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The Creation of Feeling: Part II

Postby Edreina on October 31st, 2013, 5:58 pm

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"You're sure about this?" Edreina asked for the thousand-and-ninth time that evening. The tent had been set up and the camp put to sleep save for the few sentries still up and about. Now, all that was left before the Myrian and the Svefra joined the sleeping majority was for them to fulfill the agreement made the night before.

Which was, mind you, far easier said than done. The entire day had been spent worrying over how the night would go. Hypnotism was, as she had learned, a fickle art. What if something went wrong? Or what if she used too much Djed at one time? This is why you'll practice... Edreina reminded herself, sighing gently. The part that worried her most, truly, was that she would be practicing on Razkar. She already knew that he hated hypnotism and those that manipulated the mind of others. The fact that he was allowing her to practice on him was a milestone.

A small smile touched her lips as she sat upon her bedroll, waiting to be joined by none other than the object of her worries. The amount of trust he placed in her was staggering considering his reaction to Karin and even his attitude when they had first met. Miles they had crossed, physically and mentally, but many more lay ahead of them. She simply had to maintain the strength to see the journey through.

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The Creation of Feeling: Part II

Postby Razkar on November 2nd, 2013, 8:59 pm

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"Not worry so much!"

Ah, Myrian was such a definitive way of getting your point across, especially when it was rank with frustration or exasperation. Aggression and ruthless violence were good tones, too, but the head-shaking male in the tent had none of that in him that night.

Not forgetting that he was meant to be her teacher in his tongue, too.

Razkar smiled at the thought, despite his exasperated words. Oh. He would have to share that with her-

Later! Now it is time to train.

"You know I trust you." He said as he lit the little lantern in their tent, match caressing the blackened wick before it sputtered into tentative life. He closed the lid and a light, muffled glow filled their crouched enclosure. "You may not trust yourself, but..." He sat back, legs cross, hands on his knees, face as honest and reassuring as one could get it when vast swathes were scarred, inked or pierced. "... that is why we train, no?"

He hoped she wouldn't spot the slight twinge of concern in his eyes, either. Allowing someone, and a barbarian at that, to... delve into his mind... to perhaps twist or pervert his thoughts and actions... the idea drew deeper revulsion from him that the acts of slavers and rapists. But Razkar bit down under his closed-lipped grin, not wanting to frighten his lover.

Never ceases to amaze, the things you do for those you love... and how far you go to see them succeed.

Not that it's all about her
, he reminded himself, less he develop a hero complex (heh, not much chance of that). Razkar did not much fear the morphers, the fire-mages, even users of The Flux and other such practitioners of wyrd. But the hypnotists... the forgers of lies and illusions... they always sent a chill down his spine, because they always... came at you sideways. Smiled and grinned and with bright, cheery eyes, violated you mind into something they wanted, not you.

If having one he loved and trusted probe at him would allow Razkar to better recognize and defend himself from such... snakes, then so be it.

"We will start with jokes tonight?" He said, grin turning lop-sided and unashamedly amused. "Or saving those for your finale?"
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The Creation of Feeling: Part II

Postby Edreina on November 4th, 2013, 2:51 am

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"Jokes?" Edreina gasped, fighting the urge to punch Razkar for... only a second. A small fist shot out and aimed to collide with the Myrian's muscled shoulder, as she suppressed her grin. Before he could retaliate, she scooted away, visage shattering beneath a dazzling smile. "I'll tell jokes if I want to tell jokes but... No. I had a different idea tonight." The smile turned impish as her mind flickered in the direction of what horrible thought had crossed her mind earlier that day. When once again she caught Razkar giving her that look, the one that set her body ablaze and the filthier cogs of her mind turning, only to ride ahead and leave her with a warm saddle, revenge had entered her thoughts.

Unsharpened teeth fell upon a soft lower lip as she continued to contemplate her idea, building on it, creating a timeline as to how it would best be achieved. Leaning forward, she shuttered the lantern, leaving them in a whispery darkness. Upon hand and knees she crawled to his side of the tent, making the intimate situation even moreso. A few crawling steps and her hands found his thighs, brushing past the hands upon his knees. Blue eyes sparkled with mischief, but its intent was closely guarded. A fringe of bright red hair obscured her visage for an instant as she leaned further forward to plant a soft kiss in the center of his ink and iron marked chest.

"You know..." The plane of her internal ocean was calmed by her lust for revenge and to toy with Razkar. Across it she easily dove and slid into the wellspring of Djed dancing through her chest. Warmth suffused across her chest and, for an instant, her breath caught with surprise. For a second, surprise caused the Djed to slip from between her fingers, snapping back into the pale blue nimbus filling her core. Calm... Calm... To buy herself some time, soft lips created a trail of fire from the center of his chest to his collar bone.

