Completed [Windmount Stables] What long teeth you have! (Viper)

All the better to eat you with, little Svefra.

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This shining population center is considered the jewel of The Sylira Region. Home of the vast majority of Mizahar's population, Syliras is nestled in a quiet, sprawling valley on the shores of the Suvan Sea. [Lore]

[Windmount Stables] What long teeth you have! (Viper)

Postby Edreina on September 17th, 2013, 1:38 am

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"She is going to learn how to ride with a saddle, Drykas." The voice that answered was not Edreina's, and so the woman started slightly, turning Jorven carefully towards the source. Instead, Edreina saw that the horse mistress had returned and was now leaning against the corral's fencing with an annoyed look on her face. One of the few things that she did not take well to was interference in teaching someone to become a proper horsewoman or man. Under the woman's gaze, the Svefra withered ever so slightly. But, deep down, she did not realize why the stable mistress was upset. Had this not saved her a bit of trouble in the long run? Or... perhaps this woman felt it was her place to teach Edreina the ways of the four-legged monsters. This dry world did not, Edreina remembered, work like upon the Suvan where the responsibilites of passing on knowledge was shared among the pod.

The truth was, Serena had not planned on having the redhaired woman upon the horse until a day or two from now; the saddle had been brought along to make measurements and check for fit. Pushing her too far too fast would create an inept horsewoman who did not fully respect nor trust their mount. But, leave her with one of the Wandering Horse Clans and, well, she should have seen it coming. It was not too bad, she decided. At least the Drykas held their horses in as high a regard as she.

She smiled slightly - Edreina relaxed just a touch - mentally applauding the woman for her bravery, and slapped the hitherto unnoticed black saddle resting upon the fence of the corral beside her. "This is how I will be teaching you, and until you're more comfortable on a horse's back, this is how you will ride."

Unsteadily, Edreina dismounted just as Serena turned to the Drykas. "Oh don't give me that look. It's just as safe and better for a long journey. When she gets better, though, she can form her own opinion." Apparently, there was a match of Saddle versus Yvas going on. "By the way, your Yvas has been repaired. You can pick it up and pay a stablehand by the breeding barn." The Svefra glanced at her new friend, picking upon the fact that such was a not-so-subtle queue for him to leave.

Normally, she would have resented being told what to do. But, living on the Anchorage had taught her that if someone knew better than you and was telling you to do something, it was best for you to listen. Otherwise, you might end up with a fish-hook in your arse. But, what about Viper? He had been kind to her... But he was not a lover nor was he an acquaintance; she had let him convince her to not only get onto a horse, but let him ride behind her. So, he fell into the broad category of "friend". For a tick, she chewed on her lip before stepping forward to hug him lightly. She wanted to thank him for showing her that not all Drykas were monsters, that not all would attempt to steal her away in the night... Instead, she settled for, "Thanks for the help, Viper." Found in the redhead's voice was a genuine kindness and appreciation often lost in this hard-world. When Edreina made a friend, she truly made a friend... not a business connection, not an asset, but a friend.
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[Windmount Stables] What long teeth you have! (Viper)

Postby Radiant on October 11th, 2013, 2:58 pm

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Edreina :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation +1 XP
Socialization +3 XP
Rhetoric +1 XP
Horsemanship +1 XP
Riding: Horse +3 XP


Lores
Lore Earned
Horse: Terrying Monsters
Bird: Eternally Ugly
Being Paranoid
Jorven: Silver Companion
Viper: Trusty Drykas
Ayden: Viper's Strider
Getting Jorven For Free
Horse: Basic Behavior
Riding Jorven Bareback


Loots
Jorven: A Windrunner Horse


Viper :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation +3 XP
Riding: Horse +1 XP
Socialization +3 XP
Rhetoric +1 XP
Teaching +3 XP
Horsemanship +1 XP


Lores
Lore Earned
Broken Yvas
Edreina: Fiery Redhead
Plans To Start A Business
Jorvin: Edreina's Horse
Purchasing Jorven For Edreina
Yvas Is Much Better Than Saddles
Teaching Drykas Ways To A Svefra In Syliras


Loots
-75 GM


Notes :
So, I have found an issue regarding Jorven's price... I will elaborate them in the paragraphs below. This doesn't warrant an intervention, yet serious enough for me to just give you your grades without fixing it.

It's mentioned in the Lore that Windrunner costs 300 GM outside of Taldera.

Syliras is in the Sylira region and as such, Jorwen would cost around that price range. 75 GM is far too cheap for a Windrunner outside of Taldera, I think you both may have to readjust your posts.

Edreina, with you offering only 100 GM, the seller wouldn't offer Jorven in the first place.

Viper, the seller wouldn't sell Jorven for 75 GM. I accept minor fluctuations but without decent "Negotiation" skills, the prices stay

I have saved both of your grades, make the appropriate adjustments, PM me, and I will give them. :)


Uuuh... okay... :embarrassed: I've just found out that the Windmount Stables actually sells Windrunners for 75 GM... Sorry.

Nice thread, guys. :)


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If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, beam me a PM and we can work it out. :)
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