Edalene

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Edalene

Postby Edalene on November 2nd, 2010, 7:50 am

Edalene Sunblaze

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Basic Information
Name Edalene, of the Sunblaze Pavillion
Age 16
Birthday 34th Summer, 494AV
Race Drykas
Clan Diamond
Gender Female
Last edited by Edalene on January 26th, 2011, 4:47 am, edited 13 times in total.
Edalene
Something more.
 
Posts: 191
Words: 160500
Joined roleplay: October 30th, 2010, 9:01 am
Race: Human, Drykas
Character sheet

Edalene

Postby Edalene on February 5th, 2011, 2:37 am

Physical Description

ImageEdalene is tall, and quite slender, but there is a definite network of muscle in her body. She ‎is not tan, she is not pale, but freckles are scattered all over her body. Her eyes, an amber, ‎golden and warm - similar to her hair. Her hair is a reddish brown, waist length, but usually ‎worn up. Her hair, when up, is twisted into a simple knot, with a blue silk wrap woven into ‎it, representing her mother, died in childbirth. Edalene can often be seen wearing her dark ‎blue leggings with a floaty silver top, a network of knots sewn into the material. She has no ‎windmarks, as no strider has chosen her yet.‎

EDIT: Winter 510AV
Eda has been chosen by a lovely Strider named Ayira. She is playful and speedy, though not the biggest horse of the Drykas. People look at her and underestimate her - much like they do Eda herself. Eda got her windmarks - a lone wolf. As cliche as it sounds, Eda believes that she herself is a 'lone wolf', isolated by her father and her cousin.

Character Concept
Edalene is very much a sixteen year old - awkward, bumbling, not quite used to her own ‎body and prone to sudden moodswings. She will be happy go lucky one moment, showing ‎you the utmost kindness, and extremely pissed off at you the next, for reasons which are ‎only really noticeable to her. Edalene has a tendancy to ramble, and once started, finds it ‎extremely difficult to stop. Edalene does not like to be wrong, and is extremely convicted on ‎her own beliefs - however, this depends on the person she is with. If she likes a person, or ‎has a special attachment to them, she will often change her opinions to fit with theirs, eager ‎to please. What she really wants to do in life is make closer friends ... and improve at the ‎broadsword!‎
Last edited by Edalene on March 24th, 2011, 8:32 am, edited 1 time in total.
Edalene
Something more.
 
Posts: 191
Words: 160500
Joined roleplay: October 30th, 2010, 9:01 am
Race: Human, Drykas
Character sheet

Edalene

Postby Edalene on February 5th, 2011, 2:43 am

Character History

Edalene was born into the Diamond Clan on the 34th day of Summer, 494AV. Her ‎mother ‎was a strong Drykas woman, who had skills in the spear and was enamoured of ‎artwork, so ‎it came as some surprise when Hiya, a physically fit woman, died in childbirth ‎with ‎Edalene, her first child. Hiya and her husband Damie had only been married for the ‎better ‎part of a year. Her death left the young Damie, only twenty three, alone with a small ‎child ‎and a lot of heartache. Nevertheless, he stepped up to challenge of raising a child ‎alone.‎

Damie accomplished with Edalene, though she was not easy child to raise. As a baby, ‎she ‎would gabber incessantly at anyone who would listen, and had a habit of grabbing ‎whatever ‎was nearest and gnawing on it. There were several close calls when she would grab ‎a dagger ‎or sword and bring it towards her mouth. Damie would spring up in a frenzy and ‎stop Eda ‎from cutting out her entire mouth. Eda was an inquisitive child, often involving ‎herself in ‎adult affairs, usually not ending up well. She would giggle awkwardly if ‎reprimanded, and ‎crawl off in shame to find some other adult business to disrupt. This was ‎a trait she kept ‎well into her teenage years.‎

When Eda learned to talk, it became even worse. Her physical presence was amplified by ‎the ‎constant question that surrounded her – “What? Why? When?” Despite the other ‎Drykas’ ‎annoyance, her father actively encouraged her curious nature, teaching her the ‎Common ‎language as well as Pavi, and telling her of his many adventures and escapades in ‎the Sea of ‎Grass – battling Zith, grappling with glassbeaks, all manner of true warrior like ‎situations. ‎Eda held Damie in high esteem, raising him to almost God like status. Anything ‎her beloved ‎father did was sacred. It was when she was three that her father obtained his ‎knotted ‎broadsword, a sword which would come to mean much to Eda, though she did not ‎know it ‎at the time.‎

