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Taloba, home to the Myrians, is the thriving core of Falyndar. Inhabited by a fierce and savage tribe where blood sacrifices are normal and a way of life, they are untamed and proud of it. Warlike, and with their numbers growing, the Myrians are set on reclaiming what is rightfully theirs. [Lore]

Double The "Fun"

Postby Razkar on May 8th, 2013, 6:59 am

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20th Day of Spring, 511AV
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9th Bell


He lost himself in the dance, its endless variety. Every swing and swipe led to another, and had significance of its own. It could end your enemy's life or your own, if mistimed. The wielder knew for bitter, painful experience that in the whirl of mortal combat, time both sped up and slowed down. It was bizarre and addictive, that strange juxtaposition. You saw every feature and detail of your enemy. Every twitch and tensing of his muscles, before and after his weapon started moving. Your mind raced to match him, exceed him, end him.

And before you knew, it was over. For you or for him. And what set apart the living from the dead? Luck, sometimes, but mostly it was skill.

That came from two things alone: training and experience.

Razkar had much of both, but the former he could always improve by himself.

Thus you could have seen him there, alone in the Training Yards, still cool and shadowy with rising Syna still unable to peek over the high stone walls. It was not the usual humid nightmare that Falyndar by day was, but already he had a sheen of sweat glistening across his body. When he swung his arms a patter of salty beads would fly onto the sand, then the darkened smudges would vanish as he feet glided over them.

Clad only in a loincloth, gladius and ax filling his hands, Razkar practiced.

He imagined an enemy, a human, charging at him with the long sword his kind seemed to favor. He met it with his gladius, jerking his left hand up, blade perpendicular, knocking the opposing blade up and away-

-sidestepping to his right and chopping diagonally with his hand ax, burying it in-

No. They have shields, don't they? You have not faced them, but their warriors to have them.

-the iron-rimmed wood of a shield, throwing the human off balance-

-lashing out with his foot into the open air where a nice, tempting crotch would be, staggering the human further-

-then sliding backwards, leaning back as well, reacting as if the human had slashing wildly with his blade, keeping him back-

-slicing vertically upwards with his gladius as the human finished his swing, slashing through an imaginary arm, perhaps severing it, but either way sending that blade to the ground from useless fingers-

-sidestepping again, this time to his left, ax slashing sideways, lower, at the human's left leg-

-shattering a shin bone, bringing the screaming human down-

-backhanding the shield away from the cowering enemy with the backswing of his ax, leaving him open-

-cocking back his gladius and exploding it forwards, a lethal, final thrust with his gladius, jamming two feet of sharpened steel through the ribs, lungs, heart-

-twisting it, just as he was taught, opening the wound up further, tearing organs in two, releasing a fountain of blood-

-withdrawing and stepping away, leaving his enemy to topple and bleed out...

Razkar paced in a steady circle, breathing slightly heavier. Black eyes blinked and he half-expected (hoped?) to see an eviscerated human lying on the sands, further evidence of his skill. But his warrior... no, his soldier mentality took over, running through the drill... and it was satisfied.

Good. But it went your way too much. Swinging one is good enough, but you need coordination to wield two, and-

"It works better with an actual opponent, male."

His head snapped around and beheld a laconic, staring figure leaning against the archway from the Barracks. As it straightened and stepped forward, he could see it was female... a familiar female.

A pair of training swords in one hand, a training sword and an ax in the other. Intricate tattoo work covered much of her face, red and black, bringing out her fierce and ever-glowering eyes even better.

Razkar cocked his head to one side and sheathed his true weapons, hands flying up to snatch the wooden ax and gladius out of the air when she threw them without preamble.

"And a good morning to you, Erama..."
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Double The "Fun"

Postby Razkar on May 15th, 2013, 9:05 am

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As you've probably guessed, Erama did not waste time on pleasantries. The tattoo-faced female attacked her training the same way she did everything else: relentlessly, mercilessly and with a fierce joy that was unnerving even to other Myrians. She swiped her gladii through the air a few times to settle them in her hands as she circled Razkar, then planted her feet into her stance.

