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Taloba, home to the Myrians, is the thriving core of Falyndar. Inhabited by a fierce and savage tribe where blood sacrifices are normal and a way of life, they are untamed and proud of it. Warlike, and with their numbers growing, the Myrians are set on reclaiming what is rightfully theirs. [Lore]

Rise Again(st)

Postby Razkar on May 22nd, 2013, 7:10 am

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30th Day of Spring, 511AV
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14th Bell


"Do you enjoy getting beaten up, is that it?" Oxil's words were muffled around the hunk of black bread but his rolling eyes and shaking head got the message across well enough. "I mean, gods, man, every time you step in there with her you end up with new lumps."

"I never hear you complaining."


Oxil's facade of disbelief fell for only a moment, then returned. Razkar suppressed a smile and took another bite of his lunch. Ah, the poor male. Pining after a female so bad that he let her pound him with sticks just to get close.

"That's different."

"Oh?"

"Yeah, 'oh',"
the big man said with a grin, spreading thick arms and exposing a broad, bare barrel chest, "I can take 'em better than your scrawny arse..."

Razkar just grunted and finished his meal, flicking a glance at the massive weapon sitting next to his friend and fang-mate. Three feet of thick wood capped by a nail- and spike-studded metal head, even carrying it was a chore for Razkar. Not for Oxil, though; in fact, quite the opposite. The big male could wield it with something approaching precision... though when your weapon was quite capable of shattering shields and weapons alike, knock men off their feet and break bones through plate armor, who needed precision?

"Well, it stands," he said, standing to make his point and stepping away from the table. The mess hall was half-full of recruits, some from his fang, snatching away their half-bell for sustenance before returning to another day of trining. "I'm going. Wanna come watch?"

"Seen it before."
Oxil said with a grunt, carefully masking his urge to see the fearsome warrior he longed for. "Maybe next time."

"Suit yourself..."


Razzakr made his way swiftly to the Training Yards, the orderly and comforting sounds of hundreds of Myrians training, sweating, learning and suffering surrounding him like a warm cloak. From the mess hall he could walk to the Yards blindfolded (and had, on a bet, once... well, almost all the way there. He still swore they put that wall in just the day before...).

That reassured him. The stones that built this place were centuries old, but they stood. Thousands upon thousands of Myrians had walked the flagstones his feet marched over, and countless more would in the future. As he passed under the main arch, he brushed his fingers over one of the many plaques commemorating great victories, valiant heroes, sterling examples of his race and profession.

Warriors. All of them. And this is where they were forged.

"Took yer time, didn't ya?"

Or, he thought wryly and he stepped blinking into the sun, made all the brighter by the sand it struck, where those who were born warriors just became more deadly. Like her.

Erama crammed the last of her sandwich into her mouth and stood, chewing inexorably through ham and bread and rose with her training gladii already in her hands. Next to her were his weapons: a wooden gladius and a matching hand ax, just like his own. He walked over and set down his real weapons, lifted the blunt ones... good... good balance.

"You always get the good stuff." He said with a smile, whipping the practice weapons through the air and delighting in the smooth rush of air that met his ears. "Never those rotting bloody things."

"Yeah, well, some things you should take time with."


Razkar rolled his eyes at her tone and shrugged. "Look, Oxil was with me, he'll tell you, I scarfed down my lunch and got moving."

"He's not coming? Thought he was permanently attached to your arse."


Razkar's smile flickered for a moment. "You're too hard on him, female."

Erama just snorted and Razkar felt a pang of sympathy for his lumbering friend. It just wasn't meant to be. Erama didn't like anyone too much, and Razkar suspected her tastes may have run to those sans penis, shall we say... but either way, Oxil was not in her equation.

"... shall we get to it?"

Erama's eyes lit up like they always did when tedious social matters and conversation were put aside, and she could focus on what she lived for: combat. She stepped away from him and raised both her weapons, swinging both in perfect concert and stopping them dead before her.

"Thought'd you'd never ask."
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Rise Again(st)

Postby Razkar on May 22nd, 2013, 2:18 pm

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She came at him fast, but Razkar knew she was holding back. After last week, they both realized that he wasn't on her level with two weapons and beating him half to death inside of a chime would teach neither of them a thing.

Easy victories did not make great warriors; crushing defeats taught little but despair.

Erama slid to his right and swung horizontally, left blade held close defensively. Razkar chopped to the side and warded off the gladius, but the wooden sticks had barely crashed together before she drew it back, left bursting forwards in a thrust-

-which he parried as well, sliding to his left-

-to avoid the jerking kick she aimed at his stomach.

Erama turned to face him again with a slight smile. "Learn quick, don't you?"