ImageWhen she was four, Eda woke up one morning and miraculously realised that ‎everything ‎her father did was not unattainable, and was actually entirely possible. Thus ‎began Eda’s ‎passion to become as adept at the broadsword, and as skilled a warrior, as he. ‎She begged ‎him morning, day and night for three years, trying to convince him to let her ‎learn his ‎discipline. Damie refused for three years, wary to teach his scatter brained ‎daughter such a ‎destructive weapon. If he were entirely honest with himself, he was loath to ‎put his only ‎daughter in a position where he might lose her. She was his only family.‎

Eda, for three years, would get her daily chores done as quickly as possible. After she ‎had ‎fulfilled her jobs, she would sprint off to the training grounds. It was here that Eda ‎secretly ‎memorised the moves of the sword, observing and memorising, and later practising ‎and ‎perfecting them with a stick if she found one, and thin air if she could not. Eda learned ‎all ‎she could, determined to learn as much as she could about the sword.‎

One day, when she was seven, she finished all of her chores earlier than usual, so she ‎ran ‎off to the training grounds to watch the warriors spar. She watched as her father stood ‎out ‎on the grounds and fought with such prowess. It was with growing pride, awe and a ‎little ‎bit of jealousky that Eda watched her father fight. Little did she know that he too ‎watched ‎her on the sidelines and had made a long awaited decision. After the other ‎warriors had left ‎the grounds, he drew Eda aside and told her what she had always wanted ‎to hear. He ‎would teach her the sword, and her father’s knotted blade would be hers. Thus ‎began Eda’s ‎training.‎

‎Eda trained exceptionally hard, and it would be truthful to say that everyone was ‎surprised ‎by how well she did. She by no means had any natural skill with the blade, but she ‎practiced ‎long and hard. Of course, she did not mention that she already knew the moves ‎from ‎practicing with a stick. Her father was also impressed, in his silent unflappable way. ‎Eda ‎grew in skill quickly and steadily. She would often stay behind at the War Pavillion to ‎train ‎after her lessons had finished, going over the moves she had learnt, memorising them. ‎She ‎fell in love with the blade, though still untested in the art of the kill.‎

ImageThough her father and the other men at the War Pavillion taught her well, one love ‎pushed ‎out another. While Eda’s skill with the blade improved, her relationship with her ‎father ‎deteriorated. As Eda grew up, she desired a relationship with her father that did not ‎center ‎around her childlike adoration of him. Damie, though, had not been an emotional ‎being ‎since Hiya died, and hence did not cope well with the sudden demands for a ‎meaningful ‎relationship. Though he loved Edalene, he was constantly frustrated by her still ‎childlike ‎antics and her lack of a Strider. A proud, skilled Drykas himself, he was hard ‎pressed to ‎accept his seemingly fail Drykas daughter. Their relationship began to fall apart, ‎starting ‎with small arguments. Later in her years, around the age of thirteen and fourteen, ‎Eda and ‎Damie began to have intense fights.‎

Their last major fight occurred when Edalene was fourteen. Her cousin, Yartree, had made a passing derogatory comment to Damie about Eda’s lack ‎of a ‎Strider. A touchy topic with Damie, he came home that night and demanded of Eda ‎why ‎she was still such an immature, useless child. She was not a Drykas at all, he yelled. Eda ‎was ‎shocked into silence at his sudden outburst. Damie continued to yell, culminating ‎when he ‎said “You will NEVER live up to Hiya’s memory!” Eda snapped at this point, unable ‎to keep ‎silent any more. “It’s good my mother died bearing me, because she would have ‎hated the ‎man you’ve become!” Damie stumbled back, as if struck. He regarded her silently, ‎then ‎stepped out of the Pavillion.‎
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Without her father to talk to, Eda trained harder than before, and took to ‎wandering ‎around Endrykas in her spare time. She loved to observe people as they went ‎about their ‎ways, and she would sometimes involve herself in their affairs. She, as a child, ‎would often ‎wander off into the Sea of Grass, but she has since lost much of her ‎independence and ‎courage. Eda is still very much the fourteen year old who has just ‎destroyed any chance at a ‎relationship with her father, and her lack of maturity shows. ‎

She still wanders Endrykas, restless and wanting something more – she’s just not too ‎sure ‎what that something is.‎
Last edited by Edalene on May 18th, 2011, 10:54 am, edited 2 times in total.
Edalene
Something more.
 