Razkar mirrored it, or tried to. Erama was by far the most accomplished two-hander in the fang, far outstripping his own ability. Some part of his mind was wondering why she was down here, but he ignored it.

First thing's first: mind on what's in front of you, and what's in front of you is a very dangerous fem-

She lunged, arms churning through the cool morning air.

Razkar jerked up his right arm more out of instinct than training, horizontal blade stopping her vertical slash, feet sliding him back and to the side to avoid the thrust from her right-

Gods, she's fast-

-but she was moving too, bare feet sliding, no, gliding over the sand, leaving neat and straight indents as she went, already slashing down with her left-

-forcing him to twist to the side to avoid it, suddenly sideways to her, the grim-faced female's right blade slashing horizontally, even lower, looking to take his leg out from under him, unless her jerked his other hand down-

-which he did-

-as expected-

-and her feint transformed into a thrust in mid-movement, her body burst forward with her arm to slam the blunt tip of the wooden gladius into his kidney.

Razakr staggered back with a his, feet staggering under him as he flailed madly, keeping up a screen of wood to keep her back. Over the waves of pain and the sound of his heart in his ears, he hear her steady but slightly-exasperated voice.

"Both arms, Raz! How many times must I say it, you have to start using both arms as one! You're still thinking left and right, when you should be thinking of the whole fight." She brandished her weapons and spun them in perfect harmony, finishing by coming up in her defensive stance. "Now, your turn-"

Razkar was already lunging, but she noted with satisfaction that it was not wounded male pride that was driving him on. She had to deal with that enough from the males who trained and sparred here, and while it was a useful tool in pounding them into the sand, it was a weakness she could not abide. No, what drove her fang-mate now was simply a desire to erase his mistake, to strive and meet the challenge.

To achieve victory.

He tried using speed against her, striking with both blades at once. But using them independently was still beyond him, so he swung them in the same direction, two blades headed at her in a sweeping horizontal blow. She stepped back lightly like a bird, barely disturbing the sand when she landed, wooden blades missing her completely-

-but he rallied, planting his feet, drawing back his arms and exploding outwards, a double thrust at her stomach and chest-

-which she batted aside, both blades held vertical, ripping outwards from in front of her chest to her side, knocking his strikes wide, away from her, opening his chest-

-into which she planted her boot.

Razkar went staggering back a second time, breastbone creaking in outrage, resisting the urge to rub it, denying him a weapon, knowing she wasn't finished-

And she wasn't, coming on again with her own thrust from her right, aiming for his damage chest, almost turning sideways as she lurched towards him, left blade tucked tight to her side, probably ready to come about with another sweeping-

Razkar blinked and saw his opening, knew in that frozen moment that it would not last, and seized it.

With a wounded grunt, body protesting under him and firmly put in its place, Razkar darted to her right, moving fast and low. She had twisted to her side to make her thrust and within a blink he was suddenly almost at her back, left blade backhanding towards her stomach, forcing her own left to slash it aside-

-the blade in her right hand backhanding towards his head and shoulders, spinning her body around to face him again-

-only for the shock of thick wood meeting thick wood to ripple through her arm as his right blade jutted up vertically, stopping it dead-

-and his head slammed forwards, forehead aimed square at her face-

-clanging against her jaw instead of her nose, however, as she jumped back.

Razkar gritted his teeth and felt his forehead throb, swearing that he probably had a few tooth marks in them after that jarring clash. But the pain was forgotten pretty much immediately, when he saw her work her jaw, glaring... and spit out a glob of blood onto the sand.

"Better." She said, and that would be all he'd get. Then that predatory smile was back on her face, body practically vibrating with savage enjoyment. "Now time for the hard stuff."

Oh, shyke.
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Double The "Fun"

Postby Razkar on May 15th, 2013, 2:59 pm

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Erama was every inch the product of her training. The Training Yards were without pity or restraint, and while they rarely crippled or killed their recruits, the instructors left plenty with broken bones and masses of bruises. You survived and progressed by learning everything fast and accurately.

Which was exactly what Erama was when she charged him.

