, something broke like a thick egg being hit with a spoon and Konrad half-released, half-threw the semi-conscious Dev away, striding past him to deal with-

"F-Fucker!"

"Fuck's goin' on in-"


There was a third man, of course. Someone to watch the street, keep any customers out and raise the holler if the Daggerhands stopped by. Their backup, too, Konrad was guessing. A third pair of hands to wade in in case they were ambushed. He filled the doorway as he peered over the rows of bread, cheese, dried meats and jars of oats and barley, sword already in his hand-

SHUNK

For all the good it did him, thanks to Three Eyes. Konrad's partner had been waiting across the street, shaking his little begging bowl and doing a fair job of appearing like he wasn't watching the shop. When it all kicked off and Third Man tried to make his big entrance, what he got was Three Eyes slamming into his back-

-dagger first. Twisting. Plunging. Gouging. Then ripping its way out between the same ribs, breaking one of them as the serrated steel did its job, heart already a ruined mess inside his torso.

Harry didn't know any of this. Didn't know he was the last man alive. Only knew that he was blind in one eye and tasted salty blood and delicious bee bum dung in equal measure... and the fucker who'd done 'im was right in front of him... and drawing a curved blade from the small of his back.

"Who're ya runnin' with, boy? C'mon, lemme know an'-"

Konrad didn't finish his sentence, and by choice. He lunged like the dirty bastard he was and slashed low at Harry, driving him back, hopping like a plump bird-

-his own dagger slashing higher, Konrad jerking to the side to avoid it-

-left fist snapping out to pulp his kidney before drawing back, avoiding his backhand dagger slash that would have laid his arm open-

-retaliating with a low, diagonal slash at Harry's tight.

The muscular thug roared again and crashed down to one knee, muscle gouged deep, ligament severed. He was sure he felt the kukri scrape against the bone as it went through him, dropping him down to the ground-

-flailing desperately with his dagger only for Konrad to twist to the side, going from facing him to sideways to him in a blink-

CLANG

-and the dagger bounced off the long, curved sword in his scabbard, hanging at his side, instead of carving deep into his leg instead. Konrad's free hand shot down and grabbed his wrist, jerking it back-

-and burying his kukri into his arm below the hand, severing more muscle and string strands of crucial flesh, his grip vanishing, lost in a sudden burst of pain and gushing blood-

"Wanker."

-and Konrad finished the job by kicking out with a snarl, throwing his hips into the movement, catching Harry high in the chest, booting him back and-

CRASH

Rushon winced as his new display of Akalak Bath Salts and Oils was bloody well obliterated by the fat little sod who'd been squeezing money out of him the last three weeks. Him and his friends. Harry crash-landed into the shelves like a badly-dressed comet, snapping wood, breaking glass, and the grocer didn't want to think about where all that glass was geting when he slumped down into a bleed, panting heap.

His "savior", the bloke the Daggers had sent to help, seemed less than concerned.

"Who sent ya," the scarred man said, crouching down with his blade still in his hand. "Who? Hmm?"

Nothing. Just panting, coughing, and sullen stares. So-

THUNK

Rushon's whole body seemed to spasm when he saw Konrad hack down at his side without even looking... yet Harry screamed like his world was at an end. When he drew his hand up, Rushon could see why. He tried to count the bloody digits the ganger pressed to his chest and-

Three. They're just... gone.

"Lot more I can take from ya, boy," Konrad said, pressing the wet blade to a face that looked almost as bad as his now. But better-smelling, at least. "Now... who're ya with?"

"G... Geoff..."
It took a good deal of gagging and coughing before the full name came out. "Geoff D... Drebin... g-guy w-works on-"

Konrad nodded and when that didn't work he pressed harder until the kid shut up. He knew the name. Up-and-comer, attitude, promising and expanding that convinced him he was destined and untouchable. Konrad knew the type well; he'd ended more than a few of them. But, that was a problem for another day. His role that day was simple.

Stop the little bastards. Find out who they worked for. Protect the money.

Konrad looked around and decided that the last one was... well, Tremor would have to be a little flexible. Sometimes things got petched up even while you were protecting them. But he knew that word would soon spread - was probably already spreading, in fact - of what happened to jumped-up wee cunts that tried to horn in on the Daggerhands' street taxes down here.

Aye, they will, he thought, changing his mind about something. Which means...

"Y'know," he said as he rifled through Harry's pockets with his free hand, lightly slapping aside his groping hand, voice equally airy. "I was meant to leave one a' youse alive. Y'know, carry the message back. But I reckon, message is already sent, and since I have the name-"

Rushon gritted down hard and beat back the bile straining to pour from his throat. The curved blade the Black Hat Man held disappeared into Harry's throat like a magic trick. Instantly his flushed, mutilated face was apoplectic with shock, with begging, with tears as a boy barely into manhood realized that he would die, and he couldn't stop-

"Ah, there we go."

