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[The Spinning Coin] Two Men Enter

Postby Rhov on April 4th, 2015, 10:46 pm

11th of Spring, 515 A.V.

As Rhov entered through the double doors which marked the entrance to the Spinning Coin, the sounds and smells of the harbor all but vanished. A choking fog of smoke drifted lazily through the building, replacing the clean, salty air of the sea. The foul smell of blood and alcohol pierced through the dark atmosphere of the Coin, and uproarious cries of both laughter and anger echoed nosily throughout the spacious warehouse. Shifting forms of men and women alternating between watching the fights and gambling their savings away crowded the half of the building that was not taken up by the massive stage.

Rhov hated the city. It was just so...crowded. The sights, the sounds, even the people all vied for his sense's attention, and they only succeeded in clustering and confusing him. The people were the undoubtedly worst, their huddled forms setting his fingers on fire as his natural senses attempted to compensate for the constant disturbance. Even Eria, his Guardian and constant foil, found the city distasteful. Neither Rhov nor Eria dealt well with walls, both of them missing the unabated freedom the wilderness promised.

Just, for once, take it slow Rhov. We don't know the people here, but I doubt they would be impressed with your, well, more direct approach to conversation. Subtlety is key. Find your prey, and stalk it quietly. Eria's song-like voice tinkled thoughtfully, knowing full well that Rhov was more like to abandon her advice than heed it. She sat poised and graceful on his shoulder, Rhov's opposite in both appearance and personality.

I know how to track my prey Eria. I am not a youngling on his first hunt. He replied with an internal growl. Rhov, while naturally abrasive, was particularly put-off with his Guardian recently. As she had not graced him with her presence during his first bounty hunt, Rhov maintained an annoyed attitude towards his spiritual mentor. It appeared to him that Eria only cared to comment on the mundane instances of his life, leaving him abandoned in the moments where he actually needed her guidance.

No need for rudeness! I was only trying to help. She huffed in response, her injured courtesy turning the eagle's voice painfully sharp. She knew of Rhov's recent annoyance with her and attempted to mend the rift with a cautious word or two, but she had absolutely no patience for the mule-headed boy's lack of manners. With a shrill cry of disapproval, she vanished from her perch in an instant, leaving Rhov to his own devices. She hoped he would heed her advice, but Eria knew better than to expect such wisdom from her charge.

Rolling his solid, black eyes at his invisible Guardian's scorn, Rhov proceeded forward with a casual air about him, attempting to mirror the gait of those around him. While he found her perplexing and overly concerned with how others perceived him, her advice was sound. This was a new environment, filled to brim with unknowns and variables. A certain type of urban camouflage was required to blend into the background inside Stormhold Castle. Hiding in plain sight, as it were.

The hurried movements of people rushing towards the spectator seats as another round of cage fighting began sent Rhov's senses spiking again, and the Chaktawe grit his teeth in aggravation before sperating himself from the swarm of people. Damn crowds, he thought to himself as he placed himself roughly on one of the bar stools. His eyes narrowed reflexively as he saw who was speaking gruffly to the bartender. Gene Duval.

A man's reputation often proceeded them, and Gene Duval was no different. Mean, cruel, and according to general consensus, incredibly well informed. Gene Duval was the type of man Rhov needed if he was to stay employed as a bounty hunter, a man who could find and direct Rhov to criminals who needed capturing. As much as it irked the fledgling hunter, Mr. Duval had contacts that Rhov would be dependent on.

Collecting himself as well as he could manage, Rhov cleared his throat to gain Duval's attention. "Mr. Duval, a word. Please."

I even managed a "please". Eria should be happy.

The bear of a man raised a single, bushy eyebrow before motioning Rhov to follow. Rhov's eyes trailed after Duval, the onyx orbs attempting to glean any possible information out of the man's gait. Duval's gait was aggressive, his steps more akin to stomps. He strode forth with confidence of a man who has seen battle and come out victorious. He knew his abilities, his strengths and weaknesses, and his steps proved self-assured that he could handle anything that was thrown at him. A man not to be trifled with, but a warrior that Rhov could deal with.

Once the two were a respectable distance from curious ears, Duval turned sharply towards Rhov, his angry eyes giving the bronzed foreigner a once-over. "What do you want kid?" He snarled, his annoyance at being disturbed almost palatable.

Rhov bristled visibly at the comment, half-tempted to respond to Duval in kind before reigning in his anger.

