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Razkar and Tinnok get to know each other a lil' better the Myrian way.

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Taloba, home to the Myrians, is the thriving core of Falyndar. Inhabited by a fierce and savage tribe where blood sacrifices are normal and a way of life, they are untamed and proud of it. Warlike, and with their numbers growing, the Myrians are set on reclaiming what is rightfully theirs. [Lore]

Try Your Hand [Razkar]

Postby Tinnok on February 25th, 2013, 4:12 am

She enjoyed his facial expressions, from shock to rage to awe. They ran the gamut as he assailed her. His skill was undeniable. She had the clear advantage with her weapon, yet still he kept her on the defensive time and time again, her far inferior skill losing her what may have been a more even fight, otherwise.

It did not mean she wasn't learning, however. She learned that twisting the blade was more effective that merely sweeping it back and forth like an oddly shaped sickle, and that the hilt guard was a very useful blocking mechanism for when the haft of his axe came too close for her liking.

Why could this not be the heart of their culture? She was an abomination, born and bred, and an anomaly at that, one that fought every day for her right upon Myri's green patch of Mizahar, and he was a male, lesser than she if one was to have it right, not for any reason in particular mind you, but because of their Goddesses fierce influence upon their culture. Yet how proud they both were in this moment, how satisfied with each other as opponents allies...perhaps now even friends, though a strange interpretation of the word. Her lip curled thinking about her fang mates, wishing even one of them had half of the honor of the eagle. But it mattered not, she would serve her time and be done with them, serve Caiyha as she was meant to, and live in the safety of the jungles. She knew her course now, and had only to arrive upon it...which left the male before her.

Her leap onto the pillar was not so elegant as before, hefting her weight up and rotating swiftly to eye Razkar upon the ground. Though she was about to ask him that very question which had crossed her mind, his last words stopped her. No more words it was. He attempted the copy cat move of cutting at her ankles, and the half-breed expected it. She was not so nimble as to dislodge the axe from his grip, however, so her feet merely leapt into the air over his weapon and landed roughly back onto the stone, hopping to the side as the eagle joined her upon the massive length of carved granite.

The ghosts seemed pleased by this turn of the events. Heart to hearts hadn't been the main attraction of the arena in its heyday, and so they cheered as the axe swung towards her stomach, Tinnok leaned backward, letting herself fall onto her rump, and kick with both feet towards his ankles. Might as well use the strange curvature of the pillar to her advantage, no? From her seated position she gripped the scimitar tightly in one hand and swung it towards him, making sure it was the flat of the blade and not the wicked sharp inside, in case she had caught him off guard.
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Postby Razkar on February 25th, 2013, 11:07 am

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There were no more word or debate, no more recriminations and explanations. What had been said was all that needed to be, and now they were two warriors again, fighting for the cheers of the ghosts in a place long bereft of life.

Razkar preferred it that way.

She blocked his swing but the leap took her by surprise, forcing her back as his body was suddenly flying upwards at her. She stepped backwards as he slashed again, towards her stomach, falling back-

A brief flash of triumph lit his eyes as he stepped forwards, ax raised-

-and her feet kicked out and struck him square in the ankles. Instantly his equilibirum was thrown, body realizing it was on a pillar not exactly helping, and as he wobbled and flailed he saw her scimitar flash back towards him-

Damnit!

With no other option, Razkar let himself fall back, mimicking her movement. His rump landed hard, one hand reaching back to help pull himself up and she was already scrambling to her feet, tucking her legs back in and leveraging herself up.

Their positions were reversed in moments: her standing over him, scimitar raised, him on his back, hand ax up-

-but when she slashed down, her blade sparked and clanged against ancient stone instead of steel, for he'd rolled off the pillar and back to the stone floor of the arena. Before his feet had even stopped vibrating at the shock of impact, he spun himself around, left arm stiff and swinging out-

-aiming to take her legs out from under her byt slamming his forearm into the back of her kneecaps-

-right arm with his ax already cocked back to deliver the killing blow when his spin was complete and she was on her back again.

And all the while his eyes sparkled, with exertion and pain and thought and joy. This is where their beat was, the both of them. Blood and heritage meant nothing in this dead arena, watched and judged by nobody.