"Don't try the same trick tw-"


She moved before he finished speaking, thrusting again, left and right, blindingly fast, forcing him back even as his gladius slashed from side to side to block her-

-ax held back, swinging wide to buy him some room-

-but the female swayed backwards, back straining as his blow missed-

-and his gladius slashed downwards instead, going for her right leg-

-but she spun to her left, going with her gravity as she was already leaning backwards, spinning, coming around further to his right, arm cocked out-

-smacking him hard on the side of the thigh.

Razkar yelped and crab-walked awkwardly away, weapons up. His hands didn't shake but every step sent pangs of pain shooting up his leg, making his teeth tighten. Still, Erama nodded all the same...

"Getting better, bit by bit," she said, scratching the back of her neck with one of her sticks. Razkar narrowed his eyes at the insult, but kept a wary watch on the other weapon. "But if that was real, you'd be hopping around right now... or lying on your back screaming trying to stop the spurt from where your leg was."

"Thank you for the image."

"You get those for free."

"Didn't realize I was paying."


Erama's eyes glittered again and she didn't need to expound on that. The gulp as the male's Adam's apple rose and fell told her that he understood.

This is payment.

She dove towards him but Razkar rallied. Being on the defensive would not win him any battles, and she would be expecting it. Her chop to his shoulder was smashed away by his gladius and before the vibration in his arm had even taken root, he moved in closer, swinging up and to the side with his ax, going for her ribs-

-only for her other gladius to knock it away, to his side-

-and he twisted to his right, left arm filled with his gladius bending inwards, elbow thrown out-

-but she ducked under it before it could connect, knees jerking her down and out of range-

Petch, this is gonna-

-and her right gladius thrust smack into his stomach.

He grunted and nearly doubled over as his intestines were quickly and brutally rearranged, wildly swinging vertically down one last time with his gladius-

-getting a glancing blow in on her forearm.

Razkar smiled even as he panted, hearing her hiss out surprised outrage. She looked up from the blooming purple mark to his face, smile now gone, replaced with a cold anger. He swallowed, but there was a set to his jaw now. His muscles already shone in the full sunlight, sand warm under his feet and blades heavy but not uncomfortable in his hands. He nodded curtly.

"Like you said... getting better."

"You'd still be impaled like a boar, and if you were, you wouldn't have been able to land that last blow."


He shrugged, willing to suffer a little just to goad her. If Erama had a flaw, it was that her pride in her ability bordered on arrogance, and that could be used against her.

By one matching her in skill, idiot. Not the likes of you.

"But it isn't, and it did." He held up his weapons, bruised abs already numbing as his body went to work dispersing chemicals around his bloodstream. "Ready when you are."

Erama glowered and came on again.
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Rise Again(st)

Postby Razkar on May 22nd, 2013, 3:29 pm

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Razkar spat and blood smacked onto the sand. Not that you could see it; the sands had been stained red for decades, perhaps even longer. Legend had it that the blood of countless recruits had soaked into it and forever stayed.

Razkar always wondered why rain didn't play a factor in that.

"Still cocky?"

He looked up at the female grinning across from his and struggled to straighten. Her latest attack was almost a blur, a dazzling series of feints and chopping, thrusting blows at his arms and legs. She was toying with him. Weakening him. But, even in her angered state, there was still a lesson there-

-and he managed to smash away one of her blows, chopping down towards her arm-

-only for it to jerk away and a whip-fast swipe from the end of her gladius to tag his across the jaw-

-right before her spinning kick caught him in the side.

She gave him a moment to recover, at least, not taking her tack of smacking her opponent down until he couldn't get back up again. Brutal but, as she'd said before, realistic. Why leave a lingering doubt on the battlefield, after all?

"Thought this was about teaching, not you getting your anger out."

"There's a difference?"

"Very funny."

"Wasn't joking."


Razkar wiggled his jaw painfully. "Neither was I. Got no interest in having the shyke beaten out of me for no gain, female. You're just looking to go over my head to boost yer ego, go find Oxil. I'm here to learn."

"Aw, your male pride get bruised?"

"Lil' bit, yeah."


Erama grinned, showing off those pearly whites that almost glowed like ivory. Or a piranha, Razkar thought sourly. Mollified by his honesty, she shrugged, readying her stance.

"Least yer honest. C'mon. Again."

Razakr weighed his options and decided... well, not decided, more remembered, that this was what Training with the army was. Pain, suffering and a slow, arduous progression to a higher level of skill. It took months, years, but everyone underwent it. You either accepted the harsh law of the Yards, or you left in disgrace. The instructors didn't really care either way; there was always fresh meat.

"Fine."

