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Taloba, home to the Myrians, is the thriving core of Falyndar. Inhabited by a fierce and savage tribe where blood sacrifices are normal and a way of life, they are untamed and proud of it. Warlike, and with their numbers growing, the Myrians are set on reclaiming what is rightfully theirs. [Lore]

Try Your Hand [Razkar]

Postby Tinnok on February 23rd, 2013, 5:03 am

Try Your Hand
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The stone floor was cracked and crumbling, shoots of green crawling through the gaps and reaching for light. It had once been an arena, an ancient spot for blood sport, when the clans had been divided. They would come from all over and compete, or so the stories said. Myri had been none too fond of the idea of her own people slaughtering each other, and had left the place collapse upon its upon the outskirts of Taloba, forgotten and abandoned. Tinnok had always liked it: Wide and open, yet signs of great craftsmanship still lay in the crumbling pillars and masonry. Yet a structure that had once been so immense, and the half-breed could only imagine, menacing as well, was now almost peaceful and serene as it was over taken by nature.

She stepped onto the giant slab in the middle, flipping a dagger within her grasp, glancing side long at the scimitar in her belt. She barely had any idea how to use the blade, but it was more than time she began to learn, no? She glanced towards the city, vaguely wondering if the Myrian would answer her call. Breaks from the military were few and far between save the large gaps between years of service. The half-breed had felt nearly stupid sending a letter to Razkar to request meeting, yet he was the closest thing she could call to friend save her brother and Ayatah...though even thinking of her half-breed friend Tinnok imagined the man had better ways to spend his time...

She grimaced, she was like a worried child, wondering if their friends didn't like them. She had regretted sending the missive as soon as it left her fingertips on the wings of the carrier pigeon, but time would tell if the Shorn Skull was willing to accept her offering of...whatever bizarre alliance they seemed to hold. She rolled her shoulders and sat upon a fallen pillar, removing the wicked blade from her belt and scraping a whetstone upon the sword. There was time yet, and if he did not appear? Well, she could always wrap the blade in cloth and test it upon the stone. She had no need of this male to aid her in her training, not for company or otherwise. She shut out the swiftly contrary thoughts her mind brought to bear and focused in on the cold glint of steel and the sound of stone upon metal.
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Postby Razkar on February 23rd, 2013, 8:51 am

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Razkar knew the arena had a name, a real name, but he did not know it. He didn't know anyone that did, either. It had been well over half a millenia since the Goddess-Queen had outlawed the bloodsports, leaving this place to rot slowly as an example. As he approached it, Razkar ran his fingers over a mural by the entrance archway, a beautiful, elaborate carving of a Dhani embroiled in a struggle with an over-sized Myrian, hissing and biting and slashing-

-until the stone crumbed under his fingers. The Dhani and the Myrian fell at his touch, and nothing but bare, flaking stone was left.

Razkar shook his head, feeling the chill of age down his spine despite the humidity of the day.

Time destroys everything.

The male shook his head, trying to escape from thoughts of the past. Well, that distant past, anyway. It was more recent history that had bought him here, just beyond the walls of Taloba, on one of his days off rotation. He had intended, naturally, to spend it with Ayatah. But when he looked around and found a plump pigeon cooing in the hands of a messenger at the Barracks, his plans had changed.

It was from Tinnok.

His footfalls echoed throughout the high tunnel that led from the outside to the stone arena at the center of the structure. Razkar had to admit, it was impressive work. He'd always thought the Myrians that had lived before the Goddess-Queen truly were savages, unable to even craft stone and rock.

They were not even "Myrians", were they? He reminded himself, as his ears started to pick up the faint sound of leather sliding on stone. Just a collection of endlessly warring tribes and clans, fighting just to fight. This place is a monument to that mentality... and look what it is now.

The light grew larger at the end of the tunnel. It was no longer just a wide orb, now he could see features beyond it. Yellowed and whitened stone split by moss and vines. Fallen masonry and bricks scattered haphazardly or covered in vegetation that had centuries to mount its invasion.

Movement, too. A female.

Senses as sharp as ever, Tinnok glanced up from her scimitar, stone halting its steady motion. Yellow eyes flashed, her permanent, undeniable curse, for every Myrian that looked at her knew at once she was of the Ancient Enemy. Her whole life she had been spat on, shit on and abused, and Razkar knew that the words themselves were a joke compared to the mental and physical reality.