Razkar smiled as he spun.

Maybe that's why Myri did not destroy it, he thought, almost whispering the blasphemous idea in his own head, so that those like us would have somewhere to go...
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Try Your Hand [Razkar]

Postby Tinnok on February 25th, 2013, 1:00 pm

He was fast, and knew when to get out of an element in which his nimble sparring partner had the upper hand in. She did not suspect such a quick response time on his, end, however. Her eyes flickered with a mixture of impressed awe and frustration as her body was struck from beneath her, and she fell back with a stunning thunk upon hard stone, her spine ringing with pain.

Ordinarily she might have been nimble enough to simply roll off the pillar as he did, but the force of her weight hitting the pillar was more than she could take and for just a moment the blade of the axe swung in its deadly arc unchecked.

The tip brushed against her neck as two calloused hands snapped up and grabbed the haft of the axe on either side of Razkar's own, and for a moment a struggle of wills hung there. She hissed in exertion at fighting his musculature and heard an all but silent roar of approval when her neck gyrated, ducking over and allowing her mouth access to his hands, where she bit down fiercely.

A satisfied grin brought her down to the ground on all fours like a cat, and she tumbled forward, pushing her weight to her feet so that she needn't use her hands as she stood, continuing the momentum and twirling upon one foot to have the scimitar ready and outstretched in one hand, a droplet of sweat leaking down her face. Her arm was sore and heavy, body being pushed past its limits, chest on fire, but this was good, and how it should have been.

She had been to this place more than once to escape the confines of the city, but never to such good effect. Perhaps she would have to make it a habit of training here.

She raised her arms to egg on the ghostly crowds, head turned proudly skyward, perhaps like the gladiators before her, then she surged forward, using what might have been the very last of her waning strength. She attacked from the front, but as he came up to block she feinted, both feet moving nimbly along the toes akin to a fire dancer, and sending a punch towards his kidney. The scimitar made her feel like some sort of pirate upon the high seas, stranded in this ocean of grass and stone, and she rather liked the feeling.
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Postby Razkar on February 25th, 2013, 5:50 pm

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He knew this was just... fun, he supposed the word was, but instinct took over and he pressed and pressed the a against her throat. Razkar's face was red and sweat was now running off him in rivulets. His hands shook but still his eyes shone with triumph, knowing this was-

"AAAAAAAOOOOWWW!"

The sheer bestiality of her "solution" overwhelmed him for a moment, and when her teeth sunk into his fingers he howled like a child stung by a nectar-wasp. Instinct worked against him now, jerking his hands back away from the primal fear of sharp teeth-

-giving her the opening she needed to roll away and spin back to her feet, scooping up her scimitar as she returned to her stance.

But now Tinnok was trembling as much as he. Her body shined like she had just got out of a pool of water, hair matted and sticking to her body. Her breathing was ragged and uneven, he grip the same, scimitar swaying in her hands. And yet, to his amusement, she appealed to the crowd...

Razkar smiled and shook his head as he watched her do a quick turn, silently roaring to an equally-silent crowd of bloodthirsty precursors. The male shook his head furiously, flinging sweat everywhere and looked down at his hand.

He sucked the blood from the teeth marks, stemming it for the few chimes they had left. He knew he would need them.

And as his hand fell from his mouth, she came on again, muscles straining for one last exertion. She thrust to his stomach and he twisted his body to the left, her blade swinging past him-

-leaving him completely open to her fist as it pounded into his kidney.

Razkar grunted but did not give her the pleasure of a yelp of pain. It shouldn't have hurt as much as it did, but his exhaustion and other bruises were piling on one another relentlessly. He felt his body bow to the side, as if trying to avoid her fist, and staggered to his side, almost doubled over and hacking wildly to keep her at bay.

Last chance, he thought to himself, knowing he was spent. But we know each other, don't we? We were raised by the same breed of parent, trained by the same instructors.

Neither of us will be the first to yield.


He charged forward, knees bent, coming low cocking back his right arm to deliver a backhanded horizontal swipe at her chest, knowing her scimitar would jerk down to block it from the outside-

-but it was a cover for his fist swinging towards her own kidney from the side-

-but she was expecting that too, forearm coming down to block him at the wrist.