"I am no child, and what I want is very simple. You have contacts, I have skills. I am a bounty hunter, but I need someone to alert me of upcoming contracts, to keep me informed. I think it would be profitable if worked together."

The man's features curled in surprise, obviously expecting a different sort of conversation when he pulled Rhov aside. Turning to face the crowd, Duval mulled over Rhov's proposition carefully. In their silence, the rise and fall of the crowd's cheers filled the warehouse with their thunderous sounds. Yet, even in their uproarious upheaval, the blood-curdling sound of a death-rattle pierced the barrier of sound like a knife. In that caged arena, one man lie dead, and another stood victorious.

Duval's eyes flashed with a cruel spark of intelligence before turning back again to face Rhov. A fanged, wolfish smile curled upon his face, and the rough facade peeled back to reveal savage joy.

"That was my last fight of the day. Tell you what kid, you hop in the cage and you survive, I'll take you up on that offer."
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[The Spinning Coin] Two Men Enter

Postby Rhov on April 5th, 2015, 4:16 am

"So be it," Rhov growled back without a moment's hesitation. He was tired of posturing and pretending, of blending into the background. There was a time to hide and there was a time to fight, to strike out loudly and boldly. Gene Duval was not a man who would admire the subtlety of the hunt, the quiet kill, no, he was one who wanted to see blood and battle. To witness the best and worst of man as steel clashed in a screeching dance before him. Rhov needed to show him that he could be both, silent hunter and feral fighter. If he needed to prove himself, he would, even if it was to such a man like Duval.

Duval once again stepped away, but this time towards the caged pit which had seen the death of a myriad of men for nothing else but a crowd's entertainment. That very crowed parted as Duval approached, his presence demanding both their fear and respect. Yes, Mr. Gene Duval's reputation exceeded him extensively, but Rhov did not doubt the truth in it. Rhov's own steps echoed his potential patron's confidence, his stride long and assured of himself as he followed the gap Duval's gait had left. He could not afford doubt, not now. To doubt in his strength, to let fear paralyze his movements even for a moment, would do as much good as falling on his own blade.

The split crowd revealed a set of guarded stairs, of which Rhov could only assume led to a preparation area. The smell of sweat and blood assaulted Rhov as two assistants dragged off what remained of the last unfortunate combatant. His head was crushed, bone caving in and creating odd depressions on his face. Bruises, dark and full, covered his pale form. His neck was snapped, the skin twisted and bent in an odd angle. Either the fighter was severely under-experienced, or his opponent was simply that good. Brief tremors of terror iced throughout Rhov's form before he clamped down on the emotion.

The bear of a man that he followed led him to a small rack of weapons, motioning him to choose one of the many armaments held fast by the device. Rhov waved a hand in response, declining the opportunity. He carried his weapon with him at all times, for it was the last reminder he had of his home. Drawing the curved blade of his father's Angle-Knife, Rhov examined the carved designs laden within the viscous blade. Shaking memories of a land far-gone and foreign to the one he lived in now, Rhov sheathed the blade again to equip his Teethed Gauntlet. A cool touch compassed his hand, replacing the worn bronze of his skin with smooth steel. The gauntlet reduced the mobility and flexibility of his off-hand, but it more than made up for it with the increased defense it gave.

Nodding slightly to Duvan, Rhov was approached by a well-dressed man who exuded a charismatic charm. "Hey kid, I'm the cage-match's announcer. If you're going to fight in the cage, you're going to need a fighting name. Got anything in mind?"

Rhov eyed the man with slight confusion, the strange customs of Syliras once again blind-siding him. "I have a name, it is Rhov. That should serve well enough," he replied in frustration, this establishment's employees' tendency to refer to him as a child beginning to irk him.

"No, no," the announcer assured. "I need something with punch. Something with panache. Make the crowd want to shout your name, you know? C'mon kid, give me something to work with." Seeing Rhov's unyielding stance, the announcer continued, "If you don't, I'll call you Fat Joe and be done with it."

Sighing in defeat, Rhov responded quickly and levelly. "I was born in the Dune Seas of Eyktol to the Kalanue Tribe of the Chaktawean people before leaving on spiritual journey to Syliras. That should be enough." Rhov brushed off the thin-faced announcer's attempts for more information, and mentally prepared himself as he approached the door to the cage.

"Foreigner in a strange land on a religious journey to find himself. Fine, I'll make do." The announcer's smooth voice carried distantly in the back of Rhov's mind. He had more important things to worry about than some inane stage-name.