He had tried to help that, a few weeks ago. He had failed, and more. He guessed that was the reason he was here now.

The son of the Shorn Skulls walked forwards. Walked, not marched. He was off duty, damnit, and was going to enjoy the feeling, despite the gladius and ax and dagger he still carried.

The two did not break eye contact, even when she jumped back up and met him in the silent, dead arena.

"Well met, Tinnok." Razkar said formally, then smirked slightly to show that was all the formality he had in him. Those slitted eyes... they should have disgusted him, but they intrigued him. Perhaps Aya was softening him? "Are we here to talk? Or..." He looked around at the thousands of empty seats, ghosts waiting eagerly for combat to begin again. "... are we to reenact history?"
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Postby Tinnok on February 23rd, 2013, 12:44 pm

A glimmer of surprise flickered across the golden orbs when Razkar approached over the stones. She rose as he progressed slowly towards her, putting aside the stone. The half breed inclined her head in return. "Well met, eagle."

She contemplated his question for a moment, taking another look at her surroundings. Crumbling stone sets of step, and trees blossoming through the gaps, vines encircling pillars. A strange melding of man and nature it was, and she felt at peace here...well. Now her gaze returned to him, and she tried to discern her original intent behind the letter. It hadn't been out of anger...for that had long since faded, perhaps curiosity? There were quite a few questions she had for him, but this could all be discussed in due course. "Why not, both?"

She stepped forward, brandishing the scimitar, swinging it around in her hand. It's weight was strange, different from other sword, but the curve of it...if she could learn how to use it to the advantage it had surely been crafted for...She smirked and looked up at Razkar. "Forgive me, for this will not be my finest fight." She glanced meaningfully at the blade. "The Tempered Steel, however, doesn't abide their clan wearing weapons that they cannot fully use...and it has been too long since I received this blade not to try it today..."

Like a true Myrian, he had already been ready for combat the moment he had stepped into the arena. She watched the way his hands hovered atop his weapon hilts just waiting for the excuse to grab them, and as she approached, he was ready. Deciding not to take the typical front assault, Tinnok nimbly hopped backward, half turning to leap upon a fallen pillar. She ran along it's length, thick and solid, then jumped onto another, shorn away about five feet off the ground, landing upon it and jumping down, now coming at her opponent from the right side. It was fairly clear she had already planned the move out, but Tinnok hardly saw it as cheating, she barely knew her way around the scimitar that she hurled at his face, where as he was quite expert at all the weapons she had seen him use.

As steel clashed against steel, the male quick to block her attack, Tinnok leaned in and smiled. "So tell me of this, Aya."
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Postby Razkar on February 23rd, 2013, 4:58 pm

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"Well met, eagle."

Razkar favored her with something between a smile and a grimace. He had never took Tinnok for one with nicknames, but ever since their sparring session when they first met, he had been forever "eagle" to her.

Call him crazy, but Razkar had been able to feel the lower case nature of it.

"Why not, both?"

The sun glinted on a long, curved blade and Razkar narrowed his eyes in surprise. Scimitar, he thought it was called. But an unusual blade to be found in Falyndar, where straight blades were the norm, at least for swords. Where had she got it? He noticed the burnishd but simple handle, it looked like... bone...

... Dhani?

"Forgive me, for this will not be my finest fight. The Tempered Steel, however, doesn't abide their clan wearing weapons that they cannot fully use...and it has been too long since I received this blade not to try it today..."

Razkar opened his mouth to respond but she was already moving, a dark-skinned blur that jumped back with her sword ready. Even as his eyes tracked her his hands moved of their own accord, training forcing his muscles to obey without thought. Goddess, she was nimble. She had been when she was a green recruit he'd pounded into the sand, and Myri alone knew how far her agility had come since then.

Within a moment or two she was running along the fallen pillar, scimitar flashing as she raised it. Razkar heard it whoosh through the air, mixed with steel sliding on leather-

-as she jumped and swung it towards him horizontally-

-sparks flew against the sun and the stone as his gladius met it, force of her jump shuddering through his legs as he gritted his teeth. She came forward with the blow, weapons pressed against each other, her face close and grinning.

"So tell me of this... Aya."

The question hit him like a blow, throwing his mind into a moment of confusion... just as she had intended. His limbs stalled, thoughts of that sculpted face and beautiful smile replacing the cold logic and hot passion of combat, and she seized her moment well.

