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Postby Fallon on January 5th, 2014, 8:43 am

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41st Winter 513 AV

In honest Fallon had been thinking about the idea for a last few days, a dwelling thought in the back of her mind that she felt was high time to use and exploit. It begun at the docks, her watchful gaze catching the morning rays of winter the casting ripples across the water's surface. There was the rough hum of lungs, the low mournful song of sailors on the air as she watched from her point. In anything she looked like little more than an observer, or a half frozen fiend who had no shelter to protect her - no doubt due to her pinched features in the cold. Still, Fallon could not exactly complain about today's task. It drew her away from the usual work of a mercenary - hitting, punching, kicking and slashing - and drew her into a more refined area that she found much more interesting. She knew the drill, the words and the aim. She knew her job, her intention and her purpose. Whilst it was away from that of physical combat, it became one of wits and words instead. A careful study and analysis before she gave the simple tap of sending a whoever in the right direction.

Pinching her brow the mercenary drew in a deep breath, the mumbled words repeating in her head, "Bitzer, hat, check, search." There was the looking upon the world from beneath her palm, her eyes barely focusing on the passersby. Her lids pricked, drifting between the faces. She watched the walk, she watched the way that they moved. Some with purpose, some with a nervous energy and the few others with that as if weighing up against another. And then there was those who stalked, the hunters and seekers, the chasers of rumours within the city. They hunted a dog, or a Hound to be more accurate, be it for curiosity, for joining or for more bloody reasons. There was only a shudder to the thought of finding his dead corpse because someone finally decided it was time. Discarding it Fallon looked down to her other hand, the worn leather glove covering it. Within it the crumpled flier rested in her hand, those words of promise and challenge upon it. Not that a lot had come to fruit from it, least not under her watch.

Even she knew that the ball needed to be pushed, the metaphorical sparks pushed into igniting. A plan was needed, a scheme to drag in the masses. They had their name, their dream and goal, but it was showing their seriousness of it all. There was a pinch, her head turning as she watched the men of the docks upon their boats go out to harass the approaching vessel. It was one of two things, empty or full of slaves - that form of trade became quickly apparent to her. There was only the scoffing words of Sailors as they walked on past with their rigging.

"Looks like the bastards are at it again," one of them gave a point as the smaller vessels pulled up against the large. Even Fallon's eyes were forced into lifting and following, the steady look up to the sloop. She heard the other one speak up, "What, that Daggerhand lot and they're little inspections?"
"Yeah, greedy bastards the lot of them,"
she heard their voices grow distant, and so quickly pushed herself after them. She gave a dip of the shoulders as she followed, words pricking against her ears, "Still. Their word, they control what comes in an out. Don't want no business then they make it known."
"All from that piss of a rock,"
there was a snort. Her eyes turned out to the worn distant stone of the keep within the Bay. There was a shout from lower down this time, the high pitched whistle slicing through the air and calling cry of some in coming vessel. With the sailors escaping her and her attention snatched, to others. Her gait paused she turned to the sound, eyes focusing as men brought down the gangplank. There was a flicker, the looking down on the captain and another as terms were discussed, the talks of deals and coin. Her brow pinched together as she rocked upon the boardwalk.
"Aye, 'bout right," the other spoke, checking and looking about the deck, "Yeh gunna bring those chainer's up?"
"Keep 'em where? Shuffle them out tomorrow. Keeping 'em here and guarded. Won't hurt 'em to be stuck here for a while. Don't want to damage stock,"
There was a wave off, discarding them. Hands rested in her pockets, the moment of distraction growing. Cogs in her mind turned, a thought flowing and filtering through.

And then it came. A roar of waves and thunder in her mind, an epiphany in the truest sense. An idea.

Fallon had never run so fast before. The pump of adrenal the thoughts turning and moulding into a plan. The docks, a hold the daggerhands grasped upon, their point of control within the city. They paid and took coin, they filtered the traffic that came and went. To remove that filter on the traffic, to sabotage their control. Fallon took a skid around the corner, snow picking up. She needed to find Wrenmae and fast. The words were almost upon her tongue, her eyes ablaze with a wild fire, her chest huffing as she ran. She tripped into the commons, her eyes falling upon the face and figure her brother had chosen to take today. There was no time to waste, no time to halt herself. Hand outstretched as she passed she roughly grabbed him - her fast pace continuing - and promptly dragged him into the nearest alley and its darkness. It was only there between deep, laboured gulps of air that she managed to speak to him;

"I have an idea!"
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Postby Wrenmae on January 8th, 2014, 6:06 am

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All the pieces coming into place, the snick-snack of edges lining up. He didn't have too much more time, but more than enough to get something moving in the alleys of Sunberth. The people were in discontent, they always were...it was like a disease pulsing in their words and lifeblood. Sunberth, the city of anarchy, Rhysol's little pet project he forget to police...it was everything Ravok wasn't, more like its dark, jagged shadow.

