Completed Long Time, Let's Fight II

[Roderick]

As he'd thought, the dirt smacked the Kelvic square in the face, blinding him "Shyke!" Tendo called as he tried to wipe the earth from his eyes; Roderick kicked his stomach, but he didn't budge, and continued to let Roderick hit him. He moved before the hunter could finish his attack. "I'm a tiger, bum. I have great ears, and SMELL for that matter." the Kelvic smirked "And when you go home, take a shower." he smirked again. Tendo surged at Roderick, using his ears and nose He punched Roderick in the side and palmed his face. "Too bad your trick didn't work!" Tendo said confidently - then tripped over his own feet. He put his arms out in front of him to catch himself before he hit the ground. All the same, Roderick had an opening; he ran at him and delivered a savage kick to the ribs, hurting his foot - and flipping Tendo off balance. He delivered another kick, then another, the blows raining down on the Kelvic's chest and gut. He stumbled back at the sight of Sei on the ground; he looked at his friend and suddenly his pent up anger erupted. "SHYYYKE!" Roderick bellowed, face to the sky, the tendons in his neck tensed, "Stupid bastard..." he wheezed hoarsely, resting his hands on his knees and spitting "I came here...to train with you; instead we're beating each other up like... some drunken idiots in a bar." he spat again, "You don't need to give me... gifts and offer me training to... get something from me - I'd have taught you if...you'd just asked," he sucked in another breath of air, his head swimming - the blows to his head must have been harder than he'd thought, "You...are so...petchin' lucky...that I don't want...to kill you..." He turned and walked away from the Kelvic, leaving him where he was. Roderick took his waterskin from his pack and took a great gulp of it; it was still fairly cool, and it helped ease some of the pain in his head. He sank down to the dirt, leaning his back against the tree, left leg bent up towards his chest so he could lean his arm on it. Breathing slowly to fill his lungs with air again and calm the throbbing ache in his chest, he move his arm off his knee every now and then to take a sip from the waterskin. As his breathing returned to normal and the waterskin grew lighter the pains in his head ebbed; it seemed he'd just been breathless and thirsty. The anger bled from him, leaving a bad taste on his tongue. He shut his eyes and just listened to the sounds of the woods; the rustling of the leaves and the whisper of the wind soothed him like a hummed melody. He waited for Sei.

[Sei Tendo]

Sei winced as the taste of blood fiilled his mouth. Why the petch is he kicking me so hard? He thought, rolling to his left as roderick began to speak. "Jeez." He muttered, getting to his feet and feeling around his ribcage. Nothing major. He thought with a sigh. He walked over to Roderick and smiled. "You win again, I guess." He said, wiping the dirt from his eyes. "Sorry if I was to hard, I just wanted you to teach me." He said bluntly.

Sei rolled his shoulders and yawned. After he spat out the last of the blood he put a hand on Roderick's shoulder. "Will you teach me to use a bow?" He asked.

[Roderick]

Roderick heard the Kelvic climbing to his feet, then spitting; the sound of boots on leaves, then dirt, reached the hunter's ears as Sei made his way over to him. Sei sounded fairly pleasant as he said, "You win again, I guess. Sorry if I was too hard, I just wanted you to teach me." Roderick heard Sei yawn, then spit again. The rustling all around him seemed louder now he couldn't see anything; he was impressed by how good the Kelvic's hearing was. Roderick felt a hand on his shoulder, "Will you teach me to use a bow?" reaching his ears, spoken by Sei. He opened his eyes, half-blinded by the sun's rays; Sei knelt in front of him, looking at him expectantly. The hunter held out his waterskin for the Kelvic to take, nodding at him, "I'll train you, Sei." he told him, "but if we're back at the Stallion anytime soon you're buying me lunch," he was only half joking about the last.

[Radiant]

Roderick :

Experience

Skill	XP Earned
Observation	+1 XP
Rhetoric	+1 XP
Intimidation	+1 XP
Weapon: Longbow	+1 XP
Running	+1 XP
Body Buulding	+1 XP
Unarmed Combat	+1 XP
Brawling	+1 XP
Tactics	+1 XP

Lores

Lore Earned

Another Round of Spar with Sei

Fighting "Dirty"

Loots

Sei :

Experience

Skill	XP Earned
Observation	+1 XP
Intimidation	+1 XP
Running	+1 XP
Unarmed Combat	+1 XP
Tactics	+1 XP

Lores

Lore Earned

Another Round of Spar with Roderick

Maybe I Was Too Hard?

Loots

Notes :

Like I said, Roderick. Avoid using blue text on blue background. Also, try not to repeat everything your partner sad and do to the T in your posts.

I know that this is an old thread, but keep this in mind for your future threads as it's very important.

Since you are both novices, might I suggest that you both write your PCs struggling with what they do? This isn't really a big issue since your opponent is a novice as well, but if you write like this against a Competent, Expert, or even Master, then it becomes a big issue of overplaying.

Keep what I said in mind.

And you both write longer now, good, keep it up.

Anyway, enjoy your grades.

My radiance is not bright enough?

If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, beam me a PM and we can work it out.