Razkar was stunned at just how much she was holding back. Barely even breathing hard she spun as she charged, whirling body hiding her form, left hand gladius lashing out at head height-

-he ducked under it, some part of his screaming that was too obvious-

-and was rewarded with a spinning kick from her right foot crashing into his jaw.

Now he spun, aimlessly, stars dancing across his eyes, going with it, letting it throw him away from the devil woman. Salty, coppery blood filled his mouth and he could still hear her padding quickly over the sand, closing the gap.

He rolled to his side, bruised kidney squeezed and complaining, but he repressed the feeling. Quashed it. Because he had to be fast here. He stumbled upright and she slashed down low, going for his legs again-

-only for him to jump up, straight into the air-

-right gladius alright held vertically in front of himself to step the blow she was alreayd swinging at his head, an inverted repeat of her swing-and-kick combo for barely moments ago.

Even in the melee, fact lit by the strengthening sun and looking more the mask of savagery thanks to the reams of ink, Erama smiled proudly.

"Good. Learn fast, or die-"

Razkar lunged as she spoke the last word, hoping to catch her off-guard. She probably approved, but had no time to voice it, just sway back with her flexible body as his blow sailed wide, but he came on again-

-and she showed him what she could really do.

Her gladii flashed and thrust, their intended purpose. They could be honed to a razor's edge and lop off even the limbs from Dhani, but it was as thrusting, stabbing weapons they excelled. Razkar over-extended and fast as a snake's tongue she jabbed at his thigh, making him stumble-

-her other blade smashing again into his kidney, making him stagger even more as she slid past him to his side-

-but Razkar rallied, slashing and snarling backhanded, trying to keep her-

Her gladius was already moving, swiping out to block him-

-but it didn't block. It didn't even hit his blade... it hit his wrist. The male yelped as nerveless fingers dropped his blade and he was suddenly outnumbered in terms of weapons, struggling to right himself, jerking his remaining blade down as she thrust towards his belly again-

-lashing out instinctively, catching her under the kneecap.

Now Erama grunted and took a step back. Razkar was stunned, and that is hat ended the fight.

Her shock lasted only a moment before she rallied, both swords lashing out at his thighs, forcing him back-

-meeting in front of her, elbows bent then stabbing outwards at once-

-both blades catching her breastbone, making him cry out again, wind leaving his lungs in one long whoosh-

His eyes clouded. He felt that stinging swipe against his other wrist, felt the second sword drop-

-a hammering on his thigh, numbing it, killing one feet and sending him crashing down to the sand-

And then the killing blow. He expected that. Myrians weren't trained to duel or spar, they were trained to kill. In battle or ambush, you did not down your enemy then ask him to yield; you spilled his blood enough to ensure he would never rise again, and moved on.

A thunder-crack burst inside his skull as something slammed into it, a sound incongruously like wood being chopped the last thing his ears picked up... and then all was blackness.

He woke to water poured on his face. He spluttered and coughed and waved his flailing hands, until Razkar's eyes swam into focus and saw Erama's gleaming white teeth... and her other hand offering him a water skin.

"Getting better, male," she said, taking in his bruised and battered body with relish, "Got two hits in this time. Not bad..."

Razkar wanted to shoot something back. Wanted to make a quip or a cutting remark or just promise her that one goddamn day, he would be the one pouring the water on her. But instead he just smirked up at her, shaking his head.

"I'm petched either way, Era," he said, words muffled through his swollen jaw, and spoke the words that would haunt him for years afterwards, "You're indestructible..."
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Double The "Fun"

Postby Traverse on May 22nd, 2013, 3:16 am

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Razkar

Skill XP Earned
Acrobatics 2 XP
Dual Wield 3 XP
Endurance 2 XP
Hand Axe 1 XP
Tactics 1 XP




Lores Earned
Dual Wielding: Two Weapons Become One
Erama: Indestructible


Additional Notes :
There is something quite satisfying in seeing Razkar get thoroughly beaten down, and I think it stems from the knowledge that you know he's going to get back up again, better than ever. I didn't award any points in gladius this time around, those last three XP you need are going to need to be in something more hardcore than a training bout, even if it is one hardcore training bout. As always, nicely done.


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