Posts: 191
Words: 160500
Joined roleplay: October 30th, 2010, 9:01 am
Race: Human, Drykas
Character sheet

Edalene

Postby Edalene on February 5th, 2011, 2:55 am

Training, Equipment and Skills

Skills
Skill Points Rank
Animal Husbandry 1 Novice
Horsemanship 4 Novice
Instigation 2 Novice
Intelligence 2 Novice
Investigation 1 Novice
Medicine 15 Novice
Navigation 1 Novice
Observation 3 Novice
Riding 27 Competent
Seduction 1 Novice
Stealth 3 Novice
Unarmed Combat 1 Novice
Weapon: Broadsword 30 Competent


Lores :
  • Ruining a cousin's sword
  • Losing your father's love
  • Chiming in on people's conversations
  • Falling over a lot
  • Getting attention by looking lonely
  • Sword sharpening
  • Kayiri's prowess in rambling
  • Self-made names for broadsword fighting forms
  • Drykas sword decoration
  • Being sneaky... Or not
  • Being defended by your father
  • Barging in
  • Dymphna
  • Raylin Sunsetfeather
  • Crushing on crazies
  • Admiring crafts
  • The random naming of moves
  • Being frightened of gimps
  • Proving worth
  • Wystern
  • Early menopause? Nah!
  • Being a distraction
  • Being smug at the misfortune of others
  • Matasol of the Sunkiss Pavilion
  • Being offended by parrots
  • Creating terrible insults
  • Drykas law (Basic)
  • Submitting to the law
  • Being flirted with while dying
  • Being shot
  • The fate of criminals
  • Dodging flying things
  • Bonding in the face of adversity
  • The awkward turtle
  • Tebridiar
  • Language barriers
  • Holding hands
  • The cattiness of little girls
  • The bond of a Strider and a Drykas
  • Dahlian Windcrasher's pinto Striders
  • Stubbing your toe
  • Breaking the rules is fun!
  • Jarhal (Basic)
  • Being bored
  • I'm Insane!
  • Pycon (Basic)
  • Claiming to be something more
  • Ariel (Basic)
  • Asking silly questions of midgets
  • He's A Nightmare
  • Sit. Think. Breath.
  • TURN AROUND!
  • Fleeing a Charging Olidosapux
  • Not Ready For A Rodeo
  • I'll Save You ... Or Not?
  • Sneaking Out
  • Sit, Stand or Faux Pas
  • Caught By Surprise
  • Being Instinctually Violent
  • Very First Kiss
  • Riding With Kayiri
  • Apologising Too Much
  • Attacked by Reimancy
  • Introverted
  • Saved by the Neigh
  • Unbidden Thoughts
  • Standing Up For Herself
  • Naive Selflessness
  • Dealing With A Disorientated Man


Languages
Fluent in Pavi
Skilled in Common

Equipment
Standard starting package
Broadsword with a network of knots engraved on the blade - heirloom
Drykas leather armour
Last edited by Edalene on May 23rd, 2011, 11:05 am, edited 25 times in total.
Edalene
Something more.
 
Posts: 191
Words: 160500
Joined roleplay: October 30th, 2010, 9:01 am
Race: Human, Drykas
Character sheet

Edalene

Postby Edalene on February 5th, 2011, 3:25 am

Ledger

Total Money Spent/Gained Occurance Thread
600gm +500gm Cashed in SP N/A
583.95gm -17gm5sm Bought Drykas leather armour *


Thread List

Flashbacks :
Date PCs Involved Name Summary
63rd Summer 501AV Edalene (Flashback) A Network of Knots Eda is given her broadsword by her father
22nd Summer 504AV Edalene, Emizal Sneaking Around, Why Are You Here? Eda meets another young Drykas girl


Fall 510AV :
Date PCs Involved Name Summary
25th Fall 510AV Edalene, Vanator, Kayiri Stalking Eda is bored in the Stalk Meet and meets two new people
30th Fall 510AV Edalene, Kayiri, Raylin, Dymphna Cracks in the Glass Eda watches glass being made and gets asked out on a date
68th Fall 510AV Edalene, Kayiri, Tebridiar Shopping With New and Old Friends Eda goes out shopping with Kayiri and is dismayed to find Tebridiar tagging along


