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[Anthonius Fighter's Pit] A Flamin' Distraction (Edreina)

Postby Razkar on August 23rd, 2013, 11:33 am

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The fight became more real the longer it dragged on, something Razkar recognized, too. That fire and passion, the thrill of battle he'd heard so much of, was replaced by pure, merciless determination to just end it. Smiles faded, breathing became harder, blows weren't shrugged off anymore; they were borne with grunts and flinches, damage shown in limps and stiffened movements-

-like the three body blows that lifted Edreina off the ground. One, two, Razkar gritted his teeth and mentally commanded here, three, Goddess, female, get out of-

-an uppercut broke the clinch and sent the bruiser staggering back, and then she was on him again.

"That's a girl..."

The Myrian looked up briefly and saw the cocky sureness had drained from Gerard's face. The human expected the girl to be easy meat: flailing uselessly, desperately, without a plan or skill or anything approaching endurance, just like all the other barmaids he'd seen fight. But now Dagrun was the one on the defensive, nose broken (though that was hardly new) and then-

"Fuck me!"

-even Razkar cheered with the crowd as that last ditch flying leg somehow made a connect. He flicked a glance upwards and frowned, wondering if his Goddess-Queen had a sense of humor about all this. The Svefra jumped back to her feet and stalked back towards Dagrun, human now wary, actually cautious around the slip of a girl...

"Stop toying with him," Razkar muttered, a teacher now, not a lover, "Stop fighting so-"

Elbows and knees and a pale, high forehead became weapons, and within a few chimes, Dagrun was on his knees... and the fight was over. The crowed booed or cheered, long shot junkies praising Xyna for finally recognizing them, and the stolid, practical sorts just shook their head at the injustice. A woman? A Svefra? Bringing low Dagrun?

Razkar just straightened up and faced Gerard, human's face pinched and sullen under his beard... and held out a hand.

"Yeah, yeah, yeah." Gerard said, tossing a much heavier bag of gold back over and trying to make it look like nothing, like he wasn't just handing over a few days profits. "Petching enjoy it."

The Myrian caught it and turned, wincing as he did. Petch... injuries never dulled for long, did they? Just when you though your body had finally grown accustomed, a new dimension of pain was formed, just for you. He half-walked, half-hobbled over to where Mrrko and his healing kit was waiting, returning to the edge of the pit and-

-fixing Dagrun in a hundred-percent-pure Myrian glare as he dared to smile through bloody teeth at his female. Whatever conversation the two of them were having died a quick death and Dagrun hauled himself out, nodding quickly at the Myrian.

Razkar flicked a glance over him. His posture was stooped, his legs wobbly, eye blackened and... yes, even holding a napkin to his crimson-smeared face was giving him spasms. A slow, impressed but feral grin crossed his face.

"Not expect that, did you?"

"So how'd I do? How much did you make?"

Also against expectations, Razkar's smile faded when he turned to his student. Cold calculation replaced it, stoic and stern, as if the still-bleeding gash at his side and his newly-crooked nose were just minor distractions. He looked the female up and jaw, the only hint as to his feelings the tightening of his jaw at the ugly, melon-sized bruise on her stomach and the way the scar on her shoulder was redder, angrier, more alive after being stretched so brutally.

"You could have ended earlier." He spoke finally, voice level and... educational. Much as he cared, much as he... more than cared... the Fighter's Pit was not the place for casual affection. Razkar knew eyes were on them right now, his surprising protege being weighed up by the bottom-feeders that always clustered around here. "Use fist, not elbow and knee. Try to beat... fair, and then when not, then you fight like I show."

A flush colored her face, but only briefly. Ah, another joy about Edreina: she knew how to take criticism. She learned, she adapted, and she became better. But Razkar found that he was bereft of all other judgement, so...

"But only thing I can say." A tiny smile creased his lips, and in a glittering waterfall, half the mizas in the bag fell into his palm. "You avoid enemy power, make it your power. You use his weight to hurt him; use your body as way to put him down, use leverage and speed where enemy is slow. And not just 'you', Edreina... us."