In the darkness of his room this morning he had called the Void. As in all matters of deep thought or concentration, he felt it was necessary to call upon that whole into nothingness in order to solidify his hold on what actually was.

The process was simple. First came the glyphs, long lines that intersected around a focus. These would be the leylines to control his craft, to call it to the fore and refine the hole he wanted to make. Calming himself, he called out to the darkness beyond...no, not the darkness, darkness suggested some sort of shadow, cast by an object between the sun and the earth. No this was something far more, a sort of everlasting darkness that defied shadows entirely.

He called this, djed flowing out through his fingers and into the shape, shifting and twisting as it poked a hole the size of a pin's head in reality and drew it larger.

Here in Sunberth he might have been hanged for it, but really...who were they to judge what he pursued. The people hated to be ruled and sassociated magic with ruling. Perhaps they should, honestly, the arts were dark enough to elicit at least their preemptive worry. Mages were the mad dictators who used their power to cajole and manipulate. Wren didn't need to use his mind to twist others to his side, he simply could through his words...at worst, his magic.

The void grew in front of him, magnificent in its ragged-torn glory, yawning open as large as he was.

He could feel the tug at him, the way his hair shifted off his crown to wave at the open portal. It was hungry, starving, and he had the means to offer it food...even himself.

Whispers. Whispers.

He overloaded the portal, closing it down till nothing remained and even the glyphs flaked to dust and drifted on the air.


Sighing, he picked up his weapons, pausing as he took the Shard of Askash from where it lay, wrapped in blankets, before affixing it to his belt. It was garish, enough so that he was forced to wrap it in linens to at least give it the appearance of something a little dirtier.

No sense in it...when stolen it would return, always at the beck of its master, unintentionally.

He found himself in the Commons of the dingy apartment he'd rented, waiting by the door. It wasn't for anything in particular, instead he had been gathering his courage to step through the door and into the waiting chill.

As luck would have it, Fallon made the choice for him.

She smashed him up against the wall outside the apartment, narrowly avoiding the drawn dagger that had angled up at her throat the moment she thrust him against the wall.

Wren blinked, recognizing here as his eyes lost their rabid desperation of a man ambushed. The dagger dropped and he sheathed it, biting the inside of his mouth, hard, before speaking.

"Oh. Hello Fallon. Yes, I do have time to talk, thanks much for taking the time to approach."

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This PC has the Blight gnosis. As such, you as a player need to be aware of what that consists of. Wrenmae has an invisible aura that amplifies sickness and disease. Wounds may become infected, small sneezes may become coughing, and a slight fever may become more serious. A nuit's body will also break down faster in the presence of the Blight. These effects may not be immediate, but within the few days following your encounter, the symptoms will manifest. Some sooner than others. I cannot control your character, so creativity will be left up to you. Best wishes and stay healthy!

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Postby Fallon on January 8th, 2014, 7:17 am

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Fallon's breaths were labouring, her brow knitted into a scowl. Lips gave a part breaking and allowing the whistle of air to escape between them. And whilst she continued her pointed look upon him, her fist still wrapped around the fabric of his shirt and her eyes still set burning. Sucking in the air she gathered her bearings, a curl breaking into a quick grin, "What? Not every day you get roughly accosted by a young woman is it?"

Releasing him she stepped back, her hand flicking and brushing off the crease that had gathered - least before it formed into a single point. The devilish look formed upon her features, the residue signs of a plan finally coming to a close. She gave only a quick glance around, a careful watch to those who might have been hovering nearby at corners, watching the pair that quickly tumbled into conversation. There was a pinch of lids, the tips of her fingers still hovering above him, before she went once more to lean into him. Rising up onto her tip toes, she took a low voice and spoke into his ear.

"The Daggerhands. They control the dock area, no?" she began, her hands snaking up and resting upon his shoulders, "And for the love of petch don't freak out. I'm not hitting on you." Exhaling, her eyes gave a glance to the observing man across the street, before continuing, "They decide what comes in, and what comes out. What boats and business even gets a look in here." Fallon was still out of breath, it was clear by her occasional swallow of air and the twitch of a limb. Swallowing she turned her eyes in the other direction, "They run their inspections, and have their own little vessels by the looks of things - allows them to get out into the bay quickly and see if the people have the coin to pay the steep charges. By doing that, it keeps them in control."

