[Weeklong Challenge] A Memory...What If?

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[Weeklong Challenge] A Memory...What If?

Postby Gillar on February 7th, 2023, 5:18 am

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A Memory...


We all have a moment in our lives where we have an experience with one of our five senses that ignites a memory. This may be a memory that you haven't thought of in a while or even one that you completely forgot. Think of a smell that reminds you of something from the past or a sight that reminds you of someone or a taste or anything like that which reminds you of a past event.

This challenge is tied to that sort of thing with a bit of a twist. The challenge involves your character stumbling across a simple quill; a molted flight feather of a large bird used as a writing tool. This could be found in the wilds, a library or really anywhere...it's a feather. When you find this quill, it will inspire a memory. This memory should be one that you've forgotten, haven't allowed yourself to focus on or one that never really felt significant; one that you've had from time to time but never gave much thought.

You will feel compelled to reach out and touch the quill. As soon as you do, you are drawn into the memory. At first, it will feel as though you are simply embraced by the memory; recalling such past event. As you become fully engrossed in that memory, you will eventually realize that you have been pulled into the memory. It will feel real as if you are consciously in it. When you realize it is a memory, you will find that stray thoughts or actions will actually have some changes to what happens in that memory. What really happened, as you remembered, can be altered. This feels like a rerun of sorts except you find you are able to change some of the script. You are basically the writer of your own memory.

For example, have you ever had a memory of something from the past that you thought, "What if I would have said this instead? Or what if you would have responded with a different action?" What would have happened? Would it have turned out better or would it if turned out worse? What if you could have said what you really wanted to a loved one at a certan time or even to an an enemy? What if you could have acted in a way that would have changed everything you experienced from that point after?

The idea is that whatever the memory may be, you have the chance to rewrite it. As always, get creative. Push your character. Build them up or tear them down. Pick a single memory for your character and make some edits.

This challenge will go from this posting until Tuesday, February 14th at 11:59 pm Pacific Time. Word count is great but more importantly, dig into this and have fun. Content is most important. That said, let's go for 5,000k minimum with much more encourage.

As for an ending, the memory will eventually fade and your character will blink a few times before it all ends. They will find themselves holding the quill. What happens immediately after will be revealed at the end of the challenge.
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[Weeklong Challenge] A Memory...What If?

Postby Moritz Craven on February 12th, 2023, 5:21 pm

Happy Challenging! I am going to enter with Moritz, and the memory/events he will be focused on will be his arrival at Syka.

Its something he does not think about often, but which did not go well at all in some unforeseen ways- quite dramatically- and would be a memory he would want to delve into and change if he could. With the familiar sensations of the shoreline back in Syka such memories would be easily accessed.

Thread 1- 564+671+550+703+320=2,808
Thread 2- 661+705+718+650= 2,734
Thread 3- 950+1,123= 2,073

Total WC: 2,808+2,734+2,073=7,615
Last edited by Moritz Craven on February 19th, 2023, 2:15 am, edited 10 times in total.
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[Weeklong Challenge] A Memory...What If?

Postby Tazrae on February 12th, 2023, 11:17 pm

Joining In!


I'm going to write about Tazrae's escape from her grandfather's Dominion and the choice that haunted her when she took the hourglass instead of her son.

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Stepping Backwards To Step Forwards Part I = 3104
Stepping Backwards To Step Forward Part II = 2941

Total: 6045
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[Weeklong Challenge] A Memory...What If?

Postby Gillar on February 15th, 2023, 12:45 am

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It dawned on me recently that I was ending this challenge on Valentine's Day. Not exactly a wise choice. With that, I am going to extend this challenge until Saturday night. Because of the added time, there will be an added bonus for word count. Also, because I forgot to mention it, I will now, be sure to track your threads and word counts in this thread. Enjoy!
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[Weeklong Challenge] A Memory...What If?

Postby Caspian on February 15th, 2023, 8:21 pm

Joining a bit late; will do my best. The memory will be from when Caspian was 20 or so, in Sunberth. He let someone escape instead of slitting their throat. In the thread he’ll do differently.
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[Weeklong Challenge] A Memory...What If?

Postby Gillar on February 26th, 2023, 8:26 am

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The memory eventually fades and your character blinks a few times before it all ends. They find themselves holding the quill.

Before your mind returns to the present; outside the confines of your memories, you glance down to see the quill in your hand. Along with all of the other thoughts that may dance around in your mind at that point, you are presented with a few glimpses of the past revolving around the quill.

An understanding begins to form in your mind as memories, not your own, related to the quill. Centuries ago, before the Valterrian, Qalaya, Goddess of Memory and Writing, gifted her most devoted followers with a very special quill. This quill, a feather once belonging to an ancient, now extinct bird known as a Cuari, was granted a special blessing.

Known as the Quill of the Cuari, this feather would allow those who held it to venture into their own memories as if they were reliving them in person. The details, feelings and overall atmosphere of the memories relived could then be put to parchment. This would ensure that the history could be recorded in greater detail thus preserving the past to be passed on to future generations.

The quills, numbering 12 in all, were gifted to the most devoted followers of Qalaya. Unfortunately, the Valterrian happened and many of the quills became lost. Over the course of many years, some of the quills were recovered from various locales. A few of the quills, touched like so many things by the Valterrian, were altered in a rather unexpected way.

These particular quills allowed the bearer to not only revisit their memories and experience them in immense detail, but they allow the bearer to edit said memories. In effect, the person can change, in their mind, the experiences they have lived through.

What does this mean for your character?

What it means is that 4 times per season (4 threads), you can essentially rewrite a memory of something that happened to your character. While this will not change the actual events that happened in the past, it will change how your character feels, thinks or otherwise acts in response to those past events. Did your character experience some trauma that has had lasting effects on them into the present day? The quill will allow you to change how you remember that event and how you feel in the present day. Did someone hurt you? You can change how you remember it. The feelings will become real. Maybe you forget the person who hurt you altogether. Did you experience something in your past that scared you so much that you can't face it in the present day? Maybe now you change the memory of that event so that you conquered that fear in the past and you now no longer worry about it.

The quill allows you to edit your memories, 4 per season, so that you physically and mentally feel different. The quill cannot change the actual past but can change how you remember it and how you respond to it in the present day. You can't gain skills or items from the use of the quill no matter how hard you may try as the quill only affects your memories.

The quill also retains its power to allow you an enhanced recollection of your past memories. Once the quill is used on a particular memory, you find yourself able to recall it in storytelling, writing, artwork or other forms of expression in detail that is nothing short of awe-inspiring to those who hear, see, read or otherwise experience it. As far as quantitative terms are concerned, your character gains a +10 to writing, storytelling or other artistic related skill immediately following the use of the quill to relive a memory. This bonus applies to a single action/work immediately following the use of the quill.

As a bonus for word count above the 5k requirement, the following is added:

Tazrae: Your quill will have veins of gold running up and down the shaft. You will find that, in the most random moments, you remember where you placed a gold miza. This essentially grants you a total of 60 mizas every season simply through remembering where you misplaced them. Simply having the quill in your possession grants this.

Moritz: Your quill will have veins of gold and a single vein of silver running up and down the shaft. You will find, in the most random moments, you remember where you placed a gold miza. This essentially grants you a total of 76 mizas eveyr season simply through remembering where you misplaced them. Simply having the quill in your possession grants this.
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