Whatever speed and agility he had left, he forced out of himself as he darted forwards, a new plan in mind. His first two strikes were simple, rudimentary, easily blocked and he knew she'd anticipate a deeper strategy behind them. His foot lashed out towards her from the side-

-she slashed down in a half-circle to bruise his shin-

-but then his leg snapped back in, her blow hitting nothing-

-and his ax hacked into her arm instead.

Another outraged hiss and she came in from his right, hammering at him twice and shaking his grip all the way to his shoulder, murder in her eyes.

C'mon, get closer, he thought grimly, and braced himself-

-wincing as she disarmed his left with a quick blow to his wrist, left cocked back to knock his ax away-

-but he lunged closer, against her expectations, left hand flying out to grab the gladius in her right hand, holding it firm, denying it to her-

-confusion flared in her eyes-

-and his forehead crashed towards her face.

"Fuck!"

She staggered and struck out blindly at his side with her left, ripping her right away, trying to free her gladius, but couldn't see, couldn't believe he'd-

-Razkar roared as the pain tore through him and hurled himself at her, dropping his ax.

The two smashed onto the ground with only two blades left between them. Razkar got the best of it, though, landing on top, taking a smug satisfaction in hearing his weight smash the air from Erama's lungs as she'd done to him. Not wasting a moment he slid his grip down to her wrist, smashing it over and over on the sand until it came loose-

"Bastard!"

She hammered into his ribs with her other sword, bruising and battering until his right hand slammed it down as well. Almost spitting with fury she tried a repeat headbutt but could gain no leverage, pinned on on her back, instead trying to jerk up her knee-

-but found his own legs already pressed together and between hers. He smirked down at her even as he smashed one of her wooden swords from her hand.

"Please, like that wouldn't be the first thing yoAAAARGH!"

Erama snarled like an animal and jerked her head to the side, sinking her teeth into her upper arm. Blood from her gushing nose spilled down and onto, into the blood that rose from her marks and Razkar reared back in agony-

-giving her a moment on her left, pulling up her sword-

-until Razkar let go of her right and slammed a quick cross into her jaw, paying her back-

-but not before her sword cracked him on the side of the head, even as her head snapped to the side from his punch.

Razkar toppled off her, equilibrium shattered by the blow, brain bounced around. He rolled, not knowing or caring for the moment that he could do little else, hands grasping about for something, anything-

-fingers closing around something wooden-

-he managed to get to his knees, finding her practice sword in his shaking hands...

... and finding her on trembling feet, face bloody, jaw bruised, panting as heavy as him.

Anger and aggression flashed between them like lightning between mountains. Both seemed to know what the other was thinking, mainly because it was the same combination of stubbornness and sheer anger. Razkar knew he could not win now, and didn't care as long as he got some final licks in. Erama knew she would win, but what would the damn male break on his way down?

"Now, I have to say..." both their heads snapped to the nonchalant figure leaning in the archway, chewing on a hunk of bread "... that was damned satisfying to watch."

Oxil's words, his very appearance, drain much of the tension from the arena. The two fighters looked at each other again with fresh eyes, as if seeing themselves from the outside, and... realizing how ridiculous they looked.

The frowns ceased. Lips uncurled... and then curled up. Chests began to heave and shoulders bob.

"You've looked... better, in the face, Era."

Erama didn't snarl or spit; she was already chuckling around her words. "Gonna propose from down there, Raz?"

And then, to Oxil's relief and the surprise of all, laughter pealed through the Training Yards. Razkar laughed so hard he had to balance himself on the sword like a stick, agony in his bleeding arm and side numbed despite everything. Erama was already crouched down, wincing and chuckling in equal measure even as blood leaked into her mouth.

"Fuck..." she finally said, shaking her head and tossing her weapon aside "... got a hard head, male."

"Yeah,"
Razkar mumbled back, looking as his gashed arm as he grunted back to his shaking, aching feet, "Yer teeth aren't too bad, either, female."

"Lady gotta improvise."

"Since when were you a 'lady'?"

"Since you started sucked at it."

"Alright, alright,"
Oxil said wearily, knowing they'd be at this until sunset if he didn't step in, "We got class, if you've both finished. Poisons, remember?"

Erama and Razkar both groaned as one, half-limping toward the archway with every reluctance. Oxil just rolled his eyes again and sighed. Always the shepherd for his friends... but they were worth having.
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Rise Again(st)

Postby Magpie on May 26th, 2013, 8:30 pm

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Razkar :
XP:
Weapon: Gladius +2
Weapon: Hand Axe +2
Dual Wield +2
Brawling +2
Tactics +1

Lores:
Erama and Oxil: Not Happening
A Lesson vs A Beating


Notes :
Figured I'd knock this one out quickly while you're waiting on the monster thread earlier in the queue. A lovely read, as usual, and a good spread of skills.


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