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The Death of a Father

Postby Merevaika on July 4th, 2015, 9:28 am

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23rd Winter 509

She had been sitting in front of the quarantine tent for three long bells now. Snow had started falling faintly again, replenishing the already thick layer that coated the ground from the day before, turning the deep footprints into fresh white snow again. Despite the thick, fur-lined boots she wore, and warm woven clothes that shielded her from the snow, she still felt a slight chill get to her, seeping through the gaps in the cloth and chilling her slightly, goosebumps rising along her arms and legs. Others remained inside the confinements of the main tent, soaking up the heat the fire produced with joy and eagerness, trying to survive through the flu that had reached their pavilion by staying warm and well. Her mother had urged her to return to them, to keep warm with the few that remained healthy. Merevaika had remained silent and stubborn each time.

The woman came out of the tent once more, looking hot and sweaty from the stress and illness. Merevaika's mother was the only one who had offered to tend to the ill, despite knowing the danger. Then again, the rest were young or unskilled with healing, or both. Perhaps she had realised that she would the be the only one capable of helping, that her efforts would be the only ones that could possibly heal them. Whatever the reason was, the aid wasn't doing anything for the ill, but was detrimental to her own health. Her daughter could see the effects of the illness gripping her too.It would only be so long until she would be unable to help others, but would need the help herself.

"Please, daughter, for your sake, stay inside. You have seen the flu, seen its effect. It will get you too, I fear, you too," she begged once more, lingering at the entrance. The woman feared to go any closer, not wanting to be the one who gave her daughter the illness that had invaded their pavilion. The girl was still so young, she had so much more of her life to live. She shouldn't have needed to see pain like this. She shouldn't have been fearing for her life like this.

Merevaika stared at her blankly, taking in the words but not responding. She had drifted into this state a few days ago, when her younger sister died. That had been the first death, and Merevaika had been so lost and confused as to why the gods would take a child so young and innocent. After all, Caltha had only just turned nine, and her life was ended soon after that. Following that, she had been quiet and reserved, wandering the pavilion with a lost look in her eyes, with no purpose but lost in thought, thinking about why the gods would be so cruel.

Then, when the twins had died, she had stopped wandering, and began to sit by the infirmary tent waiting for... she hated to admit it, but waiting for her father to die. He too had contracted the symptoms of the disease, the aching bones and the putrid cough, the fever that burned inside and rendered him helpless. It appeared that death was inevitable, but she prayed, every moment of being awake, and in her dreams too, prayed to whatever god or goddess she could name, pleading that they could spare her father.

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The Death of a Father

Postby Merevaika on July 4th, 2015, 9:29 am

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"If you will not go inside, take the cloak from my strider. Let it warm you, as it had warmed me, and had warmed him. Let it shield you from illness, let it protect you from harm." The words broke through another prayer, this one directed to Dira, the goddess of death herself. Please, you have taken so much from us already. Please, great goddess, take no more. Merevaika's mother stood there, just a little longer, before returning inside, knowing that Merevaika would not reply. It would be pointless to wait, especially since she had other jobs to do. She only hoped that her daughter would abide to her requests.

Apollo, her mother's strider, slowly came over, as if understanding what his bonded one had said. The noble horse knelt beside the young girl, offering the cloak that covered his dappled cream back with a soft whinny. She stared blankly at the deep purple material, cascading down the horse's back, covering the similar purple blanket. She did not respond. A young yearling joined this horse, dark with a dark mane, and dark eyes. Eryunt, her strider, her bonded mount.

At the company of her bonded one, she reached out a hand, first to brush Eryunt's mane softly then to take the cloak, which was soft and warm. She could go against her mother's wishes, but not her strider's. Eryunt was part of her, the only one she would ever truly listen to. Apollo rose, his duty done, and joined the other horses, but Eryunt stayed with her, knowing that Merevaika needed the company, whether or not she would admit it.

