Completed [Antinous Training Grounds] Taking A Stance

Low-Guard can only accomplish so much.

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[Antinous Training Grounds] Taking A Stance

Postby Bitt on May 15th, 2014, 7:30 am


77th Day of Spring, 514 AV


Tock.

Tock.

Tock.

Bitt slammed the butt of his quarterstaff into the training post: a basic thrust executed from a low-guard stance. He repeated the action endlessly, switching his primary hand at random intervals. The staff's most dominant feature was its reach, and so Crowe had taken measures to ensure that his squire was able to take advantage of it by first teaching him a low-guard thrust. Beads of sweat trickled down Bitt's face; he had been at it for bells. Despite how much he had been improving, his patron had insisted that constant practice was essential to maintain any acquired skill, and Bitt agreed with the sentiment.
"Alright lad! That's enough!" Crowe called out. The grizzled old knight always watched over his squire's training sessions so that he might correct any faults in Bitt's technique. Today, however, he had not needed to do so.

At the sound of his patron's call, Bitt stepped out of his stance and exhaled deeply. He found it odd that he could smack a practice target for bells at a time without any issues, but be assaulted by an insatiable blood-lust when in an actual fight.
There is definitely something wrong with me, Bitt thought satirically. Thankfully, he was making progress in overcoming his affliction, and it was all thanks to Crowe. Still standing, and with his quarterstaff held vertically, Bitt closed his eyes. Slowly, he started to breath. Breathing was essential. Deep, soothing breaths. Inhale. Exhale. The squire looked inwards, calling up the visualisation of his mind he was most familiar with: an ocean.

The ocean rolled in time with the current, and the small waves it generated barely crested the water's surface. A gentle breeze blew, and the sun was shining. Bitt found himself on the small rock of an island that stood alone amongst the sea and there, still standing strong, were his walls. The walls. A mighty shell of stone: a mental creation brought about through his patron's meditative instructions. They served as a focus, a manifestation of his mental fortitude, and Bitt valued them dearly. All was well. I am in control...

Several chimes passed before Bitt opened his eyes, but Crowe waited patiently. He understood the importance of his squire maintaining a stable state of mind. Bitt closed the the distance between himself and his patron, and Crowe took a quick moment to organise his own thoughts.

"Well done, lad, you're making good progress," the older night stated simply, and Bitt smiled at the praise.
"Thank you, Ser Crowe."
"Most fights, as I'm sure you've realised, lad, barely last more than a single exchange. For the most part, whoever can strike first, and hardest, will win." Crowe looked to Bitt for confirmation he had understood, and the squire nodded seriously. "However, the older knight continued, "there are times when you will find yourself in a drawn out fight, or in a situation in which you won't be able to take advantage of the staff's length." Again, Bitt nodded in response - what his patron was telling him made sense. "It's in times like these, lad, that the stance I'm about to teach you might come in handy."
"Yes, Ser-" Bitt went to answer before fully understanding what his patron had said. "Wait, so there's more than low-guard?" Crowe chuckled at the question.
"Of course there is, lad!" the older knight answered enthusiastically. "Low-guard is your most basic of the basic, any brute with a stick could do it." When his squire frowned, Crowe amended his statement, "Of course, it takes a lot of practice to do it well, but even you yourself picked it up pretty quickly, lad." Bitt was slightly taken aback.
I've barely scratched the surface of the staff, it seems he realised, and shot a quick glance towards the weapon in his hand. Bitt grinned at his patron.
"Teach me." After a few ticks, Crowe returned the smile.
"Of course, lad."
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[Antinous Training Grounds] Taking A Stance

Postby Bitt on May 16th, 2014, 3:41 am


"Alright lad, pay close attention."
"Yes, Ser Crowe," Bitt nodded in response to his patron's instruction. Crowe stood opposite him, but there were several yards of distance separating the pair. Crowe returned the nod and motioned to hold his quarterstaff horizontally, at chest height, and parallel to the ground. His right hand gripped from underneath the staff and his left hand gripped above it. In this way, Crowe effectively split the surface of the staff into three, practically equal sections: the section between his hands, and the sections to either side of them. The older knight kept his back straight, his feet shoulder-width apart, and his knees slightly bent.
"This here lad, is how you hold the staff in a basic bojutsu stance," Crowe said, and he gave his squire a few ticks to get a good look.
"What's bojutsu, Ser Crowe?" Almost immediately, Bitt fired back the obvious question. Crowe answered without hesitation;
"It means 'staff technique', lad. Now, watch closely, I'll show you the ready position."

