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“Tomorrow’s victory is today’s practice.”

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While Sylira is by far the most civilized region of Mizahar, countless surprises and encounters await the traveler in its rural wilderness. Called the Wildlands, Syliran's wilderness is comprised of gradual rolling hills in the south that become deep wilderness in the north. Ruins abound throughout the wildlands, and only the well-marked roads are safe.

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Postby Razkar on November 23rd, 2013, 7:44 pm

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40th Day of Fall
The Wildlands
17th Bell


"Somethin' not quite right with that..."

Cheeks stuffed with soup-dipped bread, Clarkie followed his older comrade's frown and decided the man had a point. Their Myrian commander was standing apart from from the rest of the sellswords, battering some enemy into submission in front of him... if "enemy" was the same as "fallen tree trunk", anyway. A few other mercenaries were watching the sight, wondering why the Myrian was smacking his knuckleduster-clad hands over over again into the tree trunk. Didn't he have a punch bag?

Razkar snarled to himself for the hundredth time that bell: "Fine idea, boy, giving away your punching bag..."

"Oi, Clarkie?" Ed said in that slow, sliding tone of one who needs to be convinced of what he's looking at. "You're seeing... that, as well, aren't you?"

"Y'mean the, ah... little difference at the end?"

"Yeah, I mean-"

CRACK!

"... that."

That, by the by, was the sound of a leather-wrapped fist hitting old, rotting wood... but to Clarkie's ears it sounded like an ax biting into a young, proud oak. One would think that the sight of seeing Razkar hammer his right fist into the trunk would reassure the young mercenary... but it did not.

Too fast. It's too fast, and that sound... the way it trembles...

The other sellswords of their company - those that weren't on the perimeter of the fresh camp, anyway - were watching now, exchanging low rumbles, even shaking their heads and wondering if it was their grog that was causing it.

Razkar knew better.

Every kata was the same. That was what "An Introduction To Flux" called the combination of blows he unleashed; or, more accurately, what the writers of the yellowed tome called it. The Myrian had finished his reading for one day, after making sure the caravan was set up... which didn't take long. Albrecht was a fine taskmaster, and once the pickets were set up, torches raised and rations prepared, his job was effectively done.

The Myrian had smiled as he'd opened the thick, heavy book. Not to mention the fact Edreina can handle most of the little details.

"Few amateur practitioners of The Flux will be lucky enough to direct the kind of power needed in that one, well-executed blow that will end a fight. The time needed to gesture or incant the djed into the right limb is simply too much to apply in the chaotic, fast-moving melee of a brawl. The speed needed to execute The Flux in a brawl is learned later in the training process.

However, it is possible to make a single djed-augmented blow the core or end of a kata. A "kata" is a series of blows, most often from either arms or legs, that have their own name or form. This allows them to be memorized and practiced easier, but of course, the practical application of them is what matters. Therefore, students are encouraged to develop their own katas, using what skills they have already learned.

Take heed: as has been said time and time before, this book is an introduction to The Flux. Not for master wielders nor lifelong users. The best advice I can give at this stage would be to look to your past and make your katas in the present. Striking past your abilities, and into the future, will bring unexpected and dire pain..."


Razkar had marked the page and found... something. Anything. That was when he first cursed himself for giving away his punching bag to that damned Akalak scholar! Just when he really needed one! A few chimes perusing, though, had turned up a gnarled and mossy tree trunk, long-fallen and forgotten, which he'd heaved up into a standing position.

It must have weighed twice what he did, and every punch he laid on it sent more ripples of impact through him than the tree.

The first two, anyway.

The Myrian developed it fairly quickly. He'd been brawling and scrapping since he could walk; he knew plenty, it was just... applying it correctly. So he'd taken a stance before the trunk, feet planted, knees bent, arms up-

-lashed out with his left hand, knuckles slamming into-

"Fuck!"

Knuckledusters. Definitely wearing the dusters...

Once that painful problem went away, Razkar could get into a rhythem. Two short jabs with his left arm; stinging, snapping blows that disoriented and rattled his "enemy's" skull, kept his guard up, his vision dancing, making way for-

-a bursting right cross, empowered by his right foot sliding forward, his upper body twisting, the real cap to the trio of punches. Over and over that crack-crack-CRACK! split out across the camp, until he'd got his rhythm, his timing... his wording...

Razkar paced... stared at the trunk with its missing patches of bark and crawling things fast-vacating their uprooted home, sweat dripping down his bare torso... still himself... closed his eyes for a moment and let himself feel that familiar tingle...

Yes. Easier every time.

Then Razkar tried again... but with words between his punches. At first it was harder; slowing his fists, or speeding his words, so everything flowed. His arm tingled and pulsed dully under his muscles.

Or, more accurately, what gave his muscles true life...