And then finally her eyes flickered to his and held. Seriousness held, a cold look of efficiency and a no nonsense attitude, "You take out their boats, you cripple their vessels, you cripple their control and hold. They would have to throw out coin to make the repairs and recovery. Means also anyone can get in. Boom, city explodes with all sorts of... imports." There was a shrug as she pulled away, limbs returning to the cold winter air. Hands resting beneath the folds of her cape she gave a glance up at him, "Plus... well, it looks like one of the chained sellers came in. You take out that boat and release their stock on the city. Well, makes the Daggers look bad and spreads chaos. Just a thought though. If you're brave to think on it though."

She gave a rock on her heels, "And you said being an observer was boring."
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Postby Wrenmae on January 9th, 2014, 10:10 pm

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There was an instinct to surrender to the warmth of a feminine body pressed against him, that deep carnal longing that came with his travels of the last several seasons. Never in one place long enough to bed down, never looking to. But they were bound by blood and he naturally and easily built a wall between the man and the intelligence, tightening than relaxing under Fallon's advance.

"Been busy, have you?" He asked her, the left corner of his mouth drawing into a smirk. "I knew the Daggerhand had some hand on shipping, but you've gone and sniffed out where they do it." He reached up and put a hand on her head, resisting the urge to tousle her hair, "And they call ME the Hound."

He gently pushed her away from him, brushing the front of his shirt and cloak, stretching before engaging her again. When he did, the gears in his head were spinning, prancing over each other.

"I've been in contact with a few of the minor gangs in Sunberth...mostly rats and mice, too weak or too scared to grab at larger morsels. They smell blood in the water and they're circling the Daggerhand, taking bites. They want change. I've approached them as a representative of the Hound, disguised of course, and I think I've aligned some to our way of thinking. Most don't even care about casting aside their old names for ours...the Scars. I think this is a good opportunity to to test out who we have. Could make it a quiet thing, but I think making it grand and showy will really draw Sunberth's attention."

He paced out of the alley for a moment, looked both ways and crossed back in, clasping his hands behind his back as he paced, "Yes, we could do it. Release the slaves, that's the first step. The ones who aren't petching useless will cause us the havoc we need to escape. No doubt when they see the flames the main gang will come running. No sense in getting caught between them and the sea-" he absently reached up to press against the cursed mark spreading across his right shoulder and breast, "Even with our skill, they'd slaughter us. I could..." He paused, yes...maybe this would be the right moment, "I could use the savage, the Myrian, Razkar. We've entered into a certain agreement. I could use him publicly. That'd be a nice feather in our cap, the enemies of Daggerhands with the dock-murderer? Hound and Wolf, perfect."

Pausing, he turned and caught Fallon in an unexpected hug, lifting her up, despite his narrow arms, and then letting her go. "Well played, well played indeed. Your talent really was wasted with the Knights...you have such a mind for conquest."

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Postby Fallon on January 10th, 2014, 6:39 pm

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Fallon only gave a nod to his own snippets and discoveries, her brow rising with the occasional smirk as he thought things through. Both of their heads were turning over in thought, and whilst one hand managed to root out information, the other had managed to lay down contacts. Of course, even this plan still required more work and coordination - but it was off the ground and in the making, "Make it showy? Break out the paint and mark it as yours then."

She gave a shrug, and rubbed at her chin with thought. It was an issue, they would need to delay of the Daggerhand approach should they try and take control of the situation. There had to be a way to slow them up, a method in which to ensure their escape. Drop points in between, an understanding of the lay out so they could all loose themselves in the city. Scattering to the winds. Either way they needed to be quick, quiet, and very hard hitting. Fingers drummed steadily, a gentle knit as she thought. It only briefly changed on the mention of the Myrian, "You have that?"

There was a flick of the hand, "We need more than a simple brute force to stand between us and them. Yes, having extra muscle would be nice, but we need to make sure we are not pursued on through. Routes need to be blocked after we pass through, and we need to make sure we're not up against the main body of the force. The phrase, divide and conquer comes to mind." There was a sudden pause, a moment of surprise that she had managed to fall into a state of scheming up tactics and plans. She gave a sheepish incline of the head, the drumming stopping as she thought, "Could leave a sting for them waiting somewhere else, maybe. And you mean your cap surely."

And then he picked her up. Although it may have only been a quick movement to him it was a long one to her - and one that left her feeling rather vulnerable. At first she went rigid, her entire form stiffening, and her eyes screwing shut. Or at least until her hands finally found life and flailed at him, "Put me down!"