Winter 510AV :
Date PCs Involved Name Summary
5th Winter 510AV Edalene, Jarhal The Wild Blue-ish Yonder! Eda meets a man outside of Endrykas who has the same wanderlust as she
6th Winter 510AV Edalene, Conrad You're So Annoying Eda and Conrad get into a fight and have to pick up arrows from the firing range
6th Winter 510AV Edalene, Conrad, Denen Fix Me! Eda and Conrad get some healing done after they have been shot by arrows.
10th Winter 510AV Edalene, Dhanya Song and Drink Eda meets a singer named Dhanya
15th Winter 510AV Edalene, Matasol What Is and What Isn't ‎ Eda is freaked out by a reimancy wielding man
18th Winter 510AV Edalene, Ariel Step Right Over Edalene meets a pycon and is bemused by how strange it is
23rd Winter 510AV Edalene, Wystern You're Doing It Wrong ‎ Eda is taught some broadsword tricks by a man from Syliras
24th Winter 510AV Edalene, Kayiri A Date On Horses Eda and Kay go out riding together‎
40th Winter 510AV Edalene, Eldon, Denen, Matasol Field Day Eda bumps into some other Drykas just outside of Endrykas
73rd Winter 510AV Edalene, Daeva The Past Comes Back To Haunt Us Edalene, distraught, seeks comfort in the War Pavilion one morning
77th Winter 510AV Edalene (Modded) A-Stridin' Eda gets a strider!!!!!!!!
77th Winter 510AV Edalene Look What I Brought Home Edalene tells her family about her new Strider
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Date PCs Involved Name Summary
7th Spring 511AV Edalene, Denen Love Me Not Eda comes upon Denen sitting quietly outside of Endrykas
12th Spring 511AV Edalene, Eldon I'm Preparing For War Woman! Eda meets Eldon training his body in the Sea of Grass
13th Spring 511AV Edalene, Sama'el The Woman and the Gentle Man Eda rides out into the Sea of Grass after the horrifying events of the day before, and is determined to kill a glassbeak or Zith or SOMETHING. She meets a Watchman, Sama'el.
24th Spring 511AV Edalene Hungry Like The Wolf After a failed excursion with Sama'el, Eda is determined to try again
63rd Spring 511AV Eda, Kayiri, Denen, Sam, Van, Kashik A Very Big Day Eldon's birthday party.
68th Spring 511AV Eda, Sam Determination Eda gets annoyed with herself and sees Sam again
71st Spring 511AV Eda, Mycroft Even In Death Eda's father is taken by a mysterious beast in the Sea, and she doesn't know what it is or how to get him back
78th Spring Eda, Denen Setting Down Roots Eda comes to see Denen after the horrifying events of the last tendays
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Edalene
Something more.
 
Posts: 191
Words: 160500
Joined roleplay: October 30th, 2010, 9:01 am
Race: Human, Drykas
Character sheet

Edalene

Postby Edalene on March 18th, 2011, 10:04 am

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My Family


ImageDamie
Damie was born in 471AV, a member of the Sunblaze pavilion in Endrykas, a proud warrior of the Diamond clan. He met Hiya, from the Ruby Clan, when he was sixteen, one day at the War Pavillion as she battled against fierce men and women their age with her trusty spear. It was instant attraction, which led to hasty fumblings in her pavillion that night. Fortunately, there was no product from that night, and it was only meant to be one night - which it was.

Hiya and Damie instead became great friends, bonding with like minds, though Damie was more rash than she, a slow thinker. They were great friends, just friends, but as time wore on, it only made sense for them to get married. It helped that they were desperately in love, too. Which they did, when Damie was twenty two. When Hiya died, he was inconsolable. Despite the cliched odds of it happening, Damie never loved again.

Damie before was rash, excitable and proud. He was always eager to show his skill for the gentle Hiya. After her death, however, he retreated into himself. He taught Eda the ways of the world for a while, until even that became too much for him. He is still the proud Drykas man he always was, strong and upstanding, but he is quick to judge and often resents people before he knows them. He frequently curses, but has a blank stare when it comes to Eda. Anything personal can go to hell, for Damie will never let anything or anyone hurt him again the way the death of his Hiya did.

ImageYartree
Yartree was born 491AV, though he acts as though he has decades of worldky experience on Eda. His mother was Damie's sister, and they were never particularly close. Damie merely paid Yartree's mother attention due to the fact that they were family. It was never ascertained just who Yartree's father, a scandolous fact that was covered up by the Sunblaze clan - even though the rest of the Drykas wouldn't have particularly cared. His mother stayed with Damie, the new Ankhal of his pavilion. Yartree's mother, however, was fond of long, lonely rides out and around the Sea of Grass, though she never strayed too far from the city. The Zith, however, came close. Capturing his mother, the Zith left with the woman in tow, a new slave to add to their collection. The horrors that would have occured there are something that Yartree consciously avoids thinking about. He was six when it happened. Eda has vague memories of Yartree's mother riding with her when she was three, just glimpses of hair and smell in the recesses of memory. Yartree grew up lonely because of this, but he bonded closely to Damie as the father he never had, though neither of them would ever be verbal about the bond.

Yartree is fun loving, radical, and everything Damie was as a youth. He loves to seek adventure, he loves the warmth of the flesh of a woman and he loves the buzz of ale through his veins. Anything that can enhance the experience of life is a bonus, for life is short - which Yartree knows well. He can be rude, though, and often insults Eda. He does not do it maliciously, despite what she believes, but he is far too gruff to ever apologise if he hurts her, leading to the rift currently between them.

ImageHiya
Edalene
Something more.
 
Posts: 191
Words: 160500
Joined roleplay: October 30th, 2010, 9:01 am
Race: Human, Drykas
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