Blood-orange plumage of a desert sunset appeared before Rhov as he was once again stopped before the entrance to the cage. Rhov, you need to rethink this. You're being unnecessarily risky. This isn't some brawl between friends, this is a fight to death. Please, just consider the-

"No!" The Chaktawe thundered at his avian Guardian. "I have made my choice, and I will follow it through. Either help, or get out of my way." He was tired of her constant interruptions, her constant attempts at tempering the fury which bubbled and boiled in his blood only serving to further the wedge between them. If she was going to appear only to berate his decisions, then she would at least yield when he had made one. For Rhov, in the midst of the tension which ran through him before battle, it was his way or no way at all.

Eria's eye's turned sharp for an instant, before cooling to an icy glare. Fine, but be prepared to lay in the bed you made, she thought at her charge, her lilting voice turning hard and hurt as she vanished before Rhov's eyes. The bounty hunter seethed in anger as the silence Eria had left in him swarmed his thoughts. Shaking his head in frustration, he attempted to re-focus his thoughts to the conflict which lay before of him.

He knew little to nothing about his opponent, he was angry, and he had had very little time to recover from the wounds which still ached from his last bounty hunt. Oh yes, this would go very well indeed. An absolute cake-walk.

"Ladies and Gentlemen!" The announcer called out, his voice reverberating with the trained grace of a storyteller. "Let it never be said that this establishment does not treat its guests right, for we at the Spinning Coin have a very special surprise for you all. An unscheduled cage match!" The audience cried out with exuberance, and the clinking sound of rapidly produced Miza's could be heard as gambler's readied their bets. "Yes, yes. All very exciting. Regardless, let us introduce our combatants!"

"Your last fight's victor needs no introduction, but let's give him one anyway! He's a bruiser with a penchant for snapping bones. He's mean, He's rough, and he's one ugly sonuva bitch! Ladies and Gentlemen, give a rousing applause for the Jawbreaker!" Cries of approval shook the warehouse as the audience followed the announcer's instructions to the letter. Drinks crashed together as toasts were risen in his honor.

Great, he's popular.

"And now, for our challenger! He has traveled across a sea of sand to be here today, driven forward only by his iron will and desire to serve his God. A spiritual nomad lost in a foreign land, he has found his way through bloody and brutal combat! May I introduce, for the first time here today...Exodus!" A hush swept over the crowd as waited expectantly for the mysterious challenger to appear on the stage. Nervous laughter bubbled up in small patches among the viewers as the arena remained empty save for Jawbreaker. Had her opponent lost his nerve and run away, or was he simply waiting for a dramatic moment to appear on stage?

Neither, as it turned out.

"Kid, that's your cue," Duval whispered urgently from behind him, shoving him roughly through the cage doors.

Embarrassed, Rhov ignored the catcalls of the crowd as he readied himself for combat. He was dressed in his usual attire, hair braided and clothed only in his tanned pants. Unfortunately for him, this apparel was considered excessively immodest by Sylirians, and provoked quite a reaction from the female, and some male, members of the crowd. Rhov was not one usually to care what others thought of him, but with as many eyes as were trained on him at this moment, he was glad his black Chaktawean warpaint hid his blush.

With a flourish, Rhov removed his father's Angle-Knife from its sheathe on his back. The slightest bolt of fear made the hunter's hand quiver, his onyx eyes narrowed at his opponent.No fear. Not now. Now was the time to be brave. To overcome. To fight and scrap and claw for success. To bleed for what I believe in. Now is the time to be more than myself. This is my path and I. Will. Walk. It!

Now psyched up for the upcoming conflict, Rhov dropped into his fighter's stance; blade held in a reverse grip, it's talon like edge curved outward and towards his opponent. He raised his gauntleted hand in a protective form, hand open and ready to intercept any strikes from his opponent. Sweat began to pool above his eyes as the oppressive heat of torchlight bore down on him. The cage door slammed shut, the only route for escape now locked from the outside.

"Combatants, are you ready?" A brief nod from both Rhov and the Jawbreaker was all the announcer received. "3...2...1...FIGHT!"