A deep breath was held for a moment longer than usual, allowing her to reach that moment of focus upon her goal and nothing else. In that single moment, she was able to regain control of herself once more and plunge her fingers into the power flowing through her core. A sparking, dancing power spread up through her chest, flowed through her throat, and landed upon her tongue. Sweet-talking a man had never been in her wheelhouse, her body typically did most of the work. But, this was Hypnotism and, as far as she knew, one had to use their eyes and their voice for the magic to work.

And so, eyes that managed to glimmer even in the wan light of the tent rose to Razkar's limpid black pools and lips like the pale pink inside of a seashell curved around words imbued with the power of her Djed. "You know you want me..." Straight and to the point, as always... Edreina had only to hope that the ridiculousness of the words themselves did not detract from the mission she was attempting to accomplish.
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The Creation of Feeling: Part II

Postby Razkar on November 4th, 2013, 5:09 am

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"You know..."

He was sure that's what the words were, but they were muffled by the hiss as her lips touched him. Razkar mentally cursed himself. Everyone saw Edreina as a pretty face, an amiable spirit... but him? He saw the cunning mind behind those innocent blue eyes, and what was cunning but the ability to come at a problem from an angle it didn't expect?

Yet she'd blindsided him again. His almost-meditative pose shuddered and he closed his eyes, waiting... expecting that... pressure, in his mind again...

"Kn... Know what...?

Fire... Gods, he felt fire on his chest. Her lips trailed up to the scar tissue on his shoulder, and even in that dulled area he felt tingles of lightning sparking to his nerves. He had to grit his teeth not to shudder and wrap his arms around her. All he saw was her bobbing mass of red curls working its way up his body, so tempting, but without her eyes, those deadly beams he knew could-

Focus! Focus! Wait for... it...

"You know you want me..."

They were rasped, whispered, murmured, but they had all the command of a tear-choked scream and Razkar's libido went from idling to sprinting in a single blink. Lust, harsh and raw and raging, exploded in his chest and shot to his pelvis, then his arms-

-snapping up to grabs her shoulder, roughly pulling her onto him-

-and he was tasting that fire on her lips, drinking it down as their shadows merged and wrestled by the lantern's light...

"... oh..."

Something in the back of Razkar's mind beat down his raging... excitement, with a blunt object and by the times his lips left hers, he was blinking like a man who'd just woke from a coma. It took him a few more ticks before his jaw dropped and he muttered: "That... That was..."

Violation. Manipulation. She yoked her love and passion for you and took away your reason. What have you unleashed?!

"... actually kind of fun..."

A voice sighed and started swinging again.
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The Creation of Feeling: Part II

Postby Edreina on November 5th, 2013, 7:07 am

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The ardor of her lover's affections caught Edreina off guard, causing her frail hold on the magic to slip away and passion to burst forth. The contagion of lust had leapt into the air and now clouded both of their minds. But, as quickly as it had set in, it faded with Razkar's realization.

It was incredibly hard to keep from laughing at the decked-fish look Razkar gave her when the effects of the Djed wore off. It was not unexpected, but the look of surprise on her Myrian's face when she managed to shock him was always a treat. His compliance was rewarded with a swift, chaste kiss as she broke their lingering embrace and returned to her side of the tent. "That takes more strength than I'd expected," was her sheepish admission. It was shortly followed by her request for a moment's respite before continuing.

Their interaction had left her heart thundering in her ears, and her mind in an absolute tizzy. Thousands of possibilities flashed before her mind's eye, intoxicating her. If she harbored any hope of trying again that night, it would need to be with a calmed mind. If somehow her intentions were muddled by the wayward wishes traipsing through her mind, the results could be horrible. Focus, she commanded herself to little avail. The washing and dancing waves of her mind formed nude shapes, twisting and writing around one another in ways most pleasurable. A shiver danced across the woman's pale skin, leaving a wake of pricked flesh.

Part of the thrashing in her mind could be attributed to her lack of direction for the remainder of their practice session. She could always- No... That could go very badly very quickly. But, then again, she would never know the limits of hypnotism if she did not attempt to reach them. With a faint exhale, Edreina forced herself to still, focusing on her curiosity and her need to see what the proposed experiment would entail and how it would play out. Up until this point, she had been focusing upon only a single emotion or idea in that instant. This time, she hoped to be able to build from one thought to the next without the first completely overshadowing her later attempts.