It was a heavy purse. Heavier than some no-name ganger would have for himself. No, that was the proceeds of all their collections that afternoon. Most from Dagger-insured businesses, and Konrad knew that even if he did stray from the letter of his instructions, the spirit was intact... which would sound much better when it came with a bag of gold stolen from the Daggerhands, returning to its rightful... extortionists.

He twisted the kukri and pulled it out, at the same time as he made the purse vanish into his jacket. Harry's eyes went cold, dead, lifeless. Flat as stones and Konrad cleaned of his blade before sheathing it. He got up and Rushon didn't move. Just stared as the tall man started to whistle, flecked with blood and honey and broken glass and strode through the carnage like he was made of it.

"That yer week's payment?" Konrad said, nodding at the handful of gold. "Tell ya what... keep it." He gestured vaguely around them both at the debris and the detritus... and the corpses. "Youse need t'clean this shite up, get rida' these cunts. Tremor'll understand." His lips moved in a way that could have, by some stretch, been described as a smile. "This time."

Rushon just nodded as the man walked away. He saw past the swirling black fabric and noticed the pudgy ganger with a misshapen... no, a mis-painted nose cleaning his own blade at the doorway and gods above, there was another body he had to clear up! Words were exchanged he couldn't quite hear. But the tone was... so casual. Three Eyes shrugged and pursed his lips, like he was getting Konrad's opinion on the weather... then just stepped away from the man he'd murdered like he was a leaf in his path, just as-

Black Hat stopped. Rushon watched, heart beating faster again as he turned to the side... and plucked a little pack of bandages from a shelf. He turned it over a few times, flexed his cut up hand, then looked back to Rushon at the counter.

"Cheers," was all he said, raising the wrappings like a salute, then him and his partner were gone.

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Well It Ain't A Rocky Montage

Postby Konrad Venger on March 3rd, 2016, 4:33 am

1st Bell - 86th Day of Spring, 506AV - Riverside


CRUNCH

Fuck...

He didn't always do so well, of course.

Konrad landed badly on the cobbles, but really, there's no good way to land on them after you've been thrown out of a window. A halo of shattered glass and splintered wood touched down with him, spreading out from his groaning form in the middle of the street. The threadbare human traffic blew away from him like a shoal of fish from a shark, muttering and whispering as they hurried by.

He rolled to his side and groped around until he found-

"Bastard," he slurred, spitting out a tooth as he set his hat back on his head. "Fuckin'..."

The brawl was still in full swing back inside the Moaning Lizzie, sounds that Konrad knew of old. Shouts and screams, crashing bodies and breaking glass, women screaming and men cursing. He staggered upright and swayed on his feet, hands at the small of his back and-

A lot of small, painful things cracked back into place and Konrad exhaled raggedly up into the starry sky. Gods, what a fucking night.

"Venger?!" A familiar voice yelled from inside. "Fuck are ya?!"

Bloody Desmond. One of his partners for the evening, charged with keeping order in Lizzie. Working the door wasn't much of a gig for Konrad, but blade work wasn't always available and a man still had to eat. So, a few nights glowering at drunks and keeping the unlicensed purveyors of pills, herbs and powders out for a modest purse seemed like a cushy little job.

Konrad took a step and his spine punished him. Yeah. Cushy...

But the job still needed doing, and where would he be if word got around that Konrad Venger reneged on a deal? Well... fine, it wouldn't have been the first time, but he was offered more money in that... those cases. This would have just been him tucking tail and running, and-

"Fuck that."

He stepped back in with his kukri in hand. No buggering around anymore. That bearded sod had earned a good bleeding for pitching him through the sodding window. He peered through the scrum and could see him banging away at another of the bouncers, throwing another off his back as he picked up a bar stool and started laying about with it-

"You again?!"

Big bastard wasn't alone, though. One of his lads finished putting the boots to someone and turned to see Konrad walk through the door like he was stopping by for a pint. He growled and pulled a gladius from his scabbard, stalking forward. Konrad strode closer, looking to meet him like a true warrior-

Bollocks.

-only to pick up a chair with his free hand in mid-stride, whirl and hurl it at him-

"Shyke!"

The gladius came up out of instinct, or training. Either way, he should have just jumped out the way. The chair smacked into him like a petrified corpse, making him yelp in pain as it bruised his arms, his chest, scraped against his face-

-and when it fell away, six-and-a-half-feet of thoroughgoing bastard was on him.