Two bodies rushed towards each other in that arena. Only one would leave alive.
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[The Spinning Coin] Two Men Enter

Postby Rhov on April 8th, 2015, 8:56 pm

Skin slammed against skin as the two combatants wrestled for control. RHov's muscles rippled from the exertion of keeping back a man who he suddenly realized had the advantage in both reach and strength. Sweat pooled above the Chaktawe's black warpaint as he was being forced to his knees, and just as it appeared that he was to be pinned, Rhov struck. Thanking Eywaat for the curvature of his weapon, Rhov slid the keen edge of his blade across his opponent's back, raking through the thick mass of muscle. The Jawbreaker roared in anguish at his newly carved back, allowing Rhov enough time to break the grapple and slide back from his enemy.

Didn't even observe him before I dove in. Maybe Eria has a point, I am getting too reckless, Rhov thought inwardly, chiding himself for his blind charge. Rage sang through his blood in a chorus of violence, and too often did he let it control his actions. Breathing deeply, Rhov molded his wrath, sharpened it, but giving it a target. He allowed his battle-fury to keen his mind, make it into a weapon as sharp as his father's knife.

Obsidian eyes now hard with focus, Rhov used the moment's respite from combat to scan his opponent. He was tall, 6'2, maybe 6'3, and his form was stacked with hard muscle, no doubt earned from years of dealing death in the arena. His hair was cut short, almost shaved, most likely to prevent any opportunist to grab a handful of the stuff to gain advantage. Hands covered in scars, it seemed to Rhov that this man was born and bred for war. A dog, rabid and wild, to be aimed and released at any man Gene Duval deemed worthy. A dog that Rhov would have to put down.

The Jawbreaker's fist swung in hard and fast, shattering Rhov's predatory focus. Luckily, Rhov's steel-clad hand stood to intercept the wild hay-maker, absorbing the brunt of the blow as flesh impacted against steel. Rhov's hand vibrated as tendril's of pain spider-webbed through his forearm, an unnecessary reminder to the bounty hunter of his enemy's grotesque strength. Rhov countered the attack with an upward slash from waist to temple, but once again he found himself surprised by the towering man's speed. The Jawbreaker's hand caught his easily, fat fingers squeezing hard against his knife-hand's forearm. Yet, even through his grimace of pain, Rhov grinned hungrily. His eyes curled with animilistic cunning, as if he were a jackal outsmarting a Baral.

Flicking his wrist forward, Rhov felt the momentum of the Angle-Knife spin about the hilt's finger ring and leave a satisfying gash across the Jawbreaker's face. His opponent once again cried in pain as blood seeped from the shallow cut, dripping downward from eyebrow to opposite cheek, but still he held on, his vice grip tightening in spite of the pain. The Jawbreaker's free hand lashed forward, impacting solidly into Rhov's stomach and forcing him to the ground. Rhov grit his teeth in anger as his blade clattered to the floor, clattering far enough away from him that he could reach it. Seizing his new found opprotunity, the mammoth of the man launched his knee upward, connecting solidly against Rhov's jaw and sending the Chaktawe flying backwards.

Stars swarmed his vision as Rhov struggled to stand, the force of his enemy's last blow nearly rendering him unconscious. A rogue sliver of blood seeped out of his mouth, and Rhov paused only for a moment to wipe it from existence. As he gathered himself to stand, Rhov almost missed the oncoming storm of pain that would be the Jawbreaker's fist. He dove hard and wide, narrowly missing what would have been a knock-out blow. This time, Rhov came to his feet without delay, not wanting to risk another unfortunate surprise.

The fighter's circled each other with savage intent, the combat now once-again center stage. Rhov knew that if it came to hand to hand, he was nowhere experienced enough to handle the Jawbreaker. His gaze shifted to his blade, which now lay in his opponent's possession. It seemed that in his rush to avoid the Jawbreaker's namesake move, his enemy saw fit to equip Rhov's ancestral blade. Sighing, Rhov undid the straps on his gauntlet, removing the steel which encompassed his left hand. He needed all the mobility he could get if it came to a knife fight, and his gauntlet would only slow him down. Onyx eyes hard with rage, Rhov realized what he must do. Once again, he would have to engage in his people's style of warfare. Deception and guile would be his only allies now, pitting them against the Jawbreaker's Goliath strength and unending endurance. He was caged, bloody, and bruised, yet still he found a reason to flash a wolfish grin. It was in the midst of combat where Rhov found himself most at peace, finally able to abandon any pretense of restraint. His barriers fractured under the strain and effort of battle, and with seeing his opponent holding his father's blade, the last remnant of his homeland, Rhov got angry. Truly and irrevocably pissed.