She pushed back hard against him, using her height against him and forcing him into a backpedal, swinging the curved blade at him again, his gladius jerking down to block it. Just.

Back and back, on the defensive, losing the momentum, until his rear struck a downed pillar-

-scimitar thrusting towards him-

-and he threw himself to the side, rolling on the hard stone, coming to his feet and spinning around with his gladius slashing to his side-

-to meet the clang of her blade again, and stepping back quickly.

Panting in the dead arena. Mainly from him. They circled each other, eyes flickering between each other and their weapons, measuring distance and speed.

"She is..." he answered, thinking hard of the words needed. But, as usual when he thought of Ayatah, all seemed insufficient. "... very dear to me. My duty and my service is my soul in this world. But my heart belongs to she of the Scattered Bones-"

On that final word he lunged forwards, swinging to the right, knowing her sword would block it. Both swung quickly but with control, each knowing that a careless or overdone blow with these weapons could cleave a limb or open a torso with ease. He could see she was unused to the weight and strange curve of the long blade, balance slightly off-

-his left arm, cocked to his side, exploded outwards, straightening as he punched for her chest-

-but she had already spun away, swinging again-

-but he completed his lunge, kept moving forwards to jump on the fallen pillar.

She spun around to face him as he walked slowly, steadily along it, gladius leveled at her, and an eyebrow cocked.

"And you, Tinnok?" He said, eyes suddenly sparkling with some unknown realization. "I do not recall me referring to her as "Aya". So... the question is, how do you know her?"

It was a gamble, and he knew it. "Aya" was the natural and common shortening of "Ayatah", but he watched her expression carefully. Her reaction could tell him much...
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Postby Tinnok on February 23rd, 2013, 8:07 pm

She had two choices open to her at his question. She could lie and play this game a little longer, try to draw out more information from this male who seemed so smitten with her friend...or she could tell the truth. The two sides of her pulled, the snake wanting to mince words and deceive, and the Myrian not seeing the point of withholding the truth from the eagle.

In the end she went with the Myrian. He had already partially figured it out anyway, no sense in attempting subterfuge any longer. She stepped forward casually as if weighing her thoughts, then swept forward with the heavy blade, swinging it viciously towards his ankles. He was swift and leapt over the blade, landing upon and shoving her backward with a foot. The blade clattered the ground and Tinnok grimaced. She should have seen the disadvantages of the move. She tumbled forward in a swift somersault and retrieved the blade, hopping up and away from his range, scimitar once again in hand, her smirk grown thoughtful. "Aya is a close friend, we met in childhood and our mixed blood among other things has kept us together for quite some time." There was a twinge of pain within her eyes at that. Aya, the beautiful Eypharian, Myrian. Though perhaps lacking the wonders of Myri's true heritage, it was perhaps one of the most attractive pairings one might create in all of Mizahar...at least where Myrians were concerned. Her pheromones, her natural charisma, Tinnok had always envied them. No Myrian male stared too long at her because of lust...certainly. She shook her head and noticed too late that just as she had taken advantage of Razkar's confusion and dazed expressions, so too was he. The eagle had lunged off of the pillar, gladius brandished in a sweeping move that went up and under her scimitar.

She snarled, and remembering his own advice, sent a punch at his arm that bore the blade, pushing it away so that her scimitar could be ready at the defense once more. "It seems you know how precious she is, which is good, lest I kill you in your sleep." The smile was filled with Dhani intent, but also the humor of knowing how Aya would react if she could hear the conversation that was transpiring in her honor.

Then she charged forward. Myri's breath was she horrible with this blade. Without the element of surprise on her side, every lash and lunge of the curved metal was easily blocked by his blade, nearly casually, in fact. He stomped on her toe, making her cringe in pain and hop back, reassessing her strategy. His was a blade that could be used with strangth and finess in equal measure...hers...it seemed to require a plan...not this horrible swinging about like a wooden bat that she was doing. She flipped the hilt around in her hand and waited for him to make the next move, deciding to try a new technique.
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Postby Razkar on February 23rd, 2013, 9:04 pm

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He watched emotions and thoughts swim across her eyes... or he thought he did. Those yellow slits weren't so full of feeling as the circle-in-circle eyes of other beings. They hid emotion, replaced it with cold reptilian intent.