"Cunt!"

Konrad should have gone for the gladius first, the obvious threat, but it was far more satisfying to bury his boot in the wanker's balls. Seeing him double over with his eye bulging out his head was worth it, even if it did come with his gladius sweeping at Konrad's side-

-kukri snapping to intercept it, curved blade blocking it well, pushing it away-

-returning with a backhand slash across the bastard's face, tearing through lips, nose, cheek-

-screams-

"Shaddap!"

Konrad's forehead exploded forwards and shattered what was left of the bastard's nose like it was putty. The gladius stabbed out one last time and Konrad twisted, avoiding it, letting the blade go past his side-

-free arm smacking down to trap the one holding the short sword even as his enemy started to black out, hooking his forearm under his elbow and then jerking up hard-

Blacking out or now, Gladius felt that. He screamed again, elbow breaking, gladius falling-

SHHHHRK

Konrad rammed the kukri into his chest and twisted as he pulled it out, making a clean stab a ragged maw as he did. He wasn't looked for precision, sliding between ribs and into specific organs. Just quick, effective results. He yanked the blade away and turned from the standing corpse, searching out other-

Bottle-

For the second time Konrad went reeling back and down, some sensible part of his mind just grateful the bottle was empty. A full one would have been even worse. His body stopped listening to his mind and he went tripping back over that fucking chair he'd thrown. His arse hitting the floor shuddered his vision back to order and he looked up to see-

A fucking nobody. Just some street rat arsehole who wanted a ruck.

Typical.

He kicked out at the chair in front of him as the little fucker with the black tattoo across his forehead tried to close in on him. His snarl went from feral to bemused as it was his turn to trip, feet caught up in the upturned wooden legs-

-going down to his knees and one hand, the other one holding a knife-

-Konrad threw everything he had from the pelvis down into a swinging kick at his jaw from flat on his arse. Blacky's head snapped back and teeth went skittering across the floor, quickly followed by his slumping body.

"Unbe... fucking-lievable..."
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Well It Ain't A Rocky Montage

Postby Konrad Venger on March 3rd, 2016, 5:32 am

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By some miracle he still had his hat on his head, though those headbutts had ruined the brim. Shyke, he had to stop doing that. It was costing him a fortune in fresh brims! He scanned the room in a blink and saw half of the crowd from the start had either ran or was lying concussed, freeing him up to-

-pull his kopis out, three feet of curved, honed sword glittering in the torches... well, the ones that hadn't been smashed.

"Venger?! Venger, where-"

"I'm fuckin' 'ere, shut the fuck-"


Some interrupting bastard hurtled at him from the side and Konrad's sword snapped out before he could think. Itzel would have been proud. Block Three, almost textbook, high and to the right, stopping the club before it could cave in his face-

-pushing the club away and backhanding across the faceless, nameless idiot's torso. A brown tunic became a ripped, ruined, scarlet mess in a single blow, slicing deep and grinding against ribs-

-Konrad finished him with a short stab into the middle of that carnage, feeling something hot and pulsing burst as the blade crunched out the man's back-

"Fucker!"

Big Bearded Cunt was still standing. Of course. And, equally predictable, he'd noticed Konrad. The sellsword actually rolled his eye, sword buried in a dying, sputtering man, as a bear with shoes bore down fast on him. He gripped Clubber by his shoulder and spat "This way" then-

-jerked, manhandled, threw the fucker in the path of the monstrosity, unlucky sod sliding off his kopis as he tottered backward, smacking into Bear and keeping him at bay for a precious tick-

-enough for Konrad to shake off the stars cascading down onto his sore head and see the bar stool hurtling for him-

He hit the ground again. This time by design.

Bear would have knocked him off his feet with that hammer-blow, but there was just air in place of his target. His height and size was working for Konrad now. A shorter man, he couldn't have ducked under a blow aimed at his head, not low enough, with something as broad as a fucking stool heading for it. But one nearly seven feet tall... yeah, he could do that.

His knees creaked and his back howled but he ducked and the giant hit nothing, momentum keeping him going-

Now!

-Konrad lunged up, kopis gripped in both hands like a short spear, tip aimed at a nice, fat, soft target-

-Bear's stomach-

The huge man gasped in shock as the kopis impaled him diagonally, piunching through layers of fat, ripping through his stomach, his liver, bursting out the middle of his back. Konrad didn't give him a chance to strike back, no matter how badly wounded, re-tightening his grip and roaring as he-

-ripped the blade sideways-

"Fuckin'... 'ell..."

