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Considered one of the most mysterious cities in Mizahar, Alvadas is called The City of Illusions. It is the home of Ionu and the notorious Inverted. This city sits on one of the main crossroads through The Region of Kalea.

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Postby Nephti on December 20th, 2016, 11:00 am

Arisia talked about martial arts, while Nephti held a look of confusion on her face. "What are martial arts?" she wondered out loud, confused even more at the mention of weapons and protection. A weapon, perhaps? But art was paintings and music and all things beautiful like the. And martial... she had no clue what martial meant. Hopefully, Arisia would be able to describe it in a way she would understand.

Then she spoke about the mirroring, which she understood a little more. It didn't sound as much magical and mysterious as she had expected. Most people who spent a long time in each other's company, who became friends, grew similar in interests. That was what happened - as far as she knew anyway. Perhaps it would be quicker, with a bond. Or stronger or a lot more... just more.

It only made her want to learn more about Arisia, so she could know what she would become, in a way.

She listened intently to Arisia. She spoke of a mother - in two languages - and Nephti assumed the first slip up was the word the Vantha used. After all, she always called her mother muna when she thought of her. As for out loud, she couldn't remember speaking to anyone about her own mother.

The story she was told left so many gaps. She lived with her mother, left, then lived with a fortune teller. Then she became restless (Nephti assumed that this meant she wanted to move and do things) and left Syliras to come to Alvadas. But surely more had to have happened in her life. After all, Nephti was younger than her, and so much had happened.

Then she remembered the strange ageing of the Kelvics, and realised that this woman could in fact be very young, in her eyes. "How old are you?" she asked, giggling slightly at the confusion she had had, "Young? Your life is so... ordinary?" Not that it was a bad thing. It just showed how little she had really lived.

"What is Syliras like?" she then continued, curious about the city of knights. She had heard quite a bit about it, but still didn't know anything about it. And, she didn't want to talk about her past quite yet. Let her instead get lost in Arisia's world.
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Postby Arisia on December 20th, 2016, 12:20 pm

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She giggled slightly when she heard that Nephti hadn't understood. She stopped herself and hoped the other wasnt offended, she had a knack for offending people when she didn't intend to.

"It means fighting without a weapon, its very different from fighting with and there are different styles and ways."

She felt the Eypharians confusion when she giggled and asked how old she was. She smiled, remembering that the other races age differently, and felt a need to explain. "I am two years old, though It's probably the equivalent of around your age, or a little older, I am not that sure."

She nodded in agreement, "Yes, it has been ordinary, though it is not the life I wanted, it is what I have had so far."

It was true that it wasn't the life she wanted, she had gone out in search of adventure and her bondmate. She had her bondmate now, and by the looks of it, the other one would be had now too.

She gladly spoke about Syrilas, she had known a lot about it while grew up there. It had been a place that had treated her well, not with prejudices or racism against the Kelvic, though she knew that some places were full of people with those opinions, she hadn't experienced it yet.

"It was very busy, though in a different way than Alvadas is." She laughed slightly. "Well, for starters you could tell where you were going." She paused and continued, "It was full of the knights of course, many of which were just people who sought power, while some were good and wanted to protect us.

I liked it there, it wasn't really an exciting place to be for myself, but I still consider it home."
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Postby Nephti on December 20th, 2016, 9:48 pm

The woman giggled, and Nephti giggled with her, showing her she didn't feel offended at all by her laughter. As long as Arisia took the time to explain it afterwards, Nephti was fine with it. So martial arts was unarmed combat, basically. And the different styles and ways... she would have to ask her about it. Later though. Maybe she could ask Arisia to show her too.

The Kelvic then explained she was two years - Nephti's years - old, which explained her lack of life. It must be strange, she realised, ageing at a completely different rate, even within the species. Her life would flash before her while friends and family would live so much longer. Nephti was lucky that Eypharians aged like humans, like most of the races. The shorter or longer living ones would lose all their friends, if they weren't the same race. Lose them at the wrong times, that was.

Nephti nodded along as Arisia continued. She wouldn't have an ordinary life with Nephti, the girl could assure her that. Not in Alvadas either - she had experienced so much in this city. The undead, ice, whales. Things that didn't even make sense as she tried to list them. "You pick right place for not ordinary," the girl smiled, knowing that the city at the moment was too ordinary for what it could be. They just had to wait till next season to see what more it would bring.

"Syliras sounds interesting," Nephti replied after the woman had spoken about it, "Maybe one day I can see the knights. The good knights, anyway." She began to giggle again, enjoying herself. "But Alvadas sounds nicer. I want to stay here too."