But Razkar just grinned, and delivered his true attack.

"Good fight."

His feet didn't slow, nor the momentum his body carried from the swings with his ax and his charge. With her scimitar blocking his ax and her hand arm block his fist, she had left her chest open-

-his legs straightened in one explosive movement, propelling himself up even as his muscles screamed under the strain-

-Razkar shouted a war whoop as he jerked one knee up, sending it spearing diagonally forward and up and into her chest. He knew his landing would be more of a crash than anything else, and his sore, aching muscles would be useless for anything else.

But this was his last throw of the bones, and he would make it count.

OOCGreat session, love. ;)
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Try Your Hand [Razkar]

Postby Tinnok on February 26th, 2013, 3:54 am

oocRight back at ya!

She had been ready. Ready in that tired, exhausted, worn out way, but ready nevertheless. Her blade was shaking as she blocked his axe, grunting with the effort, but she held it firm, body quaking with exertion. He should have known better than to try to repeat her own attack on her, but she realized too late that he most certainly was.

The knee to her chest sent her flying backwards, legs backpedaling and body falling up and over one of the pillars, limps and weapon falling in a jumbled heap upon the other side.

"Good fight, my ass!" The muffled voice cried from the other side. It was tired, but filled with humor as well. One hand gripped stone and slowly pulled her body upwards, swinging with a pained grunt over the stone and sitting there, legs dangling.

Hands rubbed her face and the scimitar was lain beside her. Well it was a good first attempt, anyway, even if the eagle had schooled her. She smirked at that and spoke silently. "Wolf, huh?" It was more to herself than a question to Razkar. She stretched her arms out, groaning with the effort, but knowing the pain would be worse for her the longer she waited, and her neck rolled in a circular motion, easing out the kinks that had formed over the course of their battle.

"Nice day off, no?"

The ghostly crowds grew quiet and taciturn, upset with the severe lack of bloodshed. Tinnok glanced at the empty and crumbling stadium, giving the imagined spectral hordes the promise of another fight upon another day.

Of course then the reality of what faced her outside of this impartial arena truly struck her. Back to the army, back to her fang. What a warm welcome they would give her too. She wondered for a moment if she would change it, alter her blood if she had the choice. The answer would seem obvious, but people like this eagle gave her pause when she considered the hypothetical option. The half-Dhani sprawled herself out on the pillar, hands behind her head as she gazed up into the clear sky. And who would Aya have to be best friends with if she was a pure blood? She recalled something her mother had once said about wishes being like lame dogs...but couldn't remember the end result, perhaps how necessary it was to put them down? That brought up the unpleasant thought of the dog in that mission not so long ago and Tinnok shoved it from her mind, glancing at her companion who was doing his own set of stretches as well.
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Postby Razkar on February 26th, 2013, 4:30 am

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Razkar had, oh, about two seconds to appreciate his victory, half-smiling as he watched the half-breed fly backwards and go head over heels across a boulder. He had to admit, it was a fine strike, and ended the fight...

Then he landed on his feet. Or, rather, he didn't.

The impact was the final blow that Tinnok didn't land, a jarring thud that seemed to travel up his spine and he went down to his knees. Hand ax fell from his hands and he crushed his eyes closed for a second, feeling acid burn through his veins as much as adrenaline.

He was lucky Tinnok was down, for if she wasn't, she could have ended him like a lamb.

"Wolf, huh?"

Panting and gulping in lungfuls of air, Razkar managed a wheezing laugh and threw his head up, still on his knees. His grin was wild now, flushed by the sun and the rush of victory and...

Everything seemed sharper, all of a sudden. The empty stands surrounding them, still echoing with roars for blood and death. The stone beneath them, half-covered with vines and dirt, and he fancied he could feel every grain of it now. Her breathing, her hands gripping stone and hauling herself over it, as exhausted as him and (he was somewhat happy to see) a little more bruised.

"Hey, what... whatever... fits..."