Sparkling sapphires greeted black coals and the goals burned like embers. To see her smile, her happiness, and know he caused it, with his monetary reward and his praise... yes... that was worth anything else.

Ouch.

But...

"Now help silly savage get patched," he said, sitting down on a bench with a grunt and handing her the kit, "Bleed like petching pig, here..."

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[Anthonius Fighter's Pit] A Flamin' Distraction (Edreina)

Postby Edreina on August 24th, 2013, 5:17 am

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"You could have ended earlier. Use fist, not elbow and knee. Try to beat... fair, and then when not, then you fight like I show."

Heat flushed Edreina's honey-colored skin for an instant before she nodded, pondering his advice. She felt so... vulnerable when relying up her fists, and had Razkar himself not said that every part of one's body was a weapon? Lips were pursed and two coppery eyebrows knitted together as absolute puzzlement claimed her for an instant. Why had he changed his tact now? When swinging her elbows or her knees, she realized, she was putting more of her body into motion and thereby making it easier for her to be put off balance, or to be grabbed as a slower, but more devastating blow moved in. With a punch, she would be able to cause damage and then get away an instant later. Eventually the Myrian's logic clicked into place for the Svefra and she nodded once again, blue eyes flickering with understanding. In the future, she would attempt to focus more upon punching than... well... flailing.

"But only thing I can say. You avoid enemy power, make it your power. You use his weight to hurt him; use your body as way to put him down, use leverage and speed where enemy is slow. And not just 'you', Edreina... us."

At the sight of so many mizas tinkling about freely, Edreina's pirate eyes sparkled. Among Svefra, bartering and trading was form their economy too. As such, Edreina had never really found the little coins to be more than entertaining, sparkling and glittering when held beneath the light. But here, among the city-dwellers, the sea-goer was taught the value of the all-important miza.

"Now help silly savage get patched. Bleed like petching pig, here..."

Edreina paled slightly, eyeing her bloodied lover. "Wouldn't someone er... more skilled be ah-" At his look, she sighed shaking her head. "Right, well I'll give it a go." Before setting sail, a Svefra first had to make sure that they had everything. And so Edreina approached this task with the same mindset. Tucking her hair behind her ears, she set her skirt and shirt aside and started pulling things from the medical kit, setting them on the bench beside her patient. Most of the items she knew after watching Razkar patch himself up many-a-time. Those that she was even slightly unsure of, were held up and explained by the Myrian. Anti-venom... Nope. It was set carefully back in the kit. Stitches... Perhaps needed but she would not mangle his flesh with her pathetic attempts at sewing, so they were placed into the kit once again as well.

His nose was bleeding the most, as any head-wound would, so she addressed it first. "Gods... forget how ugly you are sometimes..." She said softly, fingers feathering across his nose. Despite her serious, thoughtful tone, one blue orb was obscured for an instant as she winked playfully. Abruptly Edreina remembered the time he had broken her nose, and then fixed it. Of course he had used cruel teasing to distract her long enough. Her smile disappeared in the same tick that it appeared as she attempted to hide her intentions.

"So I petched Matthew..." In that instant of utter bewilderment, before rage and gods knew what else managed to set in, Edreina aligned her thumbs along Razkar's nose and popped it back into place... Well, it did not pop so much as crunch and grind angrily, but at least it was straight now. With an ornery grin, Edreina turned and took a bit of cloth from the sack and commanded Razkar press it against his nose to stop the bleeding, as if she had not just used the Myrian's fears against him.

Already Edreina could see a bruise forming along his breastbone. Her hands were rather gentle as she prodded at it gently, glancing up with wide, apologetic eyes every time Razkar made a sound of discomfort, even when he stiffened. She really shouldn't be doing this... She had no training.