In normal combat, Rhov was scary. But a Rhov consumed by fury and held rapt by rage as he saw that last gift his family ever gave him corrupted by a man who knew nothing of his people's struggle? That, that was Eywaat-damned terrifying.

The Jawbreaker charged forward with blade in hand, but Rhov let his opponent come to him, stance casual and relaxed. As he neared the Chaktawe, Rhov flung his still held gauntlet into his opponent's face. It mattered not if the strike connected, all that mattered was the momentary distraction it provided. Rhov weaved under the now blind punch that his enemy threw, and now under the Jawbreaker's guard, landed two punishing blows into his rival combatant's abdomen. Continuing to press his advantage, Rhov's adrenaline surged as he hooked a leg around the knee of the Jawbreaker's and shoved his shoulder roughly into the mammoth of a man. The Jawbreaker landed with a solid thump, but not before cutting a deep gash into the meat of Rhov's well muscled arm. Face twisted in pain, Rhov pressed his advantage as well as he could and drove his heel downward into his enemy's wrist. The solid crunch of bone echoed even among the thunderous roar of crowd, and Rhov only paused to scoop up his now free knife. One hand pressed firmly downward on the Jawbreaker's now shattered wrist, and the other rearing upward with his knife, the bounty hunter aimed a killing blow to his opponent's heart.

However, it seemed that Eywaat's favor was not with Rhov today, as the Jawbreaker's speedy response once again intercepted the Chaktawe's knife attack. Even with the Jawbreaker's meaty hand clamped firmly against Rhov's bronzed wrist, the desert dweller still found reason to carry the savage smile which emerged plainly across his face. It seemed that the Jawbreaker was not one to learn from his mistakes, as Rhov once again utilized his ancestral blade's deadly curve. Twisting his wrist in a crescent motion, Rhov found success in severing through the soft tissue of his opponent's wrist, cutting through both flesh and vein with ease. However, he was not expecting the burst of strength which tossed him from his position on top of his opponent and hard into the caged edge of the arena.

Cold steel bars almost soothing to Rhov's now bruised back, he once again found him self surprised as a rough hand slick with blood lifted him to his feet via his neck. The hand pressed forward, lifting him higher against the bars which marked the stage's end. It closed firmly against Rhov's neck, meaty finger's pressing inward towards his throat. Rhov's hand's clawed at his assailant's, but it was to no avail. His grip was to firm, his strength too much. Darkness consumed his vision as the life was being chocked out of him, dissipating all outside distractions. In this moment, there were no regrets, no responsibilities, only the slow pain of being strangled. The crowd dissipated, as did the torchlight, the cage. There was nothing besides Rhov and that grasping, bloody hand. And soon, even that began to vanish.

Then, just as the silent whispers of unconsciousness began to penetrate his mind, Rhov came crashing down to the stage with a clatter.

"You've...lost...too...much...blood," he managed to cough out to his opponent, who was now on both knees, staring up at the warehouse's ceiling.

Grasping at his fallen blade, a grim atmosphere enveloped Rhov. This was one aspect of battle that he did not enjoy. The passage of one's soul from this world to the next, all instigated by his own hand. It was not a task to take enjoyment in, his father had seen well to implant that into Rhov's mind. Killing was a waste. It was robbing this world of all the potential, good and bad, that a person had to offer. To take a life was to become a thief, albeit of a different kind. If it was possible, Rhov would have avoided this situation, refused to end the life of so vicious a warrior. Taken a defiant stand against the patrons of this den of vice, refused to be at their beck and call. Unfortunately, to do so would yield nothing, as the Jawbreaker seemed intent departing from this world.

So, with a sorrowful hand, still trembling from the fatigue of combat, Rhov readied his blade. The cut was quick, clean, and hopefully mostly painless. Rhov caught the giant's body before it slammed onto the floor, laying him down gently. With a blood-stained hand, he slid his worthy opponent's eye-lids shut.

"May you rest in peace. You fought bravely, and have done yourself proud. Eywaat guard your passage into the next world, and gift you with wings to fly among his flock,"
Rhov whispered gravely, the erupting cheer of the crowd divergent and indifferent to his internal conflict.

"Ladies and Gentlemen, there you have it! We have our victor, and what a match! It was a close one, but Exodus proved that his desert Gods do watch over him! Once more, let's give a round of applause to our mysterious nomad, Exodus!

