by Satevis on May 6th, 2012, 6:53 am
I'm liking this plot. Satevis was a Benshira before he became Ethaefal, and a major part of his character is that he believes he fell to Mizahar because he hadn't yet achieved whatever purpose Yahal set out for him when he was told to leave his homeland in the first place. And since sacrifice is a big theme with the Benshira, he would be all over this.
Although I think it's probably best if they don't give up their lives? It makes it more meaningful for the Ethaefal, because if they give up their lives to seal the rift, then it's basically over. But if they don't give up their lives, they have to go on knowing that they managed to stop any more from falling through, but they're still here.
Also, what happens to Ethaefal when they die? Do Syna and Leth just claim them again?
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