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Zhol meets Drusilla on his way to the Dreaming Lady.

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Perchance to Dream (Drusilla)

Postby Zhol on September 17th, 2014, 4:30 am


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Zhol blushed a little as she ruffled his hair, and more when she reminded him of the state he'd been only a bell or so before. He wasn't proud of what his mind had been doing to him, or the way it had made him feel; but the more they talked, and the more they walked, the harder it became to remember the reasons. A little stab resurfaced as she mentioned water and fire, though; Dinah had said something very similar once. As it turned out, it wasn't always true.

Thoughts on his twin, Dru's linguistic query firmly nailed Dinah to the forefront of his mind. See you never, his mind offered darkly, though Zhol tried his hardest to ignore it. "See you soon," he said aloud, trying to ensure that his smile stayed in place without faltering.

The warrens became increasingly familiar as they walked, and soon Zhol found himself at the end of the corridor that led to his room; the other direction led higher up into the mountain, towards the Endal aeries. He hesitated, gripped by indecision; but he wrestled his way past it, turning towards Drusilla and, with a deep breath threw his arms around her in a tight and heartfelt hug.

"Goodnight," he said quietly, speaking into her shoulder; after a beat he added, "Sister." He clung on a few moments longer, just enough to add one last thing.

"And thank you."

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Perchance to Dream (Drusilla)

Postby Neologism on November 15th, 2014, 7:27 pm

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Zhol :
XP:
  • Observation: +3 xp
  • Socialization: +5 xp
  • Teaching: +2 xp
  • Reimancy: +1 xp
  • Philosophy: +1 xp

Lore:
  • Symenestra: Monsters?
  • Drusilla's Nickname: Dru
  • Drusilla: Symenestra
  • Horses: Not so simple-minded
  • Drusilla: Ran away from her family and Kalinor culture
  • Symenestra: Take women to use as surrogates
  • Symenos: "Greetings"
  • Symenos: "Hello"
  • Drusilla's remedy for bad dreams: A massage and a soak
  • The more unpleasant the medicine, the better it heals
  • Nari: "I missed you" (caring)
  • Drusilla: Had a tough past
  • Drusilla: Reads you like a book
  • Drusilla: Integrated you into her web
  • Nickname: Versda-Zhol, meaning "brother"
  • Symenestra Venom: Liquefies organic matter
  • Symenos: "Sister"
  • Drusilla: Misses her father
  • Drusilla & Reimancy: Might have the water element

Notes: As usual, I love your writing, I never get bored. Please don't forget to update your ledger with the last grade. :)


Drusilla :
XP:
  • Singing: +1 xp
  • Observation: +3 xp
  • Socialization: +5 xp
  • Teaching: +3 xp
  • Investigation: +1 xp

Lore:
  • Zhol: Simply human
  • Zhol: Speaks Nari from Endrykas
  • Zhol: Doesn't really have favorite things
  • Horses: Pretty but scary
  • Pavi Signs: "Hello" (positive)
  • Pavi Signs: "Hello" (negative)
  • Glassbeaks: Giant Birds in the Sea of Grass
  • Drykas: Braids signify cultural status
  • Endrykas: A mobile city of tents
  • Zhol: Was exiled from his family for being different
  • Zhol: Is clearly head over heals for someone special
  • Zhol: Integrated into your web
  • Being able to make sacrifices for another is noble
  • Your personality dictates your reimancy element
  • Reimancy: You might have the water element
  • Pavi: "See you soon"

Symenestra Venom: I'd like to make a small note about Symenestra venom, which is a common mistake don't worry, but it does not last on non-organic matter. It doesn't have a shelf-life and quickly neutralizes on non-organic objects, such as weapons. This was done of purpose for the exact reason you mentioned, so that no one simply spits on their knife and goes on a killing spree. Your thread is fine as it is, just remember that for next time. :)

Notes: I finally get to read your writing! I love Dru, she's a very lively and curious little Sym. Don't forget to edit your post in the request forum as 'graded'. :)
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