Rhov wasted no time exiting the blood soaked arena, heading straight for the now unlocked doors. Gene Duval motioned an assistant forward, and Rhov allowed them to give his wound a once-over. He would require stitches, but the staff had no one skilled enough to provide treatment. Rhov grunted in response, saddened by the knowledge of his upcoming doctor's visit. Once the medic had cleaned and bound the gash, Duval pulled Rhov aside.

"Hell of a fight kid! You just won yourself a deal. I'll let you know of any incoming contracts, and, with a finder's fee of course, you'll get paid for higher value jobs."

Bristling from the inclusion of an unknown fee, combined with his still latent anger from the fight, Rhov barked back aggressively "That was not the terms of our arrangement!"

Something flashed in Duval's angry eyes, but Rhov couldn't quite tell what it was. Annoyance? Frustration?

Then, without warning, Mr. Duval slammed Rhov's injured arm on the table, tore off the bandage, and pored out the alcohol he had grabbed from celebration on his now open wound. The liquid hissed and strung as it perforated through his gaping cut. Rhov's face twisted from the torturous agony of Duval's action, while Duval's face remained placid and unchanged. Still, that unidentifiable something danced in the fierceness of his eyes.

"Kid, if there's one thing I can't abide, it's disrespect. Disrespect me again, and I'll tear your petching head off. Understand me?"

Rhov's hurried nod was his only response.

"Good, then get out of here. You've outstayed your welcome. I'll let you know if a contract comes your way." Duval's normally gruff voice came out smoothly and evenly, as if the two had just been discussing the weather or bread prices.

As he walked towards the warehouse's exit, Rhov turned back to give Mr. Duval a parting glance. Sadism, he decided. That is what flickered in his eyes. Whatever he is, Mr. Duval is not a man to be triflied with.

Exiting the Spinning Coin, Rhov paused to take in the salty harbor air. Despite it all, the pain and the suffering, Rhov found himself feeling liberated. That fight, while savage and brutal, had revealed something in Rhov, something that had not escaped his notice. Deception, agility, precision, savagery, these were the tools that had won him victory today. Tools which had often one him victory, if he recalled correctly.

His path might be fraught with struggle and toil, but Rhov found himself undaunted. Unafraid to walk it. For he knew, that with training, he could expand on what he learned today. Sharpen his skills, make himself stronger. With time and hard work, he could prove to everyone, to men like Gene Duval, that the chosen of Eywaat were not to be trifled with.

Yes, he decided internally. This is what I will do. I will not solely hunt for just the thrill it provides. I will train, become stronger, and I will create The Way of the Crow.

OOCThe Way of The Crow is the name I decided to give to the Martial Art/Combat Style that Rhov will train to create. He's still got a long way to go to even come close to making it combat viable, but I thougt I might as well give him the goal. I made up move names/stances and everything. It's going to be fun :)
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[The Spinning Coin] Two Men Enter

Postby Katelyn Marks on April 22nd, 2015, 1:37 pm

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➢ Observation +3
➢ Socialization +3
➢ Philosophy +1
➢ Planning +1
➢ Rhetoric +3
➢ Negotiation +2
➢ Tactics +2
➢ Weapon: Angle-knife +2
➢ Wrestling +1
➢ Acrobatics +1
➢ Unarmed Combat +1

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➢ Location: The Spinning Coin
➢ Gene Duval: Owner of the Spinning Coin
➢ Gene Duval: Contact Provider
➢ Cage Name: Exodus
➢ Wrestling: Basic Grappling
➢ The Way of the Crow

Consequences: Rhov will have several nice scars from the cage fight, most noticeable of all from the gash on his arm. All wounds will be healed in two weeks with treatment from a doctor, or instantly with Gnosis. He will be extremely sore for a week, but only tender two weeks after if the damage is allowed to heal naturally.

Comments: A very good thread! It held my attention the whole time. Everything flowed so well, and it was nice to see a darker side of Syliras that people don't always take advantage of. You wrote your combat so well and so descriptively that I awarded you extra for the effort, but only because it was condensed in one post.

In the future, if you want more experience, try to break things up into more posts since the norm is +1 point per post in which the skill is used properly. I can't wait to see how the Way of the Crow develops! It's always great to see people come up with new, original development goals. Keep up the good work!

If you have any concerns or questions about your rewards please feel free to send me a message. Also, please edit your original grade request and mark it as graded. Thank you and enjoy!
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