Completed Uncommon Enemy (Nanami)

Kuvarakh and Nanami find they have one of their own.

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Considered one of the most mysterious cities in Mizahar, Alvadas is called The City of Illusions. It is the home of Ionu and the notorious Inverted. This city sits on one of the main crossroads through The Region of Kalea.

Uncommon Enemy (Nanami)

Postby Kuvarakh on November 16th, 2014, 5:00 am

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Kuvarakh took no offense at the wording of Nanami's dismissal. He assumed that she was simply letting him know that she was no longer needing company. It was really a favor to him. He would have stayed all night as long as he thought she was having trouble dealing with the horrid revelation of Victor's taunting. That obligation was now discharged.

And she was right about "sleeping easier". Though Nuits did not really sleep, they did meditate. And they were pretty much just as vulnerable as a sleeping human when they did. He would "sleep" easier once this "Kirby" thing was resolved. And as for Nanami wanting Victor's hands, he had no idea what the basis of this demand was, but he just chuckled grimly, "I don't want any part of Victor, I can assure you. I can't undo inhabiting this old corpse, but I've certainly learned something about jumping into the body of a known criminal, currently at large in your own city...Not real smart. I should have thought it through a little better."

He stood up, twisting the kinks away and shaking her offered hand. "I will look for you at the Wolf's Cave, then. But right now, I ought to finding a few friends that might also find themselves caught up in this business. I need to warn them of what I appear to set in motion." He was, of course, thinking of Rey and Phobius. They weren't actually wearing the body of the target criminal, but they'd been involved in his "dispatch". "It could be that there's some group partnered with Victor that could be looking for them as well."

He'd been to the Wolf's Cave Inn a few times. He did not expect to have any real trouble finding it. Phobius had been a there now as well and the young man was getting better at finding places in town. One of these days he was going to have to bring him out to the Mansion. He wondered how comfortable the Inartan kid would be around Nanami. He was outgoing, but easily intimidated, where she was grim and fearless. He decided it would do Phobius good to have to deal with Nanami's imposing personality.

He thought about how he would arrange to introduce them as he walked back to the shop. He hoped this run-in with Victor would prove to be the worst that came of his habitation of Kirby's body. Phobius' getting used to Nanami would be trying enough, without it being under the added pressure of some violent confrontation. He hoped he was worrying for nothing.
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Uncommon Enemy (Nanami)

Postby Fable on January 17th, 2015, 9:35 am

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Kuvarkh

Skills:
    Observation +5
    Negotiation +2
    Persuasion +2
    Investigation +1
    Rhetoric +2
    Interrogation +1
    Brawling +1
    Teaching +1
    Socialization +5
    Intimidation +3
    Escape Artist +1
    Unarmed Combat +1
    Intelligence +2
    Planning +2
    Tactics +1

Lores:
    Victor: "Friend" of Kirby's
    Persuasion: Appeal to Empathy
    Persuasion: Begging
    The Baby Slavers
    Poison: Effects of Wildleash
    Nanami: Zypherian Kelvic

Notes :
Please update your appearance to account for the newly aquired gash across one of your shoulders.

Alrighty, couple of minor notes here. Nuits don't have adrenaline, so adrenaline fueled actions are something they're incapable of. Also, when a Nuit is cut, the wound will continue to bleed ichor until it is addressed in some fashion. At this point, I won't give you any penalties, but in the future, please keep this in mind.


Nanami

Skills:
    Unarmed Combat +2
    Tracking +1
    Socialization +5
    Observation +5
    Rhetoric +1
    Investigation +2
    Subterfuge +2
    Brawling +1
    Interrogation +1
    Persuasion +2
    Wrestling +1
    Intelligence +2
    Planning +1

Lores:
    Persuasion: Forceful Suggestion
    Nuit: Scent of Ichor
    Nuit: Poison Immunity
    Poison: Effects of Wildleash
    Poison: Scent of Wildleash
    Nuit: Don't Heal
    Nuit: Body Snatchers
    Kuvarkh: Nuit
    Viktor: Baby Stealer
    The True Nature of Seke's Death
    Persuasion: Presentation of Merits

Notes :
Nanami's face will have a faint scar where she was cut, unless treated by a healer. Please update you "Grey linen dress" to a "Ruined Grey Linen Dress", or if you would prefer, remove the item entirely. Nanami's middle toe (you may choose which foot) is broken and will heal in 35 days without further aggravation. It will heal crooked, pointing slightly away from her big toe, unless it is tended to by a healer, in which it will heal straight, but with an apparent bump.

Onto some minor issues! I notice that you have a tendency to slip from past tense into present tense in varying degrees throughout your posts. Please try to keep your writing in the past tense. Time on Mizahar is notated as ticks, chimes, and bells for seconds, minutes, and hours. The time mislabelling is pretty minor, I just wanted to make sure you were aware of it. Finally, Nanami has basic Common. I've recently made a post in the OOC forum here about what I'm going to be expecting from characters with basic Common. Threads before the date of that post are fine, but all future threads, please try to write more to a basic proficiency, which I understand may take some time to get used to.


Well well well. That was certainly an exciting read! Between the crazy, poison wielding baby thief to Nanami's and Kuv's pact to kill him, there was a lot to take in. I really enjoyed the amount of emotion conveyed in both Nanami's breakdown and Kuvarakh's understanding. Definitely wild. Good job, you two!
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