Merevaika slowly stroked his mane, seeking strength from him. He was warm and steady, enjoying the affection. It made her feel bad for ignoring him the past few days, but Eryunt didn't think that way. They had been bonded for a year and three seasoms now and he always seemed to understand her. He understood her need to be alone for a while, then for her need to be with him. They hadn't even ridden together yet, but their connection was strong. Merevaika smiled at the thought. She couldn't wait until he was old enough to be ridden.

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Postby Merevaika on July 4th, 2015, 9:29 am

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Another bell passed like that. Merevaika sat on the stone she had sat on every day for the past three days. A thick purple cloak wrapped around her shoulders, a hug from her mother who could not do it herself for fear of infecting her child and bringing death upon her too. Her strider's support as he waited beside her, signs of affection being swapped between the two.. The snow softly drifting down around them, magical and breathtaking. And the noises of the ill behind them, reminding them of why they were waiting.

It was then when her mother came out again, even more tired than before. Merevaika hated to think what would happen when she became unable to treat the ill. Who would take that job then? No one, she knew it, and then the ill would have no chance. All they would be able to do would be to sleep and wait and try to fight back. The woman pushed back strands of hair, stuck to her face, and wiped her hands on her apron, hands that looked bloodstained.

Her eyes were red and raw, wet with tears.

"Your father wishes to see you," she said softly, her words carrying death. Merevaika rose slowly, cloak falling to the ground. Eryunt stepped away, letting the girl passed. Her father would only have one reason to see her, one reason that was greater than the threat of passing the illness on. It had filled the air, the knowledge that even the Ankal knew he was going to die.

Merevaika entered the tent with slow deliberate movements, taking it in without wanting to. She couldn't see a lot, just two beds that contained figures covered in sheets, and a table on the opposite side, covered with bottles and herbs. One of the figures moved slightly, groaning in pain. The other remained still, but alive, the movements of her chest still visible under the blankets that coated her, several layers thick. Her mother led her further before she could take a closer look. She didn't care. She didn't want a closer look.

They passed the two beds, and through a cloth partition designed to allow the Ankal some privacy. Her mother faltered before she entered, and lingered at the side to let her daughter pass. Then, once Merevaika had fully entered, she disappeared, leaving the girl alone in the dark silence.

The lighting in the section was low, muffled by the cloth that formed the partition. Merevaika was almost glad because of it; with the poor lights, she just couldn't make out much, hiding reality that she didn't wish to see. She slowly shuffled forward, towards the low bed where her father lay, coughing and snuffling. At noticing her arrival, he sat up slightly, moving rolls of blankets into place until he could rest comfortably on them. Suddenly, he seemed to gain just a little strength, but not a lot.

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Postby Merevaika on July 4th, 2015, 9:32 am

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Merevaika knelt next to him, head bent in respect, but more because she didn't want to see the effects of illness on him. She wanted to remember the brave, strong, caring man she knew, not a sick one confided to bed. "Father," she said softly, taking his hand which hung beside her. It was scorching hot, hot and sweaty, but he gripped tightly, showing perhaps a little strength. Perhaps he would survive this? Merevaika knew it was foolish hoping.

"Daughter," he replied, echoing her tone of voice, "Daughter, why do you not look at me?" Then, she she didn't reply, he lifted up her chin, speaking softly but sternly, "Did I not teach you to look someone in the eye when they speak to you?" What he said was in good jest, but Merevaika felt guilty, like a little child caught doing something they shouldn't have. She had disappointed her father at the last time she would ever see him. "Do not fear me, daughter," he continued, brushing back her hair to see his daughter's face clearly one last time, "I am still the same man I always was. I have not changed. I am still your father."

But he had changed, whatever he said. His face was creased with lines of age and exhaustion, brought upon him by the illness. His eyes sagged and mouth drooped. And his head was clean shaven. He had only ever done that once before, when his first Strider died of old age. Merevaika had been very young when he told her about it, but he spoke with such emotion that she could never forget. Unlike other Drykas, who wore wraps to remember the deceased, her father did the opposite. He shaved his head and scattered the strands to the wind, a sacrifice for the lost loved one.