Desmond wasn't so bruised and exhausted and splattered with blood that he couldn't still be stunned. That ugly bugger Venger ripped his blade out of Billy The Boulder and nearly cut the fucker in half as he did. Didn't stay long on his feet, though. Either of them. In fact, Billy lasted a little longer.

Exhaustion finaly overwhelming sheer, hateful adrenaline, Konrad skittered across the floor and the groaning bodies and collapsed down to his knees. Panting, forcing air into his lungs as The Boulder-

-sputtered, staring down in bemusement at the gaping hole where his side should be...

Konrad saw it. That moment where his mind, his brain, his soul finally got the message. He made the oddest little sound, part whimper, part sigh, blood staining his beard red until he toppled-

Fuck me. Felt that from over here.

"Wada' fuckin' mess."

Konrad slid an eye over to Desmond and fumbled for something, anything... then found it.

Not great booze, but something. And it killed just enough pain for him to talk without wanting to vomit.

"Yer cleanin' it... it up... by yerself..."

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Well It Ain't A Rocky Montage

Postby Konrad Venger on March 3rd, 2016, 5:38 am

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14th Bell - 25th Day of Summer, 506AV - Robern's Reaches


"Who the fuck're... oh, fuck."

Sometimes, many times, it didn't need to be a riotous, roaring rampage of red steel. Konrad just had to show up. Cunt that he was, Tazloor had been right when it came to image, appearance. They all equaled the same thing: reputation. In Sunberth, the gangers didn't need to hide who they were, apart from those devious Night Eyes sods. No, it was better if people know your look; it was protection, just like a uniform was for a soldier. You mess with me? You mess with a dozen, a score, a hundred others.

It made people think twice. People like the kids sitting at the booth in Herman's.

Kids, Konrad though with an internal chuckle as he slid into a chair across from them. Since when did you get old?

But it did feel that way when the mouthy sod named Ennis turned his glare to him and then realized just whom it was he was talking to. Him and the two monkeys flanking him, decked out in tunics and jackets garish and ill-fitting. New money. Wanting to show it off. But their eyes... still children.

Konrad was twenty-six Summers walking the world. In many places, he would be considered a man, but a young one. As he reached over and helped himself to a cup of half-drank grog, he didn't feel it.

Good. Use that.

"Good," he said, voice a rasp, letting his lip pull up a little more than it really did, tendril of stinging grog drooling down his chin. It all helped. The grotesqueness of it. "Y'know me, then... don'cha, Ennis?"

The shock of him being called by name was enough to make the cocky little shit shut up all over again. Konrad sneered and set down the mug, pointing at his friend on one side - "Walmak" - then the other - "Garth".

He pushed up the brim of his hat with his thumb and let them see every inch of what his father, the streets, the years and his own misadventures had done. How they made a young man of twenty-six years look in the fierce light of the torch above their table.

"Aye. Y'know me. An' I know you. Know why?"

It would take a few ticks. He was expecting that. Past the shock, the surprise, the anger and indignation... then would come the fear. That sinking certainty that you'd attracted the worst kind of attention and it had a name, and a face, and-

CLUNK

-a blade.

It was just a dagger. Double-bladed. Well-balanced. Konrad's oldest possession, that he'd managed to hold onto over sixteen years. The first man he'd killed, slobbering all over him in that sewer... he still remembered how he felt. He'd never quite equaled that moment.

Now the three drug sellers stared at the blade and all the possibilities it embodied. Steps from behind him. The slap-slap of sandals, sloshing of fresh mugs-

"Later, girl," Konrad said over his shoulder, barely looking at the woman with an armful of booze. "We're talkin'."

She left. They watched her go almost like she could have helped them. Konrad tapped the flawless, perfect length of steel as he gripped it... then started picking his nails with it.

"Asked youse a question," he said, eyes hardening along with his voice as he flashed them over the trio. "Don' make me ask again."

They outnumbered him. They were younger than him by a half-dozen years. Of course they were armed: everyone in Sunberth was armed, to one degree or another. They might even have had friends in there, who might have helped if they'd tried something. They were monied in their little section of town and had the respect of the kids and even some of the older gangers.

Konrad could see all of those facts play out over their sweating faces. But still... they just talked. Very carefully.

"Ye... Yeah," Ennis finally said, shaking and dripping a few droplets as he did. "We... We know who you are."

"More importantly, d'y'know who I'm workin' for?"


That didn't take as long. In Sunberth, who you ran with or kicked up to was as important as you own name. It was your protection, your strength, in a world of warring gangs. So once they knew the face, and the name - and know them they petching well did - the next part came easier.

"Dag-Daggerhands."

