Thread Award!
Character Name: Euthisa Skills: Seduction +2, Rhetoric +1, Observation +1, Lore: Flirting with a Handsome Man Discreetly, Notes: Flirted with Avon I see,
Character Name: Vaas Skills: [Weapon] Staff +2, Observation +2, Falconry +1, Rhetoric +1, [Playing Musical Instrument] Flute +1, Lore: Laughing at One's Own Fall, Meeting an Old Friend Again, Notes: Wacking yourself with the staff, also the tree, hearing the birds, your bird is evil,
Character Name: Avon Lomondir Skills: Hunting +2, Seduction +2, Rhetoric +1, Observation +1, Lore: Small Talk With a Pretty (Lonely) Woman, Identified Foreigner, Notes: Flashbacking to your hunt, a lot of flirting there,
Character Name: Aela Calder Skills: [Weapon] Longbow +2, Rhetoric +1, Observation +1, Lore: Meeting an Old Friend Again, Notes: Archery practise,
Nitpicky time. Euthisa, Mizahar doesn't have roller coasters (if there were any chance of there being any, I'd build one in Hai), so a "life roller coaster" is a metaphor no Mizaharian should make. Aela, miss your mark a few more times. People do get lucky, I know, but getting lucky and hitting the target all the time, even if not in center, just comes off a bit unrealistic.
I gave you all rhetoric for your talking... I also gave you all a point in Observation for those sly deductions. Try and play according to your level and make more misses. You'll earn more points being realistic.
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