[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Ritz on November 24th, 2012, 2:10 am

Here for another reevaluation. Redone the character again. Third times the charm maybe?
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Zivilist Gott on November 24th, 2012, 6:40 pm

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic27738.html

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Torchlight on November 24th, 2012, 6:52 pm

Thanks for submitting your CSes!

Magnus - Adorable character. I love housecat Kelvics. You've just got small note in your CS.
Darkness - A wonderful choice for a PC, mixed blooded Zith. It's too bad we don't see more of these! I've placed a note in your CS.
Ritz - Your history is all good. :)
Zivilist Gott - A nice use of the Price List re: Wooden Rapiers. Glad someone is taking advantage of the wiki! You've got a little note.

Great CSes! The only errors were small clerical ones easily fixed. It was a pleasure reading tem.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Nander Greenfield on November 25th, 2012, 6:19 pm

My CS is finally done and free for the checking.

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Kraken on November 25th, 2012, 11:30 pm

Nander Greenfield - Great work with your CS! I've just left a small note for you to take a look at.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Saori Mithi on November 26th, 2012, 5:56 am

Hey ^ ^

So I made a character, I don't know if its any good, theres a lot to take in on here ahah

But none the less, here it is. I'd love feedback and tips. Always helpful :)

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post216880.html#p216880
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Postby Thundiirn on November 26th, 2012, 8:35 am

I've finally got my CS in somewhat working order haha. Let me know what you think, and ofc let me know if I've done anything horribly wrong :) I wasn't sure if I needed to have 3 languages or if that was just the max, but I've got 2 on there. I can add a third one, those were just the only two that would make sense from what of his history I currently have down.

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Slither on November 27th, 2012, 12:14 am

Just finished my CS. I'm not entirely sure what I'm doing is alright so... I'll be thankful if you check it ^_^

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Xaden on November 27th, 2012, 1:23 am

My CS is here by finish!!...I think :) Would you mind looking over it please?

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Kraken on November 28th, 2012, 4:01 am

Thanks for your patience, everyone!

Saori Mithi - I've left a note on your CS. Welcome to Miz! You're doing great.
Thundiirn - Small note on your CS. & you definitely don't need to fill all three language proficiencies. If it doesn't make sense for your PC, then we recommend you don't.
Slither - Small note for you. Looks good, otherwise!
Xaden - I've left a note on your CS. Good job so far!
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