Crowe momentarily released his left-handed grip, and repositioned the staff so that it was held vertically against his right-hand side. The older knight's right arm was slightly twisted, and his right hand held the staff from behind, so that his palm faced outwards. The staff extended upwards against the front of his torso, reaching well past his head. Crowe once again bent his legs, but he leaned forwards slightly as well. At the same time, he raised his left arm and bent it at the elbow so that his forearm could reach across the front of his head and grab the quarterstaff. His grip still separated the weapon into three segments, just like it had earlier.
"Alright lad, your turn. Assume the stances." Bitt nodded and motioned to mimic his patron. First he tried to assume the basic stance: it was actually quite similar to low-guard, Bitt thought,
Except for where the staff is gripped, how I have to stand, and-... okay, maybe not THAT similar. Shaking his head slightly as if to clear his mind, the squire focused on his task. He held the staff, he bent his legs... a pretty good first attempt if he didn't say so himself.
So far so-
"That's not quite right, lad." Bitt's thought was interrupted by Crowe, who had abandoned his own stance and closed the distance between them. "Your legs are too close together," the older knight kicked the inside of his foot, forcing it to slide outwards, "and your back's not straight enough." Crowe placed one hand in the small of Bitt's back then knocked him on the chest with the other in an effort to correct the error. "Your grip is... pretty good." Crowe nodded and Bitt felt relieved that he had gotten at least on thing right. The squire took a moment to try and remember how he was standing, knowing that he would have to show it to his patron again at some point.

"Okay lad, now try the ready stance," Crowe said, and Bitt quickly tried to comply. The ready stance looked trickier, he thought, and as he tried to imitate what he'd seen his patron do, he quickly discovered that his suspicions were accurate.
"No, lad, not like that! Your hands are too close together." Crowe gently scolded his squire and forcefully guided Bitt's hands to their proper locations, "If you'd have held it like that, lad, you'd have this:" Crowe re-assumed the stance, but with his left arm covering his eyes, "See? Well, actually, you wouldn't; that's the point."
"Yes, Ser Crowe." Bitt nodded seriously and worked to correct himself. It took several chimes of poking, prodding, dragging and shifting, but eventually Crowe was satisfied with the result.
"Alright, lad, you almost look competent if I squint my eyes. I think you're ready to try a basic kata." Crowe saw the question about to form on his squire's lips and continued, "A kata is a series of movements used to practice martial techniques: in this case, bojutsu." Bitt smiled at the explanation and nodded.
"I see. Thank you, Ser Crowe."
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[Antinous Training Grounds] Taking A Stance

Postby Bitt on May 17th, 2014, 6:27 am


"First, the head strike. Use a ten-step count: five forward, and five back." Crowe said, and began to call out. "ONE!" He stepped forward, his knees always slightly bent, and swung the quarterstaff around so that one of the forward thirds came down in a powerful overhead blow against an invisible opponent."TWO!" Again, he stepped forward, except this time he manoeuvred the staff so that it was the opposite end of the staff that swung around in an overhead strike. At this point, he paused for a moment, still in his stance. "When you need to adjust your grip on the staff to rotate it, it must be a smooth action. Keep your fingers close to the staff at all times, and have them slither around it, like a snake... THREE!" Crowe struck out again, using the original end again. After the older knight hit five, he started stepping backwards with each hit.

Along with the head, Crowe demonstrated to Bitt the correct way to strike the neck, mid-section, knees, and throat. There were slight variations in technique for each one: the throat attack, in particular, was effectively a thrust as opposed to a swing. In between counts, Crowe would occasionally pause to offer some general advice.
"Always strike through your target, lad, never stop short."
"Even when attacking a low target, like the knees, never look down. Do not take your eyes off of your opponent, lad.
The entire process lasted several chimes, and Bitt watched his patron intensely. He knew that he would only learn through actual practice, but paying close attention to the demonstration couldn't hurt. There was an elegance to the moves, and they had him captivated. They were so refined, so controlled.
It's almost like a dance. Almost.
"Those were the five, basic strikes," Crowe said after he was finished. "Your turn, lad." Bitt nodded enthusiastically at his patron's words.
"Yes, Ser Crowe."