But not entirely, he saw. She was still enough of a Myrian that her soul shone through that Dhani corruption.

She swung as an answer to his question, going for his ankles, but he anticipated it. A hop and a kick later and she was sent staggering backwards, weapon clattering to the stone. Razkar bent down and swung for her neck, aiming to stop the blow short, proving his point-

-and she was already moving, ducking and rolling and coming up with her scimitar again, forcing him to step quickly down the pillar, out of range.

"Aya is a close friend, we met in childhood and our mixed blood among other things has kept us together for quite some time."

Razkar cocked his head as he saw something flash across her face. Fondness, certainly, and a sisterhood that was always shared by two outcasts. But also an... envy? Razkar found himself understanding it. To be half Eypharian was not exactly a boon among Myrians; to be half anything wasn't. But to be tainted by the Ancient Enemy...

Razkar hoped she knew how lucky she was, in some ways. Every other clan he knew of would have killed her at birth. Or killed her mother beforehand.

But he did not waste too much time on reflection, seeking to pay her back for that clever mental trickery from earlier. As he face grew turgid and her blade faltered for a moment, he bent his knees and threw himself at her, gladius flashing high and diagonal, on her open side-

-only for her hand to shoot out like a snake's tongue (fittingly enough) and strike his sword arm with precision. The blow was stalled and he landed awkwardly, but she was focusing on readying her weapon. He spun and faced her again.

"It seems you know how precious she is, which is good, lest I kill you in your sleep."

Razkar cocked a half-challenging eyebrow at her words, impressed at her loyalty. Aside from her clan, he had met no-one who cared for Ayatah with such fierceness, other than himself.

"A rare jewel, we both agree, but I don't think she needs you protecting her, Tinnok."

Whether or not she caught the slight criticism, he never knew, for she was on the offence again in a blink. But now, on equal footing, she was showing her ill-use with the blade. The heavy curve made it swing with little control, not like the short, balanced gladius he wielded. It was obviously a weapon for long, sweeping swings, constant movement with flair and control.

As of yet, she did not have either, but every blow he parried and blocked hit like a hammer blow. The scimitar was designed for power, hacking off limbs, not thrusting or cutting, and with her muscled arms swinging it, she could make good on the promise of steel.

But she could not find a gap in his armor yet, and Razkar never relied on just one limb, sword-equipped or not.

He stomped on her foot and she cringed, backing off and buying him a moment. He slid to her left and slashed at her leg, forcing her to jerk the scimitar around from right to left to block it-

-and kicked out at her thigh as metal met metal, making her stagger even more.

They parted again, now panting with equal exertion... but not weakening. Tinnok flipped the hilt over and over in her hands like a silent meditation, curved metal flashing and glimmering in the sun as it turned. Razkar cracked his stiff neck and felt the tension in his arms ease.

They'd only just begun.

"I... We should speak of what happened." He finally said, words coming reluctantly, but he seemed intent on speaking them. "During our last outing together. I didn't mean for it to end as it did. But you should know... she was the reason."

The words came more easily now, but his guard stayed up.

"I had the same disgust of half-breeds as every other of our race before her. Not as... vehement, perhaps, but there. After her, though, she... she showed me the truth of it. That blood matters, but not nearly so much as actions. Your actions were fine and noble, and in service of our race, you did not deserve-"

Apparently she had heard enough, for with a curling of her lips, she was on him again.
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Postby Tinnok on February 24th, 2013, 3:49 am

She could only smile at his jabs. Of course Aya needed no one to protect her, if she did, she wouldn't be alive. It was still something she needed to say, so that he knew. Knew what lengths she would go to...

They both eyed each other, silence spreading between them, smile still perched upon her features at the idea of a good fight, then he opened that stupid mouth of his.

She became gripped by the same feeling she had had when he gave his noble speech in the forest. Like some puffed up Syliran shyke head upon a golden hill trying to change the world. It was great at first until you came to the stark realization it was a bunch of petching nonsense. "I deserve what I earn."

Her blade whipped out towards his face, her hand gripping the scimitar so tightly it should have been a club. He blocked and threw it to the side, and the half breed forced herself to let out a large breath. Her body coursed with anger, hissing breaths leaking out between her teeth. She was losing control ... something she absolutely hated, even more than those who tormented her. Weakness within lead to weakness outside oneself...or something bizarrely wise like that. She came in again, this time channeling her anger into the blade. She was nimble, agile. The weapon she held was no fencing foil, but it was still apt for a person like her.

