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An inland sea created by Ivak's cataclismic fury during the Valterrian, the Suvan Sea is a major trade route and the foremost hub for piracy in Mizahar. [lore]

Rising Action

Postby Theo Popcampio on June 1st, 2016, 2:30 pm

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I walk, trouble follows.

12th of Spring, 516 AV
Theo no longer cared that few of Precious’ passengers had met his company. In fact, he quite enjoyed his lack of acquaintances. He was not the sort for useless friendships, and it seemed to Theo that he would neither hear of nor see these men ever again. Once Theo left the Precious’ rotting salt wood behind he would be back on his real journey. Although he wasn’t so easily admitting of it to himself, the thought of what others would think of him if they found out why he was taking this trip bothered him as well.

Having just almost been kidnapped, Theo was cautious and a bit paranoid of his company. The event seemed so small when it initially happened, just like any other kill, but the more Theo sat on the idea the more the idea did not sit well with him. It was not like a slaver tried roping him down and chaining him. This woman wanted Theo specifically, the note to proved that. Even more frightening was that this woman, whoever she was, was a skilled swordsman and a mage, more so than who she fought. Theo’s missing memory, this woman’s similar talents and intent, the note, they all meant something, but what?

Young Theo would think of these things as he hacked away at makeshift training dummys each day. He was not a good sailor, and so his time, he figured, was best spent preparing for a battle. Very few people welcomed mages with open arms, so his abilities were kept mostly secret and only practiced in dark. Occasionally Theo would blow out a sailor’s candle across the belly of Precious and laugh as he watched the lot blame fright and tell stories of spirits on board, but that was as much as the crew saw his magic.

Right now he practiced his sword arm. Theo was getting used to fighting with one hand with his longsword, and he felt more impressive doing so. Useful practice as Theo had almost lost several times due to his lack of versatility.

The blade was heavy and at first his arm was not up to the task, but, like anything else, when Theo got to hacking the pain in his left’s forearm was out of notice. He would cut from one side to the other, but occasionally the weight of the blade would throw him off balance, so Theo paid extra careful attention to his footing this Spring day. The dummy was marked and chewed by men before him, but Theo made his cuts deeper, made his shots more lethal. Left, right, than back to a two hander for a riposte, the dummy was earning more chips.

Theo always felt dumb practicing, but discipline in combat was only maximized when one spent the time outside the battle preparing for it. Lost words channeled through him: The battle is won or lost long before one even gazes upon the field, and discipline beats fury everyday. Theo much preferred the blood rush to training, but the latter was a means to the former he was learning.
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Postby Theo Popcampio on June 8th, 2016, 2:05 pm

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I walk, trouble follows.

There was a drinking contest among the men that night. Those who were not manning the upper deck had found a partner to drink themselves sober under the belly of Precious. No coins were being placed, simply sporting, and Theo threw himself in as he’d take any chance he could to get drunk on the sea-boring-sea. His partner was a man whose name was easily forgotten, and the two of them quickly lost count of who was winning.

It was about his sixth drink that Theo had the first mate stumble into the commons. His twig legs were wobbly and he gripped the pole to raise his modest figure trying not to seem drunk. Theo had noticed that the first mate and the captain drank every night, tonight would be an even greater spoil on account of the crew being drunk as well. Theo was drunk, but not so drunk that he was beyond memory or wits.

He had twig legs and wore a skipper’s hat. His face was youthful yet pale, almost sickly, even his hair was beginning to whiten. The jacket he wore was worn and seemed a size too big, but by his face Theo could tell it was because he had lost weight. “Plop,” he slurred. He raised his hand to his mouth before starting over. “Pop, the captain wants to see you.”

Theo followed the thin wobbly man behind his tall candlelit shadow to the captain’s quarters. He hadn’t liked the name “Pop”. He wasn’t anyone’s father. Protest wasn’t in open, and Theo let the name keep even to his dismay. Indifference was his guide now.

Theo took the seat opposite to Novenem while the first mate sat behind the right shoulder of his captain. The walls were of the same old wood that lined the rest of the boat, but there was some unworn trim framing an ill equipped bookcase and a dusty old portrait of a grey-haired man in a tall hat and finery. Behind the captain hung a map of the Suvan Sea stitched into a quilt hanging over the blackness of night.

