Completed Investigations and Tribulations (Fall 10)

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This shining population center is considered the jewel of The Sylira Region. Home of the vast majority of Mizahar's population, Syliras is nestled in a quiet, sprawling valley on the shores of the Suvan Sea. [Lore]

Investigations and Tribulations (Fall 10)

Postby Bolivar on October 22nd, 2013, 5:55 pm

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Petch it all.

Sarah's strong grip around his throat there was little Bolivar can do to free himself from the her grip. Coughing as strained breathes worked it's way through his body. Though the lack of air was not the main concern for the squire it was Sarah's touch upon his skin. The touch that tore every part of his being and augmented Sarah's hold on him.

Though she might have been leeching him unknowingly before it was nothing compared to the rate she was harvesting his energies. Trying to dig his axe deeper into the woman earned Bolivar a shout of pain from Sarah before a backhand sent the squire reeling. His mind a daze put his hands up at the offending face, filled with fear and fury aplenty. Shoving Sarah's face back she retaliated with a vicious bite on the squire's right arm.

The pain was enough to snap Bolivar out of his delirious state as his free hand went to Sarah's stomach. Pounding and thrashing to no avail Bolivar heard a triumphant cry come from Sarah above him focused on the squire's expression. Bolivar's hand finding Sarah's bare breast gave a hard squeeze before trailing his hand down to her stomach. Fine. If this vagik wanted his djed she was would it.

A wordless shout escaped Bolivar's lips as his left hand quaked, grasping for another reimancy play. That grey translucent stuff, he had no reserves left. This was res that he never intended to use. Giving it shape and form res turned blade as Bolivar shakily transmuted the res in his hand. Driving the makeshift wedge up Sarah's body Bolivar felt her seize up and contort for a tic before falling dead on the squire's shoulders.

Unceremoniously shoving her aside Bolivar gasped for breathe as the rains washed away the blood that flowed in that moment. Looking at his hand the squire noticed that the ice shank had also pierced him, making for a even bigger mark of reimancy for the mage squire.

His breathes came in coughs and fits before finally he found himself laughing. Laughing of all damned things? He was alive! Bolivar had managed to kill that petching crazy bitch. He was going to live and see that young maiden that had been his crutch since coming to Syliras. Bolivar was going to do it. He would do everything in his power to make Shiress fall for him he would-

Hunching over Bolivar's eyes shot open as he realized the danger has not passed. Sarah's leeching was still going? No this was much worse. Bolivar's eyes went to his open palm. That giant new wound opening his palm up to emit more of his djed. Bolivar closed his left hand, grabbing it tightly with his right as he rested his body on it in the fetal position.

"Stop, stop stop stop. Stop!"


The new shaky voice that came out scared Bolivar. No more pretentious tones or gruff actions from him. This was bad. The squire was having a hard time controlling his res. The call to make enough res to kill Sarah along with her own demands for his res seemed to push his res production to overdrive.

The pains coursing through him were already severe but now with the possibility of becoming worse paralyzed the squire with fear. He had to stop it. To stop this altercation that would ultimately destroy or meld him in ways ultimately destructive. Feeling his insides give out the squire heaved with each breathe adhering to a rigid rhythmn to take in each breathe.

This was the time to take things slow. To move suddenly inviting disaster somewhere in his body, everywhere. A heave going as far as to push the squire to vomit was suppressed and swallowed down. Bolivar was not going to allow himself to die from this. Not now. Not so soon! The squire had something to do. To say something sweet and meaningful to Shiress. That being the main purpose of his drive to continue on and guard his body tightly.

Each part of him shaky and unreliable Bolivar had to recoup his loses and try to recover the remaining djed outside of him. What he had on hand was not enough though. He had to...

Looking back at Sarah where he had stabbed her Bolivar pulled the makeshift weapon out of her gut before running his hand over the deep wound. Revolting you might say but this was what had to be done. Remnants of his djed was still inside her, not alot. Remnants but it would suffice.

Though having been another person the squire's attempts to recoup felt as if he was driving a searing hot nail under his nails. Slowly but surely the damages were being held back and the squire's body seemingly sound. Another heave from the squire, this time an enormous repressed push. Vomitting into the forest floor Bolivar vented his body of the leecher's toxic influence before falling tired into the forest floor.

For one to have had everything and to know nothing. To have fallen to such a state. Where I have nothing but understand it all.
Last edited by Bolivar on October 30th, 2013, 4:05 am, edited 11 times in total.
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Investigations and Tribulations (Fall 10)

Postby Bolivar on October 22nd, 2013, 7:55 pm

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It was done and over with. Somehow. Somehow Bolivar managed to claw his way out of this elaborate ambush. There wasn't much left for the squire to do but recover. If anything Bolivar could keep track of all the types of pains he was going through.

