Closed New Beginnings (Sayana)

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Considered one of the most mysterious cities in Mizahar, Alvadas is called The City of Illusions. It is the home of Ionu and the notorious Inverted. This city sits on one of the main crossroads through The Region of Kalea.

New Beginnings (Sayana)

Postby Nephti on October 2nd, 2015, 11:13 pm

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The streets melted into smaller, wooden houses, tucked among trees and rocks that added a more wild look. This was where they were headed, a place very different to the Alvadas she knew. Not that she knew it very well. Alvadas changed dramatically, and she often found herself lost whenever she was sent out shopping or to deliver a message.

Sayana gave her orders to not speak, and to stick close, and they entered the inn, Nephti taking in the new surroundings. Tables and chairs were scattered across the room, furs adorning them and the floor. It was fairly empty, with kelvics in one corner, hidden behind a roaring open fire pit, and pale looking people in the other corner. Nephti's new msitress looked around, before exiting, met by a hooded man who was obviously the man she had been looking for.

Sayana suggested that they walk, and began to talk, Nephti staying close behind her as a silent shadow, trying to make out the man under his hood. None of his features were clear, and she gave up trying, instead listening to the conversation with interest and fear.

He was to track her down if she escaped into the wild. Nephti didn't like the thought Sayana had given her, of being attacked by animals or zith, but having a man ready to track her down if she did escape scared her even more. Sayana suddenly seemed a lot worse than before, automatically preparing for the worse. Automatically assuming the worst of her. But he also said he wouldn't track her in the city, or if she left by boat, and she felt hope rise again, despite having not even considered escaping yet. It was too early for that.

While the words Sayana said next discouraged her from leaving by boat, as they would be visiting the docks the next day, most likely to inform people not to let her run away, she kept that in mind, feeling it was an important point. If one day, she did escape, it would have to be by sea.

And there was a city tracker too. Nephti listened a little doubting as Sayana started to lead her to her new house. To have spent time and money arranged both a city and wilderness tracker, just for her. Was Nephti really worth that much? She doubted it, but perhaps it was her mistress who was the problem, paranoid perhaps. Nephti only hoped her paranoia would disappear soon, giving the slave girl freedom. After all, cooped up in a single apartment wearing chains all day made slavery so many times worse.

Eventually, they reached the inn, a simple block-shaped building, that gave it its name. They entered, and Nephti braced herself, ready to meet the two boys she would be working for. Hopefully, they wouldn't be too bad.

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New Beginnings (Sayana)

Postby Fable on November 18th, 2015, 4:53 am

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Sayana

Skills
    Investigation +3
    Land Navigation +3
    Persuasion +3
    Weapon: Dagger +1
    Tactics +2
    Mathematics +1
    Philosophy +1
    Acting +1
    Planning +1
    Intimidation +1
    Subterfuge +1
Lores
    Nephti: Humble Beginnings
Rewards/Consequences
    -550 GM
    +Iron Manacles x 3
    +Iron Collar and Key
    +Silver Scimitar, Decorative
Notes :
Due to Alvadas' whimsy nature, there aren't really neighborhoods. The city puts things where it wants, and while the wealthy might try to have a something something in their yards or the like, the majority of their wealth would display on interior illusions rather than exterior. I'll be sure to add this to the Player's Guide, as this is definitely something that can be easily missed! Otherwise, very interesting to see Sayana in this light. Again, just to reiterate, slavery isn't very common in Alvadas and isn't associated with wealth: In Alvadas, if you have slaves you're too poor to pay servants. I'll be sure to add this as to the player's guide as well.

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Nephti

Skills
    Cooking +1
    Hosting +2
    Fortune Telling +1
    Cleaning +2
    Persuasion +1
    Endurance +1
    Teaching +1
    Investigation +2
    Intelligence +1
    Storytelling +1
    Observation +3
Lores
    Sayana: Eypharian Mistress
Rewards/Consequences
    None
Notes :
Please do not copy large chunks of other players' writing and paste it into your replies. While I'm sure this is not intended, it is plagiarism and is not tolerated on Mizahar or most writing communities. If you're copying what someone has said, that is acceptable. Please just be a bit more conservative in the amount you transcribe. As Common is her poor language, please play it as such. One thing you can take inspiration from would be migrants from other countries in the real world: they can communicate, but they often have difficulty with odd words and things get lost in translation.

As far as the rest of the writing however, good work! You have a very nice, clean approach to storytelling that I appreciate! Keep it up, and do keep my advice in mind for the future. :)
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