Razkar was no sympathetic entity, to wait while one got an emotional handle on oneself, and he took advantage of her rage. She was knocked back again and again by the gladius, dodging the weapon barely here, having it nick her flesh in warning slices there. Soon she was up against a pillar. "I do not deserve any of what they give me, and I deserve every piece of it. Do you not understand?" Her eyes were wide with a lifetime of frustration and sadness, now channeled toward him. She sent a kick towards his knee cap, and as he swung the gladius around, blade twirling in a brilliant flash, she grunted and heaved the scimitar blade up, catching the sword in the curve of her own. She let him push with his superior strength down upon it, her arm lowering further and further, then when it reached her waist she stopped resisting the push, his weight fell forward and she sidestepped him, striking his back with the flat slide of her sword. She would not learn to master the scimitar in one day...but perhaps she could use her inferior skill to some advantage.

Her words made no sense... yet they made every sense to her. Her blood made her what she was, she saw the injustice of her treatment, yet realized it's necessity, how her own ostracized condition made her people feel more united against the evil that lay in her blood. She needn't lay down and take it... yet it was also this thing, this great force she would never shift simply for her. The unmovable boulder, as it were.

Her arms were sore from exertion, beads of sweat standing out against the sheen of scales. She took a step back, hungry for more, yet also defeated. "What do you want me to say, eagle? What closure do you seek?"
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Postby Razkar on February 24th, 2013, 4:36 am

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"I deserve what I earn."

She came on with a fury he had not expected, and her blows were even stronger, fiercer than before. For the first few Razkar's body was as stunned as his mind, arm growing numb and sore from blocking and blocking, feeling the razor edge of his gladius dull with the heavy, clanging impacts. She forced him back, snarling and angry and pouring out her anger onto him-

OK. Enough.

Another swinging blow was aimed at his head and he slid back and leaned back at the same time, curved blade swinging in front of him, and carrying Tinnok with it. The sheer momentum of the heavy sword carried her off balance and he struck out at it as it flew by, only adding to it, making her stagger-

-then stepped forward quickly and jabbed the hilt of his gladius into her sore chest.

She staggered, and the balance tipped once again. Now he thrust and hacked at her from both sides, from above, even below, keeping her guessing and denying her the initiative. Sun danced off their blades as they whirled and wheeled, the sounds of joyous combat echoing throughout the high stone for the first time in centuries.

Soon he had her against a pillar, blades grinding and sliding together, eyes boring into each other. Hers, angry and still insulted, frustrated and enraged by him, by her blood... but also something like a sad, steady acceptance. And his, wide and staring as hers, but questioning, demanding, wanting to know so badly why he messed up so badly and why she didn't see that he was trying to help?

"I do not deserve any of what they give me, and I deserve every piece of it. Do you not understand?"

"That makes no-"

His kneecap exploded in pain as she took advantage of his hesitation yet again, staggering him and forcing him to push down, to occupy her attention... but she even turned that against him. Razkar should have realized she was just baiting him, should have known that she would know there would be no victory in strength against strength-

-but her speed saved her as she let his strength work against him, spinning away, letting him press against empty air, fall against the pillar-

-and that long, curved blade smacked into his back, the flat side, but with enough blood to bite and draw blood.

Razkar grunted in pain, spinning around, back against the pillar, gladius raised... but she was not coming back. She stood with her arms sore and scimitar trembling in one slightly. The exertion had got to her quickly... and he was guessing it was not all physical.

"What do you want me to say, eagle? What closure do you seek?"

Razkar felt his jaws tighten as the mockery in her words. But he thought... he pondered. This was... why couldn't this be more simple?! With a disgusted snort he threw down his gladius, flexing and spinning his sore arms and pacing in short, fierce stretches. He drew his ax instead, finding comfort in its weight, flipping it around in his hands, then snapped his eyes back to hers, pointing with it.

"I am not all-knowing... wolf!" He said, coining a new name for her right there from the flames of his frustration. "I tried to help! Now I know what a mistake that was, but I do not deserve your scorn! I forgot where I was. I forgot who I was among, and I will not repeat those mistakes, nor will I seek to change that which must endure as it is."

His anger seemed to fade minutely, sweat trailing down his forehead and making him blink rapidly. Chest heaving, he finally breathed the anger out of his chest, eyes softening minutely.