This time, however, he was preparing for his own death.

"Merevaika, tell me, how are your brothers? And your older sister, and my first wife? Are they well?" The Ankal asked, wanting to know of the state the rest of his pavilion was in.

Merevaika remained silent. Was it better to tell him the truth, or not? "Your wife is fine, healthy, and tending to her young son. They keep away from everyone else, mostly, and go out to check and set traps often, to feed us all."

"And Tarou, how is he? And your sister Ywana?" He asked of the two siblings she didn't want to mention.

Merevaika hesitated again, taking a deep breath. "Tarou is dangerously unwell. His mother says he is fine, but he is weaker than usual, and I can hear him coughing through the tents. Ywana coughs also, but it is not too bad. She is still strong, and replaces my mother with the role of cooking, but spends a lot of her time training with her quarterstaff. But I fear she may grow worse."

"No, Ywana is strong, she will not. If she still stands and fights, she will not fall. Yet I fear for Tarou. If his mother tries to ignore the illness, it will become too late to treat when she can't ignore it." The Ankal shook his head, "No, it is not good for him to pretend to be well."

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Postby Merevaika on July 4th, 2015, 9:33 am

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"I... I am sorry to bring such news, father. I wish I could tell you better."

"The harbinger of bad news is not the one who made the bad news happen. There is nothing you could do about it. I am just glad you speak the truth. Now, tell me, have you been practicing with your bow?"

"I have not, father, I apologise. But the death of my sisters has troubled me too much to concentrate." Once again she felt like she had disappointed her father, "But I shall, I will practise as much as I can."

"Always keep a steady mind, daughter, for you must always have a steady hand. Child, what will you do when the illness has passed? You will need to provide for yourself, and your family. You must practise whenever you can, to increase your skill."

"What family? I will have none. Your wife will almost certainly return to the pavilion she came from, with her child. And Ywana has a fiance to marry. Who else will survive? Dira has taken you all from me!" With that came a small weep, a cry for mercy. The Ankal wiped away Merevaika's tears.

"Our family will get through this. There won't be many, but those few will remain strong, stronger than others after all they have been through. Yes, my wife will return to her pavilion, but she is a woman of great tradition and community. She would not survive in a pavilion like this one. She will no longer remain Stormchaser. You shall, Merevaika, promise me that. You shall always remain Merevaika of the Stormchaser pavilion?"

"Father, I would never give up my names or identity, whatever happened. You will always remain in my heart. I will always be a Stormchaser."

Her father smiled, squeezing her hand tightly. "Let Serifal guide you, daughter of the Drykas. Let Rakivas ride beside you, join Eryunt in harmony."

His grip on her hand loosened as he finished the words, eyes drifting shut. For a second, there was stillness, then Merevaika let go. Her father had lived and loved, but death had come for him. Death had taken him from her. Tears started streaming down her face as she tried to comprehend this, but nothing was clear anymore. Nothing was right.

She left the tent with the same tears leaving a trail in the ground, a line of dampness as she pushed past her mother and ran towards the horses. With frustration, anger and sorrow, she mounted the first horse she came across, and her running changed to riding.

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The Death of a Father

Postby Dravite on July 5th, 2015, 11:16 pm

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XP Award:

  • Observation: 3
  • Animal Husbandry: 1
  • Logic: 1
  • Socialisation: 2


Lore:

  • The flu brings death on the plain
  • The loss of a family member
  • Dira: Goddess of Death
  • Eryunt: A special bond
  • Observation: The look of a dying man
  • Drykas: everyone pulls their weight in times of need
  • Stormchaser: A secret name


Notes: A well told story. I’m sorry I couldn’t award you too much in the way of XP. Let me know if you think I have missed anything here and be sure to edit your grading request!

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