"S'right,"
Konrad flicked a nasty little speck of gravel out of his thumb. "Most important, now. Y'know why I'm here?"

"Be... Because we should be paying you...?"


Not much more than a few ticks before that answer, but still, Konrad sighed. The question at the end, the way the sentence lilted, it was so obvious. Ennis was still... unsure? What could possibly be ambiguous about this situation? Well, that didn't matter much to Konrad. What did matter was the fact it was ambiguous, and his orders were specific.

Make it clear. They pay. Every week. Let them know what happens if they don't.

"Here's how it's gonna run," he said, flipping the dagger idly around in his hand so it was reversed, studying his (slightly) clean nails. "We know you boys've been busy. Very busy. Successful, enterprisin'... all that shyke. Well, good. But youse ain't been payin'. Tha's not s'good-"

"M-Mister Venger, if-"


THUNK

It was the sheer, brutal speed of it that surprised them a second time. The simplicity. The lack of hesitation. One tick Konrad was sitting there, the next his hand was gripping Walmak by the hair and slammed it onto the table between them. He yelped and tried to struggle-

-until Konrad's dagger was in front of his eyes, and he could see his own, wide, pleading eyes in the pristine blade.

"The Daggerhands don't care about excuses. Man who hired me don't care about excuses. An' I surely as fuck don' care about yer fuckin' excuses. Not askin' for 'em. Never will. Not a questions man. I do answers, y'follow?"

He looked over the faces of the two men still sitting, and he could taste their fear on the air. But if he recalled correctly, Walmak was not... essential, was probably the word. He cut up their product and tested new shipments, handled some running with their customers, but he was neither brains nor brawn.

Sometimes, it didn't need to be red steel. But it didn't need not to be.

"Pay attention."

"Waitwaitno-!"


The dagger rose and fell like a star, just as fast, just as unstoppable-

CRUNCH

-and Walmak made a hideous, impossible, strangled, yelping hiss as the blade buried itself into his temple, the one facing the ceiling. It punched through bone, fractured his skull but narrowly, just wide enough to-

-skewer throbbing grey matter, but curiously little blood. Just a little trickle of it as his eyes rolled back to the whites, and his body spasmed and jerked and then Konrad twisted.

One more great, gasping shudder... then he was still.

Konrad let him lay there for a moment. Let them see the consequences of even slightly fucking around with their new landlords. When he yanked the blade free... he smiled again.

No doubt on those faces.

"Golden Calf, end of the week," he said simply, wiping his blade clean on the back of Walmak's tunic before sliding it back into his boot. "Forty percent of what you make. You skim, you lie, you come up short..."

He held up Walmak's limp, staring, gaping head. Long enough to make the point a second and third time.

Thud

Then dropped it back onto the table. Ennis was taking hissing, wheezing breaths and Konrad's nostrils as he smelled... yep. Piss. Well, that was him done. He stepped away from the table and left a single coin on the bar as he went away.

Not a rich one. It was just a body. Plenty willing to get rid of those for a copper in Sunberth. The 'tender, an old walrus of a man with an apron that had never been totally clean, pocketed it without a blink and snapped his fingers.

Konrad walked out into the day and went to find some dinner.

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Well It Ain't A Rocky Montage

Postby Aladari Coolwater on July 25th, 2016, 7:18 pm

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Name:Konrad Venger

XP Award:
  • Weapon: Kukri + 1
  • Brawling + 4
  • Weapon: Kopis + 1
  • Weapon: Dagger + 1
  • Observation + 2
  • Intimidation + 1
Lore:
  • Go for the Biggest Threat
  • Brawling: Glass is a Good Weapon
  • Booze Eases the Pain
  • No Reason Not to Kill a Grunt
  • Height Can Be a Disadvantage
  • Aim for the Soft Spots

Penalties/Rewards :
9th of Spring- A deep cut in Konrad's palm. Small shards of glass are stuck inside. It will heal around the shards over two weeks if kept clean. If the shards are removed correctly, it will be one week. Both methods will leave a faint scar.

86th of Spring- Glass cuts in Konrad's back and a large sprained muscle in the back frm landing on it in the fall (latissimus dorsi for the anatomically inclined). It will heal on its own with no consequences if the cuts are kept clean and his back is not overused.

Comments :
Your writing style is fun. It's very clearly action-oriented, and it works well for you. There's a little much swearing for my taste, but I wouldn't say that it's incorrect for Konrad or Sunberth, so I won't bother you about it.

Overall, a good insight into Konrad's fighting style. If you feel I forgot anything, or have any questions, feel free to PM me or Anarkhos.
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