"Your path is your own, Tinnok. But just know there is at least one Myrian who does not regard you as an abomination. Now..." He held out his arms again, twisting his face into a sneer, challenge writ large upon them, the glimmer in his eyes of one who is bent on self-destruction, if only for a day. "... seek you to punish me for my weakness?"

He slid back into a combat stance, eyes hard now, harder than before, a living example of the race that was half her blood but hated her, that she lived among but ostracized her, that she protected with her sweat and skill but would see her as nothing more than an enemy in waiting.

"Try it."
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Postby Tinnok on February 24th, 2013, 11:24 pm

He thought she scorned him? The one entity that respected her, not because of kinship by blood and not because of common circumstance? She snorted herself, but did not refute the comment, for he continued to speak. She let them sink in. "I forgot where I was. I forgot who I was among."

Tinnok felt shame then...something humbling in that tone. After all she was not the only being who suffered among the two. He was male, would always be inferior to all other women...perhaps not her, but any full blooded one. His rights, his pride, they were secondary to a females. Part of her speculated on that event, the speech he had given. If it had been one of the female members of her fang...would Ioxera and the Tigress have taken it more seriously? Given the words more merit?

She rolled her shoulders and cracked her neck. "Your weakness?"

Her foot rotated, pushing against the stone in circular motion so that she posed in a fighting stance, the scimitar pointed directly at his chest. Both of them stood there for a moment. He was the muscled eagle, axe in hand, body heaving, she was the wolf, body angular and rigid, chest rising and falling. They both ran forward as one and Tinnok could hear phantom screams crying out for blood. Her scimitar flashed towards his stomach, her hands clenching it in a twisting motion that could eviscerate ones internal organs. He hacked the blade away like a toy, and she spun around, able to utilize the axe hooked onto her curve blade. She twirled like a dancer, forcing his arm down and away, freeing herself and the blade, breaths leaking out, eyes wild and eager for more. "Your words only proved that it was I that was weak. Why do you think I was so angry?"

She saw confusion again in his eyes as he charged her, throwing her onto the defensive again. She caught the blade of his axe on the hilt of the scimitar, the reverberation shocking her arm and causing her to gasp in shock and leap backwards. She swapped hands and shook her arm out with a grimace."If you were a female, eagle, you would be the leader of your fang in a heart beat, Myri's pride and joy. Do you ever consider that? You are ruthless, vicious, yet clever. I would say you are like a snake...but it is why I called you eagle upon that first day. An eagle is a symbol of honor and bravery, yet you think I use it as insult, do you not?" She smiled, it was a sad, but her eyes held a certain pride there, and the pride was in the warrior before her. Her expression faltered and disappeared after the words left her mouth, however, realizing how much she had revealed, her inherent respect for the male. The clever snake within hissed in outrage, not wishing to give itself away so quickly, and the Myrian within couldn't help but agree. Grimacing the half-breed lunged forward, one hand placed behind her back, body upright like one of the great jungle trees as she jumped forward, brandishing the scimitar at an angle and utilizing the range of the sword over his hand axe.
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Postby Razkar on February 25th, 2013, 1:41 am

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"Your weakness?"

The half-breed rushed at him jut as his own feet started pounding, her blade thrusting and twisting towards his stomach. Razkar had to forcibly remind himself this was meant to be a friendly sparring session, and he slid to his right and slashed down and to the side with his ax, knocking the sword away and trapping it in the hook of its head. But she was too quick for him again, strong and nimble into the bargain, twisting and spinning until his arm was forced low and the blade was released.

They circled again, wariness beginning to creep into both of their movements.

"Your words only proved that it was I that was weak. Why do you think I was so angry?"

Razkar felt his jaw drop open in surprise, but there was more anger to it than shock. Weakness? That was what she saw in herself?! How could anyone be so stupid?! But some small, mostly-ignored voice told him that he was one male screaming in a hurricane born of females. Razkar saw her worth, her ability, the stroke of sheer genius that using the dogs truly was. But it did not matter to the rest, Ioxera and Rehkuna and Zuran or Oxil and the others of that day. No matter what, she would always be a half-snake.

Razkar felt the injustice of it choke him and lunged forwards again, losing himself to that same anger he had warned others against so many times. He stroke was so simple that a child could have blocked it, and she did... with her hilt, rather than the blade itself. But there was enough force behind it to make her wince and switch hands, circling him again as she shook the pain out of her arm.