Another laugh, shared between them, and Razkar finally hauled himself upright. Bracing himself, legs straight, he gritted his teeth... and touched his toes. Now he yelped, low and deep and agonized, spine cracking and screaming as he did so until his fingers touched the stones. Then he twisted hard, left and right, lower back popping. He put his arms above his head, behind his back, twisted back, forth, back, forth...

By the time he was done, his legs had punished him again and he was flat on his back, looking up at the same sky as his... friend?

"Nice day off, no?"

Razkar chuckled, and this time he had enough breath in his lungs to make it sound vaguely Myrian. He lolled his head to the side and shrugged, which isn't easy to do when you're on your back.

"Could have been better... could have been much worse, too..."

For several chimes they just lay there, enjoying the stillness after Goddess knew how many frantic chimes of jarring, brutal movement. Razkar welcomed the empty head he had for the first few, his brain fried and deadened after their session and recharging itself by banishing all other concerns. The only other time he'd felt this kind of quiet in his head was...

Ah, of course. With Aya.

And like that, his mind started to fill. With thoughts of her, and the other half-breed a few feet away from him. With fears and doubts, frustrations and hopes. With a grunt and some slowness, he hauled himself up into a sitting position, sheathing his hand ax and his gladius. The latter he patted softly first, as if in apology for throwing it down in his anger.

Tinnok looked over lazily as Eagle got to his feet, slowly but steadily. He looked around, squinting through the sun, as if trying to meet the eyes of each of the ghostly crowd that was surveying them through time and the ether. This place... it had once been of blood, and death, and the glorification of both. Were they any better now, he wondered? They sacrificed their enemies without mercy, trained entire generations towards war, brutalized and best and exterminated at worst anything non-Myrian in their Jungle.

They were the nightmares that other races frightened their children with.

"But at least..." he whispered to himself, and to the crowd, conviction and understanding growing with each word, "... we do not kill our own. We are one nation now, however brutal it might be. We do not need to see our own people, brothers and sisters, butchered for a braying mob."

He smiled darkly, a new truth coming to his mind.

"No... we have a whole world of other races to sate out blades now..."

Then Razkar shook his head, as if annoyed and amused at himself in equal measure. Yes, fine philosophizing, boy, but how does it help your friend? He realized it did not... but all he could do was be there. Like Ayatah was with her friendship with Tinnok. Like Tinnok had been for that poor dog.

Razkar turned to her and nodded curtly to the entrance archway, where the Gates of Taloba waited beyond.

"I'll walk you back to the Barracks." She cocked an eyebrow and before she could argue about him being seen with her, he'd already started walking, pausing only to toss her scimitar back, which she caught... with both hands. "Just shut up and let a dumb male walk with you, wolf."

He made good on his words, and started walking.
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Try Your Hand [Razkar]

Postby Logos on March 16th, 2013, 1:57 pm

Skill and Lore Rewards


Razkar

Skill Lore
Observation - 3 Hand Axe: Weapon Trapping
Philosophy - 3 Tinnok: A Worthy Comrade
Gladius - 3 A Man Amongst Women
Acrobatics - 3 Knowing One's Place
Interrogation - 1 Tinnok: A Lucky Half-Breed
Brawling - 4 Losing Control Is Bad
Rhetoric - 2 'Forbidden' Love
Hand Axe - 4 N/a



Tinnok

Skill Lore
Observation - 3 Nature Conquers All
Acrobatics - 3 Scimitar Maintenance
Scimitar - 5 Scimitar: Basket Hilt Block
Interrogation - 1 Razkar: A Man Worth Many Women
Brawling - 3 Underapreciation Breeds Contempt
Intimidation - 1 Knuckle-biting to Freedom
Rhetoric - 2 To Deserve Or Not To Deserve
Philosophy - 2 Earning One's Hate



*Tinnok - You have updated your Seasonal Expenses on your CS so cannot take this Grade until it is updated. Once done go ahead and put them up there*



Shared Lores
The Arena of the Ancients
Ghostly Presences
Anger Can Lead to Understanding
Time Mars Us All
A Bond Forged From Suffering
Myrians Never Change



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Another great thread guys, really enjoyed the way you combine fighting and emotional content. Very nice. As always if there are any issues with the grade, or want to request anything specific in terms of Lore just PM me :)
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