Bitt assumed a ready stance, and almost immediately Crowe started shaking his head.
"Not quite, lad. Your feet are too close together again." Bitt quickly motioned to correct the error, and the older knight nodded his approval. "Alright lad, first, the head strike: ten counts. Go!" Bitt stepped forward and tried to imitate what his patron had done. He even called out the count;
"ONE!" The quarterstaff moved in his hands and struck out at an invisible opponent. "TWO!" Like this, the squire continued. Twice Crowe stopped him to point out an obvious fault, and the squire's pace was rather slow compared to his patron's. When he voiced his concern regarding it, Crowe shook his head;
"Technique first, speed second."

The process repeated itself several times, once for each type of strike. Bitt found the process very mentally draining. The techniques required so much more finesse than he was used to to. His entire body needed to move in unison, flowing, like water, from one step into the next... Unfortunately, the squire still had a long way to go in that regard. His movements were awkward, but such a thing was to be expected. Bitt resolved to practice. Then, he resolved to practice some more. For what else could he do?
"Again, lad!" Crowe ordered after Bitt completed each basic kata, and the squire nodded seriosuly.
"ONE!" Bitt bellowed, and the process had started all over again.
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[Antinous Training Grounds] Taking A Stance

Postby Bitt on May 17th, 2014, 8:19 am


"SIX!"
Bitt called his count and lashed out with the quarterstaff, taking a backwards step as he did so. This was a knee strike, and it rushed through the air where his non-existent opponent stood. As the purpose of the strike was to hit a target's knees, it was executed at a very low angle.
"SEVEN!"
The squire was always tempted to direct his gaze downwards, and he had to struggle to keep his head straight. Naturally, his mind wanted to look where it was attacking. To train himself to override that instinct was proving incredibly difficult.
"EIGHT!"
Bitt had been repeating the katas constantly for the last several bells, and sweat glossed his forehead, occasionally dripping down to his chin. His arms, legs, core... everything was sore, strained from the difficult, unfamiliar movements.
"NINE!"
Relishing every moment, Bitt continued despite his discomfort. It was hard. It was tiring. But with every call, he knew he was making progress. Every cramp, every ragged breath... they took him one step closer to his goal, and his well of motivation was practically overflowing.
"TEN!"

Exhaling deeply, the squire quickly changed his grip on the quarterstaff.
"Alright lad, that's enough for now." Before Bitt could continue, his patron called out the signal to stop. Slowly, he stepped out of his stance and resumed a neutral position, supporting his weight slightly with the staff, which he now held vertically in his left hand.
"Not too bad lad. In a few years, I might even consider you halfway decent." Frowning at his patron's humor, Bitt shrugged his shoulders and answered back;
"Not too bad for a first try, I think." If he made it seem like the taunts didn't bother him, he thought that Crowe would ease up. Noticing this, the older knight raised an eyebrow, a cunning smirk creeping onto his face.
"I agree lad, not too bad at all... it certainly couldn't have been much worse." At that point, Crowe started chuckling, and Bitt's frown turned into a scowl. He knew that his patron was only joking, and for the most part it didn't bother him. What grated him somewhat, was that he would never have the last word with the older knight.

"So tell me lad, how are your muscles feeling?" Crowe asked after he'd finished laughing. Hesitantly, Bitt answered;
"Sore, Ser Crowe. A little bit cramped... bojutsu is tough." The older kngiht nodded his understanding and continued;
"I'd figured as much, lad. I'd figured as much. You know what's really good for cramped muscles?" Bitt's stomach sank.
"What is, Ser Crowe?" Even before Crowe said it, the squire knew what the answer would be.
"Why lad, it's a good jog, of course! Great way to loosen up. What do you say we go for a bit of a run, ey lad?" Knowing that Crowe had no intention of joining him, the young squire sighed.
"Yes, Ser Crowe."
"We'll start with once around the training grounds and see how we feel after that."
"Yes, Ser Crowe." After shaking out his limbs, Bitt took off at a slow, steady jog. With every step, he felt his legs cry out in discomfort. Once his patron was out of sight, the squire grinned. He was resigned to the harsh training, and acted as if he did it begrudgingly.

Truthfully, he loved it.
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[Antinous Training Grounds] Taking A Stance

Postby Radiant on May 17th, 2014, 5:24 pm

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Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation +2 XP
Socialization +1 XP
Weapon: Quarterstaff +3 XP
Acrobatics +1 XP
Endurance +1 XP
Meditation +1 XP


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Lore Earned
Quarterstaff: Bojutsu, Staff Techniques
Combat: The Kata
Combat: Always Keep The Opponent In Sight
Quarterstaff: Technique First, Speed Second


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Woho! Another solo done! One step closer to Knighthood!

Enjoy your grades, Bitt! :D


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