[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

[Coud Von Voltaire]

Coud Von Voltaire is ready to be review.

The description of the dolls are empty at the moment.

[Zaed Martel]

Ready to be reviewed, here's my character sheet :

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic34769.html

[Daedrus]

It is mostly completed but I sense there are things wrong. I would really appreciate if the CS was looked at.

Note: I will be drawing up pictures for it fairly soon for I dislike using pictures that are not my own.

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post268449.html#p268449

[Banshee]

Hello hello!

Dreadfang :

Praetorian posted a Note on your CS.

Solin :

I posted a Note on your CS.

Zyest :

I posted a Note on your CS.

Coud Von Voltaire :

I posted a Note on your CS.

Zaed Martel :

I posted a Note on your CS.

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[Banshee]

Hello hello!

Daedrus :

I posted a Note on your CS.

x

[Victorias]

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic34020.html

And I'm changing the name now... I'm posting because I deleted the first CS and put in another.

[Banshee]

Hello hello!

Adh :

Phoenix has posted a Note on your CS.

x

[Victorias]

I know that was for a completely different character... Just the same thread. I gave up on the original because I didn't get much information on what exactly to fix. No examples or anything...

[Lakina Fairntune]

Name: Lakina Fairntune. Otherwise called White-Tip.
Race: Kelvic
Animal Form: Red Fox
Age: 8
Born: 12th of Spring 505 AV
Height: 5'6"
Weight: Slim in build
Hair: Ginger-Brown, Quite bushy. Usually in a long braid down her back. Braid ends with a little white tip.
Facial Features: Slender Face, Pale and slightly freckly in complexion. Big, sharp, deep brown eyes, sometimes look as if she has no pupil, as the iris colour slightly merges with the pupil. sharpened teeth. Looks early 20's.
Birth City: Alvadas

Likes: Warm, cosy places; Rabbit (either cooked or raw); Exploring; Trying new things; Good, hearty food.
Dislikes: Long periods of time without food; Potential threats; Being alone, Heights, Being forced to do something; Bland food.
Personality: Shy, wary and mistrusting at first, due to harsh treatment when she was younger, however she is loyal, trust-worthy, obedient and dependent once she trusts you. She is largely against fighting, however she will only fight in defense or as a last resort. When she does fight she can be quite fierce.
Ethics: Would never eat fox, Robin or Bluejay, no matter how hungry she was. Will only fight in defense or as a last resort. Allows the line between right and wrong to blur occasionally.

Backstory: Born in Alvadas on 12th of Spring, 505 AV to a Kelvic mother and father. Her mother's animal form was a Robin and her father's was a Bluejay, yet even though they were both birds, she turned out to be a Red fox. In Alvadas, Lakina's father and mother dabbled in the art of illusions and made a large amount of their money through performing their illusions and trading with the rich traders who would often come to Alvadas. However, her father was tragically killed by a falcon, owned by one of the visiting traders, when Lakina was three, and her mother died shortly after in her grief. Lakina went to live with a landlord and his wife, Mr and Mrs Patris. They took pity on her and allowed her to stay as long as she wished. Mrs Patris began to realize that she was maturing very quickly and, after watching her change one day, decided to make use of her skills and employed her as a thief. She would steal food and other goods for them, and sometimes even luring the customers to the Patris' lodging house. Mrs Patris was always very busy with the customers and so she never got much of a formal education. Eventually, Lakina began to dislike the stealing and asked to leave so she could explore the world, however Mrs Patris wouldn't allow it and she was often beaten to keep her in check. Mrs Patris often made her son follow her when she went out to steal, to make sure she didn't run away, and as he was much larger than her, it worked. One night, when she tried to slip away once more, she was confronted by the son and beat him until he was knocked out. She ran away with the things she had stolen from her captors and left the city, and her old life behind, adopting the nick name of White-Tip; a name her father used to call her when she was little, due to the white tip to her braid. She was driven by the subconscious need to find a bondmate, as were all Kelvics, and a desire to see the great wide world that her parents had so adored, and she eventually came to the city of Syliras

Posessions:
-1 set of clothing (Cloak and footwear included)
-1 Waterskin
-1 Backpack containing: 1 set of toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap); Food for a week; 1 eating knife; Flint and steel.
-100 Gold Rimmed Mizas
-1 large (4 person) tent
-Large tarp
-100ft of rope
-Flint and steel
-Lantern
-2 Torches
-Bedroll
-Blanket
-Fishing tackle and hooks
-A Zavan horse, goes by the name of Brindle
-A full set of tack
-A large set of saddle bags

Family Heirloom: A book written to her by her mother, filled with little messages, teachings and stories, that she wanted to pass on to her daughter. On the inside page is a drawing of a Bluejay and a Robin in a nest together.

Skills:
Stealth- +10(sp)
Riding- +10(sp)
Observation- +5(sp)
Tracking- +10(sp)
Sewing- +5(sp)
Cooking- +5(sp)
Begging- +5(sp)
Foraging- +10(rb)

[Wanda Endust]

My character sheet is finally ready for review!