“Theo, is it?” He didn’t give time to respond, "I’m Captain Novenem." The captain took off his sailing hat and placed it on his desk as he leaned back. He was a man with a full gray beard and modest features. His face was sober and light but Theo could smell liquor in the air. ”It’s a shame really, nowadays with the need for new crew constantly I hardly get to make acquaintance with all of my men. Let me formally welcome you aboard.”

”Thank you Captain.” It was fairly easy to deduce why the captain had called him in now: He was vetting Theo. Such was obvious by the way he talked of his crew. ”And might I say it’s a pleasure to be sailing with you and your crew.” Courtesy will serve me well here.

The captain laughed, even the first mate chuckled. "You aren’t a seaman then? I don’t like my lads speaking finery. Loosen up. Skipper, get us some of that rum!”
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Postby Theo Popcampio on June 8th, 2016, 2:07 pm

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He wants me to speak truthfully? Well then so be it. Theo thought as he sipped the rum. It had a strong, unmatured taste, but Theo kept his face straight as a line. Only the best for the captain.”Do you have any water, I prefer my liquor with water.” I need to keep a clear head here, men of power do not meet with whom they think small without reason. The water in the liquor would allot him just that, or at least keep Theo less drunk than the captain.

”Brayden leave us,” the captain said. Brayden finished pouring the water and began to head for the door. The would be traitor walked by Theo and paused against his shoulder, giving him a cold, blank stare. He’s discreet as he is short. That man’s something other than a lanky sop.

”You’ll have to excuse my son,” Novenam said once the door closed behind Theo, ”He seems to have forgotten courtesy of late.”

”That’s your son?” Damn my mouth

”Well, not by blood, but I’ve raised the lad since he was a pup. Best sailor I’ve got on deck, maybe not so much as of late. He’s been acting odd since we left Syliras. Tell me, Theo, have you noticed this? You don’t know Brayden, but the lads on here like him too much to tell me anything honest. Does he seem strange to you?

He’s trying to take your ship you fool! He’s got your entire crew in pocket as well, seems like. Theo did his best to keep a straight face. I don’t know enough to speak on it, Captain.

The captain leaned back in his chair. ”Nor should I expect you too. I’m sure it’ll pass, perhaps the lad caught ill or is suffering heartache. There was some wench he was awfully fond of back in that city.” Phew. The captain sat back up and put his elbows on the table, his loosely pointed bear dangling above the surface. ”That’s not why I brought you in here. Theo, there’s been talks of mutiny on board. No one’s told me specifically, but a man hears whispers. Keep that sword arm ready.” Novenam squinted at Theo.

”I understand, Captain.”

The two had a chat while they finished their drinks. Theo soon found himself tired and requested the captain’s pardon.

Outside the door the first mate was sitting on a pickle barrel. His eyes were fixated on the door and quickly shifted to Theo with the same cold, blank stare. Theo closed the door behind him and Brayden went to head in.

Theo grabbed his arm. ”You mind telling me what’s going on?”

The first mate, who was kind when they first spoke, tossed Theo’s arm away. ”Nothing that concerns you.” Brayden said harshly before heading back into the captain’s quarters.

Coldness lingered in Theo’s hand. He wants to play tough, eh? Let’s see how tough he is when he’s pissing all over himself. Theo squinted at his hand, closing it into a fist. It’s either him or me now, it seems. I need evidence, but how? The petcher never seems to sleep. And then it dawned on Theo: That isn’t Novenam’s son at all.
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Postby Karin on September 20th, 2016, 11:10 am

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XP Award!


Name: Theo

XP Award:
  • Weapon: Longsword: +1
  • Observation: +2
  • Socialisation: +1
Lore:
  • Memory of attempted kidnap: Why?
  • Longsword: Using one-handedly
  • Longsword technique: One handed attack, two handed to finish
  • First Mate of the Precious: Brayden, a bit of a sap
  • Captain of the Precious: Novenem, a man possessed of a good beard
  • Socialisation: Introductions
  • Brayden: A treacherous fellow



Additional Comments: Please remember to delete/edit your grade request in the queue to show this thread has been graded. There wasn't much XP that I could find to award here, but your thread makes up for it in building the tension. I definitely enjoyed the glimpse of Brayden true colours... Other than that, if there was anything that you specifically wanted that I didn't award, please PM me and I'll check to see if it can be given.
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