She had found that out when she had visited Ahnatep. As much as she had wanted to return, she had wanted to go back to Alvadas even more when she was there. Of course, that was for all sorts of reasons.

Deciding it was time to tell her story, the girl shut her eyes and began to compress it, so she could get it over with. Details could be shared over time, but the main plot had to come out as one. "I come from Ahnatep. I was stupid there and my parents lost money. So, I was taken as slave." Realising it made her parents sound cruel, heartless, she added, "By Dhani, an evil Dhani. My parents did not know. It was scary - terrifying. But I came here and learned about Priskil and about hope. So I was not scared, not as much. The goddess gave me her mark and then one day I was free. So much happened. But all now is I have to help Priskil and give hope, so have to help Vantha."

And that wasn't any of it. She had missed out so much - her return to Ahnatep, the start of the Order of Radiance, the undead. Sayana. But none of that was important and she didn't want to think about any of it. Hopefully, Arisia would understand. It wasn't like she didn't trust her - she wanted to tell her. But this wasn't the time or place. Hopefully, Arisia would understand that too.
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Postby Arisia on December 21st, 2016, 11:41 am

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She listened intently to the Eypharians story, it was awful, and she couldn't imagine what it could have been like for her. Though she didn't say it, as she had probably heard those exact words before.

Instead she tried to focus and send feelings of calming and sympathy through her bond, hoping that her bondmate wouldn't be too upset about sharing this story.

She had lived a much longer and sad life than Arisia's short and boring one. Though, she felt that she preferred her boring and simple life that she had led than what Nephti had gone through.

The kelvic could tell why she loved Priskil so much now, as she has gave her hope while she had been a slave, and she had gotten her freedom eventually.

She agreed with her, as she had said before, about the vantha, and wanted to help too. Life will be interesting from now on. Arisia smiled to herself, glad to have came here today.
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Postby Kaleidoscope on January 28th, 2017, 6:26 pm

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GRADE AWARDS!


Hello you two! This was a very lovely thread. It was nice to see the gradual build-up to a very quick bond that felt completely natural. Good work, and I look forward to seeing your two characters develop. Image


Nephti


Skills:
  • Socialisation: +5
  • Persuasion: +1
  • Busking: +1
  • Intimidation: +1
  • Observation: +5
  • Rhetoric: +1
  • Acting: +1
  • Leadership: +1
  • Stealth: +1


Lores:
  • Lore: Alvadas Winter 516 Mizahar Map
  • The Power That Fortune Telling Can Hold
  • Double-Coloured Eyes: A Condition From Birth, Common In Cats
  • Arisia: Another Fortune Teller
  • Arisia: Two Year Old Cat Kelvic
  • Kelvics: Animal-like Race
  • Priskil: Basic Religion
  • Watchtowers: Linked to Priskil and Love
  • Kelvics: Bonding At Different Ages Means Different Results
  • Bonded to Arisia
  • Arisia: Wishes to Help the Vantha and Has a Vantha Mother
  • Arisia: Has Travelled Martial Arts: Fighting Without Weapons
  • Syliras: Busy and Full of Knights


Gained/Lost:
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1 bond with Arisia -


Notes:
I enjoyed this thread very much Nephti! I thought your writing was very mature and insightful.


Arisia


Skills:
  • Observation: +3
  • Socialisation: +5
  • Stealth: +1


Lores:
  • Lore: Alvadas Winter 516 Mizahar Map
  • Alvadas Location: The Stallion's Rear
  • Priskil: A Kind Goddess
  • Nephti: Curious, Priskil-Marked, Six-Armed Girl
  • Priskil: Goddess of Light, Hope, and Vigilance
  • Priskil: Basic Religion
  • Watchtowers: Linked to Priskil and Love
  • Nephti: Current Residence in the Cubacious Inn
  • Bonded to Nephti
  • Nephti: Wishes to Help the Vantha
  • Alvadas: Not Exactly Ordinary
  • Nephti: Basic History
  • Influencing Feelings Through the Bond


Gained/Lost:
+ -
1 bond with Nephti -


Notes:
Hello! I do believe this is the first thread I have graded of yours. Overall, I like the feeling of your posts. Arisia comes across quite educated but also youthful which I enjoy. I wanted to point out something which I'm sure you've gathered as you've written more. I could not award you many points because of the size of replies. Things like observation, which you implied but didn't state in some places, can easily be gained by using phrases such as, "She looked at..." or "She noticed that..." etc. Overall, adding other things into your posts (whilst not overdoing it!) can make for interesting reading.

However, I did enjoy your writing, and I hope to see more of it as your character develops. :)
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