Each time she reached for it, she found the Djed coming more easily to her fingertips. Each time, its spread through her chest felt a fraction faster and infinitesimally stronger. Perhaps it was wishful thinking, or perhaps her practicing was truly paying off and, like any other muscle, the one that allowed her to reach her core of power was strengthening. She could almost imagine the bulging cords of the muscle growing thicker and more defined with each use of Djed.

Warmth danced up her throat and across her tongue, sparking between her soft lips as Djed waited to be used or disregarded once again. Immediately this time she called it forth and into action. "I know you hate other Hypnotists..." These words were meant to be the gentle breath that fanned an ever present flame in the Myrian's chest, reminding him of his hate and perhaps allowing him to recount a few of the instances that had led to his hatred. A moment's pause was all she was given before she forced Djed to surge forth once more, coloring her new words. "But... the fact that you trust me... It means so much." This time, the emotion she attempted to slip across the plane of the dark-skinned warrior's mind was a touch more complex. She wanted for him to feel the sincerity in her words along with being reminded of how different she was from other mind-benders with whom he had struggled. The magic struggled for an instant before regaining strength as she spoke, questioning her intent for an instant. She had only to hope now that the attempt was well received.
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The Creation of Feeling: Part II

Postby Razkar on November 6th, 2013, 3:28 am

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He waited, patient and silent and still, while she regained... whatever it was she needed to continue. Razkar thought it must be similar to his own practices with The Flux: the initial exertions were a nightmare on limbs (or in her case, a mind) unused to them, but like any exercise, with repetition, it became easier.

Black eyes that shone with a kind of subdued concern watched her carefully. He was there to learn as well, after all, and he...

Sighed. This wasn't working.

The Myrian's mouth opened to voice his thoughts but her blue gaze rose to meet him and his jaw snapped shut before the first words hit the breeze. Something intent and determined arose in those gentle, swirling eyes... and he felt proud this was his female.

She is not satisfied with how far she has come; she knows she can go further.

"I know you hate other Hypnotists..."

Razkar breathed in as a warm cloud seemed to strike his chest and then envelop him, spreading over his torso like... slow, infant fire. He looked down, expecting to see tendrils of smoke worming their way around him, but felt... felt...

But not in the physical sense. His eyes flashed and his nose crinkled as if he'd just smelled fresh dung, all his disgust and loathing and the secret kernel of fear he felt for the Mind-Defilers bubbling to the surface like poison. The thoughts were more than just ideas or rememberings, though; they were... visceral. Like... rage, or fear, or hatred, palpable sensations that drove limbs and blinded reason.

Not too strong, though, and with a stark tremor of clarity he realized why such intensity was being foist upon him. Namely: Edreina. Razkar managed a weak, lopsided smile, nodding gently.

"Good... I... I felt... that..."

"But... the fact that you trust me... It means so much."

This time there was no gasp or clarity. Razkar frowned, expecting something more than the... acceptance. He frowned, the frames of the two wildly different moments clashing like Summer and Winter in adjoining fields; one snarling and disgusted, the other... smiling warmly at his love... setting her above all others who lurked in the coward's shadows of manipulation.

One who has power and uses it to protect... we Children of Myri know the strength of soul that requires...

Razkar's smile managed a wicked twist at the corners, followed by a knowing wink. He was not so naive and enraptured not to see her cunning, corkscrew strategy at work here. Working someone's mind like... machinery, pulling levers, relying on base angers and jealousies and fears, that was one thing. But to prey on someone's loves, their affections and loyalties... by such deeds were lasting bonds forged, in slavery or devotion.

"Very clever, my love..." He said, but his smile flickered, eyes dropping with that same sigh. He scratched his head, untied black hair spilling down to his bare chest like he was corralling thoughts into order. "But I feel... I feel I am not learning to... block your wyrd."

The Myrian shook his head, a gesture rank with self-criticism. Fool! Did he really think he could just stop one who could use wyrd from entering his head? Like it was a weapon he could block with steel or flesh? No, it was hopeless. He could see the signs, but would he always have his guard to every person he spoke to? And what would they do? Have "Hypnotist" on a placard strung from their necks? Edreina was but a novice and she could caress his mind, stoke it like a fire to raging or merely flickering... what would he do if one such as Karin shattered their peace again?

Hopeless. No shield-

Razkar frowned. His eyes grew fixed, intent, and Edreina had long since recognized the look of her male with a fresh thought grasped in his mind. New purpose and possibility bloomed in them, certain only of his uncertainty, but following some strand of reasoning that ended with-

"What..." He said quietly and sincerely, recovering something from next to her bedroll and holding it in two hands. "... is this?"