"If you were a female, eagle, you would be the leader of your fang in a heart beat, Myri's pride and joy. Do you ever consider that? You are ruthless, vicious, yet clever. I would say you are like a snake...but it is why I called you eagle upon that first day. An eagle is a symbol of honor and bravery, yet you think I use it as insult, do you not?"

There was a long silence in the dead arena. The ghosts paused and held their breath, watching the panting figures, the sweating female and the glaring male. Razkar wanted to deny her words, to throw them back at her as lies and nonsense... but she was right. The Children of Myri as female-dominated, and always would be. In other lands, Razkar thought (or had he dreamed?) that his abilities would have been elevated to a fang leader by now, perhaps even more. But he was destined always to follow, never to truly lead. The females would always command, always look down on him...

He gritted his teeth and gripped his ax harder as he felt years of resentment flow through him, bitterness and rejection shining in his black eyes. The ghosts seemed to sense it, howling silently in joy as they recognized a killing rage.

But her last words stilled it.

"I..." He began, finally finding some tempo with his heartbeat and his breathing. The ax was heavier than his gladius, and already his arm was tingling. "I never thought you insulted me."

He wanted to say more. But he did not. Wanted to tell her that he was... honored. That a female, even a half-breed, would regard him with such respect based solely on his actions, not what he had or didn't have between his legs. That his beautiful, wonderful, beloved Aya had opened his eyes about the dangerous, forced ignorance the Myrians lived under, and that it made it so hard for capable, dedicated and gods-damn-it loyal warriors like Tinnok to rise.

If she was ever caught by the Ancient Enemy, he though with silent horror, they would make her death last seasons. A traitor's death. And none here would mourn her save her clan... and still she fights.

Razkar let out a long, ragged sigh, head bowed. When he looked up again, there was a strange, soft smile on his sweaty face. Sadness, perhaps, but also a resignation to the way things were. Their world was harsh and rigid and often even hypocritical... but they were warriors and they would lay down their lives for it.

Warriors fought, and they endured. But they also had to suffer and sacrifice. This was theirs.

"Come forth, wolf."

That she did and, as the poets would say, verily. One hand behind her like a barbarian fencer, she slashed out at him with the long, curved blade, learning some control now even with her tired limbs. Razkar instantly regretted switching to the ax, the shorter weapon denying him any chance to get close to her. He knocked the sword away but she kept it momentum spinning back towards him again and again, whereas the ax had no such aerodynamic subtlety.

That and it was designed really to be a secondary weapon, or a striker; his other hand was meant to be filled with another weapon, but he had none. Razkar was forced to use his other hand to jab and punch but Tinnok was growing wise to his tricks. He knocked her blade wide and went for another bursting punch, exploding forwards towards her chest as he stepped forward, and she twisted her body to the side, his punch sailing past her-

-and her knee jerking up to catch him square in the chest.

Razkar rolled around it, spinning, pain and disorientation throwing him completely off. He just managed to see the pillar he was heading towards, hit it and let his body roll over it, feet hitting the ground at the same time on the other side.

With the lithe ease of an acrobat (if one that now needed one hand to lever her tired form upwards), she jumped up onto the pillar and stood over him, scimitar leveled.

Razkar smirked and nodded his appreciation for her progress. He made sure the feeling was plain on his face, too. He wanted her to see that there was no grudging respect in his eyes, the kind she had seen so many times before from peers and superiors. The kind that said "well, it was well struck, but you're still just a petching abomination."

"We have traded words long enough, wolf," he said with a wry grin, then switched his hand ax to his free hand, cracked his neck left-right with two sharp movements that sounded like branches snapping, sound echoing throughout the dry stones. "And I will forget none of what you have said."

He bowed slightly, and gave her the best compliment he could think of at that moment.

"My love is lucky to have such a loyal friend."

He waited for her yellow eyes to blink and then charged forward with a hoarse cry, determined to go out with a bang as he swung at her legs, already jumping up to meet her on the pillar.
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Razkar has been cursed by Yahal, and as such finds little acceptance from others; they will instinctively view him as being deceptive and traitorous. However, when close to one blessed by Yahal, the effect is negated. The curse is etched onto his left pectoral, and viewing the mark causes others to feel dirty and unclean.
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