He did not seem to notice much, his light praise continuing anyway. Shaking off the temporary sense of terror and the thick blush, Fallon brushed the creases out, forcing her attention to the world beyond the alley. It was best to keep the guard up just in case, who knew what fiends were about. Her hand gave a rest on the tulwar hilt, her eyes giving a scan as the drips of thought continued to flow. The plume of hot air escaped her lips, "So, Hound, Wolf and... Bitzer I guess," she gave a shrug, "You think you can get some of the rats to play decoy? Lure away from the docks and give us time to get about? Plus..." Eyes gave a narrow a thought hitting her, "Oil. Lantern Oil, lots of it. And fire."

It was quickly her expression turning serious. Something had come to her mind, a ploy for this task. She gave a pace, a wicked grin breaking out. Yes, this would work. They just needed the man power to pull it off, "Want me to stake out the ground more?"
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Postby Wrenmae on January 15th, 2014, 8:29 pm

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Wren counted things off on his fingers as he spoke, consolidating her line of thought. "Oil, layout, patrol schedule including number of Daggerhand on deck, identification of the correct ships, distraction, escape." Smiling at Fallon, he paced back into the alley, already putting together the plan.

"Take Senghor, Noven, or both and scout out the docks. We need the names, docking location, and cargo of the ships we're going to hit. We also need an accurate head count of who we need to handle on the docks. Remember, we're after freeing the slaves for a little chaos, not petching up any food imports...so be detailed. In the meantime, I'll plan a distraction and find a way to accrue the oil. We make it flashy, we make it big, and we get out before the Daggerhands can corner us. So your job will be the aforementioned and finding the best way out of the docks. I'll handle the rest and we rendezvous in a day or two. That enough time?"

He weighed the consequences. This was more than enough time for his means and although the operation wasn't without its peril, the jump between murdering a few daggerhands and petching up a shipment was too much for them to consider doubling the guard.

No...this was perfect. It would show the Nighteyes he was serious about taking down the Daggerhands and embolden their enemies. It would be the first official strike against them, the declaration of war that would embroil Sunberth later.

And it gave him a chance to watch Noven and Senghor. As new recruits, he had to consider their eventual stake in everything...who would rule, who would lead, and who he could trust to make the hard and necessary decisions to push the advantage against the Daggerhand.

"We can make this work," he said to Fallon, cracking his knuckled, "It's all in the finesse though, the how it's done. I have faith in you and you have no need to worry about my end."

He grinned.

"Negotiation is my sharpest blade."

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This PC has the Blight gnosis. As such, you as a player need to be aware of what that consists of. Wrenmae has an invisible aura that amplifies sickness and disease. Wounds may become infected, small sneezes may become coughing, and a slight fever may become more serious. A nuit's body will also break down faster in the presence of the Blight. These effects may not be immediate, but within the few days following your encounter, the symptoms will manifest. Some sooner than others. I cannot control your character, so creativity will be left up to you. Best wishes and stay healthy!

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Postby Fallon on January 16th, 2014, 7:13 pm

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"Don't trust me to be able to handle myself?" she gave a snort and shook her head. Giving a flick of the hand she gave a turn away, readying herself almost to step back once more to her designated task. She gave a click, her hand resting on the hilt of her blade as she thought. She did not think there was much more to it, the basics were laid out before them and the plan was set in motion. It would be laid out before them, there for the taking and ready to go. But, she was worried, she could not deny that much.

Sure it released those who were bound, but how would they fare against everything else. It brought up a new front in Sunberth, a city in its own turmoil, to bring destruction before creation and unity. But whilst the plan was presently destroy, they had to look further ahead. For this was no doubt the beginning of many such movement, it would be blood and conflict all the way. She gave a swallow, her brow forming a line. She hoped that once this was done, the chaos could be converted into something more useful.

"Fine, I will take them as you wish. If I think their being a liability though," she gave a shrug, "I will deal with them as necessary." Of course, her preference was to sooner direct them away and leave them forever waiting for another answer - other means were much messier and less productive. Giving him a moment of regard she gave a quick incline of the head, "I'll hold you negotiating then. Just let me know if things are going to turn ugly. I fancy getting a head start on running." And then, she sighed. The hand gave a firm pat on his shoulder, a brief squeeze as if releasing the pressure that was building up in her mind. Expression easing she looked him in the eye, "Be careful alright?"

With that she began her steps away to return to her gathering and planning.
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Postby Shai on June 19th, 2014, 10:08 pm

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