Sei :
Experience
Lores
Loots
| Skill | XP Earned |
| Weapon: Shortsword | +1 XP |
Lores
| Lore Earned |
| Awaiting New Challengers |
| Being An Arrogant Prick |
| Maybe I was Too Harsh... |
| Sword And Shield |
| Roderick: Arch-rival And Best Friend |
Loots
Roderick :
Experience
Lores
Loots
| Skill | XP Earned |
| Observation | +2 XP |
| Unarmed Combat | +2 XP |
| Brawling | +1 XP |
| Endurance | +2 XP |
| Rhetoric | +1 XP |
| Weapon: Shortsword | +2 XP |
| Weapon: Small shield | +2 XP |
Lores
| Lore Earned |
| New Challenger Approaches |
| Sei's Insults: Getting Boring |
| Berserk Button: Insulting My Archery Skill |
| Sei: Arch-Rival And Best Friend |
| Taking Up The Sword |
Loots
Notes :
Sei, as I said before, avoid using exaggerating words as you are still a novice in Unarmed Combat. Words like..
Little effort? Simultaneous coordinated strikes? Those are the skills of a Competent or above, maybe an expert if you said "Little effort". One does not fight with "little effort" as a Novice.
Your other posts also portrayed Sei as an (at least) Competent unarmed fighter... this would not do. I know you properly play his lack of skill in being a swordsman, but you still overplayed his unarmed, this happened too many times already.
I will keep giving you XP penalties until you alter this overplaying issue, Sei.
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Rod, I advise you make a distinction to the words spoken by other people compare to Rod's own words. I, myself, used bold such as...
""You're better than before, but not enough for me."
And giving it a paragraph of its own, not incorporating other's dialogues to my own paragraph. It causes much less confusion.
I know you are doing good now, but your replies in this particular thread still repeated too much of your partner's dialogue. If it's possible, try to describe those words with your own words, without CTRL C + V most of the time.
Furthermore, I love how you play Rod according to his skill level.
The description on his competency on the bow and awkwardness on unarmed and sword were lovely. Keep it up.
Sei wrote:When Roderick had taken his stance he dashed forward, and with little effort, he used his left palm to go for Rods head, and simultaneously used his right to punch Roderick in the stomach
Little effort? Simultaneous coordinated strikes? Those are the skills of a Competent or above, maybe an expert if you said "Little effort". One does not fight with "little effort" as a Novice.
Your other posts also portrayed Sei as an (at least) Competent unarmed fighter... this would not do. I know you properly play his lack of skill in being a swordsman, but you still overplayed his unarmed, this happened too many times already.
I will keep giving you XP penalties until you alter this overplaying issue, Sei.
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Rod, I advise you make a distinction to the words spoken by other people compare to Rod's own words. I, myself, used bold such as...
""You're better than before, but not enough for me."
And giving it a paragraph of its own, not incorporating other's dialogues to my own paragraph. It causes much less confusion.
I know you are doing good now, but your replies in this particular thread still repeated too much of your partner's dialogue. If it's possible, try to describe those words with your own words, without CTRL C + V most of the time.
Furthermore, I love how you play Rod according to his skill level.
The description on his competency on the bow and awkwardness on unarmed and sword were lovely. Keep it up.
My radiance is not bright enough?
If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, beam me a PM and we can work it out.