Shaking her head, the kneeling redhead had the dark-skinned warrior lean to the side so that she could inspect the gash on his hip. It was narrow and relatively shallow, but had been filthied by the battle. The very first thing she did was pour water over it, dislodging the larger dirt and grime. After that was the unpleasant part: dousing the wound in alcohol. How many times had Edreina poured a bit of distilled alcohol on a youngling's mishap with a fishing hook? But, the Myrian was different to her. She knew his strength, but did not want to be the one to test it. And so, kneeling between his legs, face perilously close to his crotch as she carefully examined the wound, Edreina hesitated. Blue eyes were unsure as they turned up to the Myrian, seeking his guidance. She did not want to hurt him, but she needed to clean the wound... the best she could do was give him a bit of warning. Her hand brought up the small bottle of alcohol and she pursed her lips. "Might sting... just a bit..."

The pained growl that filled the air the moment she started dripping alcohol into the wound stated that she might have been understanding things... Just a bit.
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[Anthonius Fighter's Pit] A Flamin' Distraction (Edreina)

Postby Razkar on August 24th, 2013, 7:50 pm

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The ugly comment raised naught but a grunt from the Myrian. For one thing he was most concentrated on holding back the little thrusts of pain slicing through his nose, even with her gentle touch. He knew that his busted nose and bleeding hip were beyond the Svefra, but...

She needs to learn. If she is to walk my path, she needs to know how to patch up the wounds left bu arrow and blade and blunt object. If she can't, she'll just be in the way.

The other factor, he thought with a soft smile (even with his teeth gritted behind it) was that it may be true, but it didn't seem to stop her all that much. Since they'd emerged from the Bronze Woods, merely five dances of Syna and Leth had concluded but... well, suffice to say, Razkar had lost count. He was half-expecting complaints about screaming, grunting, growling and breaking crockery at all hours from the other vessels flanking the 'grotto at the Docks, so he didn't pay much mind to-

"So I petched Matthew..."

-the fucking bitch!

Black eyes so intimidating to everyone else they trapped in their gaze flashed up to hers and there was a disbelieving horror stark in them. Her own cool blue eyes looked back at him, merciless and indifferent as the sea she was born on. For a moment his mind was utterly blank, than a howling wave of anger numbed every inch of him, images of ripping that fucking harlot's guts out through his mouth riding bloody and glorious across-

"You-You fuckARRGHHH!"

A flash of pain so intense his whole world became a white lightning strike, a sickening crack that he didn't hear so much as felt, bones grinding against bones with the sort of pain so incredible your mind just sort of steps away and says, screw this, I'll let the body handle this shyke...

Goddess. You really are going soft, boy.

Razkar panted and choked and realized he actually could do both again without a wheezing in his nose. His fingers gingerly tested it, and... she'd fixed it. Distracted and feinted him out, just like he'd done so long ago. A smug expression of triumph spread on her face like oil on water and his chest huffed, heaved... then slumped.

"... guess I have coming, yes?" A short and guiltless nod. "Uh-huh. Now do hip, fucking witch..."

Edreina just rolled her eyes and slunk down to her knees... between his legs. The pain he could handle, but the way his body stiffened and tenses, the cold sweat that sprung on his brow and the way his member practically growled to life at the sight of her mere inches from it-

Yes, this will take much more in the way of self-control.

"Might sting... just a bit..."

Razkar nodded at the bottle of rubbing alcohol and wordlessly put the fat base of his thumb in his mouth before that cold liquid sloshed-

-burned-

-cauterized-

-and he bit down hard with a grunt, eyes focused hard and narrowed on her, but not in anger or disappointment. Because... she was anchoring him. The face his Edri was there, tending to him, however amateurishly, and she wanted to be there.

His other hand reached out to grip her shoulder. Not too hard, but hard enough... but she bit down on her pain as well, endured hers and he endured his own... and finally the Myrian removed his hand and smiled tightly.

"Good... but I take rest from here. You watch."

He took the healer's kit and inspected the wound, most of his pelvis, hip and upper leg now slathered in liquid that could have sterilized bare soil. The dirt was still there, though, little specks of it, so Razkar rummaged in the kit and used a small bandage to clear away the last vestiges, speaking as he did.

Give her some knowledge and keep your mind elsewhere, too.