Razkar latched onto that thought as he launched into the final exercise. He put up his arms again, lips moving softly as he whispered, left fist lashing out-

"From my Body, Power-"

-and it smacked into the tree trunk, a dull whack! that shook him as much as it did the man-tall hunk of rotting wood-

-and as it snapped out again to hammer his protected knuckles into the impromptu target, roughly where the jaw would be, Razkar pulled back his right arm, inhaled deeply as he welled the his body's djed into his shoulder and bicep, feeling it swell without swelling, bulge without anything changing on his flesh-

"To my Fist, Strength-"

Then it exploded outward, a split-tick after his left fist jerked back, fierce and straight punch rippling with djed, almost pulling him forward as much as Razkar was throwing it out-

-muscles suddenly tight and straining, making the Myrian wince-

CRACK!

The tree trunk wobbled like an earthquake had broke out under it. Razkar felt the impact of his fist, the power of his djed, spread through the rotten heap in an instant-

-and his covered fist gouged out a like-sized chunk of it away. Before his jabs could do little more than dent it, gouge marks in it from the metal studs on his leather 'dusters. But now... now a chunk half the size of his head had been ripped out, knocked away...

"Bloody Nora..."

Razkar's black eyes snapped over to the mumbling, just in time to see Mann studiously observe the contents of his soup bowl. Seb just shook his head, hardly worried about the Myrian's wrath just because he was watching. If Razkar didn't intend for that, he would have done his training elsewhere.

Whatever the petch he's training in, anyway...

Then it hit him, a tick later, a dull ache that numbed first, making his right arm feel heavy and leaden... then the feeling of a hundred needles pricking him as he tried to move it, nerve endings sending blossoms of fire up and down his muscles...

"Always... a price..."

He muttered to himself and walked it off, flexing and stretching his arm as much as he dared. A few chimes... yes, that was all it took now... for his arm to return to normal; part of him again, not feeling separate and amputated.

Anyway, he thought as he took up his stance again, much easier to deal with than-
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Postby Razkar on November 27th, 2013, 2:44 am

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"Shielding, which is essentially the construction of a barrier, is not a quick nor easy process for the novice. Is it quick and easy to build a wall? Or craft a breastplate of metal? Both these things require time, patience and proper usage of available materials.

There are two main differences. Firstly and obviously, the materials used. Secondly, Shielding becomes easier with time. Though laborious and riddled with problems and imperfections at the early stages, expert and master Shielders can produce a barrier every bit as solid and unyielding as brick and iron, with the added advantage of being able to block djed, too.

The secret is the same as the accomplishment of everything: practice, and patience."


Five bells later, with the camp shuffling into a nice comfy niche for the night and Edreina poring over her books inside the tent, Razkar sighed as he read the words for the fifth time. They hadn't changed. They were advising the same.

What are you expecting? That upon the sixth they'll just tell you to "petching go for it"?

The young male grimaced, marked his place and then set down the precious "Basics Of Shielding" inside it's blanket and wrapped it up again. There was no rain by the fire outside their tent, just icy cold, but Razkar knew better than to risk any damage to Edreina's precious prize.

"How did you master your blades?" He asked himself, murmuring into the dancing fire, legs crossed, preparing his mind for the tedium ahead. "By swinging one every day since you could hold one. This is the same..."

Perhaps, some insistent corner of his mind groused, but at least it was interesting. This is just...

Boring. Razkar didn't finish the internal sentence but his sigh said pretty much the same. The Flux, ah, now, there was something he could launch into enthusiastically. Throwing fists and knees and elbows and whatever else he could parcel a thunderbolt of djed into. Even though it took him time to recover and he was no more accomplished with it than Shielding, it was... more him. It fitted him, that most martial of the wyrd disciplines.

But Shielding? It was so... gradual. Defense-oriented. Passive, really, despite its uses. Its key was found in peace, meditation, clearing ones mind until it could find that shimmering thread beyond waking sight... grasp it, and from it weave...

"Your Cloak..." He spoke in his native tongue, voice a whisper that barely carried over the crackling fire. "See your Cloak..."

The previous night had taught Razkar... well, fine, Edreina had taught him much, by way of her tome. Simply throwing up your arm and willing an invisible shield to appear would not work. No, familiarity was needed. Having the mind latch onto something it would slide into like a well-oiled groove... or a well-practiced fighting stance.

Have an aim, then exceed it. That's what they'd told Razkar and thousands of recruits before him in the Training Yards of Taloba. Even if it takes you a day or a year to accomplish it, do so. But aim for it... then set it higher.

Razkar closed his eyes and gradually, carefully, cast away the waking world around him. It was difficult, but enough time could erode anything away. First the distant and close sounds of the camp, in sharp relief for a few chimes without his eyes to see them. Laughing sellswords... twittering passengers... snuffling horses and shifting logs on fires... canteens and glasses filled... the smack of wood on wood as cargo was contained...