It was a book... and Razkar mentally slapped himself, words spilling out again before some mischievous quip could be launched-

"And I know it is a book! I mean, what is... Shel... Shil... 'Shiel...Ding...'?"
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The Creation of Feeling: Part II

Postby Edreina on November 11th, 2013, 6:44 am

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At his admission, she felt herself relax oddly. Apparently, she was not growing stronger, he had simply been unable to make any progress in blocking her magic. It had been a silent fear up until that point. If he could not block even her weakest magics. And, if he could not do it now... Could he ever? Was it even possible to keep the Djed of another from your mind? Damn you, Sari... If only she had been instructed fully instead of given a threadbare understanding by one who was only teaching for her own gains.

Sighing to herself, she reached out and took his thick, calloused hand in hers. The look on his face transcended language and culture. It rarely appeared on Edreina's own freckled features, but she had often seen it upon others. "We're learning together," the lilting voice was as soft as the words that made up its melody. "We'd be fools to think that we can get everything right on our first attempt." No sooner than the words had left her mouth, she saw a new courage snap into his ebony eyes.

Aah. The warrior does not fall so easily.

The books from the battle, she realized. Despite reading each several times, their mysteries still eluded her. One pertained to the magic of see, the other to hiding and to blocking another's Dje-

By the gods, he actually does have a brain. Thought his mother knocked it loose years ago. It took everything in her to remain calm and attempt to state the obvious. But, he seemed to be able to use that brain twice in a night and interrupted words still on her tongue. As he struggled over the pronunciation, a smile tugged at her lips. Finally, something she was better at.

Taking the book from his hand and holding it up so that it reflected the light of a lantern barely lit, she spoke gently despite the excitement in her heart. "It is a book on the magic known as Sheel-ding." Smiling lips twitched gently as she slowed her pronunciation. Before he could launch himself upon her and seek retribution, she continued, "You were brilliant to remember it. It is a magic of blocking another's Djed. I-... I think that maybe you can apply it to this... But..." she sighed and shook her head. "I've already poured over this book and I just don't seem to be able to understand it! You've seen it yourself. I learn better through... practice..." Already, his answer was apparent to her.

"I suppose... that... we could learn this... together," she added the last part with a moment's hesitation, remembering all the other kinds of magic the book had described blocking. "From what I've seen, this doesn't seem to be too dangerous a magic in and of itself. And maybe with your warrior's mindset," a single blue eye was hidden beneath a pale tan lid for an instant as she winked at him, "maybe its concepts will be easier for you to understand."

Her hands turned the book over once, then again so that she stared at the front cover. With her thumb, she toyed through the soft pages, moving through the book twice, lower lip between her teeth. Finally, she stopped and handed it back to him. "Read it and... tomorrow night we will start your practice as well... Agreed?"
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The Creation of Feeling: Part II

Postby Razkar on November 13th, 2013, 3:58 am

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He heard her words and some part of his mind was listening, but Razkar couldn't keep the greedy glint out of his eyes. He'd been right! Finally, a weapon he could use to bar the cowardly wyrd-wielders from his mind and his body! Something he could use against them, stymie their attacks on him before they even got the chance to manipulate his being with their sinister machinations!

Already he had images, fantasies flashing through his mind: a Child of Myri, master of blades and the weapons gifted onto his arms and legs, but immune to the mages and wizards of the world, too. By the Heavens and Hells and the dirt in between... what a gift to the Goddess-Queen...

"Read it and... tomorrow night we will start your practice as well... Agreed?"

A question! She asked you something! Wake up, shyke-for-brains!

"... hmm?"

Razkar found Edreina's steady and somewhat flustered gaze bearing down on him earnestly. Always amazing, how quickly that dispelled a male's daydreams of violent immortality; he tore his eyes from the venerable tome and found her eyes instead. Blue and clear and so... innocent. Razkar could hardly believe a mind such as hers was capable of such deception as to use Hypnotism, work her will in the most insidious wyrd he knew of...

Slowly, almost like a soft sunrise in the midnight tent, a smile crossed his face. The grasping, rasping voices stilled and he saw not just a budding mage, but... his love. The female that wanted them to learn together; for both of them to be skilled and strong and enlightened in those arenas they'd chosen to throw themselves into. The warrior reached out to the sailor (because, forever and always and again and again, that was what Edreina would truly be) and kissed her gently.

"We read tonight..." He said gently, one hand moving smooth and silent as she closed her eyes. "And tomorrow-"

The phrase used elsewhere would be "yoink!", but in Mizahar this was almost unheard of ("almost" because there used to be a certain kind of wading bird from Taldera that bore it, but that's neither here nor there). But the... effect, was the same. One moment Edreina was holding the book, clutching it in two hands like it was her cherished diary, and the next-

-Razkar had rocked backwards and away from her, grinning like an ecstatic ape, book in hand and laugh on his lips and-

"Fooled you!"