"Clean would is not just put on alcohol," he said, Myrian accent dragging out every syllable of 'alcohol and, actually, adding another. He winced and flinched as he dabbed the cut on his hip, trying to keep his voice level. "Clean is scrub... like this. Make sure all dirt is gone... and... make place you stitch numb. See?"

To her horror, Razkar actually prodded the edge of the gash with the sewing needle... and he didn't flinch. Instead he smiled at her and shrugged, forcing himself to breath level so he'd thread the damn needle. He always hated that part of this...

"Feel it, but is like... other male's leg. Not mine. Very good, because now... time to sew..."

The Myrian shifted position so that the raw edges of the gash - now whitened rather than red after the alcohol had done its job - were closer together and threaded the needle through the flesh on one side... then through the other, needling pointing away from him. He pulled the thread through until a few inches was left, then thread it back... through flesh, pulling it through, slow and careful...

"Must get needle right." He said in a low murmur, mind obviously elsewhere as he worked. "Too close to edge of cut, might rip skin when pull tight. To far, will make skin... crumble? No... crumple. Pull too tight. Not close right. And see?"

He turned slightly, letting the Svefra see the diagonal pattern the thread made. Close together, pulling the gash closed, not just topping it. When she nodded, he continued.

"Once is done... then tighten... and put bandage on."

Razkar was as good as his words. Once he'd repeated the stitching maybe two dozen times, from one end of the cut to the other, he pulled the cotton thread tight, hissing through teeth grinding and gnashing, cut closing under them... and staying like that. He gestured urgently for the healer's kit and she pressed it into his hand, tanned fingers darting inside-

-coming up with a bandage and a roll of sticking plaster. With the cut still pressed together and closed, he bit off a sheet of either and slapped it over his hip with a grunt... then smiled.

"Ah... better." Razkar smiled and followed his lesson with: "We should get meat in you."

Aside from, perhaps, "I'm actually a female and living in... Nigeria" (Edreina likes to make up the names of nations, and "Nigeria" always sounded funny to her), few things could have surprised Edreina more in this context. She blinked a few times, suspecting a jape or, mayhaps, shenanigans... but no. He was serious, and his furiously nodding head just confirmed it.

"No! Really!" The Myrian rose with a grunt and breathed shallowly, purple and black blotches on his breastbone flourishing with life as he laboriously packed his kit back up. "You... after fight like this, body is working hard. Best time to eat."

Razkar hauled the healer's kit over his shoulder with a grunt and a half-yell, vowing that would be the last such motion he would attempt for the rest of the day. He was a warrior blessed by the Goddess-Queen of War herself, but petch it, he still needed to R&R like every other being.

"Still have lots of pig and rabbit left. Sure we can find nice... length, for you."

The wink that snapped out at her a tick later assured her that there was no need at all for the conditional part of that sentence...
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[Anthonius Fighter's Pit] A Flamin' Distraction (Edreina)

Postby Perplexity on September 21st, 2013, 7:31 pm

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To the death! To the death I say! Or rather…to the bruising. Well done you two.

• | Mr. Razkar: Bump and bruises! You have sustained minor injuries from this battle. Where? I leave up to you. The minor injuries will heal fully after a seven day period of rest. You also have a cracked rib from all the shield bashing. The cracked rib will heal fully at the end of the season so long as strenuous activity is not undertaken on a regular basis. In addition you have two more bruised ribs and a bruised sternum that will take half the season to heal fully. Not to mention a broken nose that will take a minimum of fifteen days to fully heal. These injuries can be tended to completely by an Expert level physician or a Mark 2 Healer of Rak’keli.

• | Ms. Edreina: Bumps and bruises! You have sustained minor injuries from your skirmish. Where? I leave that up to you. The minor injuries will heal fully after a seven day period of rest. You have torn a muscle in your shoulder thus weakening it for the rest of the season. The weakness can be mitigated through regular physical therapy and exercise but strenuous exertion will result in further muscle tearing that can only be reversed through either the skills of an Expert level physician or a Mark 2 Healer of Rak’keli.
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