Definitely going through reimancy related withdrawal of some sorts. Even with him casting away a sliver of his life this body of his still yearned for more elaborate casting and mastery. The mind naked as the day one was born Bolivar could not listen to it much longer or run the risk of even more overgiving. Instead Bolivar dulled out the whispers without voice that haunted him.

Apparently his body was still rejecting the djed that he had recouped earlier. Shifting his weight to his side Bolivar once again hurled whatever manner of waste still found in his body. Occasionally he threw up blood, more so it was res that didn't sit well in his system or couldn't be taken back in. Finally there came a time that nothing came out of the squire but sounds and spasms. Whatever it was his body was rejecting couldn't be purged through this method. The soul torn Bolivar was only going through the motions in a desperate plea to sate his self.

Speaking of his self, Bolivar felt sore in places that he never would of imagined. Having a sore throat was common enough and accepted. Hell even having bruises and cuts along both of his arms was manageable enough. But his petching crotch to be sore? It was not as great as it sounded upon hearing it the first time from the tales of a lecherous man. It was soft, sore and deflated down there. A bit higher his stomach seemed to have different levels of hurt that was interesting enough. His abs felt strained, feeling his stomach empty and hollow with his sense of where his chest was, lost. The body worn Bolivar mindlessly mimed the words of hurt while he looked up at the sky.

The storm above was finally clearing. The rains stopped and with it came the first movements from the squire as he looked at Sarah's figure on the ground. Conscious and open the squire understood the woman still alive or at least having died with a very apparent twitch.The squire had to focus on something. Bolivar could not risk closing his eyes just yet, to have goddess Dira meet the young squire and confirm his fears.

Bolivar considered talking to Sarah's form. To speak frankly as if nothing was amiss. The idea quickly unappealing itself as the possibility of the other's condition being dead went up as time went by. It would be too unsettling to think himself talking to a dead husk of a woman. Rather the squire got up on his feet, shakily, drunken as he stumbled to the base of the grand oak tree.

Looking down he could see the remnants of the former squires before he pounded on the wood of the grand oak. It was too late for them. They never stood a chance. To think that even those aspiring to be knights would fall prey to such methods. It made the squire shed a few tears for his fallen brethern.

No! I have to stay awake.


Nearly following as his head dipped dangerously low Bolivar righted himself before looking to his feet. It was Sarah's robe. Sanguine red and hiding all the bloods stains that she might have sustained. It was thick, damp and still smelled something dangerous. Turning back at Sarah Bolivar grabbed the robe, bundling the cloth around his fist as he stood over the possibly dead woman.

Raising a hand to strike her Bolivar succumbed to his earlier feelings of sorrow for the squires. Leaning slightly distressed at the possibly dead Sarah. Was that a spark of understanding in her eye? If it was.

Grabbing at his pants Bolivar undid his pants gripping the length of his member once more. Sarah's body was frayed yes but warm enough for him to... swallowing hard Bolivar could imagine the look on his face. What had she done to him to push him this far? This petcher, she deserved to be defiled dead or not. Bolivar wanted to make her suffer even more somehow. Finding himself panting Bolivar muttered a string of curses staring back at that unresponsive face.

"I know I have to respect the dead. But you..."

"If you are still there know. That what I am about to do to you is more then you deserve Sarah."
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Investigations and Tribulations (Fall 10)

Postby Radiant on October 30th, 2013, 7:27 am

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Bolivar :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation +2 XP
Socialization +2 XP
Rhetoric +2 XP
Intimidation +1 XP
Persuasion +1 XP
Riding: Horse +3 XP
Endurance +3 XP
Tactics +1 XP
Wilderness Survival +1 XP
Running +1 XP
Reimancy +2 XP
Weapon: Axe +2 XP
Brawling +2 XP


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Sarah: Mage
Sarah's Djed Was Stolen
Mages Are Often Fickle
Sarah Is Crazy
Sarah: Leecher
Reimancy: Ice Blade


Loots and Consequences
Red Robe
+4 Shield Points
Overgiving: Due to being leeched, Bolivar's res control became awry and his reimancy level would be dropped to Novice. This condition lasts for about 50 days.


Notes :
Very, very amusing! :lol: I got lots of chuckles from this thread! Good work, Boli! :D :thumbsup:

Haha! I can so imagine Bolivar narrating his life with a deadpan look his face. :D

Just a note, in some of your posts, I assume your forgot to put the italic tags on some of his inner-monologue so it looked like you (as in the writer) were narrating in first-person which is highly not recommended in Miz. :)

Also, a Leecher should be rather frail, but I think she got around it with Flux. I'm assuming the crazy woman is a competent Leecher with expert in Flux.

And woah... That is one way to get back at the crazy bitch. :paranoid:

EDIT: Removed. :'( *Sigh* I like that lore... bye bye lore...


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