The Myrian smiled at the soft fwip of pages being turned now and then from inside the tent. A voracious reader, his female.

Slowly... they subsided. The beating of his heart and the sounds of the rote suck and sigh of his press pushed them aside. With the loss of his eyes and his ears... Razkar found something like isolation amid the dozens of humans. Most avoided him anyway, probably assuming he was praying before the flames.

The flames... see the flames...

He did. His eyes twitched but did not open. He saw the fire, the flickering, jostling flames that reached up and then collapsed and were replaced by fresh orange and yellow and red spurts. But now... he lifted his hands... and saw them in his mind... shimmering cloth in his hands...

But not quite cloth. Patched together from dozens, scores of hewn scalps. The details... just as he remembered them and oh, did he just not remember every one.

See this... feel it... as real as the one across your shoulders... but the material...

Old flesh and lank hair did not shimmer as this wonderful fabric did. Razkar felt the telltale tingling of djed begin to stir under his skin. No, not stir... for djed was always there. The wyrd in all creatures, all things; never asleep and never tiring. Just... awaiting a release.

The Myrian inhaled deeply and fancied he could feel the stream and tributaries under his veins and arteries flowing to his hands. The tingling increased in his arms, and many a passing sellsword and laborer frowned at the Myrian apparently folding and flapping loose...

Nothing. And a thing, too.

His hands at shoulder height, closed into light fists as if holding his "cloak" by the hem, Razkar shook it out carefully... felt the lightest of breezes when he did, as if it was his soul that sensed it, not his body...

He felt ready.

We'll see.

His eyes opened slowly. He did not wish to overwhelm his now-docile senses, shatter this moment of reflection and control. But his hands... they nearly trembled now with the crackling, prickling sensation... and he could feel the same between them, in the invisible air just... hanging there.

Not alone, either.

Taking one final breath, Razkar cocked his elbows slightly... then flicked his hands outward as if he were throwing a hanker-chief over the flames. A bead of nervous sweat rolled down his cheek but he did not let the feeling of tranquility fade... no... he could feel the djed, so fragile and tangible now, spring from his hands...

It will do what you want it to. You just have to know how to draw, craft and maintain it.

"Hide the fire from sight and ear."

Again the Myrian's own, guttural words chattered from his throat in a harsh whisper. He thought it best to evoke them into the open air, where his works were being experimented and his mind could focus all the harder on them. Invisible but not intangible, he could feel his djed fall-

-over the flames-

-that were no longer there.

Or not as distinctly, anyway. The Introduction had also told him that the shields of novices were rife with imperfections: holes and tears in the surface of them like a moth-ridden blanket, but...

Razkar stared in amazement, but not at himself. Such an... unbelievable thing. There were... patches, huge as his hand, that were not covering the sight of the stone-ringed fire. Still it burned and munched on wood and rose tall, but... not all of it. It was like someone had thrown an old blanket over it, and barely even a third of it as visible. The sounds were dull, muffled, the shape of the fire was barely even there, just the suggestion of flames.

Under the shield. Three feet tall and four wide, as large as his true Cloak of Fallen, and holding steady... but why?

Because you are trying. Because you are learning the proper way. Because you believe in your ability to do this... just like she does.

Edreina! She would need to see this! The Myrian licked his lips and turned his eyes from the flames, hands still outstretched, stinging tendrils of djed from his shield to his fingers already nipping at him painfully, but she had to-

"Edri! You must come! Come see-"

Oh, no.

"-this?"

His body realized it first; his mind caught up a half-tick later, of course, but his consious self, well... that was more complicated. His concentration broken, he felt the djed in his arms start to fragment, break up like iron bars turned to rust, the smooth flow through his ethereal arteries broken, and the shield...

Invisible as it was, he saw it break apart. The patches covering the flame and its noise simply... evaporated. Faded in the space of three blinks or a long breath, into the star-scattered sky or his own veins, perhaps. Razkar sighed, but now the flames frolicked anew in his grinning eyes.

The Myrian chuckled and opened the tend flap, grinning even broader at his studious female. She cocked a questioning eyebrow and he seemed to grow another foot (not an easy task in a five-foot-tall tent).

"I did it again!"
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Postby Radiant on December 3rd, 2013, 9:14 am

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Razkar :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Flux +2 XP
Unarmed Combat +1 XP
Reading +2 XP
Endurance +1 XP
Meditation +1 XP
Shielding +2 XP


Lores
Lore Earned
Flux: Kata
Shielding: Constructing Protection


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Notes :
I like the thread! :D You put nice descriptions on both Flux and Shielding.

Also Raz, I would appreciate if you don't other player's PC. In the last part, you controlled Edreina's actions and reactions, even if they are minor, it's still a form of god-modding. Even if you got Edreina's permission, it's very recommended to stray from god-modding.


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If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, beam me a PM and we can work it out. :)
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