But before his lover could launch at him (probably quite literally, given the look like a thunderstorm crossed with a rabid mongoose on her face), Razkar held up a hand... and spread his cross legs. He patted the bedroll between them.

"Come..."

She did, but didn't she always when he used his gravelly, savage tongue with such a glint in his eye? He gently turned her around wrapped his arms around her from behind, the thick cushion of her hair pressing against his bare chest... the bouquet of it... of soap and honest sweat and the ever-present whiff of sea salt... that trace of her blood that would always have a few toes in the ocean...

"So..." Razkar said as he laid the book across her lap, chin resting on her shoulder, closing his hands around her briefly after he turned the first page. "First we read..."

"Shielding, to give it the sobriquet that has become most common across the world, is first and foremost a defense against djed. Fireballs from the hands, manipulations of space and matter with mere thoughts, insights into the deepest thoughts of others and even the ability to sway their minds into obedience... all these things have one thing in common. They utilize djed, the miraculous and universal building block of all life in our fantastic, terrible world.

And all these things can be halted by mastery of djed, and many things more, like a light breeze would be by a brick wall.

Shields can be erected to block arrows, smoke, swords, specific animals or individuals, even sights and smells and sound. Shields can be stacked, also, each one serving a different purpose, adding a new layer of defense the deeper the practitioner builds them. The most powerful Shielders working together could easily craft barriers that could protect entire cities from any and all obstacles and attackers; legend has it that even the gods would find assault against such stalwart defenders futile.

A stunning and tempting power, isn't it? Total protection against those who use magic. Like most power, however, it comes at a cost, and like most fantasies, it is utterly unrealistic. Master Shielders take decades to reach that state of ability, and this book will not even attempt to cover their techniques. To do so would create a tome so large it would require packhorses to transport, let alone a saddlebag!

No, dear reader; this book, as the title, deals with the Basics. How to focus the mind into rudimentary shields. How to concentrate your attention so they will last more than a handful of ticks, for discipline and will are as crucial to Shielding as djed itself. You will also learn tests to see if your invisible barriers are successful, and even the meditative techniques to summon your djed.

All things worth doing are difficult, to one degree or another, the scholars teach us. This is no different..."


There was more, of course. Pages and pages of it, written by an old, long-dead mage named Arkan Grimhorn, perhaps centuries before the two young ones in a tent deep in the Wildlands were born. What a legacy, one might think.

A Myrian and a Svefra, star-crossed and heart-bound, lit by the sputtering lamp... eyes that couldn't be more different scanning and gulping down the same words, the same wisdom... with the same eagerness of the young, who have no fear of death and to whom the years are a long, exciting road laid out ahead of you. From outside they were so serious and still, statues who only moved in their eyes, or the patient, rustling "schp! schp!" of parchment turning... and, just occasionally-

"Er... what is this?"

She would tell him the word, and then what it meant.

"Ooooooh...!"

And so, their education continued. Together.
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The Creation of Feeling: Part II

Postby Radiant on November 22nd, 2013, 8:29 am

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One of the sellswords patrolled around the resting a caravan. A non-descript human male with short brown hair and equally brown eyes, an utterly average-looking mercenary, easily forgotten and unnoticed. That was just how they liked it, the mercenary passed the lover's tent, deliberately listening to their conversations before walking away, none the wiser.

"You know, sister, I can toy with their minds and make them fight each other in hatred for your amusssement." A hissing voice from the mercenary, seemingly out of nowhere.

"Heh, no need, brother. Just look at her... so happy and contented. She achieved something I can't, she actually manipulate that brute's mind." Another voice from the same mercenary, but it came from his lips this time.

"Sssahaha, your little 'apprentice' isss growing, I sssee. If I may asssk, What isss your purpossse with her?"

"It should be obvious, brother... it should be obvious."

"Oh, I sssee, I sssee. Asss expected of you, Sari. Even I am impressed, sssehehehe~"

"You humble me with your praissse, brother."


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Edreina :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Socialization +1 XP
Rhetoric +1 XP
Hypnotism +2 XP


Lores
Lore Earned
Hypnotism: Manipulating Desires
Personal Magic: Shielding


Loots


Razkar :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Reading +1 XP


Lores
Lore Earned


Loots
Edreina: Aspiring Hypnotist
Personal Magic: Shielding
Shielding: Block Djed


Notes :
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